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 Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:02 am
Okay, so I saw that EEW are going to be updating their homepage because "some of this stuff is a tad out of date!" .. Well, I figure we can all pitch in and help sort it out, and get it all updated and stuff.
First, we will start with constructive critique. No majorly negative comments are to be put forward, but critique is always the basis for the best form of development and moving forward.
So, let's have a look at the main page (in quote form):Quote: Welcome to Extreme Entertainment Wrestling! The number one promotion in Gaia! User Image EEW has Monday Night Burn and Friday Night Drown for the main roster and EEW Speed for the developmental talent who move up to Burn and Drown as soon as Cartwright thinks they are ready! EEW Burn is home to the best wrestlers in Gaia like "The Talented One" Cartwright, Harli, Joshua Danielson, Freakshow, Chris Cross, Chrono, Jed, Johnathan Riker, It is the original EEW show which started it all! User Image EEW Drown features Kelly King 2.0 , Marxx, Nuke , Mr. X, Bryan Bain, Matt Stone, Mike Landry, Saint Joey and many more! Originally the home of veteran and unappreciated wrestlers, Drown has since become equal to Burn! EEW has the best tag teams like The Cardok-Saint Connection, Unholy Alliance, The LAO and Team Carnage. User Image EEW Speed has dedicated teachers looking after the roster who teach newbies how things should be done and give advice on how to improve. Speed also has it's own grading system where members can see where they currently stand and how they are improving! If you liked the old ECW or if you like the new ECW, you will be more than welcome here! The Entertainment side covers what Cartwright will be doing. Think of him as Paul Heyman or the booking team....he gives advice about where your character could go in terms of feuds, titles etc. and helps set everything up and bring out the best in you! EEW is different to every other Wrestling Role Playing Guild because it is updated daily, it features innovative storylines/feuds, it has our very own Developmental League (EEW Speed) so that everyone can get enjoyment out of EEW whether you are new or experienced! EEW is the home of many famous, or should that be infamous, moments in Gaia Wrestling History! People have been set alight, insults have been traded, tables have been broken, rebels find religion and noone can possibly forget what will be forever known as "The Jarel Controversy".
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:10 am
Lets see, I don't believe there's Speed anymore. Lauri owns the guild now so I believe Cart should be replaced by 'EEW Crew'
EEW Burn is not home to Chrono, Freakshow, Christopher Cross. As EEW is no longer my home, Freakshow is on Drown and Cross retired.
Drown should remove Marxx, X, Bain, Stone and Joey as most have retired. Drown was never Burn's equal.
EEW doesn't have the best tag teams as CSC are gone, Unholy Alliance are retired, LAO broke up and Team Carnage isn't in EEW. The only real tag team that EEW has is Tap Out Mafia.
Speed doesn't have dedicated teachers, nor do they look after the roster that hasn't happened for a good two years now. It also does not have a grading system.
The entertainment side should be replaced as once again Cart doesn't own the guild, it should be replaced with 'EEW Crew or the character Lauri is using as the owner'
The updated daily part should be removed as it is not, Speed is gone so the Developmental League portion should be removed.
The last part should clarify the 'Jarel controversy' because hardly anyone remembers it.
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:25 am
I never knew I was on the homepage. That's interesting xd
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:25 am
First thing on my mind is this: Quote: Welcome to Extreme Entertainment Wrestling! The number one promotion in Gaia!Okay, there's an issue here; EEW isn't even seen as being in the Top 3 at the moment. Before them comes FG, EWA & :E. Therefore, I suggest either removing the highlighted part, or changing it in some way to be more relevant and truthful.
