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PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 9:32 pm


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Name: Shoechii Fudo

Age: [Actual: 800] [Looks: 20]

Birthday: 6/28

Height: 6'0"

Weight: 170lbs

Body Type: slim/slender athletic muscular

Hair Color: purple

Eye Color: blood crimson

Gender: male

Sexuality: bisexual

Personality:
Shoechii is very respectful man that put the lives of others before his that was important to him, he was lay back but when it came to work he worked very diligently to the fullest of his strength. He would would say the blunt truth no matter how it effect a person as well as he is a fearless guy that would look death in the eyes without showing a sign of weakness, as well as he did have a flirt side to him as well.

Race: Shinigami

Species: Human


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Division
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Division: 8

Seat: Captain

Squad Ability:
Sixth Sense: This ability let the user be one with the foe(s) and by the way how the foe(s) movements the user can predict the foe(s) attack(s) when blocking the user absorbs 25% of the foe(s) physical attack strength and in the following up counter attack(s) the user attacks with their strength plus the strength the user absorb from the foe(s). The higher rank the user is the user absorbs an extra 5% so when the user is a Captain Rank they absorb 40%.
Soldier: For three of their turns it is in use then they lose focus.
Officer: For five of their turns it is in use then they lose focus.
Lieutenant: For seven turns it is in use then they lose focus.
Captain: Can do it as long as he/she keep focus.


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Spells
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[Hado]
1. Shō (衝, Thrust) = low
4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) = low
11. Tsuzuri Raiden (製本電, Bound Lightning) = low
35. Breaking Palm = medium
45. Chain Reaction = medium
90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin) = maximum
93. Hyōga Seiran (氷河晴嵐, Glacier Vapor Storm) = maximum

[Bakudo]
4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) = low
8. Seki (斥, Repulse) = low
35. Fushibi (伏火, Ambush Flare) = medium
60. Hitoshirenu Nankan = medium
80. Naisei = maximum
98. Hitoshirenu Rokkaku Nankan = maximum

[Jokou]
3. Blue Mist = low
10.Doragon no Hifu = low
22. Bikan (Beautiful Sight) = low
60. Doragon no Kawa = medium
75. Collapse = maximum
80. Area of Silence = maximum
81. Doragon no Uroko = maximum

[Chiyudo]


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Shinigami Abilities
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Dashing
Garganta
Senkaimon
Shunpo (Flash-Step)
Air Walk
Senka (Flash Blossom)
Utsusemi


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Zanpakuto
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Zanpakuto Size:
Blade Length: 2ft 5in
Blade Width: 1.5in
Blade Weight: 2lbs
Blade Thickness: 1/2in

Zanpakuto Guard: Dragon's Teeth Guard, basically its a guard that has four metal pieces that is about 2in long that looks like they are the vortex of a square, each piece has a 1/2in metal dragon's tooth on each of the ends that the tip of each tooth aims upward like the blade.

Zanpakuto Sealed (Sword) Form:
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Zanpakuto Type: Re-equip

Zanpakuto Name: [Name: Erza Scarlet]

Zanpakuto Spirit:
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Spirit’s Biography:
Erza Scarlet is a very skillful fighter with her vase collection of blades as well as having a vase collection of armors as well, she is beautiful, cute, smart, funny, strong as well as wise, skillful fighter, courageous, and respectful. She always fight with honor and always gives it her all when fighting an opponent to give and show them respect. Through her many battles she got the title "Erza the Titan" because every encountered she had she hardly ever lost but even with a record like that she never let it get to her head, she always keep her cool and stay calm in any problem that she is in.

Inner World:
Samurai Graveyard, this samurai graveyard is the inner world where Erza inhabits at. The place is full of lots of corpses, many different blades, and many different armors. This place is a beautiful sight to see but the feeling it gives off is very cold dark feeling as well as having many crows flying around.


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Shikai
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Shinkai Form:
There is no base look, it depends on what armor and weapon that he re-equip for.

Shikai Size:
There is no base size, it depends on what armor and weapon that he re-equip for.

Shikai Release Phrase:
Cut a path to the new future, Erza!

