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Vesale


King Kitten

PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:04 am


Sailor Undina, Senshi of Rivers
PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:06 am


User ImageName: Jetta Ashford

Nickname: Jet

Age: 19

Birthday: 21st March

Sign: Aries

Gemstone: Aquamarine

Blood Type: B+

Fav. Food: Organic foods, salads, sushi. Does coffee count?

Hated Food: Tripe. Her mothers cooking.

School: Destiny City University

Hobbies:

World Issues
There's so much going on in the world around us, and Jetta has to know what it is. She's spends a lot of her free time reading articles online about what is happening in other countries, and always keeps up with the current big issues the country and others are facing. Jetta tries to check her favorite news websites at least once a day to stay on top of what is happening. She also likes to discuss what's going on with others, though whether they actually know what she's talking about is an entirely different matter.

Journalism
Jetta's goal in life is to be a world renowned newspaper journalist, known for covering hard hitting, real stories, not celebrity gossip and hear-say. Jetta is undertaking a degree in Journalism at DCU, as well as being a member of the student newspaper committee and working a part-time internship at the local Destiny City Newspaper (though all she does at the moment is run errands and fetch peoples drinks and lunches. She's hoping this will change soon). As if this wasn't enough, she also maintains a blog where she talks about many different things from her own perspective. Writing is an important part of journalism, so Jetta likes to practice, mostly just writing short stories or articles on things that interest her. She doesn't publish these anywhere (unless she thinks the articles are good enough for her blog) but she does keep them in folder, stored away to catalog her improvement.

Coffee
If there is one drink Jetta is addicted to it's coffee. She loves everything about coffee, from the taste, to the smell, the look and even the different coffee mugs you can get. She has to have at least 5 cups everyday. She has no one favorite drink, she loves them all, and tries as many different flavors and types as she can. A main part of the reason for her love of coffee is the atmosphere of little coffee shops. She loves seeking out small shops and hanging out for the day, watching people as the come and go, listening to the different types of music they play and analyzing the different interior style of each place. She's still not found her 'One' store though, and is constantly on the lookout.

Plants
Jetta has a soft spot for plants that she picked up from the family gardener at a young age. She loves gardening, from sowing the seed to watching the flowers blossom, Jetta loves everything about it. It makes her feel calm and peaceful. In her room she has a shelf dedicated to small indoor plants that she tends, as well as a small selection of herbs sitting on the windowsill above her sink and on her balcony, Jetta also keeps a makeshift vegetable patch. She loves to grow her own foods and is always planting something new, though it doesn't always end well. She misses the large, expansive garden of her family home, but it was the price she had to pay for living on her own.

Virtues:
Smart
Jetta is a smart girl. With a heart surgeon for a father, it's safe to say brains run in the family. She did well in school, being in the top group of all her classes, though not necessarily the top. What she does best is retain information and because of this she’s always keen to read, study, and learn about new things. She's also not afraid to show that she's smart. Jetta prefers to be herself rather than pretend to be someone she's not, so she doesn't hide the fact that she does have a brain and she can use it.

Practical
Jetta is practical in every sense of the word. When making a decision, she takes her time to reason and work out the most practical answer. She wears comfortable and practical clothing, she'll happily take a pair of jeans and sneakers over a dress and high heels. She doesn't wear clothes to look good, and she rarely wears jewelery. If there's a fight or argument, she'll offer a practical solution is she thinks it will help. She'll only buy things if their useful, if she wants a watch she'll buy a solid watch that you can read the time on, not some flimsy little thing that has a face barely the size of a fingernail. If she's left with decision making, she'll reason and choose the most practical option, even if another might do more good. When she talks she gives practical, straightforward answers, she doesn't beat around the bush or sugarcoat things.

Passionate
When something strikes a cord with Jetta, she can become really passionate about it. Her passion ranges from a variety of sources, from her passion for gardening, coffee, journalism and news, to other things like learning, her friendships, and writing. Her degree of passion varies, but nearly everything she partakes in she is passionate behind, and often has some sort of personal meaning behind it to be the driving force of the passion she holds. She gives one hundred percent to those things, striving to do her best or be the best, whatever the case may be. If it is something she is truly, madly passionate about, then she may forgo some of her beliefs and views to give it her all.

Cautious
Jetta is not cautious in the sense of not trusting and being scared of everyone around her, rather she is just aware that some people may not always be as they seem (thanks again to the way she was brought up) and so can take time to warm up to things. Sure, she will get along well with people, or go along with other plans and such, but until she truly trusts someone or understands the reasoning behind their course of action, Jetta will remain on guard, and will not devote herself completely.

Flaws:
Always right
Jetta knows that she's smart. And because of this, she almost always thinks she is right. It doesn't matter if someone has a different opinion or answer to something, hers is the right one. In class she would answer first when she knew something, and if someone answered wrongly she would be the first to correct them. Because of this she can also be seen as a bit of a know it all. People could often find this annoying, because Jetta usually stands by her decisions and answers and rarely backs down, and doesn't like it much if she has to. She also hates being wrong or being proven wrong, and would become quite sulky if it did occur.

