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Stratham

PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2011 7:57 pm


the person

Name: Graeme Daly (pronounced Grey-mm)

Nickname: "Grae" is feasible, but would probably only net you a weird look.

Age: 17

Birthday: January 3

Sign: Capricorn

Gemstone: Garnet

Blood Type: A-

Fav. Food: Mashed potatoes with bacon bits.

Hated Food: Peanut butter. Generally, anything that functions to glue your mouth shut upon eating.

School: Azure Valley Academy (By scholarship, via his father's job in the military. His family isn't exactly well-to-do, so Graeme often feels out of place.)

Hobbies:

Model Building-- Graeme's tinkering, hands-on disposition as a child stayed with him as he grew. The shelves in his room are almost embarrassingly packed with historic tank replicas, tiny airplanes and a staggering array of Gundams.

FPS-- Graeme almost exclusively plays shooters, and isn't too shabby at it, if he may say so himself. Whether it's war games, Team Fortress or Goldeneye 007, if it involves some furious aiming and clicking, Graeme's probably mastered it. His interests have been heavily influenced by his father, an Army soldier who used to take Graeme out to the shooting range or to play Airsoft rounds when he was a child.

Disaster Movies-- Giant rampaging Godzillas, whirlpools sweeping away cities, aliens blowing up the Earth-- Graeme's got a keen, almost analytical interest in the topics of mass destruction and apocalypse. He tends to watch these movies detatchedly, as if they were some kind of fantastical experiment. This taste may again be subconsciously influenced by his father, whose career was steeped in war-- a destructive phenomenon in itself. Anyway, expect marathons of 2012, Children of Men or Independence Day if you're hanging out at his place.

Reading-- Graeme considers himself a versed kinda guy, and makes an effort to pick up things like newspapers and Natural Geographics. He claims it "improves his vocabulary" (and provides arsenal for his needlessly long ramblings). Despite all this, you're most likely to find him reading superhero comics and manga.

Classic Rock-- Expect LPs and CDs of the likes of Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, and Paul McCartney littering his room and on repeat in his playlist. He likes to think of it as "cultured edginess." LIVE AND LET DIIIIE!

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PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Slightly narrow, with thin pupils. Warm brown.

Hair: Medium gray, see ref for style: [x]

Face: Sharp-featured; lean rather than round. Three small birthmarks, two above his eyebrow and one by his chin (same ref).

Clothes: School uniform
PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2011 7:58 pm


the personality

Virtues:

Grounded-- You won't find another 17-year-old with feet as firmly cemented to Earth as Graeme. Level-headed and sensible, he provides a voice of reason where appropriate (both a blessing and a curse-- once he starts up, who knows how long he'll go for). In a dangerous situation, Graeme's the last person who'd freak out (or let anybody see him, at least). He'll face the problem armed with common sense and the "experience" gained from watching god-knows how many worlds being blown up or eaten by zombies in movies.

Perceptive-- The eyes don't lie. Years of gluing tiny struts to wings and sniping from virtual rooftops have benefited Graeme's observational skills. He's aware of himself and his surroundings, and quick to spot the tiniest details and peculiarities. This attention to detail often, however, results in him missing the obvious right in front of his nose.

Craftsman-- As expected from his hobbies, Graeme's pretty good with his hands. While he isn't exactly a rippling model of physical strength, he's quick and deft with manual tasks. Currently, he's meandering towards an engineering focus to see if he can put use to his skills aside from sticking together mecha bits or fixing that broken desk leg of yours.

Unexpected humor-- He may be a dry snarker with a tendency to run off with words, but even this can sometimes be the unlikely source for a few laughs. As far as he knows, this pseudo-intellectual wit has won him a smattering of friends here and there. Graeme, an entertainer? Yeah, he amazes even himself sometimes.


Flaws:

Cynic-- While not often outwardly expressed, Graeme tends to hold the darkest, most brutally realistic perception of things out there, and an inability to change said views. We're all just cogs, anyway, cogs in a system, so what's the use of hopes and dreams?! (His attentiveness to disaster-and-dystopia movies does nothing to help, either.) Graeme can be quite the downer once provoked, and very easily spiral deeper and deeper into negative-land. Which leads to...

Defeatist-- That's it. It's over. I'm giving up! Once Graeme exhausts his catalog of practical solutions and gets into this state of mind, it's near impossible to rescue him from the depths of defeat. Once he loses his confidence, you're pretty much out of luck in trying to gain any cooperation. Henceforth, he will take to sitting forlornly at a side and snarking at your attempts to right the situation.

