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 Posted: Thu May 26, 2011 9:51 pm
Name: Senshoku Yuki
Appearance:  Age: 22Height: 5'3Weight: 98lbsPersonality: Quiet,reserved, and calm are what Senshoku seems to be on the surface, but internally shes a hyper wild child. She uses this internal energy in her work, pulling out massive bouts of strength or stamina. She harbors a love of children and goes back to district 78 and feeds those she can find. Likes razz ocky, Children, the color blue, Hari-chan Dislikes:Loud things, people touching her unexpectedly. Melted ice cream Biography: Senshoku is from the 78th Rukon district. Her parents own a bar, The blue wolf, who serve rather rough patrons, so she had to toughen up fast. She had it better than a lot of kids and knows it but she still hates the place. She tried to join the soul society at 13 and was frankly amazed when she got in. She worked so hard in the academy that she was in the infirmary from injury and exhaustion on more than 3 or 4 occasions. Squad:will accept what is given to her Rank: Zanpakuto Name:Hariokami Zanpakuto Appearance:  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Shikai Release: Hunt! Hariokami Shikai Appearance:  Shikai Discrption: Senshoku's weapon is turned into pure, reiatsu enhanced crystals. The shield is very powerful, and can defend against high level kidou and strong physical and spiritual attacks. The sword is Razor sharp and dual edged. Shikai Ability 1: The weapon can shift shapes to either a shield or a sword. (Description above) Shikai Ability 2: Crystal shards are shot from the sword, once inplanted into the ground they grow to loarge crystaline clumps These crystals are all incredibly sharp. The crystals are very susceptible to Kido and other reiatsu based attacks.. Shikai Ability 3 :  Meet Hari-chan a 6 ft tall wolf composed entirely out of the crystals. One hari is summoned Senshoku no longer has a sword but a sheild. Hari gains the abilities of the sword. (Can be used 3 times.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bankai Release: Fusion Bankai Appearance sad coming soon) Bankai Discription: hari becomes a suit of armor and a weapon in bankai form. Its a true fusion with Senshoku being more like a were wolf than person. Bankai Ability 1:Tamashī no tsume o nusumu- Claws that steal reiatsu from the wounds they cause. These same claws can give stolen reiatsu to heal others or to heal herself. Bankai Ability 2:Ookami no tōboe- The crystals fired earlier from my sword, now form into mini hari-chans . These hari-chans can not regenerate and can only be summoned once, when they attack, they absorb reiatsu and strengthen their attacks. This ability can not regain Yuki's reiatsu. (Can be used 50 times, must have countdown showing for each post.) (Max amount at once - 5) Bankai Ability 3: Tsūretsuna jigoku en- The pieces of the destroyed haris spin around the victim. These crystal fragments can slash flesh clean off, cutting your body in all directions simultaneously. These fragments can still absorb reiatsu from you with each cut. Does not replenish Senshoku's reiatsu. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Agility Dashing:A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's atributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks. Shunpo (Flash-Step):A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high lieutenant ranking, must be able to possess Shunpo. Furthermore, it is a most fearsome mid-range/long-range speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. All in all, this ability can only be used by lieutenants and captains. For lieutenants it is nearly mastered, yet not perfected. Therefore, it is only of mid-range level 1. For captains Shunpo is of a level 2 maximum ability in which it is fully perfected for both mid-range and long-range. Air Walk:Another skill, though not necessarily related, is the Soul Reaper ability to walk on air using spiritual energy. By collecting and solidifying spiritual particles beneath their feet, Soul Reapers can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling. This particular ability can only be obtained from officer level. Furthermore, it cannot necessarily be used every so often, especially for officers. It is an ability that can only be temporarily used but cannot last for a very long period of time. However, for lieutenants, they can stay on air for quite a bit longer and for captains, it can be held for quite a long while considering the great amount of riatsu within a captain ranking individual. Senka (Flash Blossom):Although Shunpo is connected with this ability, this technique possess a unique name and style of its own. This technique is known as Senka (闪花, Flash Blossom), a flash step combined with a spin to quickly move behind the enemy, followed by a strike aimed to destroy the saketsu chain and the hakusui soul sleep with a combination of two quick thrusts. This technique is one of the two, that Youruichi developed mixing Shunpo to complete its ability. Furthermore, only certain individuals, of high ranking captain level can possess such an ability. Utsusemi: This is one of the two, that Youruichi developed as well. It is the 4 ways of the Shihou through Shunpo which is also known as "Utsusemi". It's ability is a speed known to be so fast that the user leaves an afterimage of him/herself. Its affect is most absolute, superb, and flawless if ever fully perfected. And to be more specific, Utsusemi's speed is so fast, that the enemy can practically feel and touch the physical body of the afterimage and not even know the very fact that it is nothing more but an afterimage. Its very image can easily deceive the eyes of the enemy. This technique is very rare, thus few captains are able to possess such a flawless ability. Furthermore it is most lethal when combining Senka after Utsusemi is executed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bakudo-1. Sai (塞, Restrain) Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.Incantation: invisible chains come forth and bind those harm you 4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) An energy rope entangles the target's arms.Incantation: ropes of riestu come forth and bind. 8. Seki (斥, Repulse) Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it=[5]Incantation: shield of invisible forces go forth and repel. 