Blunt
Jetta says what she thinks, and she doesn't strip it back or disguise it with words. Because of this she can come across as very blunt, which some might not appreciate. She doesn't think this is a problem, and feels that its better if people didn't walk around things. It isn't that she always tells the truth, she definitely does her fair share of lying. It's just the way she words things may not be received very well.

Obsessive
Because of her passion, Jetta can become obsessed with some things. When she is obsessed with something, she'll spend all her time thinking about it, she'll talk about it, if it's not being talked about she'll try and bring the conversation back to it. Her mind becomes one tracked, where she can't really focus on anything else. This could become frustrating for some, because if Jetta is fixated on something, it can be very hard to get her to pay attention to/concentrate on something else. The things she's most likely to get obsessed about are a piece of writing she's working on, a new place or piece of music, an problem she's having with someone, almost everything.

Untrusting
Jetta takes a long time to warm up to people, and to trust what they say. Mostly because she thinks that everyone has an ulterior motive for wanting to talk to her, befriend her, or ask her on a date. You can't possibly want to be friends just because, no you must know that I'm smart and that if you become friends with me then you can get my answers. She finds it hard to see the good and genuine natures in people, and instead tends to focus on what she thinks might be their bad or negative attributes. She can trust and become friends with others, it would just take a long time.


Vesale


King Kitten



Vesale


King Kitten

PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:10 am


User ImageSenshi: Sailor Undina, Senshi of Rivers

Challenge: "Nothing can stop a raging river!"

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: "Undina's River, flow!"
Undina raises a hand and points to the sky as she speaks the first two words of her attack. As she speaks the third word, she lowers her pointed hand at the target, pointing to them by the words end. From there the attack begins. A body of water begins to charge at the intended target, following them if they choose to move, creating a river-type effect in the air, with the water's starting point beginning at Undina, and flowing through the opponent. The water's level at this stage is between the ankles and knees, with the width being about that of one and a half people. This would just cause the target to be slowed down, and perhaps slip or fall over if they were extremely clumsy. Anything they were wearing from the level of the water down would also become wet. The water does have some force to it, it would be like wading out to a fast flowing river, you can feel it, but because it's shallow it doesn't really knock you over. The attack would last for approximately 20 seconds, with the water continuing to flow for this time. Undina could use this attack twice per battle, but would be extremely drained.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: "Undina's River, rage!"
The attack is exactly the same as the previous attack, except now the water would be up to the targets waist, although the width has stayed the same. Because the amount of water has risen the effects have increased, the target can be knocked over as well as slowed down now, and if they were to fall over, the water would continue flowing over them until the time had finished. This attack would last for 15 seconds and Undina could use it twice per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: "Undina's River, Torrent!"
Undina raises both her hands into the air at the first two words. At the last word, she swings her arms down. From a radius around the target of 3m, 10 torrents of water charge at them. The water is roughly cylindrical, each torrent is approximately 1m long, and the path that it follows to the target is not straight. The water is very fast, and when it hits the target, would feel like a very solid punch. The water can be dodged by the target, although there are many coming for it all at the same time. This attack can only be used once per battle and lasts only 10 seconds, 1 second per torrent, as the torrents move swiftly and once all 10 have hit, the attack is over.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:19 am


Mother
---> Socialite, comes from old money

Father
---> Heart surgeon, rich, well respected.

Huge family home, lots of wealthy, snobby garden parties and the like. Jetta disliked growing up like that, because people were always acting nice to each other and talking behind their backs.


Vesale


King Kitten



Vesale


King Kitten

PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:22 am


Extras
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 2:46 am


Ready for criting/stamping!

My powers are very bleh. I can see how they would be in my mind, but translating that to words isn't the easiest thing. XD;;


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King Kitten


cibarium

Noob

PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 5:49 pm


You need tone down her Smart virtue a little. Right now she's being depicted as being more knowledgeable and a faster learner than everyone about everything, both in a scholastic sense and a social sense -- that's a bit overpowered. What would fix this really easily is focus this on how she's a quick thinker OR eager to learn OR socially flexible. Giving her all three of these things is too much for one trait!

Other than that her personality reads fine and her senshi attacks are lovely! I would specify how much time passes between each torrent in her Eternal attack, though.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2015 6:35 pm


*REVIVES*

I haven't touched anything but adding a duration between torrents in the eternal attack and altered her Smart trait as suggested by Mouse eons ago. sweatdrop


Vesale


King Kitten



Kyuseisha no Hikari

Crew

Dragonslaying Dragon

PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2015 9:58 am


Vesale


Hey there! I'm super excited to get Undina stamped for you (she is beautiful and well writen!), and I have just one concern about her eternal attack before she gets one! Ten punches in ten seconds is enough to hurt someone a decent amount; it might be best if when using the attack the blows when hitting could range from a weak punch to a solid punch (that way the target could be hit with more of them without being beaten to a pulp in a matter of seconds!). It would give players a bit of freedom and allow them to be hit more often (rather then them trying to dodge most of the rivers because of the heavy damage it could cause). Or perhaps after the first hit of a river, each additional hit on a person lessens in damage?

Alternately she could also be able to target more than one person during this attack and it would still be fair (and might be helpful in ORPs!). Rather than all of her rivers needing to go hit one person, she could aim for several different ones?

Please let me know what you think or if you have an alternate suggestion and give me a quote if you have any questions or comments or make any changes! <3
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