Shikai Ability:
Once in shikai Shoechii has the ability called re-equip, this ability allow him to re-equip himself with objects, when he is in battle he use this ability to re-equip himself melee weapons and armor. There are very few weapons and armors that he re-equip that has special qualities of their own.

Shikai Attack One:
Black Demon Armor- Shoechii re-equip an armor called Black Demon and a blade called Defense Destroyer. The Black Demon Armor is a all black demonish armor that has demon horns and a demon tail, this armor doubles his physical strength. The Defense Destroyer blade is a a huge broadswoad that is also like a chainsaw, it uses a small amount of reiastu from Shoechii to rev itself like a chainsaw. Both the blade and the armor can destroy any defense (armor, shields, walls, ect.) with only two strikes no matter how strong or weak the defense is, first strike seriously damage it and the second strike completely destroys it but if a defense is already seriously damage it will only take one strike to completely destroy it.

Shikai Attack Two:
Adamantium Armor- Shoechii re-equip an armor called Anama and an shield called Dragon Slayer. The Anama Armor is a very heavy but the strongest armor, it cut his speed in half but this armor is very extremely durable it can take serious massive damage before getting even a small dent in it. Anama endures 50% of physical attacks as well as each time when opponents use physical attacks the opponent tired out faster depending on how strong the attack was. The Dragon Slayer Shield is similar to the armor's durability, half of the shield is connected to each of his arms. The shield is so big that it is able to cover Shoechii's entire body and a little more with he goes to his defense stance, any reiatsu or element base attacks that the shield blocks the shield adsorbs half of the damage and replenish his reiatsu with it (not heal his wounds) as well the shield can be use for attacks as well.

Shikai Attack Three:
Beast Armor- Shoechii re-equip an armor called Fang. The Fang armor is a very light and flexible armor, the armor double his speed and dexterity as well as everyone speed is equal to his at all times (not counting when he use the orb). This armor resemble a mixture of a black wolf and a cheetah as well as have all the aspects and features of both wolf and cheetah. This armor has wolf like paws with claws as well as has a small circular orb on the stomach of the armor that uses some of his own reiatsu that causes him to because faster and more dexterous. This armor has a trick called "Speed Trick", by using the orb to gather a lot of his reiatsu when Shoechii moves he creates afterimages to confuse his opponents.



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Bankai
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Bankai Name:
Tachiana Senshi Erza

Bankai Form:
There is no base for his look, it depends on what armor and weapon that he re-equip for.

Bankai Size:
There is no base for his size, it depends on what armor and weapon that he re-equip for.

Bankai Release Phrase:
Bankai! Tachiana Senshi Erza!

Bankai Ability:
Similar to the shikai ability, Shoechii is able to levitate his own discarded weapons from the ground without using any amount of reiatsu letting him re-arm himself without even moving.

Bankai Attack One:
Energy Conversion Armor- Shoechii re-equip an armor called Energy Converter and an spear called Adopter. The Energy Converter armor and the Adopter spear is as there name states it, he is at will able to change the energy type of the armor to any other energy type to suit the purpose of the battle. The Energy Converter armor changes from energy types to another depending on the what color of the armor is for the energy type depends on what he gains, increase, and decrease. The Adopter spear changes color similar to the armor and depending on what color the spear is depends on what it can adsorb and what can be manipulate after adsorption, there is a rev gear at the bottom of the staff that can be rev by using reiatsu as well.
Armor's color and effects

(Red) Fire: endures 50% damage from fire but more vulnerable from water damage, physical strength is tripled
(Crystal Blue)Ice: endures 50% damage from ice, dexterity is doubled
(Yellow)Electricity: endures 50% damage from electricity, speed is tripled
(Purple)Reiatsu: endures 50% damage from reiatsu, dexterity and strength are doubled
(Blue) Water: endures 50% damage from water but more vulnerable from earth damage, dexterity is tripled
(White)Light: endures 50% damage from light but more vulnerable from darkness damage, speed and dexterity are doubled
(Brown)Earth: endures 50% damage from earth but more vulnerable from wind/air damage, durability is tripled and very hard to lose his ground
(Black)Darkness: endures 50% damage from darkness but more vulnerable from light damage, strength is doubled
(Gray)All colors together: endures 50% damage from all energy types, strength and dexterity are doubled
(Green)Wind/Air: endures 50% damage from wind/air but more vulnerable from fire damage, dexterity is tripled
Spear's color and effect