9. Geki (撃, Strike) Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them. Incantation: "Light of red thunder strike down and stop all movement" ("自壊せよロンダニーニの黒犬!! 一読し・焼き払い・自ら喉を掻き切るがいい!") 21. Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Escape) Creates a blast upon activation and is used like a ninja's smoke bomb.Incantation: smoke of red fog rush like the wind and blind. 26. Kyakko (曲光, Curving Light) Hides the target from sight, by bending light. The spell has the ability to totally hide the presence and reiatsu of the user or specified object.Incantation: bright light from above i dont want to be seen this person so hide me from sight. 30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam) Forming a golden triangle with one's finger, it shoots three beams of light that pin the target to one place on a surface, slamming into his or her body in three places in a shape of a perfect triangle.Incantation: gold triangular rods hold still our enemy. 37. Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star) Creates a star-shaped cushion of Spiritual Energy, which anchors it to nearby objects with "ropes" of spirit particles. It can stop falling objects, acting like a safety net.Incantation: net of energy show yourself, and catch thy falling star. 39. Enkosen (円閘扇, Arc Shield) Summons a shield of condensed reiatsu to block opponents' attacks.Incantation: shield block thee attacks. 58. Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows) Tracks and locates any spiritual force the user focuses on. To activate it, the user must draw a circle on the ground, cut into four parts with a specific character in each. The incantation animates the circle, causing various numbers to appear within until the specific set is found. The number set seems to be a variation on longitude and latitude.[12]Incantation: "Heart of the south, eye of the north, finger of the west, foot of the east, arrive with the wind and depart with the rain." ("南の心臓 北の瞳 西の指先 東の踵 風持ちて 集い雨払いて散れ") 61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light) Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams.[14]Incantation: "Carriage of Thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!" ("雷鳴の馬車 糸車の間隙 光もて此を六に別つ!") 62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence) A rod formed of energy is thrown towards the target before it disintegrates into numerous short rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile.Incantation: rod of light split and keep still our enemy. Hado 1. Shō (衝, Thrust) Pushes the target away from the caster.Incantation: Push thee away. 4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.Incantation: Fire at thy willl. 11. Tsuzuri Raiden (製本雷, Bound Lightning) Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through.Incantation: currents from the sky shot down and touch" 31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire) Fires a ball of red energy at a target.:Incantation: " Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!" 33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down) Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power.Incantation': " Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws." 54. Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames) Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact.Incantation: purple fire, come down and destroy. 58. Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky) A widening tornado-like blast is fired towards the target.Incantation: unknown 63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon) Fires a massive wave of yellow energy at a target.Incantation: "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!" ("散在する獣の骨！尖塔・紅晶・鋼鉄の車輪 動けば風 止まれば空 槍打つ音色が虚城に満ちる！") 64. Sōren Sōkatsui (双蓮蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down) Essentially a doubled version of #33 (labelled as #73 in anime), this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety.Incantation: "Rays of enegry come forth and shoot your enemy down" 88. Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon) Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in an truly enormous explosion. Its full strength is however unknown since Aizen used Splitting Void before it could hit him. Incantation: dragons from above come forth and show us your power. 88. Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon) Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in an truly enormous explosion. Its full strength is however unknown since Aizen used Splitting Void before it could hit him. Incantation: unknown 90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin) Forms a box of black energy around a target, which is then pierced by dozens of energy "spears", lacerating the one inside from head to toe. Its appearance and function is reminiscent of a common magician's trick, as well as certain torture devices used during the Spanish Inquisition.Incantation: Trap and torture thine enemy. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Other Information:
