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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:55 pm
"Gaze into my eyes, lost in the darkness, I shall swallow you whole."
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 6:27 pm
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxhero alias xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ Gateway
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxreal name xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ Basia Hartington xxxxxxxxx◆ Pronouced Ba-SHEE-ah
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxage xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ Fifteen
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxhome xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ Upper Sewit xxxxxxxxx◆ Basia lives with her over protective mother on the second floor of their xxxxxxxxx◆ seamstress boutique. Her father has been a non exsistant individual in xxxxxxxxx◆ her life since she can remember, though her mother tries to keep a xxxxxxxxx◆ secret connection to the man with daily letters to him.
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxabilities xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ Location to location portal : This power allows Basia to open two xxxxxxxxx◆ portals connected to each other, if something were to pass through xxxxxxxxx◆ one portal they would end up coming out of the other one. She can xxxxxxxxx◆ usually open 2 of these at a time, the third one really gets to her as xxxxxxxxx◆ opening portals takes a lot of energy. The further apart or the more xxxxxxxxx◆ portals she has open, the more energy she needs to keep them going. xxxxxxxxx◆ Basia's portals about 15 inch. by 15 inchs. in width
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxorigins xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ Kathleen, Basia's mother used to be a carefree woman who xxxxxxxxx◆ had successfully taken over her family's seamstress boutique, xxxxxxxxx◆ had always wanted to get married and have children. When xxxxxxxxx◆ Rodrick came into the picture, he swept Kathleen off her feet xxxxxxxxx◆ so fast she never saw the danger coming. When she got xxxxxxxxx◆ pregnant and annouced this to Rodrick, even suggesting that xxxxxxxxx◆ they should get married, things started going downhill. xxxxxxxxx◆ Kathleen did not know as much about Rodick as she xxxxxxxxx◆ suspected, and when he vanished she was heart broken. Her xxxxxxxxx◆ paranoia however started bubbling when men in suits started xxxxxxxxx◆ coming around asking her questions, watching her and xxxxxxxxx◆ following her. xxxxxxxxx◆ Apparently, Rodrick was a theif, and a very dangerous one.
xxxxxxxxx◆ Scared, pregnant and completely clueless as to what was xxxxxxxxx◆ happening, Kathleen left the shop to a good friend with a xxxxxxxxx◆ promise to return. She fled to Sewit, hiding out until she gave xxxxxxxxx◆ birth to Basia. With the birth of her daughter came the first of xxxxxxxxx◆ many letters from Rodrick, where ever he was he swore he xxxxxxxxx◆ would keep her and their child safe. He also mentioned that xxxxxxxxx◆ their daughter would perhaps take quite a bit after her father, xxxxxxxxx◆ and that Basia should be protected. It was a few years later xxxxxxxxx◆ when Basia opened her first portal that Kathleen realized that xxxxxxxxx◆ her eyes weren't the only thing off about the little girl. However, xxxxxxxxx◆ Kathleen raised her daughter to the best of her abilities, xxxxxxxxx◆ receiving letters everyday from Rodrick, and sometimes xxxxxxxxx◆ instructions for the little girls powers.
xxxxxxxxx◆ Rodrick had also suggested a private tutor, the less people xxxxxxxxx◆ saw Basia, the less she was likely to attract the wrong kind of xxxxxxxxx◆ people. So every day, a private tutor came to instruct the little xxxxxxxxx◆ girl, Kathleen had severly warned her about using her powers xxxxxxxxx◆ in front of others, even going as far as scolding Basia if she xxxxxxxxx◆ opened up portals for fun. But the little girl dreamed of leaving, xxxxxxxxx◆ dreamed of exploring the vast planet and seeing new places. xxxxxxxxx◆ She read books and devoured through her lessons so fast xxxxxxxxx◆ that her instructor was bringing home atleast a dozen books xxxxxxxxx◆ for her to read ever week. In secret Rodrick married Kathleen, xxxxxxxxx◆ and told her about the secret island, Kathleen agreed this xxxxxxxxx◆ would be the best option for their daughter.
