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Amaroq K

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 12:44 pm




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Full Name: Miyuki Uchiha


Nickname: Mai


Famous Shinobi Name: none yet
[Chuunin or higher]

Birth date: 7/20


Age: 13


Gender: Female


Sexual Orientation: Straight


Rank:
Genin [Unless told other wise]

Shinobi Profession:
Ninjutsuist



Nindo:
A girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do



Major Shinobi Information:

Bloodline: Uchiha Sharingan
Current Bloodline/Demon/Curse Mark Stage: not unlocked yet
Chakra Color: blue
Chakra Element: fire, wind. The wind element is yet to be unlocked though.
Chakra Level: medium
Chakra Control: between medium and high.

Battle Strength: Ninjutsu
Battle Weakness: Genjutsu?

Shinobi Class:
Ninjutsuist



Headband Location: wrapped around her waist
Headband Style: Leaf Ninja
Headband Color: forest green

Weapon Class: long range
Name of Weapon: Fuma Shruiken.
Weapon Range: about 100 feet.
Special Abilities: can be cloned.
Weapon Location: in her back, folded up.

Other Weapons: Metal string.


Kunai Holster Location: Right shin
Kunai Holster Color: Red
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Left thigh
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Pink
Backpack Color: Black
Backpack Style: Same as any ninja's


Squad Number/Squad Name: [Only if teacher]
Squad Members: [N/A]
1. _______ (Genin)
2. _______ (Genin)
3. _______ (Genin)

Technique List:

Ninjutsu:
1. Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
2. Bushin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
3. Kawarimi no Jutsu - Substitution Technique
4. Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
5. Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
6.Katon Housenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Mythical Fire Flower Technique)
7. Katon: Yojin Bunshin no Jutsu (Fire Release: Ember Clone Technique)
8.Katon: Ichi (Fire Release: One)
9.
10.

Taijutsu:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.

Genjutsu
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.


Personal Shinobi Information:

Height: 5'4"

Weight: 105 lbs

Eye Color: green

Personality: She is passionate, loves her older sister Kagome, and is loyal to a fault.

Personal Skill:
She is skilled with hand to hand weapons. Plus, she's a fast learner. Also, she can to hand to hand combat if needed.


Favorite Food: Chicken ramen.

Favorite Drink: Mango iced tea

Least Favorite Food: Asparagus

Likes: Being able to hang out with her sister when she's not out on missions.

Dislikes:
Bullies, asparagus, and disloyalty.v


Hates: traitors are the worst for her.

Village: Leaf

Family: As far as she knows, all she has is her older sister.


Background History:
She had only been five years old when tragedy had struck her family. Her father had left the leaf village to join the Seven Shinobi swordsman. However, because he was such a hopeless, raging drunk they had kicked him out at the first opportunity. With that poor little Miyuki's life became hell. As much as her older brother Yumi would try to protect her, her sister, and mother the violent man would just beat him. Then proceed to beat the rest of them. Then one day, the older brother suddenly disappeared. With that, the two sisters and mother ran for their dear lives while the raging drunk was sleeping. The two were taught the basics of ninja survival by their mother. However their mom got sick and with a village nearby they could save their mom. However, they ran across an assassin. He immediately killed the mother and then turned to little Miyuki, who was but six years old at the time. That was when her older sister's rage was kindled and she brutally murdered the assassin before he could lay a finger on her little sister.



Theme Song:
Second Chance- Shinedown



Extra Comments on Character:
She is an extremely friendly person.


PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 2:50 am




Ok, there are just a couple problems with your profile but we can clear it up pretty easily ^^:

- Don't forget to capitalize some of the fine points in your profile. Keep the pride in making your profile looking good ^^

- For the section that speak on your bloodline, make sure to specify that Miyuki hasn't unlocked her Sharingan just yet.

-Chakra Control: It will just stay medium.

- You must have some battle weakness

-With your weapon, it beleive it's the Uchiha variation of the Fuma Shuriken. And though your weapon may reach 100 feet to a Ninja of strength, it may be half that if not less because Miyuki is a Ninjutsu-ist, not a weapons expert or Taijutsu-ist that would have the specialty of the full distance of the weapon. Secondly, if your going to say it can be cloned, it will have to be more define.

For example, if you want it to be cloned, you will have to gain some sort of seal that can manipulate that ability. ( I'm thinking the best choice would be a Uchiha seal which you can learn from one of your siblings. ^^ ) Secondly, the cloning of the weapons will only work, once the user has learned 'Kage Bushin no Jutsu' or one of it's variants. That will have it make more sense. ^^

- Techniques: You are going to have to remove your second elemental jutsu from the list. As a Genin, you can't have your second element unlocked. As well as you having a Chuunin level technique. That is fine, if you learned it but as for auto-learning a technique, you can only choose from D-ranked jutsu's and below. So once you remove your other two jutsu's, you can add two more from D-rank and below.

- Lastly, since you said that your character is a little more proficient in Taijutsu, then this would be the best thing to put as your personal skill. Just elaborate it on it a little bit more. ^^ But if you pick it, the being fast, trait will be more so of a ternary trait. Meaning if a character that has speed either out of their clan, out of a picked personal skill, or out of a triggered technique, they will be faster than you.

Other than that, looks good. Edit those things and I'll check it out later. ^^
 

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Amaroq K

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 5:23 am


first of all, I was dead tired when I was doing this profile XD. Second, are you saying I can't have genin jutsu?
PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 6:21 am


Lol that's why I didn't rate the profile so hard mon ami. ^^

- lol, I said D-Ranked, which is Genin level. But there was a Chuunin level jutsu that you had previously last time.

- But just put in all the things I said to edit into consideration and I'll check it again. ^^
 

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 4:31 am


which i did if you had checked XD.
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