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 7:13 pm
Passes! The Dorito approves. ^^
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 7:27 pm
Tsukirou Hiragano Passes! The Dorito approves. ^^ Your hard-on for foxes is clearly an issue. Her weapon turn into a sword and shield, not really an issue. The sword can cut with a touch. Not with cutting force, but simply touching the edge. The blade can cut through defenses yet her shield repels powerful attacks. Her Shikai power two is essentially an ever-growing spear that can pierce metal and flesh with equal ease AND it's fast, meaning at point blank, expect to be impaled. Her Shikai three power is a Living creature made of Power. That is, in almost all cases represented from what I've seen in bleach, a Bankai power. Not only is it a living weapon, but IT can shoot the spear thing, meaning you have to deal with two of them. Coupled with regeneration, all of which has to be VERY draining on the user because I doubt a creature MADE from HER reitsu is going to be making its OWN reitsu Bankai transformation is a suit of armor.Claws on the armor can Vampiricly steal enemy Reitsu. Her sword can shoot a bunch of mini-foxes, that, should you successfully defeat, just turn into a deadly s**t-storm tornado at your feet. Every aspect of her set-up requires a ******** of focus and energy, You accept it without a visible issue. My second RPC, which had pretty demanding limitations on the conditions of effect, was still given criticism. Thu fuq man?
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 7:57 pm
Hemlock Dressedel Tsukirou Hiragano Passes! The Dorito approves. ^^ Your hard-on for foxes is clearly an issue. Her weapon turn into a sword and shield, not really an issue. The sword can cut with a touch. Not with cutting force, but simply touching the edge. The blade can cut through defenses yet her shield repels powerful attacks. Her Shikai power two is essentially an ever-growing spear that can pierce metal and flesh with equal ease AND it's fast, meaning at point blank, expect to be impaled. Her Shikai three power is a Living creature made of Power. That is, in almost all cases represented from what I've seen in bleach, a Bankai power. Not only is it a living weapon, but IT can shoot the spear thing, meaning you have to deal with two of them. Coupled with regeneration, all of which has to be VERY draining on the user because I doubt a creature MADE from HER reitsu is going to be making its OWN reitsu Bankai transformation is a suit of armor.Claws on the armor can Vampiricly steal enemy Reitsu. Her sword can shoot a bunch of mini-foxes, that, should you successfully defeat, just turn into a deadly s**t-storm tornado at your feet. Every aspect of her set-up requires a ******** of focus and energy, You accept it without a visible issue. My second RPC, which had pretty demanding limitations on the conditions of effect, was still given criticism. Thu fuq man? Ok I do not have hard-ons for the fox people, don't need an a*****e response from someone who is JUST coming to the guild. I appreciate your concerns, and I like your arguments, but give it a rest. Shikai ability 1 the sharpness just describes the weapons razor edge, nothing more. Same with the defenses. Yes it can slash through weak defenses, but if the defenses are strong enough it can hold easily. The shield, although powerful, does have some vulnerability. Reiatsu related attacks can't be repelled unless the user directly specifies that it does. Shikai ability 2 These spears CAN be destroyed. And yes, getting close is a VERY bad idea. So don't get close, or if you can outrun it, do that. Don't expect EVERY move to be unavoidable. Use your imagination. Shikai 3 Basically, yes, a bankai ability. Your only solid argument here. I will change that. Bankai ability 1 No issues. Bankai ability 2 Yes, it's supposed to be powerful, it's a bankai. As stated, once they are used, her energy is not regained. It will take a lot of energy. It is basically Starks ability with a twist, her twist apparently being bankai ability 3 Bankai ability 3 Again, if you use your head, then you should know that attacking them from a distance is not a bad idea. She's not asking you to step on them to create a shitstorm right under you, that's you thinking of the most retarded way of destroying them. If you attack them from afar, it's no real danger to you. Yes I will edit it just the slightest to put some sort of reduction on this (I'll say that she can make 100 Hari's before she can't make any more at all and leave it at that.) If you're going to put up and argument, you should be respectful of other peoples creativity. Not EVERYONE can word EXACTLY what their character can and can't do. However, you sir seemed to be so damn confident that you have. Please show some of these members, including those with higher ranks in this guild, a little damn respect. Next time you have a concern with a profile, you answer to me first, then I will decide what to do with it. I respect your experience as a roleplayer, but again with your comments and concerns. No one needs to hear this, and you're getting on my last nerve. I would respect you a lot more if you could show my reasons, my judgement, and my rank with a bit more respect. That is all.
