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Bloody Anubis

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2011 1:39 pm


Contest Info





This is a contest for two kimeti (Shadow and Water), both of which are based off of Zelda’s Ocarina of Time! They will be given away by means of writing contest and all are welcome to enter, newbie or non, familiar with the game or not!

I am the sole judge of this competition. I have just a few rules.

1. You must keep the names of their original songs. They are the Nocturne of Shadow and Serenade of Water, respectively.
2. It doesn’t matter if you have a million kimeti or none; this competition is for everyone to enter.
3. You may enter for all, but you may only win one!
4. Personality does NOT need to be in line with their looks/tidbit.
5. You do not need to be familiar with the Zelda games to enter.
6. You should answer one or the other prompt. If you want to write for both, that’s up to you, but only one is necessary.
7. Entries are judged on artful writing and concept content.
8. Please specify which you are entering for.
9. Do not bother to make little edits to your entries - make sure to submit the finished product. I’ll be reading them as they are entered.
10. One post per entry.


Option 1:
Construct me a brief profile detailing the kimeti’s personality and history. This should be no more than 2k words (it’s ok if it’s a little over). If you’re having a little trouble getting started, ask yourself how other kimeti might see yours. What do they care about? What do they believe? Do they have any goals or are they just living their lives? Was there anything that specifically influenced them as a youngling?

Option 2:
Write a naming dream for the kimeti you want! There’s a bunch of great examples in the subforum of the guild.


Entry Form


[b][size=16]I Am Entering For (Shadow or Water)![/size][/b]
[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Favorite Zelda Moment?[/b] (If you've never played any of the games, just say so)
[b]Prompt:[/b] (Option 1,2, or Both)
[b]Entry:[/b]



Starts: NOW
Ends: Tuesday, May 31st, 11:59PM EST (may be extended if few entries)
PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2011 2:13 pm


Inspirations


This is all information from the game, the Ocarina of Time. Remember, you do not have to use this to win the competition. This is here only for people who might like a springboard of ideas they could use.


In both cases, the songs for which the does are named for are songs which teleport the hero (Link) to a specific place in his world.




Nocturne of Shadow
[Official Song]


"This is the melody that will draw you into the infinite darkness that absorbs even time... Listen to this, the Nocturne of Shadow!!" - Sheik

This song transports Link onto a ledge overlooking a graveyard. The Shadow Temple is full of booby traps, undead monsters/spirits, and pitfalls into the abyss...

Its personal monster has a thing for drums.

The race representing this temple are humans, as it's made around their village and graveyard.





Serenade of Water
[Official Song]



"Time passes, people move... Like a river's flow, it never ends... A childish mind will turn to noble ambition... Young love will become deep affection... The clear water's surface reflects growth... Now listen to the Serenade of Water to reflect upon yourself...." - Sheik

This song transports Link into the middle of a great lake. The Water Temple is perhaps the most difficult in the game - it is, itself, a puzzle of rising or sinking water levels. It has very few monsters, just annoying rock-spitting octopi and water-walking spiders. You also will have to fight your own, corrupted reflection...

The monster plaguing the temple is liquid/gelatinous and ever morphing to shape itself into the best length to try and choke the life out of you.

The people representing the temple are the Zoras, a mysterious and graceful fish people who are inclined to keep to their own race. When submerged in water, they become invisible to the naked eye.

Bloody Anubis


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PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2011 3:09 pm


I Am Entering For Water!
Username: Lolli McHotpants
Favorite Zelda Moment? Sheik's big "reveal" of identity. xD It just made me laugh.
Prompt: Both.
Entry:

One
The water trickled, tickled, the stones.
Moving forever and never stopping over the ground it went.
Rushing past in steady streams or barely a whisper,
it sings.
Forever we hear it's water serenade.


Two

She's fluid and unassuming as a steady stream. A constant fount of love, nourishment, and a kind ear; Serenade of Water is wherever one needs her most. She never sees it as a burden it's just part of life and why the Swamp Mother gave her the gifts and insight she has. The very epitome of calm and collected she is.
Until the new moon. She's never known why but when the sky vanishes in the sky it's as though she becomes a completely new doe. Anger fills her heart and clouds her mind. Serenade becomes a kin to a tidal wave with the sole unquenchable need to wash over everything and destroy it. It's never her choice and always something tries unsuccessfully to control. As the moon returns to the sky and phases back into being she slowly returns to a more fluid and gentle state; she comes out of hiding (if she hid herself away in time) exhausted and drained but more or less "herself" again.
PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2011 7:34 pm


