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Hemlock Dressedel

Ruthless Lover

PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 2:20 pm


User Name: Hemlock Dressedel

Rpc Name: Ser P’Olgranara Gnarlagoria Pesteltia. Or P’Olgra if it’s too much for you.

Appearance: User Image

Uniform Specifications: A mask representing Beur, The Demon of Medicine.

eye color: None.

Skin tone: Pale, almost translucent.

Hair color: Bleached a bright white.

Strange body features: For those lucky/Unlucky enough to catch a rare glimpse underneath the Mask, you’d find a horrifying sight. A pale, featureless face. The eyes long since removed, pale flesh long since grown over the wounds to give the appearance of never having. His nose, also removed in a similar manner has the same appearance as the eyes. The only real feature one could find would be the mouth, Sewn almost shut a good deal of time ago, only the barest slit remains, and even then only because he needs a way to get orders across short of stabbing or pantomiming.

Age: Old.

Gender: Was Male.

Height: Six foot exact.

Weight (Optional): 156 Pounds.

Squad: 12, Lieutenant.

Material Status: Materials. . ? Uhh, Silk. If you meant MARITAL status then Widower

Bio: You all know the story of Frankenstein, correct? The man who built a monster. Well, P’Olgra follows a similar story within the Mythos of the 13 court squads. Originally a member of Squad four for a number of years, He was never very strong in the ways of Spiritual power, but he was amazing with the Scalpel and Needlework. More members have been able to keep limbs do to his steady hand than any other time in the history of Soul Society. However, he was never interested in healing simply to help others. He did it as a Scientist. Eventually, People he healed would complain of odd Fevers, illnesses, pains and a great list of other complaints. As time went by things got worse. The turning point was when, as an experiment, a slam group of women he had done intensive Surgery on had shown to be pregnant later. When the time came, Horrid creations of flesh and suffering were born. Terrible Hollow/Soul spawn. He was then locked away for a great time. Most have forgotten, even he. But when his time was up, they found a bizarre creature waiting in his Cell. Blood coating the walls in strange equations and images. A few clear jars he had been able to smuggle in held a pair of eyes and a nose. The ruined face that stared back at them, empty sockets to frightened eyes. This creature stood proud, demanded his blade and robes and promptly walked out. His time in the cells had been spent training his Reitsu and Body. He found he no longer needed to see when tendrils of his own spiritual power touched on everything, giving him a far more detailed picture of what it was than his eyes ever could. A small amount of time went by. He had since turned back to his experiments, though, not to the degree that had seen him locked away. A mask, The Unholy symbol of Beur to hide his face from those with a weak stomach was a constant sight at the Science labs of the 12th squad. Eventually, he tried for the position of Lieutenant.

Likes: Discovering new things, a warm broth, an intellect from which he can have an intelligent conversation.

Dislikes: Fools who are more blind mentally than he is physically.

Personality: Clinical. Everything he does has a reason and is done with little to no emotion.

Zanpakuto Name: Riaon Kiba

Zanpakuto Seal Appearance: Derp

Zanpakuto Spirit: Derpaherp

Shikai Release: Lash out and Roar, Riaon!

Shikai Appearance: Same as the original blade, serrated edge.

Shikai full description: Blade grows a serrated edge but otherwise remains the same.

Shikai Ability 1: Reitsu compresses densely around the edge of the blade, giving it a sharper cutting edge. This means it carves through your flesh with the ease of a hot knife through butter.

Shikai Ability 2: Wounds suffered by the blade cause terrible pain signals to travel directly through your nervous system. (( Like being hit with a Bear Tazer )) Multiple wounds in one area (( around three to four )) Will cause numbing and the flow of Reitsu through that area becomes difficult.


Bankai Release Feel their pain, feed from it~! Riaon Kiba!

Bankai Appearance: Razorwire.