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 8:44 pm
Tsukirou Hiragano Hemlock Dressedel Tsukirou Hiragano Passes! The Dorito approves. ^^ Your hard-on for foxes is clearly an issue. Her weapon turn into a sword and shield, not really an issue. The sword can cut with a touch. Not with cutting force, but simply touching the edge. The blade can cut through defenses yet her shield repels powerful attacks. Her Shikai power two is essentially an ever-growing spear that can pierce metal and flesh with equal ease AND it's fast, meaning at point blank, expect to be impaled. Her Shikai three power is a Living creature made of Power. That is, in almost all cases represented from what I've seen in bleach, a Bankai power. Not only is it a living weapon, but IT can shoot the spear thing, meaning you have to deal with two of them. Coupled with regeneration, all of which has to be VERY draining on the user because I doubt a creature MADE from HER reitsu is going to be making its OWN reitsu Bankai transformation is a suit of armor.Claws on the armor can Vampiricly steal enemy Reitsu. Her sword can shoot a bunch of mini-foxes, that, should you successfully defeat, just turn into a deadly s**t-storm tornado at your feet. Every aspect of her set-up requires a ******** of focus and energy, You accept it without a visible issue. My second RPC, which had pretty demanding limitations on the conditions of effect, was still given criticism. Thu fuq man? Ok I do not have hard-ons for the fox people, don't need an a*****e response from someone who is JUST coming to the guild. I appreciate your concerns, and I like your arguments, but give it a rest. Shikai ability 1 the sharpness just describes the weapons razor edge, nothing more. Same with the defenses. Yes it can slash through weak defenses, but if the defenses are strong enough it can hold easily. The shield, although powerful, does have some vulnerability. Reiatsu related attacks can't be repelled unless the user directly specifies that it does. Shikai ability 2 These spears CAN be destroyed. And yes, getting close is a VERY bad idea. So don't get close, or if you can outrun it, do that. Don't expect EVERY move to be unavoidable. Use your imagination. Shikai 3 Basically, yes, a bankai ability. Your only solid argument here. I will change that. Bankai ability 1 No issues. Bankai ability 2 Yes, it's supposed to be powerful, it's a bankai. As stated, once they are used, her energy is not regained. It will take a lot of energy. It is basically Starks ability with a twist, her twist apparently being bankai ability 3 Bankai ability 3 Again, if you use your head, then you should know that attacking them from a distance is not a bad idea. She's not asking you to step on them to create a shitstorm right under you, that's you thinking of the most retarded way of destroying them. If you attack them from afar, it's no real danger to you. Yes I will edit it just the slightest to put some sort of reduction on this (I'll say that she can make 100 Hari's before she can't make any more at all and leave it at that.) If you're going to put up and argument, you should be respectful of other peoples creativity. Not EVERYONE can word EXACTLY what their character can and can't do. However, you sir seemed to be so damn confident that you have. Please show some of these members, including those with higher ranks in this guild, a little damn respect. Next time you have a concern with a profile, you answer to me first, then I will decide what to do with it. I respect your experience as a roleplayer, but again with your comments and concerns. No one needs to hear this, and you're getting on my last nerve. I would respect you a lot more if you could show my reasons, my judgement, and my rank with a bit more respect. That is all. And now everyone up in this is getting the frustration card. The crock about the fox thing wasn't purposely intended as an insult, but merely an observation from the little I've seen. Her sword/shield combo. I'm sure Kidou is made of Reitsu. If Kidou can be blocked, other Reitsu based abilities can to an extent. Shikai 2 You say this but I think you may have forgotten that everyon'es primary weapon is a sword. I think they're close-range weapons. I know very well that not all attacks can be avoided, and a ranged attack is a very clever way of getting an advantage. Now, they don't say they can be broken, especially since it's made of Solid Reitsu. Shikai 3 