I Am Entering For Water!
Username: anemosagkelos
Favorite Zelda Moment? OhgoshwhymustIchoose? If I must, I have to go with ummmm the start of A Link to the Past because it was the first Zelda game I ever played as a little tiny tater tot (okay so my dad might have done more playing than I did but I was there all curled up when he played and button mashing like woah when I got to play!) and I was hooked.
Prompt: Both
Entry:
Option One
Serenade of Water is an ever changing puzzle, there are multiple facets of personalities woven against the facade of harmless calm one sees her project from a distance. She--much like the stillness of a pond--seems to take on the most pronounced part of a personality of anything she meets. She mirrors what she sees from all she meets, half because she doesn't know any better--to those around she doesn't seem to know herself--and because if one were able to get to the core of it, Serenade of Water doesn't enjoy the idea of anyone knowing her. Her heart and soul are hers to know--much like only the ocean itself seems to know what it holds, whether it be unknown creatures or a topography hiding millions of years of history's secrets.

After emerging from her sac, Serenade found herself enveloped into a herd of kimeti. She was raised by many and as all their ideas of what or who she should be seemed to change she began to mirror themselves back at them unable to know what else to do. She changed depending on who she was set against--a chameleon as was needed. She, like any living creature, is concerned most about her own survival.


Option Two
The water appeared calm, reflected herself back into her eyes of murky darkness, and she wished to know what it hid--wished to know what hid inside her. She stared and stared begging it to show the answers to the puzzles she wished to solve. All alone she knew not what to do, she was blank and lost and this water was the only thing that saw her, knew her.

She took a step, hoof sinking down into the chilled pool, but gained no insight. She took another, front legs sunk as the water curled about her knees and hooves slipped a little against the silt laden rock bed. She stood and turned in small circles, watching her reflection do the same, until there was only one path left to take. The answer she sought must be underneath. All the way underneath.

She pulled a breath into her mouth and held it between her teeth like the scaly flesh of fish. All the way underneath then. She stared into the blank eyes the water watched her with as she traveled into the depths unknown. It was cold and her muscles protested, her throat pleaded for her to breathe. And yet she plunged onward, head sinking beneath the surface rippling from her submergence.

The water had lied itself for it showed nothing to her outright. Sunlight once bright became filtered into the dulled rays of fireflies. Nothing reflected back at her as she sought answers. And as she began to believe there was nothing about herself hidden without the pool, her hoof slipped against slick algae coated rocks.

She tumbled forward mouth opening to gasp in surprise and allowing water to invade her throat. She found herself falling, a stone's weight pulled down to the bottom. The thought to kick, to rise up, was swallowed as the water rushed into her ears. It sang to her, the lying water, as she drowned. And it calmed and comforted her, the further she sank to the ever lengthening depths.

And she knew then, the answers. To all the questions she had asked the reflection.

She was nothing. Nothing but the serenade of water.

anemosagkelos


The_Great_Book_Wyrm

Gallant Gawker

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2011 8:05 am


I Am Entering For Water!
Username: The_Great_Book_Wyrm
Favorite Zelda Moment? I have never played the games, sorry!
Prompt: Option 2
Entry:

First
it's
a
drop
and
a
drip
and
then
suddenly
it
comes
crashing
down
and
drowning
your

heart
with
a
beat
of
its
own
and
then
nothing
else
matters
but
the
r u s h
of
the
w
ater
and
you're
singing
along
with
the
never
ending
flood
PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2011 2:39 pm


I Am Entering For Shadow!
Username: demon_pachabel
Favorite Zelda Moment? This is really hard to narrow down man. I will say that in Wind Waker the 'battleship' game gets me bad every time. I lol.
Prompt: Option 2
Entry:

They sank. Slowly, the stones in the marsh were devoured by the murk that made up the swamp. She moved, carefully, from place to place. Each step was taken extra carefully; if she'd stepped wrong, the same dark shadow that was slowly taking over the wetlands would have devoured her as well.

That was when she heard the cry; some poor creature had been caught in the darkness and was swallowed, screaming as it sank as the stones had, surrounded by graves which echoed, only barely, its final tune.

A nocturne.

demon_pachabel

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PostPosted: Thu May 26, 2011 12:22 pm


Hahaha, I got the options backwards. Just pretend one = two and vice versa. Sorry.
PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 4:56 pm


I Am Entering For Shadow!
Username: Roadkill
Favorite Zelda Moment? Everything with Linebeck in it. I love that man. Or can I just say BEN.wmv
Prompt: Option 2

Entry:

It began with falling.

