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 Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:30 am
Information  Name: Azrael
Alias: Father, Azzy -- dislikes Azzy
Offiliations: Meibatsu House, Shukuchoku no Meibatsu (House Guards), Soul Society.
Actual Age: 421
Appearance Age: 30's.
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Personality: Azrael really likes to be around people, but knows that some quality time alone is just as good. He has a kind of personality that people aren't annoyed by, but also can sometimes hurt people. He doesn't always sugarcoat things, and tells them the hard truth. He tends to dislike telling people the truth when it hurts them. However, he also knows that it's more hurtful to lie over a long period than to just say the truth. His belief in family bonds are close to being above his Shinigami duties. Beyond the hard stuff, he loves to joke around and laugh with his fellow division members.
Bio: Azrael was taken in by a low level family from birth. The family was only known as Meibatsu; divine punishment. The family held a sacred bond; a man or woman who turns their back on family, they aren't in any means a man or woman, but just an ignorant soul. The Meibatsu held close to those bonds. The family was relatively powerful, but just not very influential. Everything they had, they earned it, and build the large estate they live at. The man who founded the estate is named Father, and so was his grandson. The figure known as Father is simply the head of the house, and decides what the family does.
He was given a job as he would grow older, and that was to keep the house under absolute peak condition. He tooled hard, and learned the crafts to keep the house running at perfection. He also learned landscaping, and knows a lot about keeping plants. While learning all this, he was being tested by Father. Over the years, the man watched him; and after 220 years, the old man finally began to get ill. He died just a few years later. Many were unsure where the family would go, that was until Mother -- the woman who counseled and helped Father in running the family -- came forward with the black and silver-lined coat Father wore. She gathered the family and those who lived with them as friends and servants. Mother Natsuko gave the long coat to Azrael, telling him that his duties around the house had proven him worthy. Since the beginning, Father Sato had been watching and preparing the boy for the road ahead.
Azrael did not feel like he was the proper man for this, maybe an older man from the family; but he had the bond to think about. So, he went to Natsuko and made one exception... he would only be the Father of the Meibatsu if he he was able to become a Shinigami. So, he went to the academy. He became a Shinigami; he became the Father of the Meibatsu. He uses his resources to keep the family house running, but spends little time with them due to Shinigami duties. Even though he keeps this family together, it has yet to become of the higher level family homes.
Theme Song: Two Against One - Danger Mouse and Daniele Luppi, Featuring Jack White
Thinking: They Can't Stop the Future
Shikai: Mein Hertz Brennt - Rammstein ft. T.a.T.U.
Bankai: Spirit Within - Audiomachine
Division: Seventh - Nanabantai
Rank: Captain - Taichō Appearance Height: 6' 3"
Weight: 178 lbs
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Royal blue
Usual Clothing: Shinigami attire, but keeps a long black coat.
Reiatsu Color: Dark Goldenrod
Zanpakutō Position: Keeps in his hands.
Other Appearance: Five scars; left arm-to-chest, left-chest-to-shoulder, left side of back down to right side, straight down right side of back, and straight horizontally over chest.
Accessories: Glasses, paper and pencil.
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 12:31 am
Zanpakutō Name: Shuushi (Beginning and End)
Shikai:
Release Command: Boufuu, Shuushi (Wind Storm , Beginning and End)
Physical Changes: Golden-colored metal cuffs lock themselves over his forearms. The sword is completely gone. A chain equal to a small anchor's chain -- approximately half-inch thick -- wraps itself around the chest and waist-band of Azrael, which keeps itself in a never-ending link.
Shikai Special Ability: Allows him to mildly use wind to perform attacks and has an increase in speed (+10 Hohō) while also having an increase in physical strength (+10 Strength).
Shikai Abilities
Kujiku (Crush)
-- This ability comes without being spoken. Azrael must, though, perform a smashing attack with his fist. He launches down at his opponent with an arm pulled back. As he moves to punch the target, a loud whistle echoes from his cuffs. This whistle is the sound of air pressure adding strength to his attack, and it is made in the affect to harden the blow by his fist. The air is released just as the fist comes within striking distance. The move is powerful enough to crush through a target's skull, if the endurance is at least 50 below his strength.