Thank you. Bankai one. So when she hits your Bankai/Shikai/Kidou and anything else you can think of that has Reitsu, Absorbs it into herself like a Bount, and heals her wounds with it in combat, That doesn't seem like something that needs the Chainsaw of Balance? Try to think about this as if you were in a death match with her RPC. It helps with Going over RPCs, or, at least I feel it does, but that's only my opinion. Bankai two It does in fact say her energy is regained. They're Reitsu vampires too. Bankai 3 Going back to the earlier spear issue. your weapon is a sword. a short-range weapon. Kidou, being Reitsu, and as described by her vampiric powers, seems like it would just be sucked up to a point. Your best option being to have some long range Bankai/Shikai, and if her Vampiricy is based on Reitsu, wouldn't that prove equally pointless? And as to the s**t-storm under you, when you bust them with your sword, they tend to fall down on the ground, meaning they will rise up under you. A limit is a good thing, I agree on that. Now I KNOW I can't word my RPC EXACTLY how it is going to be, but that's not the issue. The issue is Balance. There's a difference between an RPC that is strong and fairly Balanced, and one that just has a whole bunch of powers flying about. I try to make mine with a Benefit/drawback ratio of 1=1 or 1=2 if not more. Not only does that mean a fight can go on longer but it also means we get to stretch our imagination to delightful limits and ideas as opposed to trying to out BS the other on a scale of who can have the most ludicrously over-powered RPC. Balance usually implies that for every benefit, there's some sort of drawback. In the case of a Bankai/Shikai/Kidou the drawback is a loss of power along with any other added downsides. I understand creativity and I know the want to have a character that can dish out and take a good deal of abuse. But that's what the imagination IN-GAME is for. Like a Chess game with a story, but what happens when every piece is a Queen? It's just a ******** then. I'm not TRYING to disrespect you or anything, but when the "higher ups" Are allowing RPCs that look like they'll just go on forever, essentially being Giant batteries of Reitsu that walk around firing "********" Bazookas or something, it's about then that a person start to question. Now, Me quoting this with my views, That IS coming to you first. I make sure to bring up an issue or Quote you so that way you notice it sooner. I'd normally PM or Comment but that system is being buggy for me right now. I accept ALL comments and concerns with any RPC I make. I actually get upset if no one has anything to say about it. How do you learn if you someone doesn't point out a mistake you may have made? A Comment or concern is something that SHOULD be heard, regardless of the other's feeling because their RPC effects EVERYONE they come in contact with, be it for better or worse. As to your Reason's, Judgments and Rank. I grew up on the archaic style of Roleplaying almost all Forum based Roleplaying has stemmed off of. I've been there as it changed and evolved and within the last four years or so, it's been taking a terrible turn as Anime has permeated our culture. You start to see people with all these crazy powers with no explanation as to how they got it, what are the drawbacks, what is it based off of, etc,etc. From what I can see people seem to think "Well, The hero and the main character people they keep showing are all super powerful, why shouldn't my guy?" Because Fate chose that small group over everyone else. The way Rpers now are, It would seem Fate just outright chose EVERYONE to have anything they want. I know Captains and Lieutenants need to be stronger than everyone else. I get that. But when everyone can pretty much equal everyone else, it's hard to separate who should really be in charge. Another issue is people refusing to acknowledge Logic, Reason and Science. I get that it's Fantasy and so in a lot of places those don't apply. But when you remove them entirely you get a mess. Logic helps to hold a flow on powers, skills, what can and can't be done. Reason helps maintain a Balance to keep people from making Gods and Planet destroyers. Science helps maintain a skeleton for even the most ridiculous power or race. These have been sadly lacking from most every RP you could bump into. Maybe it's just that I'm too caught up in how things Used to be. But it was fun in those days.