She wailed as she tumbled down this long, dark hole-- this pit. A sudden thud signified the end of her tumultuous journey. Shaken, the doe rose up hesitantly and with a certain care so as not to hurt herself any further. The darkness around her was overwhelming; she squinted, trying her best to make something out. A gigantic rock. That's what she was standing on! Her hooves clopped against the large stone as she took a step forward. And water, yes. She could barely see it, but she could hear it as it lightly splashed against her platform. Past that there was only a feeling of dread.

Then, from that absolute dread emerged a gargantuan hoof. The doe only stared as it smacked against the ground harshly. Her eyes stayed wide when another hoof appeared, clattering as well. They completely dwarfed her, and this terrified her. Another booming clap of a hoof echoed out, and another, and another. These sounds were forming a rhythm-- a song! Only this song was not celebrating life, it was a warning. A nocturne to only fuel on the horror in the kimeti's heart.

Eyes darting everywhere and head swimming, it was then when the full beast revealed itself. Half the body of an enormous kimeti came from the shadows. It appeared deathly like a phantom. Hues of purple and green covered its taut and sickly form. It was not its body that made her tremble, but its head (if it could be called that). From its neck bloomed a gruesome red flower with skin flayed out to form its petals. The doe gasped sharply and was all most frozen with fear. Clop. She took one slow step backward.

The beat would not falter, and now she was forced to dance to it. One of the hooves slammed down where she stood. Just managing to slip away, the kimeti began to weave and maneuver through them. The hooves pounded as her heart did, and she was growing weary. A slave to this rhythm-- the doe's body twisted and sprang at the will of this monster. She panted and heaved, ready to collapse. Her body would give out before her will.

A sickening squelch, crunch, and splatter and it was over. The beast stopped its nocturne (for there was no one to play for) and returned to the shadows from whence it came.

Roadkill


Hedjrebl

Anxious Nerd

PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 11:49 pm


I Am Entering For Water!
Username: Hedjrebl
Favorite Zelda Moment? the moment when I first saw my waifu UM... um... that's a really hard choice, lmao. I'll say my favorite is the sequence of events during and after the first fight with Skull Kid in Majora's Mask-- getting the Ocarina of Time back, then meeting the Happy Mask Salesman and Link's curse being reversed... there are so many moments from that game that really stuck with me, and that whole sequence was really well done, IMO.
Prompt: Option 2
Entry:

The sound had called to the doe from far away.

At first, there was only a soft hush, like a breeze ruffling through the branches of a willow tree, but it continued on and on, without pause, long after the breeze had died. She had walked for many miles, following the river's path for what felt like an eternity before she heard the second sound. It dipped in and out of the steady roar, mingling with it seamlessly, and there were times when she could not be sure that they were not one and the same; it was a voice, a lilting, wordless singsong, a serenade that pulled her forward even when her head hung low and her legs trembled with fatigue.

The cacophony of the waterfall filled her ears as she approached it. It thrummed through her entire body, sweeping through all of her senses completely, leaving room for nothing else. She gazed out over the water in awe as it crashed over the rocks, and crept as near to the edge as she dared, her dark eyes wide in her pale face. Below was a wide pool that tapered into a continuation of the river's flow. It reflected the deep, clear blue of the sky above, and was half-ringed by boulders, mossy and slick with the waterfall's spray. It was a sight more beautiful than any she had seen before.

So enamored was the doe, in fact, that she did not notice that the voice had long stopped singing.

When she felt something brush past her hooves, she jerked away in surprise, but by then it was far too late. Something snaked around her ankle, and with a swift tug, she was pulled off-balance; the roaring in her ears became muffled as the water took her. In her weary state, she couldn't fight the current that dragged her under-- and then over the falls.

The last thing she had seen before hitting the water- which was too swift-moving and choppy to hold a reflection- was a pale face, with a pale smile, and dark, dark eyes.
PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2011 6:55 pm


I Am Entering For Water!
Username: Xerianthe
Favorite Zelda Moment? I never really got that far into the games. I guess I kind of liked the piggies at the beginning of Wind Waker though.
Prompt: Both
Entry:

One
Enveloped in a nearby herd quickly after hatching, Serenade grew up surrounded by various personalities, and quickly found she was not a sociable Kimeti. She used to shadow one particular Kimeti though: the group’s ‘bard’, an elderly doe who entertained the young ones with her life stories and gathered fables.