Bankai full description: The blade compresses into a short sword, connected by the pommel to a spool of razorwire, 4 meters in length, and attached to the wrist. The wiring being made entirely of Reitsu. It takes a methodical hand to wield and has been known to remove limbs from those unfortunate enough to be hit. To help manipulate it, the Sheath changes to a pair of Reitsu imbued gloves.

Bankai Ability 1: Reflections. Not so much a power, as a Science and optical illusion, but the wires catch rays of light, throwing about images of Razorwire. The appearance is that of many wires or a displacement of the actual.

Bankai Ability 2: Using his unique control over thin tendrils of Reitsu, He can manipulate his razorwire to spin around his body like a small whirlwind of Death. Not only does this provide a deadly defense, but due to the reflective nature of the wire, it send flashes of light in all direction making it almost impossible to visually focus on him.

Kidou: None

Agility

Dashing:A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's atributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks.

Ransōtengai (乱装天傀; lit. "heavenly wild puppet suit", "disheveled paradise puppet" in the Viz translation) — this is a high level technique that allows the user to control their body parts using strings of spirit energy controlled by their brain, forming lines or strings out of countless spiritrons. By using this technique, the user can control their body as one would a puppet, allowing them to move freely despite paralysis, broken limbs, or any other force that would impede normal movement.
-P’Olgra developed a similar technique using the same concept as that which he uses to see with. With a body as frail as his can be, it is a necessary tool in both combat and experimentation, continuing long after his weak body has given up. It's nowhere near perfect or even to the same level as that which Quincy's can preform, but it serves his purposes.

Shunpo (Flash-Step):A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high lieutenant ranking, must be able to possess
PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 2:56 pm


the shikai and bankai are slight problems.

Surely the area would be rendered useless, but lets put a set time on this. How about the affect lasts 5 post turns. It is a shikai.

Bankai ability goes with the above, but I love how you added the summoned bankai parts. It's new.

Other than that it's all good.

One problem though. As I've been trying to explain in the announcements, some of the people have been given multiple high positions because it's part of a story. When the story is over, more positions such as Captain and Lt will be released for the guild members to use and to earn. I'll talk to Kira about giving you two Lt positions, but it's undecided. I'll let you know ASAP.

Tsukirou Nevermore

Omnipresent Mystic


Hemlock Dressedel

Ruthless Lover

PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 3:02 pm


Tsukirou Hiragano
the shikai and bankai are slight problems.

Surely the area would be rendered useless, but lets put a set time on this. How about the affect lasts 5 post turns. It is a shikai.

Bankai ability goes with the above, but I love how you added the summoned bankai parts. It's new.

Other than that it's all good.

One problem though. As I've been trying to explain in the announcements, some of the people have been given multiple high positions because it's part of a story. When the story is over, more positions such as Captain and Lt will be released for the guild members to use and to earn. I'll talk to Kira about giving you two Lt positions, but it's undecided. I'll let you know ASAP.
Well, the point was that they have to be within inches of each other. The odds of which are low. Now, I will agree on the Shikai part, it IS just a shikai. This was only just worked up on the spot. As to the Bankai part, I think it's fine as is.
One, It's a Bankai. It's supposed to suck getting hit by one.
Two, There are a literal s**t-storm of far over-powered Bankai as compared to mine JUST in the line up waiting for approval, let alone in the series itself. Not to mention it is pretty much his only combat ability, that's not too much to ask. The need to have the wounds close together still applies, and in a fight, usually that's up to how much of a d**k the person who is being attacked feels like not being.
PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 3:06 pm


Hemlock Dressedel
Tsukirou Hiragano
the shikai and bankai are slight problems.

Surely the area would be rendered useless, but lets put a set time on this. How about the affect lasts 5 post turns. It is a shikai.

Bankai ability goes with the above, but I love how you added the summoned bankai parts. It's new.

Other than that it's all good.

