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PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 10:45 am


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PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 11:52 pm


Very... inspiring? sweatdrop

The ending seems to be a little dissconnected, but for a short it's nice and tidy. Poor kid though.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 1:48 pm


Lea Fealith
Very... inspiring? sweatdrop

The ending seems to be a little dissconnected, but for a short it's nice and tidy. Poor kid though.
Like I said, 500 words. sweatdrop I hate word limits.

Yeah, I know. Ifeel bad for him. That's why I'm thinking about saving his butt in another installment.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 1:52 pm


Yeah, a limit like that's a b***h, but you did pretty well given the constraints. 3nodding

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