Haughty and aloof, Serenade of Water is a solitary traveler. She has an insatiable curiosity which can sometimes conflict with her superior demeanor. In the end she will always find a way to get the knowledge that satisfies that curiosity. She is icy, untouchable – one can barely believe that anyone can like her. The only time she is even tolerable is when she’s fishing for information, all polite smiles and sweet encouragements. And the moment she gets what she wants – bam! she’s back to her snarky and sharp words. She’ll insult intelligence, looks, parentage – you name it, she can dish it. Her temper is a fierce flood of anger. This doe is definitely two faced.

One thing can be said about Serenade, though – she has a fierce passion for traveling. Careful not to do such when others can see, Serenade becomes almost a filly on the move. She’ll skip and hop, sing and chase after butterflies. The wandering spirit runs through her veins; she’s truly joyful journeying. Yet the moment she can sense another Kimeti she falls back to her chilly persona. It’s only alone, with merely the Swamp surrounding her that Serenade feels truly at peace with herself.

Another thing this doe has a fierce passion for is stories. She collects them like a magpie hoards shiny things. As a filly she avidly listened in story circles, hanging on every word. Her mind holds hundreds of tales, all different versions. She will still take advantage of any opportunity – any opportunity – to listen to a fable. The way to this doe’s heart is through stories, tell her one and while she won’t automatically adore you, her stinging tongue will take a rest. If one could put up with her for a great amount of time, a stubborn personality and numerous stories could just melt this doe’s heart. She has a great respect for those who take on a storyteller role within a group.

Her most secret goal, one that she will never utter aloud, is that she wants to travel to the ocean. She has a deep ache to see the shining waters, and those tales of the ocean are the one she gathers with the most consuming fervor.


Two
There is silence. It’s suffocating – she sees birds with their beaks moving, yet try as she might she hears no sweet song. Her footsteps do not whisper through the dry grass. She stumbles, confused. Without the sound she’s not even sure she’s walking and that’s not right – she can see the movement, that should be enough. But it’s not and the little doe keeps floundering for her balance, until she’s almost certain that the grass itself is trying to tangle around her legs. Black eyes seek out the green; the blades just gleam dully in the sun, innocent as can be.

She’s not sure why she keeps walking. Surely it would be better to just lay here, in this muffled place and wait for it to end than to keep confusing herself searching for the sound? There’s this feeling though – if she keeps walking she’ll find the sound and everything will be right again.

With a silent oomph! she tumbles headfirst into a rut. Black eyes blink as she truly looks around. It’s not really a rut. This little place is a depression, as bare and rocky as she feels. Perfectly etched into the land, a scar. Her eyes fall to a close. If she goes to sleep maybe she’ll wake up in a place where everything is true. Or maybe she just won’t wake up at all.

After a moment, the Kimeti’s brow furrows, her mind not certain how to process this feeling. There’s a deep thrumming, faint but there. She keeps her eyes closed – it’s easier to focus on this entity without the mocking sight of the world around her. She lets out a little sigh at the feeling. And then her mind jumpstarts, though her body remains still. Sound. She had made sound! The thrumming is louder now, and she realizes its beauty – the flow and rhythm of melody and wordless magnificence of this song. Song isn’t even the right word to describe it yet it is truly the only one that comes to mind. It fills her up, and she realizes it fills the world too; she hears the birds now, and the wind, too. Her breath is audible. The world seems so right now.

It’s joy, it’s bliss, it’s euphoria. It’s comforting and soothing and energizing and exhilarating all at the same time and the contradictions both confuse and fill her with the profound sense of rightness. She’s not supposed to be able to define it, confine it.

And as the melody reaches its crescendo, she realizes the undertone, a rumbling sound. The awareness comes to her even before obsidian eyes peek open. The river is rushing and roaring, claiming once more its place in the world. She really can’t bring herself to move though, because that first song is still there, that breath-taking serenade.

When the frothy angered water envelops her, it brings with it sound and peace. The river quiets, its place reclaimed and it pays no heed to the floating white and blue body that slowly comes to rest on its bed.

The surface stills, the water’s serenade hushes, falling to a muted hum. Yet the world is filled with music.