One problem though. As I've been trying to explain in the announcements, some of the people have been given multiple high positions because it's part of a story. When the story is over, more positions such as Captain and Lt will be released for the guild members to use and to earn. I'll talk to Kira about giving you two Lt positions, but it's undecided. I'll let you know ASAP.
Well, the point was that they have to be within inches of each other. The odds of which are low. Now, I will agree on the Shikai part, it IS just a shikai. This was only just worked up on the spot. As to the Bankai part, I think it's fine as is.
One, It's a Bankai. It's supposed to suck getting hit by one.
Two, There are a literal s**t-storm of far over-powered Bankai as compared to mine JUST in the line up waiting for approval, let alone in the series itself. Not to mention it is pretty much his only combat ability, that's not too much to ask. The need to have the wounds close together still applies, and in a fight, usually that's up to how much of a d**k the person who is being attacked feels like not being.


Well, I wouldn't say five posts with the bankai, that would be too little. Not only that but it would be too similar to the shikai. I'm just afraid of permanent affects. ones that don't go away even after the fight. Just make sure you put something in there like "This ability can only be turned off if the user exits bankai" or something. Don't want confusion.

Tsukirou Nevermore

Omnipresent Mystic


Hemlock Dressedel

Ruthless Lover

PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 3:11 pm


Tsukirou Hiragano
Hemlock Dressedel
Tsukirou Hiragano
the shikai and bankai are slight problems.

Surely the area would be rendered useless, but lets put a set time on this. How about the affect lasts 5 post turns. It is a shikai.

Bankai ability goes with the above, but I love how you added the summoned bankai parts. It's new.

Other than that it's all good.

One problem though. As I've been trying to explain in the announcements, some of the people have been given multiple high positions because it's part of a story. When the story is over, more positions such as Captain and Lt will be released for the guild members to use and to earn. I'll talk to Kira about giving you two Lt positions, but it's undecided. I'll let you know ASAP.
Well, the point was that they have to be within inches of each other. The odds of which are low. Now, I will agree on the Shikai part, it IS just a shikai. This was only just worked up on the spot. As to the Bankai part, I think it's fine as is.
One, It's a Bankai. It's supposed to suck getting hit by one.
Two, There are a literal s**t-storm of far over-powered Bankai as compared to mine JUST in the line up waiting for approval, let alone in the series itself. Not to mention it is pretty much his only combat ability, that's not too much to ask. The need to have the wounds close together still applies, and in a fight, usually that's up to how much of a d**k the person who is being attacked feels like not being.


Well, I wouldn't say five posts with the bankai, that would be too little. Not only that but it would be too similar to the shikai. I'm just afraid of permanent affects. ones that don't go away even after the fight. Just make sure you put something in there like "This ability can only be turned off if the user exits bankai" or something. Don't want confusion.
That I can understand. No, the Bankai one would go away when the wounds are repaired. The effect remains only so long as the wounds do. I'll be sure to make that noticeable in the RPC.
PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 10:53 pm


Tsukirou Hiragano
the shikai and bankai are slight problems.

Surely the area would be rendered useless, but lets put a set time on this. How about the affect lasts 5 post turns. It is a shikai.

Bankai ability goes with the above, but I love how you added the summoned bankai parts. It's new.

Other than that it's all good.

One problem though. As I've been trying to explain in the announcements, some of the people have been given multiple high positions because it's part of a story. When the story is over, more positions such as Captain and Lt will be released for the guild members to use and to earn. I'll talk to Kira about giving you two Lt positions, but it's undecided. I'll let you know ASAP.
Something I'm having trouble with here. . . Now, I know there's an already Cannon story going on here, but what I'm having trouble with is, where exactly are the areas us newly accepted members allowed to post in or, are we to wait until things are officially done? I've noticed a Time gap in posts from Sep 2010 till now. Am I to assume that we can post anywhere the newer posts are? Or, as asked, are we to wait?

Hemlock Dressedel

Ruthless Lover


Tsukirou Nevermore

Omnipresent Mystic

PostPosted: Sat May 28, 2011 6:47 am


Hemlock Dressedel
Tsukirou Hiragano
the shikai and bankai are slight problems.