Chouonsoku (Supersonic Speed)
-- Azrael is able to use the air to shoot him in certain directions that would otherwise be near incapable by even a Lieutenant of Squad Two. The only problem; he can only use it in one direction, and cannot change that direction midway unless he speaks the ability once more. (+40 Hohō, excluding already stat of +10.)
Gyakufuu (Adverse Wind)
Spoken once, last up to twenty shots. Gyakufuu allows Azrael to launch an explosive ball of pressurized air. The small balls have the capability of destroying walls with ease. When they explode, they do an area damage, so anything within the specific area will be struck by it as well. The Gyakufuu have a range of five hundred feet before they self-explode. The exploding creates a high-pitched whistling, while the quick expansion cools the air to cause cold-damage.
Tenrai (Sound of Wind)
-- The ability is spoken, and sends a slash of wind towards the target. The wind has cut to it, and creates a roar like a tornado. The roar of the attack is made to deafen the target to close-proximity noises, such as footsteps or even someone talking; all-the-while, Azrael can either escape, perform an incantation, or even get in place for another attack if the Tenrai is blocked.
Obtained?: Yes
Bankai
Extended Name: Shuushi, Makugire, Tomodaore no Zenmensonsou (Beginning and End, Fall of the Curtain, Mutual Destruction of All-Out War)
Physical Changes: A stone material forms a row of eight piston-like objects down his back. A gauntlet forms itself on both of his forearms, and makes a blunt metal impact-plate for punching; a weapon some know as a Knuckle. On each gauntlet, two exhaust tubes sprout and seem to spew steam. The chain stays over his body. A black mask forms over his face to block his nose and mouth.
Bankai Special Ability: Allows for Azrael to further use wind attacks, and strengthens his attacks through the wind.
Bankai Abilities:
Shippuu (Hurricane)
-- This ability is spoken. It allows Azrael to send a swirling vortex of wind to smash in to his opponent as he jabs at them with his gauntlets. The ability is two times as potent when given both gauntlets, but is easier to control the winds with one. The winds can destroy small buildings, and is launched at impact upon anything equal to the diameter of the metal crusher -- small metal impact plates on each gauntlet, ranging at a 6 inch diameter -- is fully connected with.
Fukakouryoku (Irresistible Force)
-- This ability is spoken. Azrael's gauntlets build up their power and as it is spoken, the gauntlets release a wicked nine slashes of air to skip across the ground and fly down at the target. The slashes are quick and blocking them would still harm a target within the range of which Azrael can hurt them. The best bet is to just try to evade them completely, if the person is able to move quick enough. The attack requires a lengthy time to build up, so he may use other attacks in the process of this build up. Using other abilities further stimulates the ability, making less time be needed, as the steam builds up within the gauntlet or gauntlets. Cannot use Oiuchi during build up.
Kouhai Tenchuu (Rise and Fall Pillars Supporting Heaven)
-- Ability is spoken. Azrael's pistons seem to open at the top, and steam spews out once the ability is spoken. From the sky above, the sound of explosions occur. Four sets of chain then proceed to take after the targets arms and legs; the chains seeming to be coming from the air. From there, the shimmer of four white pillars slam down upon the target. After the pillars smash down, the pillars burst in to clouds that are sucked back in to the pistons. As the attack requires the target to be taken by the chains, it also requires the one's strength to be up to 2 levels below Azrael's endurance to break them -- anything below that will be unable to break them and await their punishment. (Levels will be more defined once PointSystem is put in).
Monosugoi Bakushinchi (Earth Shattering Center of Explosion)
-- Spoken once, last only four shots. Azrael speaks the ability, and the pistons on his back seems to retreat their ends in to the majority of mechanism. A ball of air swirls together at one centimeter from the shock plate of the gauntlet. Azrael can use these to either smash them in to the target, or even fire them off. They resemble the say Shikai move of Gyakufuu, but these can crumble whole apartment complexes. It's name is no exaggeration of what it can do, and shattering earth is not its only danger. Because the pressure in order to create such an explosion is compressed so deeply, when it explodes, it will rapidly cool the air. This can create nasty frost damage on an opponent, even causing frost-bite to living things nearest to the explosion... if they aren't killed or destroyed by the force of the explosion.
