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 Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 6:13 am
At the waking of morning, the sun is just rising over the break of the horizon, its orange face stretching across the near black body of water. There's a brisk chill in the air that blows from the ocean, carrying with it the taste of salt and sprinkle of cool water. Beneath the feet of any who may walk the beach, the sand is cold and damp from the previous night where a light drizzle of rain had come in. The looming gray clouds are now in the distance, leaving for a clear sky over heard. And if one were to walk further down the beach, the rocks that shape out great, sharp jetting objects in the distance would come to reveal hidden caves. A place where small crabs come to call shelter to hide from the eyes of predators. As of now, the beach is a serene picture of tranquility, not a soul wanders the beach at this time, the only life in the passing seagulls that fly over head from time to time.
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 10:46 pm
 Rocky Road ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ - - - - - Rocky strolled across the beach, hands in his pockets and humming along to the music he was playing. He headed towards his favourite spot, under the palm tree, where he lay down with his hands behind his head, watching the clouds. Ah, he thought, what better way to start the day than by the beach. It was warm and the heat was starting to get to Rocky as time went by. Before he knew it, he dozed off.
- - - - -Rocky woke up with a jolt. He looked at the sky, and realised that the sun was directly above his head. Shoot, I'm late for my first day! Rocky hurriedly got up and bolted towards the town.
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 11:42 pm
Rexydexy Rocky Road ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ - - - - - Rocky strolled across the beach, (Why is he on the beach?) his direction aimless, just to enjoy the fresh air. With his hands in his pockets and humming along to the music he was playing , he. He headed towards his favourite spot under the palm tree. ( Once again, the question is why? Why is it his favorite spot? There's a reference to him having been here before. Explain.) It was close enough to the water to feel the small sprinkle of water when the waves crashed as while a distance far enough that the water never reached him. where he He lay laid down with his hands behind his head, watching the clouds. Ah, he thought, what better way to start the day than by the beach. (These are thoughts. Put thoughts in italics, [ i ] [ / i ] .) It was warm and the heat was starting to get to Rocky as time went by. Before he knew it, he dozed off. (Several things could be added here; his thoughts before dozing off, whether he dreams or not - if so, what did he dream of? Etc.)
- - - - -Rocky woke up with a jolt. He looked at the sky, and realised that the sun was directly above his head. Shoot, I'm late for my first day! (Thought again should be in italics. Also, first day to what? Explain.) Rocky hurriedly got up and bolted towards the town. (How close is the town? Where in town is he headed? His emotions right now? Etc.)NEXT SCENE: Rocky enters a super market Introduction post like him entering the beach, except now he's at the Super Market, or entering it, or been in it, it's your decision. Just take the information above and see what you can make with your next post. heart heart heart
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Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 4:26 am
The annoying beep of the watch started to play. Rocky stretched as he let out a loud yawn. He let out a groan as he pushed himself to a sitting position. Rocky rubbed his left eye and he squinted his eyes as he looked around his room.Morning already?He took a glance at his watch.Man, 9.00 AM already?
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Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 4:50 am
(( Hah, okay now that was written finely. But you need to work on length~ And using " whenever he's talking. Here I'll reply and give you an example. Remember, try to shoot for at the very least four lines each time. ))  The Reality ◑ The Delusion -
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- Emery, having long escaped the dreaded leash that tied her to her lawn, now sat on the beach staring aimlessly at the water. It was nice, the wind was nice and chilly and made her skin all bumpy to touch - not to mention the sand was fun to play with. On the wind, as she fiddled with the sand between her fingers, she caught a voice. Having been certain she was alone, she sought the source out with great enthusiasm. Indeed there was another, a boy just sitting a ways away who clearly hadn't discovered the fun of sand yet. So she greeted him with a shout. “Hi!!”(( See, it's more then 4 sentences & exactly 4 lines and I remembered to mention why she was doing what she was, and what her thoughts were. Try to describe more when you reply to this. Just read mines carefully and see if you can pick up on the things I used when I wrote it out. (: ))
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Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 5:23 am
Rocky Road ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ - - - - - Rocky had gone to the beach for some fresh air and was laying down on the fine, yellowish sand. The waves crashed below his feet and sent water sprinkling onto his face. Ah, how cooling. Rocky was cloud gazing while talking to himself about he was going to start his adventures on Nirvani Island. As he was halfway through a conversation with himself, he was interrupted by a faint voice that came from a distance. Hmm? Did I just hear a voice? I thought I was the only one here. Rocky pushed himself off the smooth, warm sand and onto his feet. He quickly looked around as he dusted the sand off his grey striped shirt and his gaze finally fell onto a blurry red-haired person who was pretty far away. Is that a girl? The voice does seem to belong to a girl, but who knows. At that, Rocky shrugged and politely waved his arms back in the direction of the red-haired individual and shouted. "Hey!"
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