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Jinei Ryuu Shinigami

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 8:49 am


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NAMEJin‘ei Ryuu Shinigami
AGE 14
GENDERMale
RANKGenin
PERSONALITYUndecided path in life, very flighty but secretly schemes in his head against most however has yet to meet anyone he trust. He has a strong sense of loyalty and what he calls justice. In all actuality his justice is closer to equality. He tends to come off as rude to other people as he a tendency to ignore them and get lost in thought



BIOGRAPHYJinei Ryuu Shinigami was born to a small Shinobi family that had made its home in the land of water near the borders of Kiri. They were counted as a part of the village because they living relatively nearby. The Shinobi from Jinei’s family were not a clan or anything special they were simply Shinobi who had never amounted to anything. They did train with the Kiri village Shinobi in order to maintain a strong alliance as well as hone their ninja skills. Jinei as a child showed no particularly special talents he was by all means an average Shinobi.

During his years at the academy he trained as hard as possible, trying to one day become a well-known Shinobi. He thought everyday about how he would make the Shinigami family famous. He never really excelled in anything, except for when it came to tasks that involved physical strength, speed, and stamina. Due to this they decided to train him in Tai or Kenjutsu. Having no strong clan ties or Kekkei Genkai towards one or the other, they left it up to him to choose which one.

Jinei was unable to decide. As he headed home that night something strange happened. His route was normally patrolled by Kiri Nin, so he never encountered anything on the way, even though he wasn’t actually living within the gates of the village. However, something was very strange. As he was on his way home that night, he noticed the forest was quiet. Eerily quiet. He had learned about things to look for in case he was ever alone in the forest. He found himself in a situation where he knew something was wrong, but he wasn’t sure exactly what to do. He knew that if he was about to be ambushed he was being watched; he acted as if he hadn’t noticed anything heading towards his house. As he was just out of sight of the village and unable to see his home, they struck.

Two Shinobi from the land of Rain appeared. One landed on each side of Jinei. He was unsure of what to do. He hadn’t learned how to defend an attack from both sides at one time yet. Also, he didn’t have a weapon. Not even a wooden sword. The Shinobi from behind him made the first move. He drew a kunai and charged towards Jinei. The Shinobi in front jumped backwards and performed a set of hand signs. Jinei was clearly outmatched. He dove, spinning so he was flying backwards. He pulled three shurikens from his pack he threw them towards the two Shinobi. He landed on the ground rolling, so that he could see if the attack had hit them.

The Shinobi that charged Jinei had easily deflected all three shuriken with a single swipe. Jinei climbed to his feet just in time to see the Shinobi that had performed a hand sign finishing his jutsu. He created a blast of wind that threw Jinei backwards. It was so hard it slammed him into a tree branch, breaking it off. Jinei was dazed, and by the time he realized what was now going on the Shinobi were both upon him ready to tie him up. Jinei grabbed the branch in a panic. He swung it hard, closing his eyes. He whispered to himself, “Someone please help me”. He felt the branch snap and shards of wood scatter. He opened his eyes to see he had hit one of the two Shinobi, knocking him to the ground. Jinei was surprised that he had actually landed the blow. The second Shinobi was about to strike when suddenly a huge blast of wind and smoke rose around him, causing him to be unable to see. The sounds of someone moving could be heard coming from within the smoke. Jinei struggled to climb to his feet, his mind running through all the possible ways he could get out of this alive. The smoke began to clear revealing the huge blade from what appeared to be a great sword. Jinei noticed something strange about the blade it seemed to be covered with exploding tags, ”This explains that blast” He thought to himself. He followed the blade with his eyes still gripping the branch tightly ready for anything. His eyes focused in on the man he saw holding the blade. He was a large man his hands were about the size of Jinei’s head. His hair was let black and worn in a very fashionable ponytail, His eyes were pure white as if they had no pupil at all. He noticed the man wore robes similar to that of the Mizukage's formal attire. Jinei then spotted something that made his heart race. A belt with the symbol of kiri directly in the center, the belt was green but the symbol was taken directly from a headband. Jinei opened his mouth to speak when the stranger curt him off.

“It seems that not even my own country is safe any longer. Who are you?”

