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Name: Makayla Lynn Dolan

Nickname: Ayla or Lynn

Age: 18

Birthday: Jan 25th

Sign: Aquarius

Gemstone: Garnet

Blood Type: AB+

Fav. Food: Love fruit, more so fruit salads.

Hated Food: Seafood of any kind. Put it anywhere near her, and she ends up sick to her stomach.

School: Destiny City University

Hobbies:
Working Out - Ayla is a firm believer that the best way to keep looking young is to stay in top shape. She busts her butt and goes to the gym at least five times a week and even takes brisk morning walks on the weekends. She knows she has to stay healthy and one of the best ways to do that is to stay constantly active. After all, a lady can't hope to keep her figure if she is a couch potato, no?
What Kind of Drink can I Get You? - A girls got to have money to keep up with her wardrobe, however, Ayla's not really one to work the stage - if you catch my drift. She prefers to work the bar at a local club, and with her fun loving attitude and fine figure, she knows how to keep the tips flowing, even if she can't score a few free drinks to sweeten the deal.
Charge It - Did you say shopping? OH HEY A SALE! Ayla loves to shop - LOVES to shop. Thing of it is, she's smart about it, a professional sale hunter, she doesn't really mind if the clothes might be going out of style and are about to be pulled from the rack and shipped off to some discount barn somewhere, as long as she likes their look and they flatter her figure then she's happy.
Drop it Like its Hot - Ayla likes to take it to the floor as soon as she can clock out of work. She will school any fool who thinks they can keep up with her, and isnt' afraid to get down when the music calls for it. She can't help it, she just loses herself to the beat and it works into her blood, pumping her up better than any other thing out there. Dancing is her drug, and she's not going to give it up - ever.


Virtues:

Motherly -- When Ayla finds someone to be a true and trusted friend, she will become the biggest grizzly momma as far as they are concerned. If anyone trys to hurt, harass or bother those she cares deeply for, she will immediately jump to their defense, going full momma lion mode and tearing the harasser apart. She keeps an eye out for her friends needs, and always has their back, going above and beyond to make sure that anything they need they have. That's not to say she won't sit back and let people take care of their own problems, but if she feels the need to intervene then she will not hesitate to jump all over the issue.
Just Wanna have Fun -- Ayla is fun loving, and that translates into everything she does. No matter what the activity, she tries to make as much fun for herself and those with her as she can. Weather at work, school or off the clock, she finds something fun in what she is doing. She can lift even the most mundane and miserable tasks to become entertaining. When she lets go and just enjoys herself, bringing everyone with her along for the ride.
Cross my Heart -- When Ayla makes a promise she means it - her word is her bond and she never breaks a promise. If there is any doubt in her mind she might not be able to keep a promise, she flat out refuses to give one, simply stating that she will do her best, but she can't make any promises to the effect. If a promise makes her have to do something she feels is wrong, she will still keep it, because she made a promise. Ayla refuses to break a promise, and if it looks like she might have to, she pulls the person she made the promise to aside to explain her situation and try to make the promise happen.

Flaws:

You're dead to me -- When someone crosses the line with Ayla, its over and she considers them an enemy from that day forward. To her, they have died, and left nothing but a shell of hurt and pain. She is not above calling them out if she meets them again, and will go out of her way to make their lives miserable to return the pain they have given her. It takes a bit to get on Ayla's bad side, but once there, there is not chance of redemption.
Yea, I'm a b***h. Get over It -- Ayla is a b***h, plain and simple, to those she dislikes anyway. She makes no excuses for it, and expects everyone to deal with it. She does what she wants, when she wants to, and if someone gets in her way she isn't afraid to walk over them to get what she wants. She pushes peoples buttons and goes out of her way to make people miserable, but its only to prove that she is the alpha female.
That's for me to know, and you to never find out -- Ayla plays her hand close to her chest, and doesn't really give up anything when she deals with others. She's got a strong poker face and remains tight-lipped no matter what the circumstance. She refuses to give up her secrets, even to those who she trusts. She will even taunt people with what she knows sometimes, simply hinting that she knows more than she lets on. There are a few exceptions to this, but they are few and far between.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Dark blue, almost black in color around the outer part of the eye.

Hair: Long down to the waist straight black hair. Its highlighted with with teal blue throughout the whole hair.Style similar to this

Face: Heart shape face, with a small scar right under her right eye. Just above her left eye, she has a eyebrow bar piercing. Its a simple silver with a black jewel in the center. Similar to this

Clothes: Pretty fashionable, she loves wearing clothes that show off her body. Clingy, short, and eye catching. Normally dresses in hip hugger jeans, boots, and long sleeve crop tops. Every once in awhile she wear spaghetti straps or a jean skirt, but she likes her jeans more then anything. The colors are darker so she balances out the color of her skin. Depending on her mood she'll wear either heels or her worn in shoes.
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Pants and Boots

ON THE CIVILIAN:

Works for me!

ON THE SENSHI:

Pain and Suffering are very closely-related spheres, but I know that you and LF designed them with each other -- so I'm not going to sweat any toe-stepping that I might have if they weren't!

For the regular attack, it is too strong for her to completely stop someone from being able to fight for thirty seconds. That is like paralyzing someone for that long at this stage, which would also be too strong! I think an interesting tilt to suffering would be the idea that it is "all in your head," which could explain why the pain always manifests there. With that in mind, I think her suffering attacks could be headache-based. So insted of 100% stopping someone from attacking, it would be like they just got a massive migraine, making it incredibly hard to focus on fighting (but not stopping them entirely).

For super senshi, there is suddenly a new effect on the attack. First stage, it is all about head pain, but in second, you widen the range, up the duration, and then add an entirely new effect that feels like another power altogether. I would get rid of the 'seeds of doubt' bit and instead focus on cranial suffering. You can just intensify the distracting head pain and say that it is super hard for an enemy combatant to fight accurately during the duration.

For eternal, you need to have a duration on the power. I also think you are encroaching into the territory of other spheres. This attack sounds like it would be for the Senshi of Doubt, and the Senshi of Forgiveness has an attack that basically makes people not want to attack her too. In order to streamline the power set and keep Euclase from bleeding into other areas, I would recommend sticking to the fact that she causes physical suffering in the head of an opponent. At eternal, I think you could perhaps add that the feelings of physical pain are amplified by an emotional component of suffering, but leave that effect up to the player you are fighting.

SO BASICALLY:

Reg: Head Pain, distracting.
Super: Really bad head pain, really distracting.
Eternal: AoE head pain attack that also has an emotional component to it, as determined by the inner turmoil/suffering of each affected person.

I hope that made sense! Let me know if I can clarify anything.

Happy RPing!