xxxxxxxxx◆ The day before Basia left to go to the academy, while she was xxxxxxxxx◆ out at the library getting a book, someone caught her using her xxxxxxxxx◆ powers. It was innocent enough, the book was on a topshelf xxxxxxxxx◆ she couldn't reach and she'd opened up a portal to get the xxxxxxxxx◆ book. This time Rodrick went straight to Kathleen, warning her xxxxxxxxx◆ of the imment danger that was approaching, Basia needed to xxxxxxxxx◆ leave, and soon. Rodrick left before his daughter came home, xxxxxxxxx◆ Kathleen was already packing up her things when someone xxxxxxxxx◆ knocked on the door. Kathleen hide, watching the shadow xxxxxxxxx◆ under the door as the person tried the door to see if it was xxxxxxxxx◆ unlocked. The person left, Basia came home and Kathleen xxxxxxxxx◆ rushed her out of the house towards the location of the xxxxxxxxx◆ helicopter that Basia was to take.
xxxxxxxxx◆ Whatever Rodrick had done in his past would certianly affect xxxxxxxxx◆ Basia's future.
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxpersonality xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ Intelligent : Basia takes a lot of pride in her vast knowledge of the xxxxxxxxx◆ world from all her reading, and this makes her very smart and xxxxxxxxx◆ sometimes a show off. She will experiment with a situation and xxxxxxxxx◆ analysis it before she steps into it. Puzzles, games that need xxxxxxxxx◆ lots of thinking are an easy brainer to her to the point that they xxxxxxxxx◆ actually bore her. She likes a good challenge that will make xxxxxxxxx◆ her think beyond what she is used to.
xxxxxxxxx◆ Calm : Basia's reactions are minimal at best. There are few situations xxxxxxxxx◆ where one can really get under her skin. Dealing with her xxxxxxxxx◆ mother's panic every single day has given her the necessary xxxxxxxxx◆ disciple for her to stay calm around situtations or individuals that xxxxxxxxx◆ are in a panic. Keeping calm allows her to keep a steady head on xxxxxxxxx◆ her shoulders, and leaves little space for things to go wrong.
xxxxxxxxx◆ Curious : Basia has been cooped up her whole life, so there’s a ton xxxxxxxxx◆ of things that she don’t know yet or has yet to experience... xxxxxxxxx◆ but she's dying to learn it all! If something catches her xxxxxxxxx◆ interested, or someone you can be sure she's going xxxxxxxxx◆ to ask as many questions as she can to get as much xxxxxxxxx◆ information as possible until her curiosity is satisfied. xxxxxxxxx◆ Dare her to do something she's never done, and she'll xxxxxxxxx◆ be curious enough to try it, even if it's a little dangerous.
xxxxxxxxx◆ Over thinker : Basia has a tendency to over think a lot of situations xxxxxxxxx◆ she's in, this is often the case when she's asked to explain xxxxxxxxx◆ something. Her mind will try to explain every single detail, xxxxxxxxx◆ when in reality all you wanted was a “yes” or “no answer xxxxxxxxx◆ from her. This trait is also present in social encounters, she xxxxxxxxx◆ may take a smile for something more after a few moments xxxxxxxxx◆ of reflection. In the future, she will try to over think battle xxxxxxxxx◆ situations that leave her vulnerable.
xxxxxxxxx◆ Stubborn : Basia does not wield to the instructions of others, so you best xxxxxxxxx◆ believe that she is only going to do what she thinks will be best for xxxxxxxxx◆ herself or, in some cases, those very close to her. Once Basia xxxxxxxxx◆ has made up her mind, there is a very slim chance that anyone xxxxxxxxx◆ will ever really persuade her into changing it. You could try. She'll xxxxxxxxx◆ consider your argument, then act on her own accord. xxxxxxxxx◆ Furthermore, it is nearly impossible to shake her morals and xxxxxxxxx◆ opinions.
xxxxxxxxx◆ Hubris : This is not the "an A+ student" proud. This is the "oh my gosh xxxxxxxxx◆ that girl is such a b***h" proud, otherwise known as arrogance or xxxxxxxxx◆ hubris. Because she's intelligent, she doesn't like to be wrong. xxxxxxxxx◆ Nor does she like others to do anything for her. Basia prefer to xxxxxxxxx◆ take care of herself only for herself. If it happens to benefit others, xxxxxxxxx◆ then whoop-de-doo. This "pride" thing is her fatal flaw. It is a huge xxxxxxxxx◆ part of the reason she is stubborn.