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 8:56 pm
Hemlock Dressedel Tsukirou Hiragano Hemlock Dressedel Tsukirou Hiragano Passes! The Dorito approves. ^^ Your hard-on for foxes is clearly an issue. Her weapon turn into a sword and shield, not really an issue. The sword can cut with a touch. Not with cutting force, but simply touching the edge. The blade can cut through defenses yet her shield repels powerful attacks. Her Shikai power two is essentially an ever-growing spear that can pierce metal and flesh with equal ease AND it's fast, meaning at point blank, expect to be impaled. Her Shikai three power is a Living creature made of Power. That is, in almost all cases represented from what I've seen in bleach, a Bankai power. Not only is it a living weapon, but IT can shoot the spear thing, meaning you have to deal with two of them. Coupled with regeneration, all of which has to be VERY draining on the user because I doubt a creature MADE from HER reitsu is going to be making its OWN reitsu Bankai transformation is a suit of armor.Claws on the armor can Vampiricly steal enemy Reitsu. Her sword can shoot a bunch of mini-foxes, that, should you successfully defeat, just turn into a deadly s**t-storm tornado at your feet. Every aspect of her set-up requires a ******** of focus and energy, You accept it without a visible issue. My second RPC, which had pretty demanding limitations on the conditions of effect, was still given criticism. Thu fuq man? Ok I do not have hard-ons for the fox people, don't need an a*****e response from someone who is JUST coming to the guild. I appreciate your concerns, and I like your arguments, but give it a rest. Shikai ability 1 the sharpness just describes the weapons razor edge, nothing more. Same with the defenses. Yes it can slash through weak defenses, but if the defenses are strong enough it can hold easily. The shield, although powerful, does have some vulnerability. Reiatsu related attacks can't be repelled unless the user directly specifies that it does. Shikai ability 2 These spears CAN be destroyed. And yes, getting close is a VERY bad idea. So don't get close, or if you can outrun it, do that. Don't expect EVERY move to be unavoidable. Use your imagination. Shikai 3 Basically, yes, a bankai ability. Your only solid argument here. I will change that. Bankai ability 1 No issues. Bankai ability 2 Yes, it's supposed to be powerful, it's a bankai. As stated, once they are used, her energy is not regained. It will take a lot of energy. It is basically Starks ability with a twist, her twist apparently being bankai ability 3 Bankai ability 3 Again, if you use your head, then you should know that attacking them from a distance is not a bad idea. She's not asking you to step on them to create a shitstorm right under you, that's you thinking of the most retarded way of destroying them. If you attack them from afar, it's no real danger to you. Yes I will edit it just the slightest to put some sort of reduction on this (I'll say that she can make 100 Hari's before she can't make any more at all and leave it at that.) If you're going to put up and argument, you should be respectful of other peoples creativity. Not EVERYONE can word EXACTLY what their character can and can't do. However, you sir seemed to be so damn confident that you have. Please show some of these members, including those with higher ranks in this guild, a little damn respect. Next time you have a concern with a profile, you answer to me first, then I will decide what to do with it. I respect your experience as a roleplayer, but again with your comments and concerns. No one needs to hear this, and you're getting on my last nerve. I would respect you a lot more if you could show my reasons, my judgement, and my rank with a bit more respect. That is all. And now everyone up in this is getting the frustration card. The crock about the fox thing wasn't purposely intended as an insult, but merely an observation from the little I've seen. Her sword/shield combo. I'm sure Kidou is made of Reitsu. If Kidou can be blocked, other Reitsu based abilities can to an extent. Shikai 2 You say this but I think you may have forgotten that everyon'es primary weapon is a sword. I think they're close-range weapons. I know very well that not all attacks can be avoided, and a ranged attack is a very clever way of getting an advantage. Now, they don't say they can be broken, especially since it's made of Solid Reitsu. Shikai 3 Thank you. Bankai one. So when she hits your Bankai/Shikai/Kidou and anything else you can think of that has Reitsu, Absorbs it into herself like a Bount, and heals her wounds with it in combat, That