Joushoukiryuu (Ascending Air Current)
-- Ability is not spoken. This allows for Azrael to dash at 1.4x regular speed. It is much similar to Chouonsoku, but it is not a destined way and he can change paths at any time. He cannot, however, use this at the same time any of his attacks are charging, or when Monosugoi Bakushinchi is in effect. Only able to use when in correlation with Oiuchi. Can change course up to three times, and use ability once per post.
Oiuchi (Final Blow)
-- Spoken, must have target under restraint or able keep them still long enough. Six pillars fall from the sky in a hexagon. Chains connected to the pillars near the bottom force the target to the ground. Two layers of chains ensure the target to stay down, and so that if to be released, they will have to break up to eight chains. An explosion in the sky releases a storm-cloud of steam. Azrael connects the shock plates of his gauntlet and another roar of an explosion is heard. Azrael will then slam both gauntlets down and the last pillar will fall. The last pillar has a hexagon shaped blade of air to it. The blades will cut through the chains and then come down on the target. As the pillar smashes down on the target, it will explode in to a freezing mess that creates a crystal clan of ice. Last pillar, although being made of air, is compressed to resemble the consistency of stone. This is the reason why it will actually freeze the water particles in the air and create these large ice crystals that ensnare an opponent. [example]
Obtained?: In Training
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 12:33 am
Powers and Abilities Hand-to-Hand Control
-- He is a hand-to-hand fighter naturally. With both his Shikai and later Bankai being both fist weapons, he is learned in the skill. He has little skill with his sword, and does not care to use it.
Survivor
-- Azrael had to learn to fight for what he got when he came to the Soul Society. In doing so, he also had very little to live off of; going day-to-day with what little he had. He learned to eat specific foods to keep himself strong, and to keep going.
Philosophic
-- Azrael keeps a large collection of books in his room, mostly of which is about philosophers and their works. He likes to read these books so he may learn from the past.
Tactical Fighter
-- Azrael really doesn't create a plan when he fights. He makes the plans as he goes on, though. He likes to watch his opponents for a few attacks before actually making his decisions.
Strength, Endurance!
-- Azrael, being a close-combat efficient person, has to keep himself strong and endure a lot. Being so close has given him many scars, most of which would be bigger and possibly more dangerous if he didn't have a high endurance.
Pain Tolerable
-- He has learned to pay attention to the fight rather than the pain from that gash or slash across his chest or back. This can make him reckless, but allows him to fight even when some would think about retreating. Unique Abilities Photographic Memory
-- Azrael has a memory that can save small things, like a face or page of text, and store it where he can later recall it near perfectly.
Perfect Vision
-- Azrael has about as good of vision as you can get. Oh, he wears glasses? Well, that's his personal choice, being so that "The ladies seem to think he's really cute with glasses." This perfect vision also allows him to be aided in combat and when doing assignments, where he misses very little. Miscellaneous Information Likes:
-- Tea
-- Soup
-- Gummy worms
-- Periodic and random naps
-- Food, just.. food.
-- Women
-- Friends
-- Sarcasm
-- Friendly people
Dislikes:
-- Chocolate
-- Steak
-- Onions
-- Mean sarcasm
-- Pompous attitudes
-- High Society people
Fears: Keeps it secret
Trivia:
-- Azrael comes from a low level family where last names are not given.
-- The coat he wears belonged to the man the family knew as "Father". The head of house, and the oldest living member, who passed the House down to Azrael.
-- Azrael absolutely loves gummy worms. Feed them to him if you don't want him to talk anymore, or if you just don't want him to be around you.
-- Azrael has a small machine in his room that allows for him to have a brew of coffee and tea all day.