Passive-- Not a leader by any means, Graeme's perfectly content to sit back and let everyone else order him around. He sees no reason to pitch in proactively, or to take the initiative. Expect minimal contribution (until threatened), but plenty of sharp words, if you're ever stuck in a group with him.

Long-winded-- When a meaningful look crosses Graeme's face and he opens his mouth to speak-- run. What could easily be said in a couple words becomes a long, pseudo-scholarly spiel in Graeme-speak, rendering it completely incomprehensible to a normal human being. At this point, the listener's only options are to tune out, to tell him to get to the freakin' point, or to chuck something at his head. Whether faux eloquent, snarking, or filled with righteous indignation... when this boy wants to, he can go at it for ages. (This can occasionally work as a distraction when facing the enemy, but don't count on it.)

Stratham


Stratham

PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2011 7:59 pm


the negaverse

Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Massicot

Challenge: I’ll put you at ease.

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Uniform: Post-apocalyptic military/hazmat theme! Well, moreso @ final stage haha.

Main color: Dark olive with very faint camo pattern (more olive than green tho). Can be super rough; you can just overlay the pattern if you'd like, really!

Secondary: I'll leave piping color to you? Black, brown, crimson... something that doesn't clash too much? =)

Top/Bottom -- They are combined because what I had in mind is jumpsuit-like! Pretty much like this, with the only change being longer boots, and the overall fit a bit looser/baggier (since Graeme isn't exactly Mr. Macho lols. Here's an extreme example of loose style.)
Undershirt: Black and exposed like the first ref, but a tight turtleneck, please! Sleeves: long and bunched like the ref, cuffed at wrists. Piping can be on the edges of collar, pockets, sleeve cuffs, whereever you think is good and not overboard!

Gloves -- Not yet, maybe next stage!

Belt -- Yes, again like the first ref. Just let it stand out somehow against the uniform =)

Shoes -- Black or dark brown (CC) combat boots that reach mid-shin. Pants are tucked loosely in the top. Something like this length, though boots should be un-shiny and chunkier? Your call!

Accessories -- If possible, I'd love a stitched emblem/insignia on one sleeve of his upper arm =o? ("military insignia" in google images has some inspiration!)


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Weapon:
1st stage: Coil of thick industrial hose, hanging at his side.
2nd stage: Fire extinguisher (color TBD), with long hose and spray gun head.
3rd stage: Pressurized air or steam gun, similar to a flamethrower in look. By this time his jumpsuit will have more hazmat/gasmask influence to it!
PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2011 8:00 pm


the useless knowledge

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...Massicot: The mineral

...- One of the natural mineral forms of lead(II) oxide, PbO
...- Forms soft, yellow to reddish-yellow, earthy, scaley masses which are very dense
...- Forms as a result of other lead minerals' oxidation
...- Its dimorph is the mineral Litharge (both have the same chemistry, PbO, but different structures; also, Litharge is red)
...- Sometimes used as artists' pigment

Stratham


Stratham

PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2011 8:01 pm


the reason

(CAUTION: tl;dr)

WHY NEGAVERSE?

For the most part, Graeme appears to be a sensible, (somewhat) normal high-school kid. Why would he join up with the Negaverse?

Grame has been influenced heavily by his father in many aspects of his life, hobbies and nature-- whether he realizes it or not. The two were very close when Graeme was a child. Strong, brave, and humorous, and a soldier on top of that, his father was not only a role model to Graeme-- he was an idol.

However, as the years passed, Graeme's family started seeing less and less of their father. Rising in the ranks, constantly overseas, fighting in strange lands for strange purposes-- it was during this time Graeme began to obsessively play shooters, to watch lives being swept away on screen, to scan the newspaper daily. It was his way of filling the hole that had grown within him, the cause of which only returned twice a year, which gradually became once, then once every other. His father was disappearing into the abyss of his career, and Graeme could do nothing but watch.

In recent years, his father's sporadic returns marked a significant change in their relationship. A grim, hollow-eyed stranger came instead, one who had seen many things, and had no voice to say so. Graeme would sit tensely at the kitchen table, watching his father leaf mechanically through newspapers, silently screaming at him to say something, anything. This was not his father. War had taken his father, his laughing, beloved father, and left Graeme with merely a shell.

Could war do things like this to a person? Could you watch millions of lives be destroyed, and not blink an eye? Could you kill a man and live with it?

Graeme began to consider these questions. He looked at them practically, analytically, and-- increasingly-- cynically. He studies the ends of worlds and the wanton waste of lives, in various mediums, without blinking. Online, virtual bullets find their mark through virtual heads; he tops the game leaderboards once again.

Is this what his father feels? It is all so impersonal.