Okay, next paragraph: Quote: EEW has Monday Night Burn and Friday Night Drown for the main roster and EEW Speed for the developmental talent who move up to Burn and Drown as soon as Cartwright thinks they are ready! If I remember correctly, Speed is now closed, and therefore you could just put in some form of catchy and descriptive text describing Drown and Burn. Quote: EEW Burn is home to the best wrestlers in Gaia like "The Talented One" Cartwright, Harli, Joshua Danielson, Freakshow, Chris Cross, Chrono, Jed, Johnathan Riker, It is the original EEW show which started it all! EEW Drown features Kelly King 2.0 , Marxx, Nuke , Mr. X, Bryan Bain, Matt Stone, Mike Landry, Saint Joey and many more! Originally the home of veteran and unappreciated wrestlers, Drown has since become equal to Burn! EEW has the best tag teams like The Cardok-Saint Connection, Unholy Alliance, The LAO and Team Carnage. Need I even say anything here? This is so out of date, it's picking up dust; the text has almost not been touched in as much time as Cartwright has. Never. Quote: EEW Speed has dedicated teachers looking after the roster who teach newbies how things should be done and give advice on how to improve. Speed also has it's own grading system where members can see where they currently stand and how they are improving! Delete. Quote: If you liked the old ECW or if you like the new ECW, you will be more than welcome here! The old ECW is nothing like the current EEW, as the current EEW is just too damn boring; no controversy, no bloody matches, nothing that the old ECW had. Not to mention that you compare yourself to ECW, then claim that you're the biggest one Gaia; the old Eee-Cee-Dub was all about small shows and going extreme, not being the biggest.
The "new ECW" that was revived by Vince was killed off in a very slow and painful way. The new-new ECW that was revived in TNA .. It doesn't even deserve another mention at all. Quote: The Entertainment side covers what Cartwright will be doing. Think of him as Paul Heyman or the booking team....he gives advice about where your character could go in terms of feuds, titles etc. and helps set everything up and bring out the best in you! Cartwright isn't active any more, but this paragraph could still be adapted. Include names of your crew, who does what, and who can help with the new guys that need a foothold. Just clean it up a bit. Quote: EEW is different to every other Wrestling Role Playing Guild because it is updated daily, it features innovative storylines/feuds, it has our very own Developmental League (EEW Speed) so that everyone can get enjoyment out of EEW whether you are new or experienced! Okay, so EEW claimed all of this, but it's not relevant now.
Updated daily? No, not at all. And not to mention that other guilds are generally more active.
Innovative storylines/feuds .. EEW does offer this (even though it's usually the participants sorting the storyline, and not the crew helping) but this doesn't make them "different to every other Wrestling Role Playing Guild". There are other guilds that are far more innovative.
Speed is both dead, and hasn't been the sole developmental territory for a long time now. Not relevant any more. Quote: EEW is the home of many famous, or should that be infamous, moments in Gaia Wrestling History! People have been set alight, insults have been traded, tables have been broken, rebels find religion and noone can possibly forget what will be forever known as "The Jarel Controversy". This is quite possibly the only part of the front page that I appreciate, and it's because it highlights what EEW was, and should strive to return to. Just update it a bit, talking about other grand storylines that have happened in the guild.
Thoughts, people?
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 11:42 am
I put that 'tad out of date' on the home page the day MB bought EEW, glad it's finally been noticed. razz Quote: The old ECW is nothing like the current EEW, as the current EEW is just too damn boring; no controversy, no bloody matches, nothing that the old ECW had. So you guys missing me yet? xd
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:19 pm
Cartwright I put that 'tad out of date' on the home page the day MB bought EEW, glad it's finally been noticed. razz Quote: The old ECW is nothing like the current EEW, as the current EEW is just too damn boring; no controversy, no bloody matches, nothing that the old ECW had. So you guys missing me yet? xd So much. MB's been joking about booking me against Angel...there are some things you just don't joke about...
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:32 pm
Your End Of Days Cartwright I put that 'tad out of date' on the home page the day MB bought EEW, glad it's finally been noticed. razz Quote: The old ECW is nothing like the current EEW, as the current EEW is just too damn boring; no controversy, no bloody matches, nothing that the old ECW had. So you guys missing me yet? xd So much. MB's been joking about booking me against Angel...there are some things you just don't joke about... You know, that doesn't sound like a bad idea...not bad at all...make it a match Michael Cole made famous. Kiss My Foot. I AM EXTREEEEEEEEME.