-- Shukuchoku Leader goes by the name of Nishikihebi (Harlequin Snake), [X]. All members of the Shukuchoku wear the following: [X]. Shinigami Point System (Leave blank until accepted and given a division and rank. Please visit [X]Point System Zanjutsu
Zanpakutō - 100
Swordsmanship - 100
Kidō
Agility
Combat
Hakuda - 100
Resist Damage -100
Physical Strength
Strength - 140
Endurance - 140
Reiryoku -
Reiatsu - 140
Hierro - 140 Points~ 1160 ________________________________________________________
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:35 pm
More of an observation than a real issue, but his Shikai - Physical Change has an anchor chain wrapped around his waist... wouldn't that be a bit... difficult, to move around in?
You might wanna be a bit more specific in Shikai Special Ability when you say he gains increased speed. Put something like +10 to Speed stat, or something like that.
Just for reference, how powerful is Kujiku? You know, can it put a dent in a car, or can it completely topple it, something like that.
Cool, Azrael and Kangen-- a future RPC of mine-- has an ability the both share. biggrin Anyway, quick question about Chouonsoku if he impacts upon someone along the way, what do you think will happen, exactly?
Might wanna ease up on Tenrai having a diamond-like cutting ability that can also be potentially deafening is pushing it a bit.
Odd that you left the majority of his Bankai blank. Though I guess you can fill that out once you attain it. Of course, it will have to be reapproved then before you can use it.
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:45 pm
This is the third Wind Zanpakuto, isn't?GoodthingHibikiisgettingkilledoff. xd
A quick thing though; per se, no one has "perfect" vision... If they had perfect vision, they could probably see all the way until the earth started to actually curve... >_<
Are his Metal cuffs solid gold?
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 3:06 am
Dante_Shadowolf More of an observation than a real issue, but his Shikai - Physical Change has an anchor chain wrapped around his waist... wouldn't that be a bit... difficult, to move around in?
You might wanna be a bit more specific in Shikai Special Ability when you say he gains increased speed. Put something like +10 to Speed stat, or something like that.
Just for reference, how powerful is Kujiku? You know, can it put a dent in a car, or can it completely topple it, something like that.
Cool, Azrael and Kangen-- a future RPC of mine-- has an ability the both share. biggrin Anyway, quick question about Chouonsoku if he impacts upon someone along the way, what do you think will happen, exactly?
Might wanna ease up on Tenrai having a diamond-like cutting ability that can also be potentially deafening is pushing it a bit.
Odd that you left the majority of his Bankai blank. Though I guess you can fill that out once you attain it. Of course, it will have to be reapproved then before you can use it. 1. Well, I was picturing a kind of heavy chain around him, and the only thing that came out was an anchor chain. The more specific size would be about a half-inch thick. 2. Yeap, got tired by the time I was doing those, so I forgot to add that stat stuff. I'll make sure to get that done. 3. Well, a shinigami is probably powerful enough to punch a car over? At least at Lieutenant level? If so, then I'd say able to definitely hurt someone. As it comes from the top, it's aimed to smash the skull which leads to a broken neck. All-in-all, I'd say it should do more than just dent something. 4. Well, that's where his endurance would come in. He's going to be a CQC type of person, so he'll have to take the heavy punishment, and that will allow him to smash in to a wall and turn around with just a little "Ow, that hurt". Besides that, he'll usually block/smash through anything if he comes across it. 5. That's understandable.. Rather than deafen, I should actually put "Deafen the target to most surrounding noises". Like, someone's footsteps, and that stuff. 6. I left it blank because I don't want to put in Bankai if I'm not going to ever be able to use it; kind of just a "Oh, look what I could have" and would only serve as extra writing that gives nothing back~ __________________________ Yeap, I didn't think about making it wind until I started looking in to his style of attacks. Everything I had down was modified from the journal version due to it's need of a reason behind certain powers. My solution was to use the element of air. Yea, talked about the perfect vision thing in PMs. Solid gold? No. That would make them weak, as gold is a weak metal. They are simply just gold colored~
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 6:42 am
Well at most it's just an aesthetic issue anyway. Still struck me as odd though, might wanna reword it.
