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Savage Royal

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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 12:18 am


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name:Kasdeza
Nicknames: Kas. Deza. Dez
Gender: Male
Age:Around the teen years for an Avarice demon.
Height: 5' 11

Faction/Race Demon / Avarice Affinity Envy.

Personality: A menacing trickster with a lofty if not comically insane demeanor. Kasdeza always makes sure to seem like your best friend if you have traits or things he admires but loyalty is not something Kas abides by. So if you go on believing that you two are the best of mates chances are you'll get double crossed or stabbed in the back. Related to the ancient Avarice demon embodiment Envy Kas has chameleon quality's like many related to his ancestor. It is a blessing for him because of his cursed actual appearance. Dark and hardy skin cracked in fissures all over his body bleeding and glowing. Some could and have confused him for a common monster. This always creates a fury and rage which never goes unanswered.

Keep a close eye on him and his charming ways no matter how illogical and harmless he may seem. Do this and you can be perfect friends with him without harm. A sly hunter almost never strikes when they know you're watching for it. Kas honestly likes the wary quality in his acquaintances. It means he isn't being underestimated or undermined. An odd balance for a true friend to him. The people who are aware not to trust him he often trusts more. One of his major loves is a psychological awareness and studying of others. To understand what someone feels or is hiding by judging body and facial movements. That and always finding a pretty characteristic he can remember to make himself more gorgeous then anyone else. It is no secret descendants of Envy dislike others looking or having more superior things then them. This levels the visual playing field.

Overall he can be scatter brained, flirtatious, friendly or cute he might even be the most helpful friend you could have. For now. But in the end you have something he wants. The day might be years from now. Or next week. Or maybe not until his venture for power is over. But the day will come when he tries to take it all from you. You might not see this. Most people would consider him of the nicest kinds of demons. Manipulative sure but nice enough. You know better now. He wants it all and is making plans to get it as soon as possible.

Judgement All things and people are viewed in a certain perspective. What is the advantage of socializing with them? Where is the mutual benefit of becoming acquaintances? Overall being friends with other demons means a mutual stab in the back, but that's not the kind of agreement Kas is looking for. So rarely will you see him overly buddy buddy with another of his race. That doesn't mean he dislikes them. In fact his favorite things to study and stare at are succubi. they always give him idea's for new glorious features. But when it comes to those he enjoys over all else it would have to be the ghosts and patchwork women of the undead. He rarely brings his two favorites together. They just don't understand or have the need to be around each other. But they both have numerous uses for him. They can see and hear secrets and gain trust from social status along with looks.
Monsters and the rest he holds quite an indifference for. They have opportune moments for when they can be coerced for his liking. Overall though Kas just doesn't have a taste for them. That includes vampires. Cocky pompous things. He already has to hear from his cousin Vainglory every half century or so and that is enough for his liking.

Method To Madness His mindset is envious. Beings with things he does not have are intolerable. But he keeps this contempt hidden down under the skin that mimics his true personality. Hardened broken and bleeding. Though the ones he most closely associates with are not the most glorious they are reliable to an end. To his end life goal. Not to the end of his. But everyone's. It was almost like greed but so much different. Everyone in the world has at least one thing he doesn't. He feels spite for all the beauty's, riches, hearts, glorious minds and anything else not directly in his grasp. If he can't have it no one can. It takes an army to conquer the worlds. He may be crafty but he is not a one demon militia. Kas would need an army that would obey his every order. Somehow he needs to learn to raise legions of the undead. But loyal to him. Their necromancer. The dead once had something he wanted. But they lost it. Maybe gained a bit of something else but their losses far outweigh the profit. Ghost's would be the world around him once he is through. That is if he couldn't find a way to banish them permanently after his conquest. But otherwise he would live with his beautiful dolls. Patchwork dolls he will create through necromancy and science. Side by side with those he feels no jealousy for. Life complete and fade from existence himself. Or get a new hobby.

Kasdeza In A Nutshell Overall he can be scatter brained, flirtatious, friendly or cute he might even be the most helpful friend you could have. For now. But in the end you have something he wants. The day might be years from now. Or next week. Or maybe not until his venture for power is over. But the day will come when he tries to take it all from you. You might not see this. Most people would consider him of the nicest kinds of demons. Manipulative sure but nice enough. You know better now. He wants it all and is making plans to get it as soon as possible.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Necromancy. Other then the pass to the real world, Kasdeza has always wanted to control his own zombie hoard. A few other subjects have his interest and he is determined to learn as much as possible. Though necromancy is by far his most desired subject. So basically Curses, Spells, and Hexes. Something should be in there to help.

Natural Ability Millions of tiny chameleon spore scales covering his body. Though his characteristic changeling attributes are unique in a sense. The miniscule scale like particles change in shade to match any color pattern no matter how complex at ease because of the particle sizes. The longevity of his basic transformations can last for a week unrested. That would be his appearance in general. Without this his appearance would be more that of a monster then a demon. His ability for it is quite rare with the amount of time he can keep a created form.