(Red) Fire: Adsorbs 50% of fire attacks from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the fire
(Crystal Blue)Ice: Adsorbs 50% of ice attacks from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the ice
(Yellow)Electricity: Adsorbs 50% of electricity attacks from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the electricity
(Purple)Reiatsu: Adsorbs 50% of reiatsu attacks from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the reiatsu
(Blue) Water: Adsorbs 50% of water attacks from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the water
(White)Light: Adsorbs 50% of light attacks from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the light
(Brown)Earth: Adsorbs 50% of earth attacks from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the earth
(Black)Darkness: Adsorbs 50% of darkness attacks from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the darkness
(Gray)All colors together: Adsorbs 50% of all energy types attacks from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the energy types
(Green)Wind/Air: Adsorbs 50% of wind/air from opponent but 100% from allies, as well can use the wind/air

Bankai Attack Two:
Samurai Soul Armor: Shoechii re-equip an armor called Samurai Soul. At first glance it may seem like a average samurai hakama and a yukata hanging off his waist but this is armor is his most strongest and powerful armor for a reason the armor compress his entire reiatsu into his body and unsealing him completely causing him to become his true state as if he was in sealed form as well as his spiritual pressure and reiatsu can't be found, felt, nor sensed in anyway, shape, or form it is like he had none anymore. He barely even use this armor at all, the only time he will use it if it is really needed to be use at that is only if that is only chose left. This armor has two main abilities "Powerless Reiatsu" and "Common Plain Field", Powerless Reiastu is a ability causes all reiatsu base from both the wearer and any opponent that opposed him to become ineffective meaning all reiastu attacks, emitting reiastu, and ect are render useless, Common Plain Field is an ability that while this armor is on the wearer and everyone (foe, ally, or unknown) to almost be more like a common human meaning that all speed abilities like shunpo, sonido, air walk, and ect. are canceled and render useless except for Dashing. He also re-equips two beautiful masterwork katanas that has nothing special to it but that it is so sharp that it could almost slash through anything because it is sharper than the average katanas, it looks like someone to time and hard work to sharpen them. This armor does have one attack to it called "Samurai Graveyard," by throwing both katanas in the air he uses his re-equip powers to bring out over a thousand more of the same katanas that rains back down in random spots within a 100 foot radius while the two he threw up landed right back next to him. Everyone within the 100 foot radius can't leave the graveyard nor anyone that is on the outside can't enter in it until it is gone. This armor resembles the same look he had before his death as a human in his final stand to save a village.


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Other
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Items:
~Medical Kit: This medical kit is not a normal one, this medical kit was special made for Shoechii after the strange lady healed him fully and after teaching him the ways of natural healing. The kit is double in size.

~Special Necklace: Shoechii received this necklace from Chaos' mother after giving him Chaos' haori as well, this necklace is made exactly from pour light and darkness similar to Chaos' powers. The necklace has only one simple thing and that it also allow Shoechii to make a very thin thread made of light or darkness, depends on what time of day, that is invisible to the naked eye. The thread is unbreakable as well as the energy is so compressed that it makes it very difficult to sense or be seen even if it was right next to the opponent, only Shoechii is the only one can sense it as well he can infused kido into it.