Xerianthe

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SilverShieldwolf

Alien Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2011 11:00 pm


I Am Entering For Shadow!
Username: SilverShieldwolf
Favorite Zelda Moment? I have played the games and I can not pick one favorite part, it has been too long
Prompt: #1
Entry: As a filly, she always heard the song and would ask the others if they heard the melody playing. Getting weird looks from some of them, she finally stopped asking about it, but smiles when it lulls her to sleep. One night, she thought she heard one of the elders tell a story about the song the Motherfather sent down to Matope. Afraid to ask for it to be repeated, Shadow kept the tale locked away for her to remember it and dream that she was a special doe.
Nocturne of Shadow is a considerate doe. Going out of her way to help the other kimeti when they ask. When she isn't busy helping another, you can see her swaying a little in in the sun, as she listens to the song. She realized that was her purpose for hear the song, to be happy and help out any and all.
PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2011 9:16 am


I Am Entering For Shadow!
Username: Xerianthe
Favorite Zelda Moment? Wind Waker piggies~
Prompt: Both
Entry:
One
A darkly humored Kimeti, Nocturne of Shadows can be a bit depressing. She herself is not depressed, but she is fascinated with what can go wrong and the negative side of things. Many of her scenarios are so ridiculous as to be funny, such as a band of fireflies forming a hand and picking an unlucky Kimeti up to toss them in the air. It takes a hardy Kimeti to put up with Nocturne, and one who learns to not take her seriously – and that her pessimism is not an insult. She can be called cheerfully negative, since she always has a smile and a happy tone. Her tendency to exaggerate, even when not fabricating some ridiculous story, is enormous.

Nocturne is a very social Kimeti, always enjoying the feeling of being around others. Unfortunately, she tends to drive Kimeti off with her dismal stories and is always searching for others who can at least tolerate her sense of humor. She currently travels alone. Despite this constant rejection, she is flirty, a very physically affectionate doe. Her creativity can be put to good use when charming another Kimeti – though she does have to work a bit to put her outrageous tales out of her head, and sometimes she’ll spout an offbeat story out of habit. She always seeks out companionship, and is trying to find a group of Kimeti who complement her personality. Nocturne is a secret romantic.

Nocturne loves to sing, sometimes haunting melodies and sometimes happy ditties. When she’s not story-telling, she’s singing or humming whatever comes to mind. She loves to dance too, leaping and twirling gracefully from hoof to hoof, be it to her own music or the sounds of the swamp. Her usual walk is more of a prance, a stride of skipping steps, always graceful.

Her childhood nickname was ‘firefly’, because of her golden eyes – and her fascination with them. Nocturne can wax poetic for hours about their beauty, the reflection of their little lights off of water. She’s always preferred the night, becoming mostly nocturnal, and fireflies are definitely a part of that. The new moon night is a tradition for Nocturne, a time of introspection and solemnity. It is her alone time, the one time she actually seeks out solitude, because she finds comfort in the darkest night – she likes to talk to the Swamp, tell the Mother about her thoughts.

Two
It’s so bright. Her golden eyes blink into the sunlight filtering through the trees and glinting off of murky water. And even as she watches the life-giving sun, shadowy fingers creep across the sky. The melody begins, the lilts and lulls somehow matching the writhing shadows. Tha-dum, tha-dum. She can feel the deep drumming in her very bones, relaxing her even as the world turns dark.

She wakes to a song, haunting and eerie. The swamp has lost all color, the trees their leaves. The only sound is the peculiar tune. Her eyes take in this strange new swamp. Where has all the color gone? The vibrant hues, the subtle shades? She struggles to her feet, legs wobbly and weak. One step –thum. Another - tha-dam. The doe begins walking and the drum beats match her steps. ThadumbadumthumthadumthadumbumbadumbadumTHUMP. She lets out a helpless giggle, unable to contain a little thrill of exhilaration as the thumps complement her movement. An experimental step forward- bum. A more forceful one – baDUM. An excited squeal escapes her throat as she bounces around, dancing to the melody her body is making, thrilling in the excitement and vitality of it. The shades which had earlier enveloped her once more began to match the harmony.

Who needs color when you have this beautiful sound?

So excited is the little doe she fails to hear it – a jarring tune, screechy and angry, slinking underneath her cheerful melody. The shadows dancing around the grayscale trees begin to take on jagged shapes, their movements becoming threatening. But the little Kimeti was lost in her exhilaration, twirling gracefully until one of the malicious tentacles latches onto her leg. Her golden eyes grow wide and a soundless screech works its way out of her throat. Once one finds ground, the others twist around her body in a gruesome parody of the doe’s dance. There’s no more music now, only the cacophonous melody of dying creatures and angry spirits screaming a sad imitation of the earlier beauty.