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxstrengths xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ Her smarts are her greatest asset. xxxxxxxxx◆ When things get rough, Basia will always be calm. Always. xxxxxxxxx◆ Her portals can be very deadly when used properly. xxxxxxxxx◆ She will never stray from her friends.
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxweaknesses xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ She has no physical strenght whatso ever. Never been in a fight either. xxxxxxxxx◆ To many portals = no energy left xxxxxxxxx◆ She doesn't favor those without xxxxxxxxx◆ powers. her dislike is sometimes obvious. xxxxxxxxx◆ Her hubris will be her downfall.
xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxenrollment xxxx━━━━━━━━━━━━ xxxxxxxxx◆ The only reason Basia ended up at the academy was because her xxxxxxxxx◆ mothers paranoia sent her there, she thought someone would come xxxxxxxxx◆ knocking on their door at anytime and take her daughter away. The xxxxxxxxx◆ academy, which was away and secrative seemed like the best of their xxxxxxxxx◆ options. It took a very long time for her mother to find the right xxxxxxxxx◆ "people" to intrust her daughter to, and off Basia went to the academy.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 2:25 pm
Open!
I'd really appreciate if you guys could tell me if there's any spelling mistakes. I didn't spell check a lot x.x
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 6:13 pm
lmao, either basia and anemone will get along wonderfully or terribly. they're pretty similar, except basia has an attitude where anemone is socially awkward/shy xD
i think gateway is an awesome name for her, fits pretty perfectly
What size are her portals roughly? Does size affect how much effort goes into them? If so, would one massive portal take as much energy as like 6 little ones or something? Can living things go through the portals? Can technology? I'm assuming she can, but can she bring people, too?
if you're gunna take the dimensional portal route, you could do a nightcrawler-like character, which would explain how the normal portals work too :3c
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 6:22 pm
I think they'd actually get along xD
I didn't want to name her Portal because of the already existing Portal character so XD
I'll have to add what you said about her powers.
Well nightcrawler doesn't open up portals per say, I'm going off the picture on the first post so XD
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 7:28 am
okay her family history has me very very intrigued, I'm so curious about Rodrick but... that's kinda not the point of critting lmao * v*;;
her portals, does she need to see/visualize where the portals appear or lead to? a la Nightcrawler? 8D
and her eyes, they're a pretty unusual colour so, doesn't she get weird looks if she goes outside? Or does Kathleen keep her indoors under lock and key? Or is there some kind of "tell that to anyone who asks" explanation for them?
plus, I noticed she's 20, but there isn't much about her childhood? Or maybe you wanted to keep that as a mystery idk rofl
and also, inter dimensional travel is ... complicated, and iffy because it opens up a LOT of possibilities for god modding. I get the sense that you're adding it because its going to be somehow tied to Rodrick/her origins so I don't want to tell you straight out NO, but yeah, if its not we'd prefer that there was't inter dimensional travel at all o uob
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 7:38 am
Good job, I like her! I like Gateway too, it somewhat sounds like 'get-away', which will will fairly useful for group missions.
She sounds like the human version of GLaDOS now, from the game Portal XD Which is funny because I never knew the game when I drew her.
I also like that she's the product of a seamstress and a thief. I see her as a very fashionable femme fatale world's greatest thief (ehem) hero someday from what you've written. Though she looks like headed for a different vocation in the future, which isn't bad either. XD
I was kind of confused with opening three portals, I get the two and the dimensional part, but what's with the 3rd?
edit: when you said inter-dimension I thought it would be about space XD so what's about this, since Mori asked too.
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 7:52 am
lol okay to clarify, I meant dimension like, parallel worlds, alternate universes, sci fi things like that
if it was just space, uh... shouldn't be a problem o vo
edit OOPS forgot I was on the mule sorry! * u*;;;
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 6:30 pm
To answer both of you guys :3
Her history is suppose to mysterious biggrin biggrin And her father plays a BIG part in her future haha.
I actually hadn't thought about the visualization XD Gotta add that in too!
As for her eyes, and why so little on her childhood, it's because Kathleen did keep her in. She got super paranoid, hence the private tutor, and trust me that dude was paid a lot to keep her eyes a secret. She got her eyes from her daddy :3 And with the trouble he's in >.> He didn't want her to get noticed.
