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PostPosted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 9:42 pm


Hello, before I post my random poem, I'd just say that I noticed that we haven't been active for a while so I though of making a random poem for both the purpose of giving it my girlfriend, and to be shown to you and have your opinions on my writing. I'd try writing more stuff to promote activity in the guild. For now, here's the poem, and I hope to see your opinions.

For you I cannot wait
for without you I feel burden's weight

but patience I should have
for I don't want both to sob
you are my love

for you I shall wait
I see you as my perfect mate

I shall wait for you my love
with you I feel welcomed in love's club. heart
PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 8:32 pm


It's sweet! It's not exactly Shakespeare but it is much better than Hemingway. I think your girlfriend will like it.

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Friendly Warlord

PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 9:37 pm


ContrabassClarinetist
It's sweet! It's not exactly Shakespeare but it is much better than Hemingway. I think your girlfriend will like it.

Thanks. :3
I just randomly came up with it though. x3
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