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 Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 1:17 am
Name: wreave Age:25 Race: 3/4 qunari 1/4 human Gender: male Class: mage Specialty: Arcane warrior Personality: straight forward but far different than other qunari with more human like emotions shining through History: Wreave was born of a half human mother and a full qunari father yet his qunari genes are unbelievably powerful his horns are full and massive as is his body. He is a mage and because of that he is lets face it, not treated the best by the qunari people, and ran away at a very young age. Taken in by a bloodmage apostate wreave learned all he needed to know about magic. However he did not let his massive physical power go to waste. he crafted a sword for himself which he uses instead of a staff. His master, the apostate that cared for him did not wish to push being a blood mage on him. So she taught him only things that could make his sword play and combat better as well as many healing powers. By the time he was 14 he and his master, or how she would put it. His mother started to help free mages from the circle. Which is how he came to the worst moment of his life. One of the mages he and his ""mother"" where helping turned on them. Endlessly torturing his master consuming her to fuel his own power using a strange technique allowing to use the fade like a demon does controlling the environment of the fade. Grasping wreaves head he brought him to the fade and tortured him just like his master. But instead of killing him and consuming his power the bloodmage decided to experiment with wreave placing a spell on him so that he was either full human or full qunari at one time. However this curse was not completed do to Wreave breaking free and wounding the bloodmage. He got away but wreave was left stuck in human form so weak and injured from the short battle that he was hardly able to walk. He took the bloodmages notes and research and left. but was easy prey for the slavers. Do to his looks as a human he was quickly bought by a woman noble wanting the obvious which gravely confused him. He spent most his time with other slaves specifically the young ones. He always liked teaching children but between the noble woman and his injuries he hardly had time to even sleep. Likes: children.eating Dislikes: ignorant people, loss Crush: none yet Picture or description of your character:  Curiosities: Currently his arms are very badly burned and covered in bandages.
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 5:05 am
Just note that the age doesn't match his looks.
He looks a lot older o.o
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:25 am
I know, right. Even Seni looks younger. rolleyes
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 9:37 am
I think the best solution is to not have a 15 year old character. I don't think him being old would affect his background really, but perhaps that's because his background came off as a block of text. I'm starting to sound like a broken record, but please put more effort into your grammar. Things like his name should be capitalized, and some punctuation wouldn't hurt either.
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 10:11 am
I agree, though. Grammarnazis to the rescue.
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 10:53 am
lArchangel I agree, though. Grammarnazis to the rescue. I truly don't want to come off as a b*tch, but some of the grammar in this guild is really starting to rub me the wrong way. I'm dsylexic, so having to decode other people's grammar soup is headache inducing and highly exasperating.
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:06 am
No, I truly understand. Don't worry about What everyone else thinks, because I really do know what you mean.
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:53 pm
Cruor Corvus Just note that the age doesn't match his looks. He looks a lot older o.o Qunari are not by any means human. It is not known how they age. But I gotcha there. I fixed his age for you and adjusted the grammar. So then....without the simple mistakes...what do you think of the character?
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 9:34 pm
Dione Nightly lArchangel I agree, though. Grammarnazis to the rescue. I truly don't want to come off as a b*tch, but some of the grammar in this guild is really starting to rub me the wrong way. I'm dsylexic, so having to decode other people's grammar soup is headache inducing and highly exasperating. its alright your trying to make the guild better. I should have made my profile with some better spelling and such.
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Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 1:22 am
kesuke uchiha Cruor Corvus Just note that the age doesn't match his looks. He looks a lot older o.o Qunari are not by any means human. It is not known how they age. But I gotcha there. I fixed his age for you and adjusted the grammar. So then....without the simple mistakes...what do you think of the character? its fine really, its good to have more Qunaris around *inner Sylvia licks her lips*
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Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 7:48 am
Cruor Corvus kesuke uchiha Cruor Corvus Just note that the age doesn't match his looks. He looks a lot older o.o Qunari are not by any means human. It is not known how they age. But I gotcha there. I fixed his age for you and adjusted the grammar. So then....without the simple mistakes...what do you think of the character? its fine really, its good to have more Qunaris around *inner Sylvia licks her lips* -Clears throat-. Only female Qunari, RIGHT here. Yoohooo.
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Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 9:18 am
lArchangel Cruor Corvus kesuke uchiha Cruor Corvus Just note that the age doesn't match his looks. He looks a lot older o.o Qunari are not by any means human. It is not known how they age. But I gotcha there. I fixed his age for you and adjusted the grammar. So then....without the simple mistakes...what do you think of the character? its fine really, its good to have more Qunaris around *inner Sylvia licks her lips* -Clears throat-. Only female Qunari, RIGHT here. Yoohooo. *hugs Seni* Oh I know *winks* x3
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Posted: Sun May 01, 2011 10:22 am
Cruor Corvus lArchangel Cruor Corvus kesuke uchiha Cruor Corvus Just note that the age doesn't match his looks. He looks a lot older o.o Qunari are not by any means human. It is not known how they age. But I gotcha there. I fixed his age for you and adjusted the grammar. So then....without the simple mistakes...what do you think of the character? its fine really, its good to have more Qunaris around *inner Sylvia licks her lips* -Clears throat-. Only female Qunari, RIGHT here. Yoohooo. *hugs Seni* Oh I know *winks* x3 You bring the elf, I'll bring the Qunari. heart .
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Posted: Tue May 03, 2011 1:58 am
lArchangel Cruor Corvus lArchangel Cruor Corvus kesuke uchiha Cruor Corvus Just note that the age doesn't match his looks. He looks a lot older o.o Qunari are not by any means human. It is not known how they age. But I gotcha there. I fixed his age for you and adjusted the grammar. So then....without the simple mistakes...what do you think of the character? its fine really, its good to have more Qunaris around *inner Sylvia licks her lips* -Clears throat-. Only female Qunari, RIGHT here. Yoohooo. *hugs Seni* Oh I know *winks* x3 You bring the elf, I'll bring the Qunari. heart . qunari....female.......heyyyyy there cool XD
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Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 9:52 am
lol so hey there little qunari mage razz
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