FEAR: An extension of his natural ability. The scales can also detach and float around in a massive cloud keeping a psychic link to Kasdeza, changing color and density at his will. Usually only used to fight or frighten because it takes much more energy then just keeping his attractive appearance and while doing this reveals his true form. That is if you can see past the spore scales. His speed and agility also increase during the time his scales are off of his body. As his FEAR grows larger the spores will gain diverse properties along with his speed and agility boost growing exponentially.

First Mutation:
Scale spores detach from the body in a cloud of fluctuating color maintained by a psychic link to Kas.
Cloud Radius- 50ft
Speed Boost - 75%
Agility Boost - 50%

Second Mutation
More detailed camouflage in the spore cloud. It now can cluster specifically toward eye's and other open orifices
on its own.
Cloud Radius- 70ft
Speed Boost - 110%
Agility Boost - 85%

Third Mutation The detached spores can now change in density from soft to hard or razor sharp. The psychic link between spores and Kas now allows them to vibrate wildly in the air. The camouflage is drastically more detailed. It can almost form a complete illusion inside of itself.
Cloud Radius- 95ft
Speed Boost - 145%
Agility Boost - 115%

Final Mutation With density and perfect chameleon capability's now in cloud form Kas can make realistic mirages of himself and anyone else. As long as he can remember exactly what they look like. The dense spore illusions can also touch to make the illusion more believable and distracting.
Cloud Radius- 120ft
Speed Boost - 180%
Agility Boost - 150%


Weaknesses: He might be quick. But he is weak if you get a hold of him. Craft not brawn is how he operates. He does decently against most magic's but cold magic like ice can deteriorate his and his spores effects dramatically. He avoids people of this magic type at all costs.

Physical Description:
Eye Colour:
Disguised: Ultraviolet with illuminating pink pupils.
Unmasked: Completely Black
Hair Colour/Style:
Disguised: Dark blue pompadour.
Unmasked: Grey blue butchered hair.
Skin Colour:
Disguised: Varies from tan to porcelain white
Unmasked: Grey cracked bloody skin.
Clothing Style/Colours: Modern fashion gone wrong. Imagine Fabio coming out of a slaughter house with black and blue accessories in shapes of dead things. Like belts with imprinted body's stretched and tortured on the rack. This is just an example
His pant's are slightly tight skinny jeans with diamond cut holes on the sides. Each hole exposes a pentagram tattooed on his skin. Blue and black bloodied ribbon is tied off at his ankle to match the rest of his accessories. Also a blue tiger stripe on his one visible shoulder.
Extra: A white razor tipped tail.
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PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 12:08 pm


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Just started collecting them. go easy on me. xd

Savage Royal

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Frezir

Kawaii Wolf

PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 1:02 pm


First Critic > w<
But in all seriousness.
I find Kas to be a very interesting character.
My question is how would he get along with the different types of students?
ex. Demons, hunters, ghouls, etc,
I'm just curious cause I'd like to know what types they get along better with than others.

Crit back if you'd like <3
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21078773
PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 1:30 pm


Thank you. I'll work on that right now. smile

Savage Royal

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Savage Royal

Lavish Lunatic

PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2011 10:40 pm


Okay added Judgement as a section for his likes and dislikes of others. Any more criticism? smile
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 11:04 am


Kas is definitely interesting, I've love to see a more in detail look at his traits. I feel like I don't know enough about HIM yet, what he thinks about various things, any quirks he has, any pet peeves, guilty pleasures.

Also I feel a bit sketchy about his fear. The idea behind the scales changing his appearance sounds like it belongs more in his natural ability. Not to mention that the fear attack is a type of skill that will grow as the student grows, and isn't perfected yet.

From the description, I cant seem to get a feel for how it could improve as he gets older, nor exactly how he would use it in battle. Is it like a certain range of area where the spores are released in? Last but not least; as powerful as the fear attacks are, that all have some sort of weakness or drawback.

Your getting there, keep it up!

Bloodlust Dante

Fortunate Hellraiser


Savage Royal

Lavish Lunatic

PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 11:48 am


I'll get to work on it. Thank you smile
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 12:46 pm


Hey! Just wanted to say again thanks for critting my quest, and here's a little crit back blurb.

I think an envy demon would be interesting, I am pretty sure there isn't one yet (could be wrong). You want to be careful about not making him TOO 'devestatingly handsome', otherwise you're kinda roaming into incubus turf.

I think in his personality a lot of the second half of that first paragraph (about his appearance and transformation) should be moved to his FEAR section, as it's more a description of his abilities rather than his personality.

As for the rest of his personality, I think it's ok - he chooses friends based on traits he feels he lacks or is envious of, right? Why does he feel the need to betray them, though? Does his hatred turn to jealousy? And you say he likes patchworks/ghosts/necromancy, but why? I mean, they're usually not pretty or very powerful, so is it not based off of envy, but personal interest? Why is he interested? Is it something from his past?