doesn't seem like something that needs the Chainsaw of Balance? Try to think about this as if you were in a death match with her RPC. It helps with Going over RPCs, or, at least I feel it does, but that's only my opinion. Bankai two It does in fact say her energy is regained. They're Reitsu vampires too. Bankai 3 Going back to the earlier spear issue. your weapon is a sword. a short-range weapon. Kidou, being Reitsu, and as described by her vampiric powers, seems like it would just be sucked up to a point. Your best option being to have some long range Bankai/Shikai, and if her Vampiricy is based on Reitsu, wouldn't that prove equally pointless? And as to the s**t-storm under you, when you bust them with your sword, they tend to fall down on the ground, meaning they will rise up under you. A limit is a good thing, I agree on that. Now I KNOW I can't word my RPC EXACTLY how it is going to be, but that's not the issue. The issue is Balance. There's a difference between an RPC that is strong and fairly Balanced, and one that just has a whole bunch of powers flying about. I try to make mine with a Benefit/drawback ratio of 1=1 or 1=2 if not more. Not only does that mean a fight can go on longer but it also means we get to stretch our imagination to delightful limits and ideas as opposed to trying to out BS the other on a scale of who can have the most ludicrously over-powered RPC. Balance usually implies that for every benefit, there's some sort of drawback. In the case of a Bankai/Shikai/Kidou the drawback is a loss of power along with any other added downsides. I understand creativity and I know the want to have a character that can dish out and take a good deal of abuse. But that's what the imagination IN-GAME is for. Like a Chess game with a story, but what happens when every piece is a Queen? It's just a ******** then. I'm not TRYING to disrespect you or anything, but when the "higher ups" Are allowing RPCs that look like they'll just go on forever, essentially being Giant batteries of Reitsu that walk around firing "********" Bazookas or something, it's about then that a person start to question. Now, Me quoting this with my views, That IS coming to you first. I make sure to bring up an issue or Quote you so that way you notice it sooner. I'd normally PM or Comment but that system is being buggy for me right now. I accept ALL comments and concerns with any RPC I make. I actually get upset if no one has anything to say about it. How do you learn if you someone doesn't point out a mistake you may have made? A Comment or concern is something that SHOULD be heard, regardless of the other's feeling because their RPC effects EVERYONE they come in contact with, be it for better or worse. As to your Reason's, Judgments and Rank. I grew up on the archaic style of Roleplaying almost all Forum based Roleplaying has stemmed off of. I've been there as it changed and evolved and within the last four years or so, it's been taking a terrible turn as Anime has permeated our culture. You start to see people with all these crazy powers with no explanation as to how they got it, what are the drawbacks, what is it based off of, etc,etc. From what I can see people seem to think "Well, The hero and the main character people they keep showing are all super powerful, why shouldn't my guy?" Because Fate chose that small group over everyone else. The way Rpers now are, It would seem Fate just outright chose EVERYONE to have anything they want. I know Captains and Lieutenants need to be stronger than everyone else. I get that. But when everyone can pretty much equal everyone else, it's hard to separate who should really be in charge. Another issue is people refusing to acknowledge Logic, Reason and Science. I get that it's Fantasy and so in a lot of places those don't apply. But when you remove them entirely you get a mess. Logic helps to hold a flow on powers, skills, what can and can't be done. Reason helps maintain a Balance to keep people from making Gods and Planet destroyers. Science helps maintain a skeleton for even the most ridiculous power or race. These have been sadly lacking from most every RP you could bump into. Maybe it's just that I'm too caught up in how things Used to be. But it was fun in those days. Alright, well then next time don't judge a book by the first 3 pages. I fixed all the abilities, and it shouldn't be a problem. I will have Setsu fix up her shikai one and 2 the way she wants to. If you read her bankai ability AT ALL, it says that it steals reiatsu from the WOUNDS of her OPPONENTS. Have I proven my point yet. Read it weep it eat it like it gurgle it swallow it. No more needs to be said.