Surely the area would be rendered useless, but lets put a set time on this. How about the affect lasts 5 post turns. It is a shikai.

Bankai ability goes with the above, but I love how you added the summoned bankai parts. It's new.

Other than that it's all good.

One problem though. As I've been trying to explain in the announcements, some of the people have been given multiple high positions because it's part of a story. When the story is over, more positions such as Captain and Lt will be released for the guild members to use and to earn. I'll talk to Kira about giving you two Lt positions, but it's undecided. I'll let you know ASAP.
Something I'm having trouble with here. . . Now, I know there's an already Cannon story going on here, but what I'm having trouble with is, where exactly are the areas us newly accepted members allowed to post in or, are we to wait until things are officially done? I've noticed a Time gap in posts from Sep 2010 till now. Am I to assume that we can post anywhere the newer posts are? Or, as asked, are we to wait?


sure you can post anywhere you want. You can even link places to events happening around you, don't be afraid too. (The time gape was from a LONG time ago, no one would post, so I started making everyone post.) You can start anywhere you want.
PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2011 11:44 am


Tsukirou Hiragano
Hemlock Dressedel
Tsukirou Hiragano
the shikai and bankai are slight problems.

Surely the area would be rendered useless, but lets put a set time on this. How about the affect lasts 5 post turns. It is a shikai.

Bankai ability goes with the above, but I love how you added the summoned bankai parts. It's new.

Other than that it's all good.

One problem though. As I've been trying to explain in the announcements, some of the people have been given multiple high positions because it's part of a story. When the story is over, more positions such as Captain and Lt will be released for the guild members to use and to earn. I'll talk to Kira about giving you two Lt positions, but it's undecided. I'll let you know ASAP.
Something I'm having trouble with here. . . Now, I know there's an already Cannon story going on here, but what I'm having trouble with is, where exactly are the areas us newly accepted members allowed to post in or, are we to wait until things are officially done? I've noticed a Time gap in posts from Sep 2010 till now. Am I to assume that we can post anywhere the newer posts are? Or, as asked, are we to wait?


sure you can post anywhere you want. You can even link places to events happening around you, don't be afraid too. (The time gape was from a LONG time ago, no one would post, so I started making everyone post.) You can start anywhere you want.


So do I get a verdict on whether or not I have to scrap this RPC? Because I know the 12th Captain will have me.

Hemlock Dressedel

Ruthless Lover


Hemlock Dressedel

Ruthless Lover

PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2011 4:39 pm


-Bumping because I can.-
PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2011 4:44 pm


bankai ability 2 sounds ALOT like Tsukirou's pulsar attack. I don't mind it though. Dorito will approve of this message as long as there is some sort of post cooldown on the bankai ability 2.

Tsukirou Nevermore

Omnipresent Mystic


Hemlock Dressedel

Ruthless Lover

PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2011 5:04 pm


Tsukirou Hiragano
bankai ability 2 sounds ALOT like Tsukirou's pulsar attack. I don't mind it though. Dorito will approve of this message as long as there is some sort of post cooldown on the bankai ability 2.
Hmm. I'll need to look at that then. The idea is that, seeing as it's 12 feet of line, and to make something that has almost no weight move, the energy required is minimal at best. It's connected to him by his blade and the spool, it can't fly out in a whirlwind AT someone, it's purely defensive. Therefor I'm not sure if a cooldown is really required. I mean, It's razorwire. If I want to stab someone, it has to stop moving or I'd cut off my own arm.

In fact, the only real energy used here was transformation. Most of the energy I can ever see him using is to replicate his version of the Quincy Puppet ability, and even then it's not a perfected form like theirs is.
PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2011 6:27 pm


M'kay, So got an Lt. for 12th squad now.

Keefe_the_Music_Man

Magnetic Smoker


Hemlock Dressedel

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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2011 6:49 pm


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