The sinister appendages make their way up her body, forcing themselves down her open mouth, gagging the doe. The beautiful tune starts again; the one that she had made, full of life and eagerness. Her eyes drift closed and she focuses on the song, her glorious song, desperately ignoring the creeping shadows as they slide across her fur. It’s a lovely little nocturne, isn’t it? Just a lovely little nocturne – a charming little nocturne of shadows.

Xerianthe

Mewling Fatcat


phoenix kiss
Crew

Magical Girl

PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2011 5:06 pm


I Am Entering For Water!
Username: phoenix kiss
Favorite Zelda Moment? Finding out the hard way what happens when you kick a cucco. Also memories of playing through Ocarina of Time with my roommate and making HIM play through the motherflipping Water Temple because I'd gotten frustrated with it.
Prompt: Both
Entry:

Prompt 1:
She would have been born a fish if she'd had a say in things. Though born during one of the driest summers known to Matope, her underwater dream was full of cool water, moist sand and brilliantly-colored fish. On long, still days, when the humidity turns the air thick and close, she swears she can still feel the water sliding over her slick skin; she can still remember what it feels to burrow into cool, damp sand and just rest, content to think deep and murky thoughts.

She's too active to let her love of water manifest as a longing if she can't find any; she simply roams around the swamp finding puddles and pools and eating the fish or shellfish she finds within them. On especially dry days and in the dry season, she carries around a small, smooth river-rock in her mouth, rolling it around on her tongue to taste the waters it came from. Her favorite places in the swamp are those with an abundance of water, whether clear (her favorite) or choked with duckweed. On hot days she's up to her nose in it, and during rainstorms she's seeking the places with few trees to feel the downpour beat on her back. Sometimes it pelts her hard enough to leave bruises, but she has never once complained about them.

She's a bit whimsical; always positive, though sometimes her trains of thought are a little hard to follow -- not the destructive force of water, riptides and undercurrents, but instead she is the subtle, slow dreaming of a still tidepool or a shallow pond. She tries to remember her dreams as best she can, but usually forgets within minutes. Other kimeti find her to be refreshing -- her emotions never seem to rise to any extreme. Instead, she is placid and peaceful, never tied down to any one place or any subject; she will speak to anyone about anything, and does so with a thoughtful air (regardless of what they might think!). If she weren't so much of a free spirit sometimes this would backfire, but it's almost impossible to get mad or argue with someone so calm.

Prompt 2:
The sand is gritty underneath her, but in a flash she has crossed it, leaving curling clouds of silt in her wake. Before her the way is still clear; shafts of sunlight pierce down through blue-green water as she enters a maze of reeds, feeling their leaves brush past her flanks (her tail?). This is her private place; the world is held apart here, one step removed. She turns on her back to watch the reeds sway and dance over her head, and listens.

Even in the silence under water there is music, if one knows how to listen.
PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2011 9:01 pm


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Bloody Anubis


Bloody Anubis

PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2011 9:49 pm


First of all, I want to thank everyone for entering. I enjoyed going through the entries and I'm sorry that I only have two kimeti to give away. I saw some really artful entries, and the nostalgia from the people who answered the Zelda questions was great.


But let's not even joke. You're not here for me to gush. You're already scrolling past this bit to read the winners.



Serenade of Water
Goes home with Phoenix Kiss

Both entries were short and sweet, but certainly not lacking in style. Overall, I was looking for a doe that would fit her name, or one that I could at least see true to the song inspiration given. The word 'serenade', to me, means a song that is amorous and silly with youth. I liked how your personality description detailed her lifestyle, simple as it is, in a way that feels natural. She isn't overtly obsessed with being around water, but she's got distinctions for each type and it is her solace. Her gentle and free spirit is as refreshing as water in the desert. She is a serenade of water.

It is important to note that her naming dream matches her personality very well. Simple, but finding detail in the little things.



Nocturne of Shadow
Goes home with Xerianthe

Not going to lie, I was looking for a horror story for this doe's dream. No one disappointed me in that. I thought your entry, however, was a good mix of markings, name, and game-boss inspiration. You made it your own tale without relying too heavily on any of the inspirations; a successful display of creativity.

I like how... cracked her personality seems to be as well. I was worried at first about the paradox of being cheerfully melancholy, but I think it just all chalks up to be an askew view on her world, which I think is welcome. You gave her a bit of history and traditions, both of which help to round a character, and I think it worked out for you.




So, congrats to the winners! And thank you to all the participants that made this contest a success!


To the winners, don't worry about posting certing information. Just collect your uncerteds and wait for the mule to drop off your certs! Feel free to rp in the meantime, if you want!
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