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 Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 9:17 am
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 9:22 am
Certing
Username: Chibi_Kokoro143
Nickname: Chibi, Koko, Cheebes
Gender: Female
DEX Number: #222
Species: Corsola
Type: Water/Rock
Ability: Regenerator
Job: Owner of Sea Side Treasures: A Specialty store *she sometimes volunteers in giving tour guides*
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 9:23 am
Basic Info
[IMAGE GOES HERE]
Name: Undine
Origin of Name: From a German folktale, The Sleep of Ondine, the water nymph
(This is where the "For Artist" info was suppose to be)
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 9:24 am
About the Character
Personality:
>>Level-Head: When Undine is calm, she can think things throughly and efficiently. This allows her to be able to see a person for who they are and can tell wether to trust them or not. During her travels, she was bound to run into a lot of trouble and being calm, allowed her to figure out a solution. But sometimes she can be rattled. When over come with a loss she will not be able to think clearly and will have to take some time to calm down
>>Insightful: Again, it goes hand in hand with the Level-Head. She can sense a person's feelings and sense the situation. This allows her to help anyone she can and become friends with them too. Or not, sometimes she sticks her nose where it shouldn't be. Sometimes Undine's insight will not work with confused feelings or mixed, especially when those feelings are love and hate for those feelings can become complicated and can be made up of several other feelings. When this happens, she'll stay out of the way until they've calm down
>>Stubborn: Once she gets something stuck on her mind, it'll stay there for awhile. This can be good or bad for her. She won't ever admit that she was wrong when she was and has a one track mind when it comes to her latest project or adventure. Until something comes along to persuade her, she'll stick.
>>Rebelious: Goes hand in hand with Stubborn a little. She has tried to do something out of the norm and tries to live life by her rules. People might not like it or think she's weird, but she's trying to live life to the fullest.
>>Ironic: She can also do something unexpected for her personality. When people she her all hyper and energetic, they are completely surprise if she does something like relaxing in a chair and reading a book. She can be confusing but it also makes her a bit mysterious to people who don't know her that well.
>>Strong: A strong will, mind, and body. Her charisma can make her look like a show off and others might try to bring her down, but she remains strong.. She promises to her self that she will keep on going through life and nothing will bring her down. Though some hurtful words here or there can leave a mark.
>>Courageous: She is brave and sometimes able to face her fears. She is scared of a lot of things, but she knows if she faces them, they will become the things worth most while. Bugs are a different story.
>>Loyal: She is only loyal to a very few and she becomes loyal towards the very end. She will stick by you like glue and if you ever need a shoulder to lean on she'll be there. She's the best friend that you've always wanted. To those who breaks that trust it will take for her to trust you again. You're facts might make you innocent but it will be awhile and a lot of hard work to make Undine trust someone again.
>>Lonely: From traveling place to place, she doesn't make that much connections to others and since settling down a little, it seem to make it worst. Sometimes others can't handle her and her friends keep on making her the leader and person to lean on, it's hard to find someone who she can lean on from time to time. She can be hard on herself as well and it can make her envious of others. If she compares herself to her friends like saying her friends are pretty but then her friends don't think they're pretty enough either, that makes her feel more alone. It's very complicated. She can succumb to the feelings of loneliness when she feels there is no way but she will get over it once something exciting comes along. However, it can still lingers behind.
>>Charismatic: She tends to attract people and becomes a fierce leader in the community. She's the one you turn to for advise and someone you can trust. She has a charm that makes people smile. But sometimes she can attract trouble with her Charismatic behavior and she could end up in a situation. She will somehow outsmart this problem and figure out a solution, by herself or with her friends.
Habits: She would usually go online and put a little post on what she plans to do today. A little blog and check her email.
She would then get dress and treat herself by going to the cafe she frequents often, order, and look at all the *coughs* eye candy that passes by.
Then she mostly works on the weekdays and hangs out and does something new on the weekends.
Quirks: Look at her hands. He hands usually tells people what she's feeling and sometimes you would see the sudden shift in her eyes.
Hobbies: Dancing, shopping, playing video games, drawing (traditional or using a tablet), and swimming
Dislikes: Liars, clowns, bugs and dirty things (Like unclean dishes and bathrooms. Those type of dirty)
Likes:Seashells, watching the seasons and days go by, eye candy, and anything pink.
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 9:25 am
Just-for-Fun Stuff
Educational Background: She's very high in math but everything else no. She can read books that interest her and can remember every single detail in the books she reads.