Jinei stammered saying his name after a moment of hesitation. He also noticed the man looked strongly around the area almost as if he couldn’t see anything, but knew where everything was. Jinei rudely waved his hands in front of the man’s face with no reaction.

“You know it is rude to do that”
“Sorry, I just.”

Jinei looked ashamed of himself. He then began to apologize franticly.

“Please forgive my rudeness; my name is Jinei Ryuu Shinigami of the hidden mist village.”
Jinei stated sheepishly, and then pointed to his headband. He smiled big after doing so as he was proud to be from the mist village. The man seemed to know exactly what he was doing even though he couldn’t see.
“Allow me to escort you home.”

“Ok, thank you”
The man and Jinei headed towards Jinei’s family home. Talking about things that have changed in the village and the way things were now as opposed to how they had been. Jinei and the man hit it off very well exchanging good byes it wasn’t until after the man had left the Jinei realized that he hadn’t gotten the man’s name.

The next day
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Jinei was supposed to pick his specialization today. He had seen a great kenjutsu sure the day before and he knew exactly what he wanted to train in now. As he was given his final assignment by his academy instructor he was given a new sensei. His sensei would be a man by the name of Ruuk. Jinei wondered who the man was he didn’t remember anyone by that name. He wondered if he would ever meet that strange swordsman that was in the forest who had saved him. He never even got to know his name.

As he reported to the ramen shop awaiting his new sensei, he walked into the ramen shop and noticed the swordsman from the day before sitting inside eating noodles. He approached the man eagerly a big smile on his face. As he got close the man spoke to him.

“You’re late Jinei.”
“Oh I didn’t know I was supposed to meet you here, I’m waiting on my new sensei…. Wait are you my new sensei?”
“I thought you would have figured that out already.”

The two continued to acquaint themselves with one another, then headed to the training ground so that Ruuk Could get a chance to gage Jinei’s skills. Afterwards they hit the local hot springs and then … took Jinei home. Jinei went to sleep that night with great hopes and dreams. He envisioned himself as a great Shinobi kenjutsu user completing missions and making the Shinigami family known. He even was offered the Mizukage position but he declined because he didn’t want to be tied down to the village. He became a wandering Sannin just like his new master.

Awaking the next morning to a bright sunny day he exited his home quickly hurrying to the village. He made it to the village several hours before his squad was scheduled to meet. Taking the time to wander around and try to find his sensei so that he could get some extra practice in. He found him in the ramen shop again. They greeted each other as usual and then headed to the training ground after grabbing some ramen. As they entered the training ground, Jinei was given a wooden training sword and told to attack Ruuk, Jinei attacked several times and was easily deflected. He had strength and speed but he had no technique he swung wildly. His master decided to focus on this for his first few lessons having Jinei practice sword positions and stances. He made Jinei train every day for hours on end until the point where he would pass out from exhaustion. This went on for several months before they began a new lesson in ninjutsu which was a lot less physically exhausting but much more frustration for Jinei. After several months he had his ninjutsu to the average level for most genin. His master then began to work with him in taijutsu which seemed to come almost naturally to him. Though Jinei could never match his teacher do to the fact that he was simply a novice and a genin, while his master used the juken ryu and was a Sannin. Jinei and his master went on a trip one day far from the village; His master had plans of teaching him the ways of the world and how to adapt to one’s environment especially in combat.

During their trip Jinei did learn many things about the world and how to fight in different surroundings. He was also able to learn some new and interesting jutsu from other Shinobi that were met along the road. There were a few small battles but never anything that lead to any real bloodshed. Jinei and his master had developed a special bond and his master gave him a sword on the day he deemed him ready to take the chuunin exams. They began their journey back to the village.

Several days before they made it back to kiri, Jinei had a horrible nightmare. In which he saw strange eyes with dark violet swirls in them. The eyes seemed to follow him everywhere, and then they finally stopped following him. He was tired from running so he learned down to take a drink from a stream nearby; as he leaned down he saw his reflection and his eyes were swirled but a sky blue color. He screamed and just as he did there were three people around him, all of them had the same swirl design in their eyes. Jinei then even saw people he knew they were appearing all around him everyone with those eyes. They were all trying to get him and take his eyes. He ran from them stopping as he came up behind his master, thinking he was safe. He began to talk trying to catch his breath.
“There….After….Me…”

His master turned around his hand on the hilt of the blast sword. His eyes were swirled like the rest, Before Jinei had a chance to react his master swung the blast sword cleaving Jinei in half. As soon as the blade entered his body Jinei woke up screaming. He jumped from his bed grabbing his sword ready to strike at the first sign of motion. His subconscious mind taking over his body causing him to black out. His eyes opened to his master lying feet away from him. The Camp destroyed only bits and pieces of their items scattered around. Jinei crawled over to his sensei and pulled him close.

