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[Q] Lyria Marwick :: Hunter [Crits please?]

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nessy

Cuddly Hunter

PostPosted: Tue May 17, 2011 11:32 pm


DEUS EX MACHINA PERSONNEL FORM

Note: This hunter was not played in the event. I apologize if this is not open for questing but I didn't see otherwise in the form.


The Hunter
Name: Lyria Marwick
Nicknames: Ria, Lyrs (pronounced Leer-z)
Gender: Female
Age: 16

Category: Death


The Weapon
Name: Firman
Nicknames: Firry
Type of Weapon: War Hammer
Former species of weapon: A storm giant.
Gender: Very male.


Personalities:
Hunter: Lyria is an ask now, ask later, and then ask as a third time just to be sure kind of girl. There's nothing in this world she hates more than being wrong so if she has to ask you a million times to make sure she's doing it right the first time she will. Whether this is from low self-esteem or just a desire to look brilliant can only be known when you talk to her and realize that all she wants is to be helpful.

It does result in her sometimes hopping into things to be helpful without entirely thinking them through in a pinch though. When not asking for exact directions things tend to go interestingly for everyone involved and certainly for Lyria. Failure to be helpful or useful in some way tends to make her a bit morose and withdrawn into herself. Not really a shy young lady, nonetheless she does have a shell and would retreat into it after failing in such an epic manner.

It's really quite pathetic considering how often it happens. After all, you can't always be useful!

Why does she desire to be helpful? Well because it makes people like her and it feels good. You do good things for good people and they think you are a good person. It would baffle Lyria to have someone ask her this question and she'd just look at them and go "Why not?".

Weapon: Firman is, if nothing else, approving of his Hunter's helpful nature. However he does disapprove of those times when she hops ahead of herself without thinking things through 100 percent and when he puts his weight down she can't even drag Firman behind her! This means that Lyria has to have her weapon on her side for any given thing and she spends a lot of time being solicitous towards him.

Why did your human character choose to become a Hunter? There is no other way to be helpful than to be a Hunter. She found the idea of learning and helping the organization irresistible and threw herself at it...without entirely thinking it through. That's not to say that she regrets the decision at all! Oh no, she just sometimes has 'what-if' moments and uses the results of her headstrong impulsiveness as a reminder to check, check again, and then check a third time...just to be sure.

Weapon Ability Normally this is just a heavy hammer that hits rather hard, nothing exceptional save an affection for static discharge. What do I mean by discharge? Well it's like being shocked by rubbing your feet on the carpet, only it happens a bit more often. Especially when Firman is grumpy. This is almost entirely cosmetic because the shock doesn't carry enough charge to do anything more than make you blink for a second.

When charged the swing of her hammer carries twice the weight a normal hammer would have. This results in a rather heavy swing that, depending on who is on the other end, can be quite painful. It may even send them flying with the weight of a giant's fist.
PostPosted: Tue May 17, 2011 11:53 pm


Anything anyone might say would be helpful please and thank you.

c:

nessy

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PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2011 9:27 am


Looking good so far Nessy biggrin

Couple of things that piqued my interest though. Is there any particular reason she has this undying need to be helpful? Did something happen to her that she feels the need to be like this or has she simply been like that for as long as she can recall.

What happens if she does get something wrong? Unabashed self-loathing or rage facing all over the place? Like I said, I'm just being kind of nosy here smile

I really like the sound of how Lyria and Firman work together. I enjoy the mental image of her running down the road after something (info or otherwise) and suddenly being stopped by the hammer 'glued' to the ground.


About the weapon ability, is the static charge basically just something for looks? Like, every now and again it just lights up with the discharge?
PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2011 9:46 am


Thanks Yin! I tried to elaborate on all of that without being too heavily extensive.

I'm glad you like the part about him putting his foot down. Lyria needs someone to look after her so she doesn't spend all of her time moping at Firman. He'd rather deal with her temper than her emo.

nessy

Cuddly Hunter

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