There's no other way to learn, to understand. He has to kill a man for himself, with his own hands. Detached, straightforward, sensible-- this is an experiment. This is putting everything he's "learned" to practice. Can he do it? Must you be a bad person to be the bad guy? Would an everyday highschooler missing his father work?

Graeme would start out his Negaverse stint purely as an "experiment." He wouldn't fit in at first, awkwardly trying to keep aloof and objective from the twisted souls there. All he wants to do is see if he can-- physically and morally-- kill someone, to destroy something, to understand what his father goes through everyday. I imagine, though, that he would eventually overreach himself; his deep-seated cynicism would begin to consume him, leaving him--ironically-- as hollow and soulless as his father. He would slip into jadedness, killing without feeling; someone who, unfortunately, fits right into the mold of a Negaverse agent. If it comes to this, I'm hoping that with some help, he could eventually be redeemed...
PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2011 9:12 pm


the family

Cpt. Jerrod Daly, 49
Graeme's father. Army captain, away for extremely long periods. Once a lively man who loved spending time with his family, he has drifted away due to work, and become listless and withdrawn. Graeme's mission is to find out why, in order to bring his "true father" back.

Madeleine Daly née Pierce, 39
Graeme's mother. A frail, softspoken woman who nonetheless works her hardest-- often, too hard-- for the household in her husband's absence. Has poor health, made worse by worry over making ends meet, and sadness over her distant husband. Graeme is often forced to take on her duties, and to care for her, when she falls ill.

Clement Daly, 11
Graeme's younger brother. Was sweet as a child; now in that awkward stage of pre-teen brattiness, which only causes more worry for their mother. Nonetheless, Clem's always held respect for his older brother Graeme, and views him almost as a father figure in absence of their true father. By the time Clem was born, their father had already begun drifting away, and as a consequence Clem did not know or respect him as much as Graeme did.

Stratham


Akina Tokuwa

PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2011 9:22 am


ON THE CIVILIAN:

Looks great! I think you might want to add another line to long-winded that focuses on how this can alienate him from people, but otherwise, this side of the quest is fantastic.

ON THE NEGA:

Osmium is not allowed as a Nega name because it is an element! There has been some confusion in the past, but we do not allow elements, only minerals. So you will unfortunately have to select another name for him.

For his weapon, delete the line about fourth stage. That is not guaranteed and will be very, very, very rare. So it is not part of a quest thread! If I am reading it correctly, his weapon is: long hose (like you might find on a fire extinguisher) > suped-up fire extinguisher > pressurized air/steam gun. If this is correct, then I think that is A-OK!
PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2011 3:28 pm


Ack -- Dioptase is a mineral, yes! But we unfortunately used it for a rather prominent disposable character who died. x_x SO SORRY. We usually try not to use real mineral names, but in the case of Dioptase, that is the name of someone we used for an event that was run last month. So this name won't work either!

Akina Tokuwa


Stratham

PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2011 3:34 pm


Akina Tokuwa
Ack -- Dioptase is a mineral, yes! But we unfortunately used it for a rather prominent disposable character who died. x_x SO SORRY. We usually try not to use real mineral names, but in the case of Dioptase, that is the name of someone we used for an event that was run last month. So this name won't work either!


Ah my bad!! I wish I had more shoplore knowledge D= I'll keep looking.
PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2011 3:40 pm


Stratham
Akina Tokuwa
Ack -- Dioptase is a mineral, yes! But we unfortunately used it for a rather prominent disposable character who died. x_x SO SORRY. We usually try not to use real mineral names, but in the case of Dioptase, that is the name of someone we used for an event that was run last month. So this name won't work either!


Ah my bad!! I wish I had more shoplore knowledge D= I'll keep looking.


Oh, this one is totally our fault. We should have added that name to the list of unacceptable minerals. SORRY. Thank you so much for being so flexible.

Akina Tokuwa


A Wandering Esper

Beloved Stargazer

PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2011 3:53 pm


There's Diopside. which is a mineral and similar ? I remember hesitating in between the two before settling on Dioptase.
PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2011 3:57 pm


Zero Dream
There's Diopside. which is a mineral and similar ? I remember hesitating in between the two before settling on Dioptase.


Thank you! I was waffling between the two as well, actually, haha. I'll keep on searching for now, perhaps for something a bit different!

Stratham


Stratham

PostPosted: Tue May 03, 2011 4:51 pm


Akina Tokuwa


Would Massicot be acceptable? Just wanted to make sure with you first!
PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2011 7:22 pm


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Most definitely.

When he hits General, we might need to chit-chat about exactly how his airpump-gun works since we try to steer clear of gun-guns, but this is great -- approved!


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