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Hey guildies razz

Yeah, I don't even think this people has joined the guild. Not in the member's list.

Rule four is easy. Don't advertise outside RPs, threads, or anything else unless you have 10 posts in the guild.
A link to the guild in your sig (I think at one point having the link to the guild in the main post was an alternate).

Or a link to that RP or thing being advertised in your sig.

In your advertising post here it is to include the link to the post.

You have said nothing to grab our attention that would make us want to look at your RP which is fundamental. You might think that we are being mean about this but that's not true. We merely want you to do your best right from the beginning. If you think that just by posting it here hoping that your 'guildies' will help out of loyalty or something like that then you are sadly mistaken.

First you should watch your spelling, punctuation, and basic grammar. How can you not capitalize 'I' in a guild that prides itself on being at most semi-lit?

Now for the link.
I won't go into detail about your introduction, but it seems contradictory that you demand semi-literate players yet you do not watch your own grammar. The settings and details of the RP is lacking. All that we are aware of is that there is a war going on and there is a hospital where the injured are taken.

I am not sure where you are going with the residents being cursed to see thousands die. We're not sure if you mean this because it is a hospital in a warring area so seeing people die is common place. Or perhaps you are taking a figurative page from Death Note or Zombie Loan where people actually have the ability to see the signs of someone's impending demise.

To be brutally honest there isn't anything really appealing about your RP and as it stands I could only see close friends of yours or people who are accustomed to RPing with you joining you for this.

I advice you to go back and revise it, check on your spelling and grammar, and elaborate more.