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PostPosted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 11:17 pm


Here is where you can post the most fail things you've seen in RP! Please, have a blast, and everyone, don't take it too seriously alright? Add in a little description to give us some background as well!  
PostPosted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 11:20 pm


Deil Grist
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Thank you Shay, as do I...as do I (:

Now, I have a quick announcement. If anyone ever posts like this in this guild, I will slay you with a blast of 60830129 pixels from my pixel cannon....and ban you of course... I'll have you know that this was a serious post that I came across, I didn't make this. I'll swear to the sexy potato in my last post.


Niajhay
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Niajhay watkis

Niajhay looked around as he saw what was happening he was a little confused as all this crazy SH!TZZZZ going about.

First the young shinobi was really p!!!!sed about it was twice now that the mizukage stopped him getting in on some action but an idea came to mind maybe he knew something he doesn't he was really confused.

Then some big assed mother f@ed shark came and nearly to his freaking head of after that 2 younge kunoichi(genin) came out his fre@king head his fre@king head o o o but then they just walk of like fre@king nothings happened.

Woe woe woe woe tmi man tmi.

But the ashy grew young shinobi just reacted with two blinks and shouted out.

''WTF(Basically saying what the f@ck) is going on.Hmmm im board to death now doing jack for jack''.

He thought to go and find a mission to do but shook his head

'' naarr to board man''.

Niajhay bent to the floor and then bent down side ways in a sort of lazy sleeping position.




Genin l kenjutsu l kirigakure

200 0 occ: some crazy sh!tz going about here

It makes you want to lol and puke at the same time...
It looks like what you would get if you mix Shikamaru, Killer Bee, and Napa from DBZ abridged in a "wtf is this" blender and serve it with a side of SHI....
Watch out guys, I think it's contagious. Such a waste of a pro picture too.



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Here we have an epic dose of super fail, followed by a epic dose of super win by Deil. Please TUP, don't make the mistake of EVER posting like this. If I offered you money to do something like this, please say no, and promptly spartan kick me into Le Closet, or off a cliff...whichever seems closest. Now remember everyone, Naar to board!
 

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 10:04 am


Anything that came from the mind of Kills 666 or Hayate-Sempai.... No posts required.  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:30 am


Deil Grist
X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X
Bijuu's Name: Houkou Or Gobi

General Abilities: Control Over All Five Elements
No Elemental Weakness
Increased Sense Of Smell Equivalent To That Of A Inuzuka Clan Member
Ability To Sense Others Chakra
A Mild Speed Increase

Did you have this bijuu in VR?
No
Briefly explain how unlocking tails works and what the risks are for using more tails than your character can handle:
Upon reaching the required rank for a tail, five techniques must be learned. From the sixth technique onward, a 100-sided dice will be rolled after each technique. If the dice lands on a 20 or lower, then the host is taken into his mind and forced to fight with a future version of themselves that has the next stage activated (ex: host knows up to stage 5, then future version is in stage 6.) If the host manages to survive for at least 6 posts, they are certified for the next stage. If they cannot, then they black-out and the demon controls the host's body for however many posts that the host had yet to go through. In the chance that the host has learned every technique available to them at the time, then they must fight their other self once every day until the next stage is unlocked.
In the case that a forced activation of a tail is used--in other words, if the host uses more tails than they can handle--they have a high chance of losing complete control of themselves. In the case that they lost control and cannot be subdued, the bijuu will continue going through each stage until the final stage is reached. Once the last stage is reached, the seal holding the demon is undone and the bijuu is released.
Why do you want to have a bijuu?
I Never Feel Comfortable In a Naruto Guild With Applying For A Bijuu To Understand The Severity Of The Literacy Needed For A Bijuu And I Find It To Be Very Useful To Have A Bijuu With Your Rpc And Would Use It To Benefit My Own Rp Experience.

Why do you want THIS bijuu?
I've Rped Multiple Times With The Gobi And It's One Bijuu I'm Certain I Have A Good Understanding Of No Matter How Complicated The System Around It Is. (Just Pointing Out How Complicated Your System Is)

Give me an RP sample of your character fighting in stage one and another RP sample of you fighting in any stage other than the first or last one.
Genin, Ninjutsu Class, Raiton
Soul kicked a rock through the forest being another Genin in Konoha he felt as if he wasn't different possibly the only thing unique about him was his raiton chakra. Which was very rare in Konoha. But it boggled him that every time he took a look at an adult they would look at him as if he was something to be left for dead and never to be seen again. He continued walking as he heard a rustling behind him. He stopped.