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 9:02 pm
Tsukirou Hiragano Alright, well then next time don't judge a book by the first 3 pages. I fixed all the abilities, and it shouldn't be a problem. I will have Setsu fix up her shikai one and 2 the way she wants to. If you read her bankai ability AT ALL, it says that it steals reiatsu from the WOUNDS of her OPPONENTS. Have I proven my point yet. Read it weep it eat it like it gurgle it swallow it. No more needs to be said. -Rubs eyes- I feel I need to be technical, but it merely said wounds for the claws. If your Bankai has a physical form (Meaning all of them in one way or another) Then the Mini-foxes could simply take the hit and power her up. But, either way, I concede defeat on this subject. I'm still going to be an annoying fly on RPCs that catch my personal red-flare, but I will stop here lest we argue for the rest of the night.
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 9:18 pm
Hemlock Dressedel Tsukirou Hiragano Alright, well then next time don't judge a book by the first 3 pages. I fixed all the abilities, and it shouldn't be a problem. I will have Setsu fix up her shikai one and 2 the way she wants to. If you read her bankai ability AT ALL, it says that it steals reiatsu from the WOUNDS of her OPPONENTS. Have I proven my point yet. Read it weep it eat it like it gurgle it swallow it. No more needs to be said. -Rubs eyes- I feel I need to be technical, but it merely said wounds for the claws. If your Bankai has a physical form (Meaning all of them in one way or another) Then the Mini-foxes could simply take the hit and power her up. But, either way, I concede defeat on this subject. I'm still going to be an annoying fly on RPCs that catch my personal red-flare, but I will stop here lest we argue for the rest of the night. The Dorito reigns Supreme!
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 9:22 pm
Tsukirou Hiragano Hemlock Dressedel Tsukirou Hiragano Alright, well then next time don't judge a book by the first 3 pages. I fixed all the abilities, and it shouldn't be a problem. I will have Setsu fix up her shikai one and 2 the way she wants to. If you read her bankai ability AT ALL, it says that it steals reiatsu from the WOUNDS of her OPPONENTS. Have I proven my point yet. Read it weep it eat it like it gurgle it swallow it. No more needs to be said. -Rubs eyes- I feel I need to be technical, but it merely said wounds for the claws. If your Bankai has a physical form (Meaning all of them in one way or another) Then the Mini-foxes could simply take the hit and power her up. But, either way, I concede defeat on this subject. I'm still going to be an annoying fly on RPCs that catch my personal red-flare, but I will stop here lest we argue for the rest of the night. The Dorito reigns Supreme!
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 9:22 pm
Tsukirou Hiragano Hemlock Dressedel Tsukirou Hiragano Alright, well then next time don't judge a book by the first 3 pages. I fixed all the abilities, and it shouldn't be a problem. I will have Setsu fix up her shikai one and 2 the way she wants to. If you read her bankai ability AT ALL, it says that it steals reiatsu from the WOUNDS of her OPPONENTS. Have I proven my point yet. Read it weep it eat it like it gurgle it swallow it. No more needs to be said. -Rubs eyes- I feel I need to be technical, but it merely said wounds for the claws. If your Bankai has a physical form (Meaning all of them in one way or another) Then the Mini-foxes could simply take the hit and power her up. But, either way, I concede defeat on this subject. I'm still going to be an annoying fly on RPCs that catch my personal red-flare, but I will stop here lest we argue for the rest of the night. The Dorito reigns Supreme! 
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Posted: Tue May 31, 2011 7:41 pm
I took your objections into account and edited thusly.
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