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stella cinere

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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 12:23 pm


User ImageAMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLMENT FORM

Name: Joachim von Helmar
Nicknames: Joachim, Joac, Von, Mouse boy, Pied Piper, Hamelin
Gender: Male
Age: 16

Faction/Race Reapers - Pied Piper Grim Reaper

Personality: Joachim in first meeting is a rather melancholic, grumpy, pessimistic reaper who has appeared to be rather content on insisting that something will always go wrong no matter what the situation or occasion is. He is quite content in seeing the unfortunate side of most things and has little interest in changing his opinion beyond even if things don't turn for the worse. Joachim doesn't sleep very well taking after his mother's mara genealogy leaving him with a rather grumpy, bag under the eyes appearance that seems to follow him no matter if he is able to sleep or not. He is easily agitated over little things such as people calling his mice rats, thread coming loose on his coat, people being far too loud for their own good.

Joachim however isn't exactly what someone would call evil, or cruel he doesn't have an issue if it comes to helping someone out as long as they don't annoy him. He is rather reluctant to do things for free yet he is willing to help out friends he finds in need. He isn't the world's greatest advice giver so if friends need any it would probably be better to skip over Joachim's opinion because it will usually result in something negative. He isn't a go getter so anyone interested in him being a friend or so forth would probably have to push him along, Joachim is just as content keeping his mouth shut and sitting in the corner with his mice than introducing himself to everyone. This shouldn't be mistaken as shy he just doesn't feel the effort of doing the whole greeting thing. He can be rather blunt in nature when it comes to asking him questions and forgets that others have feelings until they point it out to him.

Other than being easily agitated over specific things he doesn't seem to show a whole lot of emotion, you could tell him he was a jerk and he would shrug his shoulders and tell you that was the way the tombstone crumbled. He doesn't seem to smile much or cry but those things are probably tucked away in need of dusting off.

Joachim's hobby consist of playing wind instruments specifically flute. Next to his mice it's probably the only thing he cares about and can be seen practicing it whenever he can. He strives to be one of the best flutist in Halloween Town if not the entire world of things. Despite his appearance and lack of emotion there seems to be a lot of emotion and passion in his playing in which he can move his audience depending on the expression, such as tears if it is a sad tune or joy if it is a cheerful tune.

He also bears a light European accent when he talks from his family influence.

History: Joachim is the grandson of the infamous Pied Piper of Hameln or at least this was what was told to him whether he believes his kook of a grandfather is up to him. He takes after his father's musical talents in being able to play various wind instruments the flute being his most favorite. His mother is of lineage of mara and valkyrite reapers however other than her rather insane nature of continuously staying up well beyond well needed sleep and being able to sing like a choir boy he has none of his mother's useful traits. He has one younger sister who has a rather fond nature of finding Joachim's mice and having little tea parties or creating little cute mice outfits for them to wear. This usually results in Joachim throwing a bit of an argument saying that his mice are not meant to play dress up but that never seems to stop her from doing it.

Likes: Mice, coats, music, music, and more music.

Dislikes:
People calling his mice rats, over optimistic people who insist on making everyone happy, his sister, and cats.

Quotes:
"One time at band camp..... I reaped everyone's soul THE END." (Hates when people bring this up when they see his flute)
"They are not rats! Rats are dirty little abominations that carry diseases, mice are much cleaner and pleasing."
"How could it get much worse than this... oh wait it has."

Why did they enroll at the academy? Joachim's father insisted that much like him and his mother that Joachim should attend school and despite his insisting that it was the worst idea in the entire universe he was sent anyways.

Fear: Joachim's fear is being able to control his enemy via use of various specific melodies played on his flute. As well he can summon mice to aid him.

Current Fear First Year:
Come My Friends: He can summon his mice friends (just mice not other creatures currently). In a half mile radius (this will expand when he gets older). They will defend and attack for him when needed however these are normal mice they aren't super human.

Maybe Fear for Later Years:
Simon Says: He can get an enemy to fall under his control via playing a certain tune however he can only control them as long as he is playing the tune (which means that he is limited to pretty much making them follow him he can't move his hands or do anything that would cause the tune to stop). If the tune stops or he messes it up the affected foe will gain control of his or her own body again.

All Cheers: He can play a tune that will inspire his mice, gives them a little boost if they are fatigue.
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 12:48 pm


FFFFFFFFF.

1. I love his personality. He seems rather neutral apathetic which is an interesting combination.
2. I. LOVE. HIS FEAR.

I really have no constructive crit I could give to you. He's well thought out and nothing really seems to contradict!