He listened again but the rustling had stopped, he continued onward but on guard as he held his kunai close and that's when it happened he was tackled to the floor with a kunai placed to his throat. He panicked and thrust his own kunai into the arm of his attacker. He ran and ran through the forest unsure of what to do, but he never realized that someone else had been following him along with the attacker it was his long time crush Kyoha Arbelaez, but the attacker took notice and decided to use her as bate he stopped infront of Soul with Kyoha in hand.

"Stay still and she doesn't have to die." the perp stated. Soul was distraught he had no idea what to do but in his panicked mine all he could hear was run and as he took a steep backwards an incision was made into Kyoha's collar, as the blood trickled down from her collar bone onto her silky white dress. Soul blacked out his body froze, inside his mind a heap of darkness surrunded him he began to search through ths arkness not knowing where he was, he finally reached a dead end, where he saw a giant cage with two giant blue eyes looking down at him. What's the matter boy haven't seen me in 15 years and all ofa sudden you don't have any respect. Soul flinched and then bowed down. "Sorry, Os.....Bijuu-sama." he greeted the Gobi and then rose. "I guess you've come here for something so powerful you couldn't even begi to comprehend." The Gobi said in a ridling form. "You know I hate it when you speak in riddles." Soul responded. "You haave no right to an opinion yet boy. The Gobi retorted. Soul bowed his head. "Take it and leave. The Gobi said as he roared and a massive amount of chakra flooded through Soul. Soul looked down his head to the ground as his hair covered his eyes he didn't move.

And when he finally looked up any being that looked into his eyes would've been frightened the immense chakra he was giving off blew the leaves and twigs around him and his glare, was so intense it blew back the mahogany brown hair back from Kyoha's face as she cried it angered him even more as his own ash blonde locks began to blow wildly from his chakra.

His mystifying blue eyes glaring at the attacker as if it were trying to pierce his soul, his skin now covered in thin layer of silky whitish brown fur. Soul made a movement, but he was gone. when he finally reappeared the stench of the attacker was foul as if he hadn't bathed in months, he grabbed Kyoha with intense swift movements and placed her in a tree as he landed back onto the ground his nails turned red as he began weaving hand signs and then released a barrage of fireballs.

"Katon: Phoenix flower jutsu!" he shouted as the balls of fire shot towards his attacker causing him to jump and dodge. Soul being a combo master appeared next to him using Air riding skill and then using kaze bakuhatsu technique and smashing an explosion into his attackers face sending him flying. Soul appeared again slashing his hands in a swift movement leaving a gash on his attacker back not using his hands but instead using Kaze no yoroi. He finally drew his father's katana as the winds began to intensify, suddenly they stopped and when the attacker looked behind him Soul was gone.

Suddenly he sunk into the ground and was now only a head sticking out of the dirt as Soul himself reappeared. soul waved in a cutesy manner signifying a form of goodbye as he brought his sword down and just let it tip his head and a flash of winds came following after and sliced right through his head leaving soul with blood splattered on his face.

Rp Sample #2:

Two men ran out of the clearing as destruction followed them out of a thick forest. Out of the forest after them came a small boy, but he was not ordinary he was terrifying covered in a blue chakra with three tails made of the chakra. There Soul stood his eyes menacing his mind flashing in and out of sanity he had lost it he had pushed it way too far and this was the result.

The two men attempted a combo attack of lightning beam jutsu and Chidori but Soul merely caught them both with his tails and send them flying into the abyss below but he knew they weren't dead he couldn't smell the death of them and he could still sense their chakra. He jumped off of the cliff at the end of the clearing and found the two men who were frightened out of their mind in their black cloaks with red clouds.

Soul was seeing red and nothing could stop him now, he slashed at one of them hitting him so hard he went flying into deeper into the abyss at inhumane speeds his screams could be heard as they echoed after him until there was a loud bang cracking and squelches of flesh could be heard echoing up.

Soul laughed in delight not in control of himself at the moment. He flew towards the other one who had also seemed to known fuuton and was slowly flying upwards on his cloak. Soul chuckled as he too began to fly spinning his tails in a rapid movement after weaving a few hand signs he caught up to the man who thought he was safe and uppercut him in the back sending him flying upwards faster.

