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(First off lets get to the basic. Alright during this time Zeta Hex isnt fighting Squad X lol but its cool. How I see it in this guilg you can rp anywere just as long as your rp character dont die. It like rping different time frames but let get the show on the road)

First when rping let try making a good rp like making you character feel, giving emotion and showing their point of view which would lead to making a long but bot to long of a post like this:

Fury sat in his chair in the meeting hall. He looked over to the window and back to the others. He was quite sure on how this will when inform them on the next mission. He got up and walked down as all of them faced him. He smiled"Now...Squad X has guarded these areas and we need certain people in those areas. Each one of you will take a area and bring back these three people. They indeed worth allot and we can use them."He voice serious and calm. He cut to the chase instead of wasting time.

Now see the example. It has allot f detail on Fury and how he sees thing or what he is doing and his expression to things like saying serious or calm.

(Sorry it took had to go hit the shower. Now back to business. Now were gonna have a showdown which will build up your skill in rp and your rp character.)

Now first lets start with making your character & talking(fighting comes in a few)

Fury looked at Animus with a serious look on his face. He knew allot about Animus and wanted to make sure he fit to be one of the Strongest in Zeta Hex"So Animus..let see if you got what it takes to make it to be one of us."He calmly said. His orange hair blew in the wind and his eyes were now closed. His was tilted downward facing the ground. He ha looked up he opened his eyes. They were orange and filled with fire for battle. He slowly walked toward Animus waiting on him to attack.

Now as you see I mad fury do something as he talked to you and after. I showed what he was doing before he started to walk toward you or even if he was still I showed detail on what was happening with him. Now you give it a shot.

(Ok Good Job, but now when talking you just speak like this

Animus grabbed the hilt of his dagger. His hand was gripped tightly to it and ready to attack. He looked at Fury with fire in his eyes"I was made ready."He said with courage in his voice. He he got into a battle ready to charge.

See this way you dont always have to say He looked at Fury and said"I was made ready." It just sound kind of boring when "said" is always used for making someone speak. Just get to the chase and say it that way after wards you can either put how they sound ex. calm or with anger in his voice)

Fury looked up to the sky and smiled"Well..then give me everything you got."He wanted to see what Animus is made of and would he be able to survive an enemy high powered attack. Fury kept walking toward him until he was a close range of a distance.

(Now this one is quite short but it gets to the feeling and what Fury wants to know. Yet it show that he was wlking toward but kept his distance until he felt it was a good amount of space. Now let see what you got..it just a start so its not gonna be perfect.)

(Good Job! Now when attacking lets not say"created an explosion at Fury" but more like "Animus sent a shadowball at Fury. If Fury dont dodge it would cause a giant explosion creating massive damage to everything in its range." That way its more detailed and effective plus it doesn't just attack the person but it give the person a choice to be attacked or dodge or counter attack. Now know this also never say this"Animus stabbed Fury in his abdomen with his dagger." Thats auto-hitting or Never Dodge every attack that thrown at you that would be "God-Modding which includes:never being hit and if hit they never damage nor effect you or alway countering someone else attack which is too God-Modding. Since your character can slowdown time try using it not everytime but some time like giving it space between like you can use it five times but then you have to recharge it or w/e we will figure something out)

Fury stood behind Animus looking at the explosion. He laughed slightly looking down at him"That was pretty impressive...but let be a little faster."The ground around began to raise. Lightning began to form around them. Fury extended his right arm outward at Animus creating a force field ball in his palm. He then launched it toward Animus.

(Now this is starting of "Fighting Rp". Lets see what you got.)

(Good job! Now when a clash heppend with two ogject that are sepperate from you you can do another attack follow led by another.

Ex. Animus then jumped in the air sending a barrage of shadow spike toward Fury. He then followed behind them with a ball of black energy in both hands.

that was a short example of what you can do.)

Fury Flew into the air. He then flew toward Animus at hight speed. Then another fury appeared beside Animusr and another Fury appeared behind Fury. They both had sword aiming for Animus. "Pre-pare yourself". They then launched their swords at Animus. The Fury in the air then began a barrage of energy ball at Animus.

(Now that was good but remeber: You can say that "Animus slowed down time and went to kill the two Fury copies with his dagger."This way since they are also my character I can have them dodge block counter or be killed. Now another thing remember if if your oponent has done mutliple attack make sure you dont just focus on one cause then you will automatically be hit because you didn't mention them like when I said Fury was in the air sent a Barrage of Energy balls at Animus. You could have dodge them or block or counter. Ok lets talk about your attack and detail like a energy ball describe it or your sword if you use one. How does it look or when you attack what color is it.)

Fury smiled at Animus"Slowing down time I see...perfect. Now I guess we can get to the point."He dashed toward Animus causing a boom in the sky. As he came close he activated his Corrupted Zakuragai. He grabbed his sword off his back. The sword glew with a redish-orange aura surrounding it. He sent out a uproar of heat releasing from it. He then sent a wave of of the aura toward Animus. If Animus dont dodge nor counter if could cause serious damage.

(Ok your doing good. Now remeber you dont always have to say "As such & such sent he/she attack" Jus get to the point of it"As the attack came toward Animus...." and then on. Now adding thing to your character. Remember this you can always add thing to what your character is feeling or doing"Animus slowed down time. Ws the attack came in a slow motion he swollowed the gem after removing his mask which will increase his power greatly. Time then resumed and he prepared to face Fury once again."There I added that you prepared yourself(and I altered it) but you get the point right? Any who let start increasing your senteces like adding detail to your attacks, thought, movement, stance, and feeling about situation or enviorment(the things around you)

Fury laughed as he stood in the air looking at Animus. He pointed his left hand at the ground were Animus stood.. The ground began to rumble and turn blazing red as flames raged up out the ground heading toward him. Fury began to laugh insanely as his carrupted Zakuragai seven white symbol began to spin. Lighting forged in the sky aiming toward Animus.

(Now as you can see I added detail to Fury. I made it were he is feeling great cause he is laughing yet his attack is scortching red hot. Adding another attack as the lightning aimed at you. Do you get it?)