Cool, just notify me once it's done. Bonuses of +10 are usually alright when it comes to Shikai.
That entirely depends on the Shinigami, of course. Kenpachi could probably do that, but I doubt Mayuri could. Hmm... so it's powerful enough to, say crack a human skull? Sounds reasonable I suppose.
Hmm... well as long as he takes some damage upon impact.
Well that's not what I had in mind exactly, but it'll do.
I can agree with that, a shame though. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 7:34 am
Well, if I knew I would get to be a Captain, I would..
But since I doubt I could get it, I don't really care much for Bankai.
I may add in the attacks in case I am Lieutenant and I get Bankai training, but overall, it'd be useless to me if I wasn't.
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 3:04 am
I'm under the assumption that most, if not all, Lieutenants are able to use their Bankai. If so, then you're probably going to fill that part out pretty soon.
But for now it's approved. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 3:14 pm
Dante_Shadowolf I'm under the assumption that most, if not all, Lieutenants are able to use their Bankai. If so, then you're probably going to fill that part out pretty soon. But for now it's approved. 3nodding I have actually added and edited things.
So, you might wanna look over that if you didn't.
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:42 pm
Shikai Special Ability A suggestion would perhaps be +10 Hoho and +10 Strength.
Might want to add in Kujiku's description that it is enough to crush a human skull, since most Shinigami have large endurance.
Given the description Chouonsoku should probably have a +50 in Hoho, or somewhere along those lines.
I'm not that much of a scientist but I doubt Monosugoi Bakushinchi can freeze opponents, chill them perhaps.
The speed boost of Joushoukiryuu is rather large, even with 100 speed, Azrael will reach 200 speed with very little limitations in terms of maneuverability. Perhaps reduce it to 1.5x?
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 10:57 pm
Dante_Shadowolf
The speed boost of Joushoukiryuu is rather large, even with 100 speed, Azrael will reach 200 speed with very little limitations in terms of maneuverability. Perhaps reduce it to 1.5x?
It needs to be in point terms. To begin with, few things exceeding 140 in Agility are consistent from profile to profile; this is why even matched stats are rarely perfectly matched and have wiggle room. Secondly, the speed in 100/100 doubled would certainly not reach lightning speeds, which is 160 (or 170, not sure) Hohou in Yuki's Bankai.
Need I remind anyone that few things should be exceeding 150 to begin with. This should really only occur in special cases, i.e powerful antagonists or Captain Commander-level RPCs.
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II Palmtop Tiger II Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 11:02 pm
Dante_Shadowolf Shikai Special Ability A suggestion would perhaps be +10 Hoho and +10 Strength.
Might want to add in Kujiku's description that it is enough to crush a human skull, since most Shinigami have large endurance.
Given the description Chouonsoku should probably have a +50 in Hoho, or somewhere along those lines.
I'm not that much of a scientist but I doubt Monosugoi Bakushinchi can freeze opponents, chill them perhaps.
The speed boost of Joushoukiryuu is rather large, even with 100 speed, Azrael will reach 200 speed with very little limitations in terms of maneuverability. Perhaps reduce it to 1.5x? 1. Added.
2. Added.
3. Added.
4. Well, when steam rapidly expands, it will hyper-freeze and turn in to ice particles. Working upon that same idea, air when pressurized and then suddenly released is rapidly cooled in much the same way. Therefore, as I made it, air that would otherwise take up a large area which could destroy an apartment building in rapid expansion and then compress it to the size of a CD in diameter... that's a very compressed little ball of air. If that is to rapidly expand to meet the same requirements of an apartment complex, and most of all to expand in just a few milliseconds to meet this, that would most definitely freeze the water particles in the air, and maybe even cause frost-bite. As for freezing them, I will have changed that.
5. Added
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 11:05 pm
Ah, well that settles it then I approve.
Of course, Taiga seems to have some points of her own so the final approval is up to her. 3nodding
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