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 Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:18 pm
Alright, after my horrendous promo last night in WWF:G, I have come to a realization: god damn it, I am retarded! So, I have chosen to look into my faults, and let it out here, and then get some feedback from the other superstars on how to correct them.
List of my faults (limited)
- Can not post a decent promo
- When promos are posted, they go overboard
- Does not understand when to stop posting promos
- When Chrono gives Hiro advice, he listens to it, but is for some reason led astray from it
There is more, I know. Those seem like the most important problems that need to be corrected, so they were mentioned. Now, for the hell of it, I will say some good things about myself.
List of my good qualities
- I actually can wrestle, and when I put my mind to it, can have a decent gimmick
- Unlike most people who get on the nerves of the fedding community and do stupid s**t, I am literate and can type in full sentences.
- I am not that bad of a guy...I think
Well, thats it. Give me some feedback! Please, Im just looking to get better so that I can have a decent career here. Thanks.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:57 pm
I see a lot of potential in you, even if it was stemming from our one match. My main suggestion to you is to start an angle with one other wrestler and actually create a storyline, You seem to be trying to start angles with everyone and keep using the R Truth characterization to try and seem off.
Vary it up chico, if you wanna mess with different fedders, change up your approach. Here's example: Lets say Hiro wants to mess with 187, ******** come out dressed as Immigration and say something stupid like referencing taco bell or what not.
Simply put, focus on starting an angle with one individual and change up how you showcase your character's insanity and your promos could flow easily.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:09 pm
I see. Alright, I will work on angles. I actually have made a change in my gimmick, I am planning on stopping with the interruptions, and Im going to debut a darker version Hiro at Conquest.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:19 pm
ok, since you said dark, and i'm the resident dark guy, my advice to you, beware how you do a dark gimmick.
ie, do not rip off taker's powers, that would enormously piss us all off. do not rip off Jeff hardy, mostly because the dark jeff hardy in tna sucked majorly.
if you go dark, put your own twist on it. steer clear of r truth stuff too.
best piece of advice i can give you, do not interfere with other people's s**t. i managed to work it out when you interfered in mine to make jarel look good again, but honestly, there was never any need for you to be there. that promo between jarel, draze, snypa, and harli could have been epic being that i've been allies with all of them and all of them want to face me
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 12:56 pm
I liked the promo. It was expertly done.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:25 pm
Well, on the road to getting better, I won my first championship in 2 years, the LWL World Title.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:28 pm
Super Cphiro Well, on the road to getting better, I won my first championship in 2 years, the LWL World Title. Well, the problem isn't so much with your ringwork, its more with your promoing. So sure that helps the confidence, but it doesn't target the real problem.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:31 pm
Dion Necurat Super Cphiro Well, on the road to getting better, I won my first championship in 2 years, the LWL World Title. Well, the problem isn't so much with your ringwork, its more with your promoing. So sure that helps the confidence, but it doesn't target the real problem. This is true. Still have to work on the promos, but a title is always a bonus.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:33 pm
Super Cphiro Dion Necurat Super Cphiro Well, on the road to getting better, I won my first championship in 2 years, the LWL World Title. Well, the problem isn't so much with your ringwork, its more with your promoing. So sure that helps the confidence, but it doesn't target the real problem. This is true. Still have to work on the promos, but a title is always a bonus. If anything, it gives you an opportunity to work on your promoing. You're a champion now, so you get to talk smack.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:36 pm
Dion Necurat Super Cphiro Dion Necurat Super Cphiro Well, on the road to getting better, I won my first championship in 2 years, the LWL World Title. Well, the problem isn't so much with your ringwork, its more with your promoing. So sure that helps the confidence, but it doesn't target the real problem. This is true. Still have to work on the promos, but a title is always a bonus. If anything, it gives you an opportunity to work on your promoing. You're a champion now, so you get to talk smack. Yeah, you have a point. Its just upsetting that the one guild that I win the world title in is the only one where im Face.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:38 pm
Super Cphiro Dion Necurat Super Cphiro Dion Necurat Super Cphiro Well, on the road to getting better, I won my first championship in 2 years, the LWL World Title. Well, the problem isn't so much with your ringwork, its more with your promoing. So sure that helps the confidence, but it doesn't target the real problem. This is true. Still have to work on the promos, but a title is always a bonus. If anything, it gives you an opportunity to work on your promoing. You're a champion now, so you get to talk smack. Yeah, you have a point. Its just upsetting that the one guild that I win the world title in is the only one where im Face. You can still use it to work on promoing. Alignment doesn't affect your RP ability.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:39 pm
Super Cphiro Dion Necurat Super Cphiro Dion Necurat Super Cphiro Well, on the road to getting better, I won my first championship in 2 years, the LWL World Title. Well, the problem isn't so much with your ringwork, its more with your promoing. So sure that helps the confidence, but it doesn't target the real problem. This is true. Still have to work on the promos, but a title is always a bonus. If anything, it gives you an opportunity to work on your promoing. You're a champion now, so you get to talk smack. Yeah, you have a point. Its just upsetting that the one guild that I win the world title in is the only one where im Face. Then you can change that, a title is a good point to change, you can be a cocky p***k champion. Or flip heel somehow.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:47 pm
THIS THREAD IS NOW ABOUT:
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:48 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:49 pm
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