I have no idea what GLaDOS is XD Never played portal hahah XD Yeaaaaa... Different future indead! And yes I'm hoping she will be fashionable xD
About the number of portals. It's just that, it's how many she can open at once. You guys think I should clarify that? :3
I actually meant space XD I went to watch the Green Lantern and I was kinda trying to go for that space-y feel. XD Plus, I could never RP other dimentions considering I have no idea what's IN other dimensions and much less what they look like xD
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:37 pm
Tnau Well nightcrawler doesn't open up portals per say, I'm going off the picture on the first post so XD to clarify- i meant that nightcrawler, when he teleports, actually jumps to another dimension, walks through that dimension or w/e he does, and poofs back in another location. xD; thats what i mean, like, the regular portals could actually have to do with other dimensions and stuff. orz idk if that makes sense. NOT THAT IT MATTERS CAUSE LOL SPACE /random
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:01 am
lol obsessing with the game even if I haven't played it yet. Infecting you with the virus hehe spaaaace! portal teaser co-op portal 2 I picture Basia to move like that (wishful thinking, ignore my obsession, I know it's gonna different) GLaDOS talking, also portal 2 trailer. A cold-hearted robot (but the ending shows different, she has a heart too) that loves science and experiments on humans by letting them participate in a series of test (puzzles) using a handheld portal gun. I watched a lot of videos already about this game that I see Basia's personality quite similar to her, it's funny XD Two ending songs that also shows glados' personality blaugh Ehem, excuse the madness. Going back. If she open's up a portal that directs to space, she could be sucked in right? And everything around her...but I think this will be for the future...disasters to come XD What I mean with the three portals that she can open up simultaneously, if she passes through portal A and goes out portal B, what's the third for? It's hilarious that I imagined her passing thruogh pA then going out pB and pC making a copy of her, or she in ends in half. (lol, sorry for being quite literal) So does that mean if she and another person goes through pA, she can come out of pB and the other one in pC? She got her eyes from her papa? * v* He got powers too?
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 8:37 am
Rika Mayumi lol obsessing with the game even if I haven't played it yet. Infecting you with the virus hehe spaaaace! portal teaser co-op portal 2 I picture Basia to move like that (wishful thinking, ignore my obsession, I know it's gonna different) GLaDOS talking, also portal 2 trailer. A cold-hearted robot (but the ending shows different, she has a heart too) that loves science and experiments on humans by letting them participate in a series of test (puzzles) using a handheld portal gun. I watched a lot of videos already about this game that I see Basia's personality quite similar to her, it's funny XD Two ending songs that also shows glados' personality blaugh Ehem, excuse the madness. Going back. If she open's up a portal that directs to space, she could be sucked in right? And everything around her...but I think this will be for the future...disasters to come XD What I mean with the three portals that she can open up simultaneously, if she passes through portal A and goes out portal B, what's the third for? It's hilarious that I imagined her passing thruogh pA then going out pB and pC making a copy of her, or she in ends in half. (lol, sorry for being quite literal) So does that mean if she and another person goes through pA, she can come out of pB and the other one in pC? She got her eyes from her papa? * v* He got powers too? LOL Those shoes omg! XD Though I can def see where Basia resembles GLaDOS XD For the space portals once I add the little bit to it that I wanted it should make sense <3 Now for her portals. I originally though of her portals as a one way mirror, which is somewhat explained in my prompt response. Anyways, when she opens up a portal, the facade facing her she can see that's on other other side, there's nothing blocking. But to anyone looking into the portal from the other side will see what the other portal is facing. Example since this may get a bit complicated. P1 is opened in front of a tree. P2 is opened in front of a flower. Basia is in the middle of these two portals. She can see clearly the tree from P1 and the flower form P2. Anyone looking into P1 will see the flower. Anyone looking into P2 will see the tree. If you pass through P1 you end up coming out of P2 and vice versa. She can make a third portal and go around jumping from one to the other xD Hope that explains everything :3
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:01 am
I like where you're going with this. I'm wondering, if you see P1 when looking in P2 and vice versa, what do you see when looking through the third portal?
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:33 am
It depends which one she connects it too. Think of it as bunny hopping. She jumps into P1 exits at P3. She jumps into P3 and ends up in P2. I think of the travelling as if she was at the water park in those massive water slides example. Except that she can reconnect and change their connection as she goes.
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 11:34 pm
So the third is sorta like wormholes?
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