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:35 pm
Cartwright Your End Of Days Cartwright I put that 'tad out of date' on the home page the day MB bought EEW, glad it's finally been noticed. razz Quote: The old ECW is nothing like the current EEW, as the current EEW is just too damn boring; no controversy, no bloody matches, nothing that the old ECW had. So you guys missing me yet? xd So much. MB's been joking about booking me against Angel...there are some things you just don't joke about... You know, that doesn't sound like a bad idea...not bad at all...make it a match Michael Cole made famous. Kiss My Foot. I AM EXTREEEEEEEEME. I quit.
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:38 pm
Your End Of Days Cartwright Your End Of Days Cartwright I put that 'tad out of date' on the home page the day MB bought EEW, glad it's finally been noticed. razz Quote: The old ECW is nothing like the current EEW, as the current EEW is just too damn boring; no controversy, no bloody matches, nothing that the old ECW had. So you guys missing me yet? xd So much. MB's been joking about booking me against Angel...there are some things you just don't joke about... You know, that doesn't sound like a bad idea...not bad at all...make it a match Michael Cole made famous. Kiss My Foot. I AM EXTREEEEEEEEME. I quit. You can't quit, you're fired! Fired from something you are not paid to do nor forced by a contract in law to participate in.
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:27 pm
Your End Of Days Cartwright I put that 'tad out of date' on the home page the day MB bought EEW, glad it's finally been noticed. razz Quote: The old ECW is nothing like the current EEW, as the current EEW is just too damn boring; no controversy, no bloody matches, nothing that the old ECW had. So you guys missing me yet? xd So much. MB's been joking about booking me against Angel...there are some things you just don't joke about... I only said that since you were being a dumb a** making a big deal about something that didn't concern you at the least. rofl Now as for the EEW homepage in particular the only thing that was ever done to it so far was "taken over by K.korp" that's pretty much it. by the way I'm laughing my a** off on that your dissecting something probably hasnt changed much in a couple oh I dont know YEARS?!
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:32 pm
MidnightBlue9999 Your End Of Days Cartwright I put that 'tad out of date' on the home page the day MB bought EEW, glad it's finally been noticed. razz Quote: The old ECW is nothing like the current EEW, as the current EEW is just too damn boring; no controversy, no bloody matches, nothing that the old ECW had. So you guys missing me yet? xd So much. MB's been joking about booking me against Angel...there are some things you just don't joke about... I only said that since you were being a dumb a** making a big deal about something that didn't concern you at the least. rofl Now as for the EEW homepage in particular the only thing that was ever done to it so far was "taken over by K.korp" that's pretty much it. by the way I'm laughing my a** off on that your dissecting something probably hasnt changed much in a couple oh I dont know YEARS?! I know, I was joking xd Although if you guys are serious about EEW's new era, rebuilding the homepage is a good idea - having information that's no longer accurate seems minor league.
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:38 pm
People still read the homepages?
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 5:45 pm
Your End Of Days MidnightBlue9999 Your End Of Days Cartwright I put that 'tad out of date' on the home page the day MB bought EEW, glad it's finally been noticed. razz Quote: The old ECW is nothing like the current EEW, as the current EEW is just too damn boring; no controversy, no bloody matches, nothing that the old ECW had. So you guys missing me yet? xd So much. MB's been joking about booking me against Angel...there are some things you just don't joke about... I only said that since you were being a dumb a** making a big deal about something that didn't concern you at the least. rofl Now as for the EEW homepage in particular the only thing that was ever done to it so far was "taken over by K.korp" that's pretty much it. by the way I'm laughing my a** off on that your dissecting something probably hasnt changed much in a couple oh I dont know YEARS?! I know, I was joking xd Although if you guys are serious about EEW's new era, rebuilding the homepage is a good idea - having information that's no longer accurate seems minor league. Look I already know about it just havent gotten around to it yet. much like other things.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:45 pm
Neo_Hurricane People still read the homepages?
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:22 pm
Cartwright Neo_Hurricane People still read the homepages?
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