“Master, what happened who did this”
“Rinnegan”
His masters eyes widened as he looked into Jinei’s tear filled eyes as if he saw something for the first and last time in his life. Jinei let out a loud scream as his master slipped off into death. Jinei took the time to gather his thoughts, swearing a blood oath for revenge against who or whatever this Rinnegan is. After words he wrapped his sensei in the tent sheet and then used the ropes to fashion himself a backpack. Gathering his things and then carrying his sensei on his back all the way back to the village.

As he reached the gates he collapsed and was quickly found by several Shinobi that were on patrol. Rushing Jinei to the infirmary and having him debriefed immediately the mistake became aware of the situation. Jinei was kept away from everyone else in the village only a select few ANBU members were allowed to see him directly.

After several days when he was completely recovered the Mizukage appeared at his door with a single ANBU member. The Mizukage began to explain things to him about his eyes and what kind of power that they would hold. Jinei was barely able to understand what they were saying his mind was still grief ridden from his sensei’s death. Living the rest of his days in the village training preparing for the day he would find someone else with the Rinnegan.

STRENGTHS & WEAKNESSESGood at close range combat including tai and kenjutsu dealing chakra damage by absorbing chakra with his fists or cutting you to pieces with a sword. His weaknesses would genjutsu as he has little practice working on breaking or using it. he is mediocre at ninjutsu. He tends to be a bit head strong this often puts him in dangerious situations but he is very quick thinking on his feet.
ABILITIES
Nin: 3 Rinnegan plus some ninjutsu training to average level.
Gen: 2 Rinnegan so he is able to see chakra but not as well as other doujutsu.
Ken: 5 Kenjutsu class.
Speed: 4 kenjutsu class, plus taijutsu training
Strength: 5 Trains wth great swords and heavy weights
Tai: 4 Has natural great strength and speed, plus his kenjutsu training has punches and kicks in the combos.
Intelligence: 3 average
Hand Seals: 3 average
Total: 29/40


TRIVIALook at my role play samples from around the guild to see bonus info about my characters history.
PLAYED BYJinei Ryuu Shinigami
 
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 10:02 pm


Speaciality
Kenjutsu/Ninjutsu
Chakra Affinity
- Fuuton
- Kekkei Genkai (Rinnegan~ Storm release)
- Raiton (Jounin)

Fighting Style
Strong offensive Melee combat ~ ninjutsu to support and boost kenjutsu


Jutsu List


These are unranked, so im leaving it as is until someone tells me otherwise
Kekkei Genkai
Preta Path
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In Buddhism, the Preta realm (also known as the Hungry Ghost realm) is a reincarnation based on strong possessiveness and desire which were cultivated in a previous life or lives. The Preta are humanoid creatures which are perpetually hungry and thirsty, but are unable to sate themselves, living lives similar to those of hopeless addicts trying to appease their unyielding hunger. In appearance, the Preta are deathly pale, emaciated figures, which contrasts with Pain's Preta Path's hefty stature.

This path's "Chakra Absorption" ability was primarily defensive, since it was capable of absorbing any ninjutsu-related technique, thereby nullifying its effect. This technique could also take the form of a barrier around its body, allowing it to absorb attacks from all directions. In addition to its defensive properties, this body's ability had also shown offensive capabilities, as it could absorb all the chakra out of any person that it touched or grabbed.

This path has shown an affinity for the Storm release element, able to use its techniques without the need for the Kekkei Genkai. Because of this the user will be able to learn and use the Lighting element easier than others.


Blocking Technique Absorption Seal
A highly advanced sealing technique that is capable of absorbing any chakra, regardless of any shape or nature transformation, and dispersing it within one's body by spinning the chakra within one's body in the opposite direction. As a result, this technique can absorb any ninjutsu based technique, regardless of power, without harming the user. Should the user get close enough to grab the opponent, the barrier can absorb chakra right out of an individual's body, effectively draining them.