Misc:
Traits

-Kidō Master: Shoechii's vast knowledge of Kidō is so great that he can perform them without calling out a name, while retaining its great potential power, whereas most users require a name to do so, if not a full incantation. He is also able to produce immensely powerful barriers to protect him from all but the strongest of dangers. But personally he doesn't use kido to often unless he came up with a plan or he knows that he will need it in a battle.
-Spiritual Power: Shoechii possesses an immense amount of spiritual power that can strike fear in the most fearless of people, being very wise and understanding the link between energy and a person, through his continuous of meditation and training Shoechii found a way how to not only control but also strengthen his spiritual powers quickly. To others his reiatsu capacity is undefined because no one really knows how much reiatsu he has they just believe that it is limitless. But this is not the reason why Shoechii is in consent release one of the real reason why he is in consent release is because when he is in his release a cubed of his Spiritual Powers are sealed so that it seems like he has a limit except when he is in his "Samurai Soul Armor," when he is in "Samurai Soul Armor" his Spiritual Powers are not sealed no more but all of it are compressed in his body. But the only time he can really access the sealed Spiritual Power in his release is when at anytime he uses his reiatsu the sealed reiatsu will fill in the empty space from the reiastu that is not sealed.
-Master Strategist & Tactician: Shoechii has repeatedly shown himself to be a very insightful and cunning man. He also possesses great intuition, able to quickly become aware of any incoming danger and react to it in time. Shoechii has an undeniable talent for thinking things well in advance as well, make decisive and accurate decisions quickly in battle, and able to perceive any situation at hand. He generally has shown himself to also be a crafty tactician from how easily he can deceive both allies and enemies. He has also shown to be a very perceptive and analytical man from how quickly he can analyze an opponent's power and attack patterns to ultimately make them useless against him.
-Strength: Through consent meditation to understand and know one's body Shoechii have immense physical strength, he has been seen to use this strength to help him through many of his tough obstacles. Others believe that his strength is of its own because no matter how much strength his opposer has he is able to overrun them with ease. This is another reason why he is in consent release because his strength is cubed during his release but in Samurai Soul Armor his compressed reiatsu causes his strength to return back to its peek.
-Dexterity: Before his death Shoechii was well known for his weird but quick thinking as well as being very adroit throughout. With his immense dexterity and his insightful as he is, he was very clever as to most others in his days and with that cleverness he survived through many battles no matter if won or lost. Others believe that he was a shadow of some sort because of the way how he moves so believers thought for him being so dexterous it was like it was its own. This is another reason why he is in consent release because his dexterity is cubed during his release but in Samurai Soul Armor his compressed reiatsu causes his dexterity to return back to its peek.
-Endurance: Having immense endurance, Shoechii with common knowledge knew that he would get tired out quickly because of his current stamina he had wasn't enough to in order for him to fight to the fullest of himself. By practicing and training to have better control of his stamina he is able to last while showing very little visible signs of of exhaustion, but from time to time he will breath but no one can tell if he is tiring out or he just wanted to take a breath because Shoechii has been seen taking breaths even when he is not doing anything.
-Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Shoechii is very deadly combatant because of how fast he can swing or thrust a sword and how pin-point precision and accurate he is when he makes his attacks. Few would hope to come out alive from a fight with him because even though he will never fight to kill unless that is his only option left open, given a chance he will strike a person and beat them with that one strike as other seen before. Shoechii is well-known in using multiple melee weapons with such skills and grace as well as his inventory of using melee weapons skillfully are not limited.
-Hakuda Master: Shoechii is a highly dangerous combatant even without his Zanpakutō. As with his skill in swordsmanship, he is also a powerful master in hand-to-hand combat. As like his swordsmanship, he knows varies of hand-to-hand fighting styles so he can always throw his adversaries off in battle. Like other very few Shinigamis in the Seireitei, he is one of the many Shinigamis that is diverse in many different ways.
-Shunpo Master:As well as Yoruichi, Shoechii considered to be one of the many very few Shinigamis that is the most proficient Hohō master. Shoechii is highly skilled in the use of Shunpo, a high speed movement ability, as like the very few Shinigamis he can travel further distance than others could with Shunpo.
Abilities

*Perfect Concentration- Through his whole life as the perfect samurai, Shoechii's focus is on prior with Chaos that had no equal when it came to focus. Shoechii is able to make his natural capabilities twice as strong by compressing all of his reiatsu/kido into his body or he really use it to channel it through his body as well but he only use it to channel to make a very thin surface under his feet so his feet won't get dirty because he hates wearing foot gear.
*Buraddishadōīmūnsurasshu- This is a simple sword technique that requires lots of speed to preform. Shoechii slowly does a circle with his zanpakuto then lunge at the foe and once the foe attacks, Shoechii use his speed to leave an afterimage behind then two Shoechii appear and both of them can slash twice with one swing catching his foe off guard.
Fighting Style:
All around Martial Arts Fighting

Marks:
After the battles between the battle against Chaos he have two dragon claws mark on his chest one dragon claw mark is light and the other darkness.