Intelligence Level: Above Average
Physical/Mental Condition: Physical, Fine. She's iffy with the metal condition, tends to speak out loud and tends to forget and talks to herself a lot and doubts herself too.
Learning Experiences: Been traveling the world with different pokemon groups and learning the unique culture and history of each.
Character's short-term goals in life: To discover the secrets of Hiun City
Character's long-term goals in life: To find someone who can keep up and understand her and love her for who she is.
How does Character see himself/herself? Cool, artistic, and rebellious
How does Character believe he/she is perceived by others? That Undine is too much for them to handle, and that she is a very odd, considering her hobbies. *Sky diving, rock climbing, etc* Also they can find her quite charming and fun
Does the character seem ruled by emotion or logic or some combination thereof? Im thinking both. Some days one might over power the other but they are pretty much balanced.
What would most embarass this character? Being humiliated in public
Introvert or Extrovert? Extrovert
How will the character deal with anger? She tends to fume and call a group meeting with her friends and rant. Until she tallks to her friends, she ignores everyone and keeps it hidden until she burst.
--------------------------------------With sadness? Same thing with anger since they both go hand in hand with her.
--------------------------------------With conflict? She tries to smooth things out with talk, that doesn't work she gives it the okay to brawl.
--------------------------------------With change? She can handle it. She used to travel from place to place, seeking adventure so seeing a place where she settled down in changing wont be a surprise to her.
--------------------------------------With loss? She locks herself up and cries and cries until she falls asleep. After the storm, she calms down and then remembers all the happy memories with one person.
What does the character want out of life? Fullfillment
What would the character like to change in his/her life? Some sort of companionship and a sense of belonging.
What motivates this character? The future outlook of life and what might happen next
What frightens this character?Bugs. She is scared of bug pokemon, except some. Like Surskit and Masquerain for they were once water pokemon. Some she can tolerate like beautifly and butterfree. The rest are a no.
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:49 am
-Temp crit staff at the request of Hoshi Lockhart-
This isn't actually a crit but a request. Please break down each individual trait into it's own separate blurb. You can keep the paragraphs you have already but I want each trait to have it's own section so that you can better explain and develop each trait.
The paragraphs themselves are too vague to count for the personality requirements. You need 5 good and bad traits with a minimum of 3 sentences per each trait. That means a minimum of 30 total sentences. As is you have 8 and they are not in the proper format.
If you're unsure of what I'm asking for please feel free to check out the approved quest Sif the Flaaffy to see the proper format.
Thank you. :3
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 6:59 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:37 pm
Temp Crit staff for Hoshicakes.
Level headed: I like that you mention this is a trait that has developed over time. Is there ever a time when she gets shaken up and can't be so calm when she's thinking?
Insightful: How does she react to people she can't read? Has she ever found one?
Stubborn: I like that you mention she'll change her mind if she is presented with facts. How MUCH would it take though? It seems like it wouldn't be easy to change her mind!
Disobedient: I'm not sure what this trait should be called but I don't think disobedience is the correct word. It sounds more like a "dances to her own drum" kind of thing. Disobedient is like, not taking out the trash when mom tells you to.
Ironic: This trait also seems like it should be something about unexpected mood swings. The word ironic technically fits what you're describing but it seems off to me.
Strong: " Her strong will is a little bit faltered for some doesn't like her Charismatic behavior and constantly try to bring it down, but she still keeps it up." That sentences confuses me. I think I understand what you're saying but for clarity's sake, could you please rewrite it? It seems kind of random.
Courageous: I love how she sometimes can face her fears and other times can't. Very realistic. <3
Loyal: What happens if someone breaks her undying trust? How would she react?
Lonely: I like that behind the vibrant personality is this very sad, hidden trait. Does she overcome this feeling or succumb to it?
Charisma: Has this trait ever attracted the attention of the wrong kind of person? How did she react or deal with it if it has?
"How does Character believe he/she is perceived by others? That Undine is too much for them to handle, extreme wise since she does odd things. *Sky diving, rock climbing, etc* Also they can find her quite charming and fun"
This is hard for me to understand. It's written a little strangely. Could you perhaps rewrite it? I don't understand what you're saying with the "extreme wise" part.
"Does the character seem ruled by emotion or logic or some combination thereof? Im thing both"
Is this supposed to say "I'm thinking both?"
Also, I like that she's afraid of bugs and bug pokemon. x3 It's adorable. <3
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:07 am
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