As Soul reached the clearing he chuckled as he caught the man and gripped him tight as the clouds began to turn dark and thunder and lightning rumbled through the sky a dragon's mouth could be seen forming in the clouds, Soul waved in a cutesy manner at the man, signifying his departure, as a huge dragon made entirely of lightning appeared from the sky and struck them man killing him as Soul continually chuckled, his chuckle getting slower and slower until he finally passed out.
[Well there it is]

1. Experience in other guilds with bijuu isn't a selling point, especially considering what else I'm about to say. If you understood the "severity of the literacy" (which doesn't even make sense) needed to be a host, then your application wouldn't be like it is.
2. It's obvious that someone typed some or all of your request for you. Why? Because you have obvious shifts in writing style. When you get down to "why do you want a bijuu," you capitalize the letter of every word in that section and the one after it, but then revert to the proper form of capitalizing words for the remainder of the application.
3. The complication of the system has no relevance as to why you would want that particular bijuu. Again, I don't care if you've had it in any other guild besides VR.
4. The grammar and content of your RP samples are ATROCIOUS. You're constantly jumping from one detail to another without linking them together, and you skip random moments in the fight. A prime example is:
X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X
He panicked and thrust his own kunai into the arm of his attacker. He ran and ran through the forest unsure of what to do, but he never realized that someone else had been following him along with the attacker it was his long time crush Kyoha Arbelaez, but the attacker took notice and decided to use her as bate he stopped infront of Soul with Kyoha in hand.

How did you go from stabbing your opponent to running through the forest? You completely skipped how you managed to get away from the target. This particular quote also contains a huge run-on sentence that makes your ideas get all jumbled together. I just can't even begin to piece together some of the ideas in your RP samples because of all the stuff that's wrong with it. This is absolutely unacceptable RP material for anyone, much less a host. It's very obvious that you didn't care about the quality or material of this application, and I will not consider giving you a bijuu even if you were to edit your application or send a new one.

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X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X

*Note these posts need to be quite lengthy. A high quality RP sample is imperative.
**Post your character's rank, class, and elements it will have in each sample at the top of each sample. [Well there it is]

What, do you think I'm BLIND and don't know what your RP sample SHOULD be like? I mean you got the lengthy part right at least, but who could miss such a long piece of crap?

If you happened to be a new roleplayer, I wouldn't have been nearly this harsh to you. The fact that you've been in multiple guilds as the Gobi host and threw this kind of application at me is insulting. If you were lying, that's even MORE insulting.

X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X
Ok Wait First Of ll I Actually Put Alot Of Thogut Into This And No OneElse Typed This From Me I Change Grammatical Styles Due To The Fact That In Ooc I Typ All The First Letters In Capital While In Rp I Do It Regular....I think You're Being a Bit To Harsh And Could Instead Of Insulting Me Try To Instead Aid Me By Telling Me What I Did Wrong And Giving Me One Mor Chanc This Was In No Way Or Form An Attempt To Insult You, The Part About Me Just Throwing Ideas Together Isn't True I Probably Missed Some Minor Details That Could've Been Important And The Grammatical Errors Are Not On My Part ]color=red]My Keyboard Is Acting Strange So If You Could Please Reconsider And Allow Me A Second Cance As Well As Just Give Me A Few Pointers On Wat I Could DOo To Better My Rp Sample I'd Gladly Do This All Over Again

1. Then it was all thought an no effort.
2. If that's true, then why didn't you type that way for the bijuu abilities section and tails system section? Technically this is all OOC, and such a writing style just looks so sloppy. If you're writing OOC outside of an appropriate thread, then just {OOC: }. whatever you want to say. This whole section is nothing but OOC anyway, so there's no need to distinguish your non-rp sample material from your rp sample material other than by following the application format.
3. There is SO MUCH wrong with this application that, if I were to tell you all the stuff that needed to be fixed, I might as well write the application myself. That's unacceptable as a veteran roleplayer.
4. If I ask for a high quality sample, you shouldn't have been anywhere near as sloppy as you were. Quantity is not quality.
5. That has to be the absolute worst excuse I have ever heard. The only sort of keyboard problems that exist are keys that won't respond or get stuck, and your application doesn't suffer from any problems that stem from keyboard issues. This is a YOU issue.
6. I don't WANT another application from you here. Don't post in this topic again. Do you understand me? DO NOT POST IN THE BIJUU REQUEST SECTION AGAIN!

I hope I never have to get that ugly with someone again, but I will if they deserve it.  

Deil Grist
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