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Biography
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Shoechii was a samurai warrior of the feudal era, he was a well known and respected all around that era. He had a very strong will to survive that is how he won battles but there was something special about him even when the chips he would gather everyone will to survive to combine with own to give him the strength to beat anything even if the person believe or not they had a will to survive to begin with. One day Shoechii was sleeping until he heard a commotion once he got outside they was being attack by at least 200 warriors, he didn't have enough time to put his armor so he grabbed his trust katana that he named Erza while only wearing a hakama and a yukata hanging off his waist. After defeating the first wave of the onslaught Shoechii thought it was over until he saw the finally wave that consist over about 1,000 people and he had some injuries as well but he knew that he had a village to protect so he kept on fighting to the bitter end. Shoechii fought on until he killed everyone single on and in the end the village was saved but when everyone was gonna praise and thank him he died standing while holding his trustful katana Erza but his body was died long before the fight even ended, his body was died but the will to survive that he gathered from everyone kept his died body to fight on until all enemies was died.

After dying Shoechii found himself in the Rukongai District holding his trustful blade Erza that soon later that he realize that actually became his zanpakuto, once he got up he heard his blade talk to him at first he was surprised but then he quickly regain his self again. Shoechii got the gist of what happen after Erza explain everything to him and knew where was at as well thanks to his zanpakuto, he lived on the streets of the Rukongai District looking for the Seireitei. Spending his whole time on the street he finally found the Seireitei and joined the Academy to become a Soul Reaper, being the best he can do in the academy so he could past with high honors. Being very focus on his goal Shoechii was able to past with high honors in the academy then he became a Soul Reaper but he already has Erza he didn't need to get a zanpakuto, he decided to join Squad 8 and his new focus was to become Captain. After several years in Squad 8 he became Lieutenant but on one he went on there was an mishap and Shoechii went missing for many years on end that mostly everyone thought he was deceased and forgot about him, it took several years for him to recover but while recovering he still trained to keep himself in tip top shape but the only reason he survive because a strange lady help him out and teach him the ways of healing without the need of healing kidos so he was in debt to her. To repay the strange women back she wanted Shoechii to kill Chaos Leirith, to him it seemed that she had a grudge against this Chaos person but he went off to lead out his repayment after getting location Chaos would be at, he finally found him in in a field alone so he walked up to him but after at first it was weird because Chaos offered him some sake so he gladly sat down to have a drink with him. While drinking Chaos started to talk about everyone he knew in the Seireitei including Kage, Tokemaru, Dakota, Redd, and many others even though he was suppose to kill this guy he just couldn't help but to have a good time then as soon as they was done Chaos knew that Shoechii was sent to kill him and ask Shoechii to promise some things before they started and as Shoechii being a samurai he agreed to those promises but he found it weird that in Chaos' eyes that he wanted to die and was ready for it like he knew this day was gonna happen. Before the battle started Shoechii thought he had the upper hand because he could stay in consent release as long as he want after the training he did during recovery but as they fought one another to Shoechii this was the best fight he ever had it gave him a better feeling than the time when he took out a hole army single handed before he died but as the went on Shoechii saw something that he thought couldn't happen to any Shinigami, Hollow, Arrancar, nor Vizard a power that was so massive and destructive this was the first time that Shoechii felt a slight of fear in him, he thought that he was gonna die instead and after being push to his limit he unlock his Bankai 2 Technique and at that moment everything seem on a even plan field but Chaos still had a slight upper hand. As the battles got to the peek Chaos and Shoechii was at a stand off as they delivered their final blow Shoechii won the battle and killed Chaos so he thought but was left with two claw marks on his chest. Once he woke up he was in Chaos Mother's house, he was out for a week and the mother was tending to his wounds he got up to leave but before he did Chaos' mother brought him the Captain Haori for Squad 8 Chaos' haori that now became Shoechii as well as a special necklace for him, once he put it on he was gonna keep his promises he made to Chaos and headed back to the Seireitei as the new Captain of Squad 8.