Sealing Technique: Living Barrier
When using this technique, the user can seal their opponents' chakra.


Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave
Hiruko uses Storm Release to generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around him, creating an offensive and defensive ward. He can then uses these clouds to fire powerful blasts of lightning at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter; effectively preventing his enemies from getting close.

Storm Release Secret Technique: Demon Dragon Storm
This technique produces a massive thunder cloud that can infinitely absorb chakra to grow in size, strength and the chakra it receives will increase. He can apparently channel this absorbed energy into the earth, meaning it will lead to a bigger technique.

Storm Release: Laser Circus
The user creates several bright beams and shoots them at the enemy. A halo of bright energy spreads from the user's hands as this technique is activated. The beams are able to alter their direction after being shot, making it possible to strike multiple enemies with pinpoint accuracy, even bypassing hostages held in close proximity. The user can increase the number of missiles to a great amount to pin down an enemy.





Ninjutsu
E-ranked
- Body Replacement Technique
Requires: Object for replacement switch
This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.


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- Like The Wind
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: The user sends bursts of fuuton chakra to their feet which explode outward on impact with the ground, giving them an extra push off with each footfall. This gives them increased speed. This technique does not require any handseals.


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- Wind Release: Heavy Slashes
Rank: B
Requirements: A blade.
Description: The user fills their blade with chakra and leaps forwards, slashing as they move forwards. A wave of chakra leaps forwards, mimicking the motion of their blade. These slashes can cut equal to what the blade that is being wielded can cut. As long as the user is moving straight forward they can continue to make slashes. Stopping or changing direction slightly will end the jutsu


-Wind Release: Wind Layer
Rank: B
Requirements: Any kind of metal-made weapons.
Description: The weapon of the user attracts wind, giving it a wind layer. This layer of wind makes the weapon much sharper, as becomes rapidly evident by the fact that it can even leave cuts on weapons that are labeled indestructible or unbreakable. This technique does not require hand seals.

-Frictionless
Rank: B
Requirements: A weapon
Description: After focusing fuuton chakra over a weapon, the user is able to swing them faster, due to the wind on the weapon reducing wind drag from the surrounding environment; essentially removing wind resistance.


-Shadow Clone Technique
Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance.

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- Chakra Strike
By channeling a small amount of chakra into their weapon, the user is able to hit more effectively.

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- Fury Swallow
The user punches the opponent a few times and finishes the combo with two final slashes.

-Drilling Crimson Blade
The user takes out their blade and channels their chakra into it, then runs toward the opponent, slashing them upwards into the air. Appearing above the target, the user delivers a sharp, drilling slash down upon them, impelling the opponent to the ground.

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- Dance of the Crescent Moon
Requirements: Shadow Clones
The user creates three shadow clones, and each one of them assaults the enemy from a blind spot. The attack occurs on three fronts simultaneously, so it's almost impossible to catch them flat-footed. Furthermore, the mighty attacks are so severe that receiving a blow even from one among the three will inevitably result in a fatal wound. In addition, because of the magnificence this ninjutsu projects as they jump at the opponent's upper body in an orbital pattern, the elegance of which is reminiscent of the shape of a crescent moon.

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Jinei Ryuu Shinigami

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Jinei Ryuu Shinigami

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 9:35 pm


Weapons
- Katana
- Blast sword (shibuki)

Placement on Body
- Left side hip
-Back

What do your weapons do?
- Very durable
- Can explode on impact


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 10:54 am



Age-Rank ratio is way out of line, as such I expect the stats to greatly suffer. 17 year olds who are still genin should have no more than 2 since they obviously struggle.
The jutsu listing is still not in line with my skeleton, I can't see what is what rank and as such can't dictate whether or not you've filled it correctly.
Personality still needs a lot more detail
I don't want a story for your history, I want a brief overview in detail as to what has happened, how it has affected your character.
Stats need to change.

It seems the only thing you've changes is the history, rank and picture from the last time, so the profile still needs a lot of character development.

Please keep in mind this isn't a fighting guild, its an roleplaying guild. Strength means nothing if there isn't a character behind it.


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