I'd love to see more details about his past here, and I also agree with what Dante said - this is a nice beginning but I don't feel like I'm getting a clear picture of this dude in my head yet.

Does he have any weaknesses? For example, maybe his obsession with things he is envious/jealous of makes him blind to others around him that he considers insignificant? IDK, just a thought.

The fear could probably use a little work too, try to think of it as an ability he'll learn to master over time. Start thinking about where you want to go with him- how you'd like him to develop, what his plan is, etc.

Ravvlet
Crew

Hygienic Waffles


Savage Royal

Lavish Lunatic

PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 1:19 pm


Ravv- Thank you. I am getting right on it. So much to fiddle with.


Sections Added

Natural Ability
Fear Mutations
Weaknesses
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 2:03 pm


Ps this isn't really a crit, but to correct Ravv - there is actually an envy demon in existence~ :3

Not that it matters; just throwing it out there. xD

kuropeco

Dramatic Marshmallow


Savage Royal

Lavish Lunatic

PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 2:28 pm


Kuro-Mizuki
Ps this isn't really a crit, but to correct Ravv - there is actually an envy demon in existence~ :3

Not that it matters; just throwing it out there. xD
I thought there might be. So I tried to make his prerogative and powers somewhat unique to himself. As a descendant of Envy. Care to give it a read and crit it?

I just fixed everything I think.

Sections Added

Method To Madness
Kasdeza In A Nutshell

tons of other stuff I think.
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 6:20 pm


He looks good over all but the main thing that's sticking out is his natural ability.

• Envy: Can change the colors of their hair/eye/skin/nails to anything they desire. Patterns are possible, but they usually revert back to their normal colors after 24 hours.

Taken from this thread. What you have up is similar, but it seems it's supposed to be only the color that can be changed and it lasts for a shorter amount of time. You may have to ask the staff if you're able to deviate from the official information in the shop when it comes to natural abilities.

Also weapon of choice isn't really needed. XD Only Reapers and Hunters are allowed to have weapons of any sort.

Those bits aside, he seems fairly solid in terms of personality.

Blade Kuroda

Militant Raider


Savage Royal

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PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 6:44 pm


Blade Kuroda
He looks good over all but the main thing that's sticking out is his natural ability.

• Envy: Can change the colors of their hair/eye/skin/nails to anything they desire. Patterns are possible, but they usually revert back to their normal colors after 24 hours.

Taken from this thread. What you have up is similar, but it seems it's supposed to be only the color that can be changed and it lasts for a shorter amount of time. You may have to ask the staff if you're able to deviate from the official information in the shop when it comes to natural abilities.

Also weapon of choice isn't really needed. XD Only Reapers and Hunters are allowed to have weapons of any sort.

Those bits aside, he seems fairly solid in terms of personality.
Well his fear ability are the spores/scales so it ties in with the natural ability. Which keeps his true form from being seen and is used in battle. Slightly altered but I'll run it past some of the staff smile
Thank you 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu May 12, 2011 8:27 pm


HI HERE HAS A CRIT

First off - Avarice Demons are loved here. They are also all currently in play. That means there's currently an Envy demon, AND there's information on avarice demons in the world setting. If you haven't already read through all of the demon and avarice demon info in the world setting information post, in guild, make sure you do so. (I'm not saying it looks like you haven't, I actually haven't read anything yet XD If you read it before writing this, GOOD ON YOU and thank you for doing the right thing!)

I don't think Eyulra has too much background written up about his envy demon (Livius), but it might be worth a read to go check out what he wrote in HIS quest enrollment thread or dorm, just so nothing conflicts. I doubt anything will! But always good to read anything that might affect you in any way. (Again, you may have already done this, and good on you for it!)

NOW AFTER READING:

His personality is well thought out and very fleshed out - all good stuff in there.

His "Why is he enrolled" is PERFECT and a GREAT example of the kind of thing Amityville can really teach someone. *_* I LOVE IT.

I like his natural ability. There is already natural abilities written up for avarice demons but I know that personal touches are sometimes allowed, and I really like this one. It's actually really unique and makes sense with being an envy demon. It's also very personal, which is a touch I like. It's even better that his FEAR is directly linked to his natural ability. They tie together very well, something that is hard to do sometimes. It also has REALLY SPECIFIC INFO which is GREAT!

Quote:
Weapon of Choice: Honestly? Anything that's close and laying around. Light and sharp are always nice though


He shouldn't have a weapon of choice. He shouldn't have a weapon. He's a demon, not a reaper, and in TiH they only want reapers to have weapons. <3 So you might wanna remove this. It's also disengaging from the fluidity of the form overall.

Lastly remember that the best part of this roleplay is character development. He seems to have a lot of things set in stone and descriptiveness is great, but when you actually do get to roleplay him, be open to change! Cause it happens, WHETHER WE LIKE IT OR NOT 8D;

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