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Sword Arts
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[Beginner]
50 Blades Dance
The Swordsman's Shadow
Sky Flash

[Intermediate]
100 Blades Dance
Swordsmen's Shadows 3

[Advanced]
1000 blades Dance
Swordsman's shadow X
Zentetsuken


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PostPosted: Fri May 13, 2011 7:15 pm


I can't find a godmod in it again

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 4:23 pm


After much deliberation I have decided that this profile should be re-judged so that it is fair to SRotS standards. My name is Zoro, and I shall evaluate your RPC.

First off, everything seems to be fine until it reaches your Shikai Attack One; It says that it can break any defense with a simple two attacks. But that doesn't make sense for stronger defenses. I'm going to need you edit this, two attacks can take down defenses up to a certain level of Kido #. Stronger kido's or even Captain-level armor should take more hits.

Shikai Attack Two, A defensive armor and weapon is good, but being able to replenish your reiatsu with it seems a bit much. I can accept that it can endure the majority of physical attacks and most of elemental and reiatsu attacks, but being able to absorb to replenish your strength, it says it doesn't heal wounds but replenishing your reiatsu is the first step in healing. So I'm going to need you to edit that.

Shikai Attack three; Perfectly fine with the ability aspect, however it says that his speed, agility, and flexibility are doubled and then tripled on top of that. In this guild three is high as you go... So edit that.

Bankai... Here's the fun part.

Bankai ability 1... Alright So every piece of armor gives you the ability to endure 75% of the damage and a big stat increase, depending on the color. Which I take it you can change at a whim. At the same time each spear is able to absord 50% of the opponent's attack and gives the user the ability use the same techniques. So from this alone, it gives only 12.5% of a single attack from actually hitting and doing some sort of damage. And that's for any attack. And at the same time gives your character a big stat boost and more abilites. That's four abilities for one attack. That's a big no-no. At most I can accept one ability for each piece of armor and spear. That's two abilities for One attack.

Bankai Attack Two, Once again you have more than one ability for a single attack. You need to edit and take some out. The first part is interesting, it gives him the feeling as if has no reiatsu, which I suppose is like what happened with Ichigo. The next takes away all speed abilities, now does this also make it so they cannot use kido? Since it makes them basically humans and such. I suggest taking the last part out, this is because it resembles another bankai in the guild. One in which you were told of previously and simply brushed it off, saying that, "This one is better."

Traits are the next thing I will address... This will take quite some time, so I decided to quote you and highlight all the words and phrases that either make your character Godmoddish.