I know you have in his 'dislikes' that he doesn't like cats. I can imagine it's only natural as they are the inherent enemies to his little micey friends. But to what extremes?

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stella cinere

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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 2:08 pm


@Zombie: Thank you!!! I can't wait to see your banshee girl!

Hahaha you ever see an old woman chase a cat with a broom <----- totally something Jocahim would do XD he really doesn't like them at all but he wouldn't go out of his way to hurt a cat just avoid or yell at them to get away.
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 9:34 pm


He is such a trap! xDD Glad you made him a male, although my Lizzy muse is going "WHY ANOTHER GRUMPY MALE REAPER? D8"

Let's see... I like his personality. I can imagine a raincloud following him around, and the fact that he's forever pessimistic is something rather new. 8D I'm looking forward to seeing him in RP for sure!

I'm assuming that his Reaper weapon is his flute, right? Anyway, moving onto the FEAR! I would say, starting as a Year 1, it would be best to start out with just one single FEAR to work with since it'll be easier to ICly improve that way. Besides, I'm pretty sure that Year 1 students are rather weak in the FEAR-control department, so having three different abilities at the get go is a bit too much!

I think 'Come my friends' is the best FEAR to start out with, judging from his personality and his art. Since a person's FEAR to connected to their experiences, perhaps as he attends classes and whatnot, his music will reach a further distance/other animals or even give his mice a boost of sorts.

But yeah, do pick a single FEAR to work with and potentially expand! That's the only real crit I have; the rest of the form looks pretty good!

Dragain

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stella cinere

Ice-Cold Codger

PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 9:58 pm


Thank you Dragain!

I put Come My Friends as his first year fear the other two are ideas for later fear years <3

Haha, I love his pessimistic nature as soon as I saw him I knew he had to be that way, awww poor Lizzy though at least this one has mice XD
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 10:10 pm


Mac has a bird and Shun has a mouse. Both less grumpy than their owner. 8D I SENSE A TREND HERE. Or rather, Lizzy does.

Anyway, this quest has my GM thumbs up for when an admin look it over~ I'm looking forward to seeing you in RP! <33


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Dragain

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PostPosted: Sat May 21, 2011 7:26 pm


how does he feel about girls?
will he let anyone close to him?
and you say that he can be grumpy, how would he react if someone really ticked him off? how would he act?

i love him, though heart heart
PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2011 8:15 am


Thank you Dragain <3 And thats right XD Joachim needs to meet Shun and his mouse!

@childs menu: He likes girls as long as they don't overall annoy him like screeching about something in his ears, dress his mice into little dresses, or invite his mice to tea parties. He doesn't really hate his sister either he thinks she is adorable just annoying when she wants to do something silly with his mice. He does have a small general idea of how to treat girls or at least he thinks he does however he assumes that they all aren't like his sister.

He would let anyone be close to him as long as they could deal with his grumpiness. He would be slightly amazed that they are willing to put up and deal with his attitude all of the time and though he wouldn't say it as often as he should he would feel bad if he snapped at them when he got annoyed feeling that it was partially his own fault for not having patients to deal with them. He would be very much thankful if they were willing to help or even consider him as a friend though this may take him a while to realize (again not that he would say this much out loud).

If someone really ticked him off one of two things would happen, he would either get extremely red in the face and scream, insult, and try to swing at them or go extremely silent. The first would be something that would just merely make him snap like someone making fun of him or shoving him something offhand that he just can't take anymore. Going silent is the scary part if someone continues to annoy, piss him off or so on he would not just scream but get even and or seek some sort of diabolical scheme in his head to dispose of the member at fault. Luckily for him his has rather crafty little mice who are more than willing to help him do what he wants (the black one is the most notorious of them all). However a good part of the time he tends not to care out his plans he usually cools down at some point after steaming hours away about it and decides whatever it is is just not worth his time.

and thank you!

stella cinere

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 10:53 pm


The office this brilliant Webday morning was punctuated by a strange sort of ruffling sound.

The office Shredder looked left and right. To their left, a gnome, muttering something about skitters as they mopped up the floor. To the right, a... large blue thing draped over the desk. This large blue thing had been occupying their property for quite a while now, and the Shredder had tried all sorts of methods to pester, cajole, and otherwise harass the Blue Thing until it left, but no such luck.

However, today there would be none of this. The Shredder was out on a mission.

It was on a diet.

Hellma would wonder a few days later why the Acceptance Bin seemed extra-ordinarily overweight.
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