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-Kidō Master: Shoechii's vast knowledge of Kidō is so great that he can perform them without calling out a name, while retaining its great potential power, whereas most users require a name to do so, if not a full incantation. He is also able to produce immensely powerful barriers to protect him from all but the strongest of dangers. But personally he doesn't use kido to often unless he came up with a plan or he knows that he will need it in a battle.
-Spiritual Power: Shoechii possesses an exceedingly powerful amount of Reiatsu and Spiritual Pressure, capable of making other captain level Shinigami caliber sweat in fear and paralyses lieutenant level Shinigami with a simple look. To others his reiatsu capacity is undefined because no one really knows how much reiatsu he has they just believe that it is limitless. But this is not the reason why Shoechii is in consent release one of the real reason why he is in consent release is because when he is in his release a cubed of his Spiritual Powers are sealed so that it seems like he has a limit except when he is in his "Samurai Soul Armor," when he is in "Samurai Soul Armor" his Spiritual Powers are not sealed no more but all of it are compressed in his body. But the only time he can really access the sealed Spiritual Power in his release is when at anytime he uses his reiatsu the sealed reiatsu will fill in the empty space from the reiastu that is not sealed.
-Master Strategist & Tactician: Shoechii has repeatedly shown himself to be a very insightful and cunning man. He also possesses great intuition, able to quickly become aware of any incoming danger and react to it in time. Shoechii has an undeniable talent for thinking things well in advance as well, make decisive and accurate decisions quickly in battle, and able to perceive any situation at hand. He generally has shown himself to also be a crafty tactician from how easily he can deceive both allies and enemies. He has also shown to be a very perceptive and analytical man from how quickly he can analyze an opponent's power and attack patterns to ultimately make them useless against him.
-Strength: Shoechii have exceedingly tremendous physical strength, he can slash or break through an Espada-level Hierro with a weapon or even his fist with ease. Others believe that his physical strength is limitless because no matter how much physical strength his opposer has he is able to physically overrun them with ease. This is another reason why he is in consent release because his strength is cubed during his release but in Samurai Soul Armor his compressed reiatsu causes his strength to return back to its peek.
-Durability: Shoechii have exceedingly tremendous durability, during his fights he took attacks from others without being phased. Even being impaled on a sword or having his entire arm slashed off without so much as flinching from the perceived damage, or even being able to take an onslaught of punches and come out completely unfazed by the assault with no more than simple scratches. Others believe that nothing or anything can't seem to hurt or even faze him at all. This is another reason why he is in consent release because his durability is cubed during his release but in Samurai Soul Armor his compressed reiatsu causes his strength to return back to its peek.
-Endurance: Shoechii have exceedingly tremendous endurance, he is capable of fighting for long periods of time even when outnumbered with no visible signs of exhaustion or even running at top speed. There was times when he fought over hundreds of enemies and defeating them single handedly without even breaking a sweat or even breathing heavily.
-Speed: Shoechii have exceedingly tremendous speed making him the fastest Shinigami in the entire Seireitei history, no one was able to keep up with his speed. As well as he is not just fast with his feet, he is also fast with his hands. Others believe that his speed has no match, this is another reason why he is in consent release because his speed is cubed during his release but in Samurai Soul Armor his compressed reiatsu causes his strength to return back to its peek.
-Agility: As well as speed, Shoechii have exceedingly agility he can dodge attacks with great reaction time speed as well. He is known to dodge mostly all attacks completely with his speed even if the attack is in front of his face, he is still able to dodge it without a scratch on him while for others it is impossible. Others believe that he was untouchable, this is another reason why he is in consent release because his agility is cubed during his release but in Samurai Soul Armor his compressed reiatsu causes his strength to return back to its peek.
-Flexibility: As well as agility, Shoechii have exceedingly flexibility he can bend his body pass the extent of a normal beings its like he has a body of a felon. His flexibility combine with his agility cause him to become even more harder to hit. This is another reason why he is in consent release because his flexibility is cubed during his release but in Samurai Soul Armor his compressed reiatsu causes his strength to return back to its peek.
-Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Shoechii is very deadly combatant because of how fast he can swing or thrust a sword and how pin-point precision and accurate he is when he makes his attacks, he is known for his fast swordsmanship because he can swing a blade every half a second and fast enough to take down his opponent with a single precise strike. Few would hope to come out alive from a fight with him. He is capable of fighting three captain-level Shinigami simultaneously. As well as Shoechii being a master swordsman he was to wield five blades at once.
-Hakuda Master: Shoechii is a highly dangerous combatant even without his Zanpakutō. As with his skill in swordsmanship, he is also a powerful master in hand-to-hand combat. As like his swordsmanship, he is able to punch and kick every half a second.
-Shunpo Master: As well as Yoruichi, Shoechii considered to be the most proficient Hohō master. Shoechii is highly skilled in the use of Shunpo, a high speed movement ability because he has mastered this ability to such an extent that he can appear to be in several places at once and wipe out an entire.


Now there was also words stating that all of his stats are cubed in his "Samurai Soul Armor" But it never states that this happens in the original ability. I decide to not highlight this because it just seems like something you add between the lines so that if one reads your Bankai ability, they wouldn't jump out and tell you that it was completely unfair.

The main reason I call this profile a Godmod is because of what you can possibly do with it as well as phrases that you have personally told me, "No one can beat Shoechii alone." or "Shoechii can get anything through his re-equip, because it doesn't limit it."

Change what I have gone through and/or talk about this with me via PM.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 4:37 pm


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PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:44 am


I am accepting this profile. The changes have been made and the current judge is taking more then enough time to accept it.


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