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 Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 12:59 pm
So i had to write a Acrostic poem (those poems where you choose a word and write off of it)... (LOOK IT UP) for class and it had to be 10 lines or more and i was stumped so i started daydreaming about running through the TARDIS with David Tenant and Matt Smith (awesome daydream) and it came to me WEEPING ANGELS!!! now i live in ohio in the USA so obviously no one will understand it XD well just read it and tell me whatchu think
We move when you blink,
Entirely unseen,
Ending in a weeping stance,
Protected by our shell.
Incarcerated in a glance
Never to be free.
Guardians, the last of our kind.
Angels, we rise
Now moving through our caves,
Gathering up our strength.
Endless training to meet you
Laughing at your attempts to stop us.
Slow down Doctor, it’s our turn to outsmart you.
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 1:51 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 1:53 pm
THANKZ! I put this picture on it hehe 
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 6:09 pm
Really cool poem. biggrin
One question about the image you used, though; are you trying to give your teachers heart attacks? lol
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 7:04 pm
(Clicks on the image filter to remove it, THEN remembers the rule about images of weeping angels. gonk ))
First of all, that's GREAT! I love the poem and, from one writer to another, think that it's fantastic! Brilliant! Molto bene!
As for trying to give your teachers heart attacks, I would rather accuse you of trying to unleash weeping angels on earth.... Why a picture??
Haha just kidding. Really creative. Love it.
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 7:55 pm
Great Poem!!! i scared my teachers one time with a weeping angels thing in computer class though it was really more of me just running out of the room the moment the bell rang screaming to one of my friends " THE ANGELS HAVE THE PHONEBOX!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:23 pm
Trying my hardest not to inject correct lore "twitch" but pretty sweet poem well written.
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:31 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 7:18 am
very awesome :3
Gah! WEEPING ANGEL PIC! (grabs a mirror to bounce the eyes back at it)
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 7:41 pm
Well done, I'd say. I think it's great. (I haven't blinked yet... good for me, I'm not dead.)
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 4:32 pm
A BUNCH OF MANIACKS (sp?) COMMENTED ON MY POEM.... now all we need are some hobos and the Doo Wap girls from the Little Shop of Horrors and my life will be completed!!
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 4:47 pm
Ninja_Cookie_Chan A BUNCH OF MANIACKS (sp?) COMMENTED ON MY POEM.... now all we need are some hobos and the Doo Wap girls from the Little Shop of Horrors and my life will be completed!!
((Answer to your spelling question: Maniacs))
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Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:17 pm
White_Trash_PartyofCanada Ninja_Cookie_Chan A BUNCH OF MANIACKS (sp?) COMMENTED ON MY POEM.... now all we need are some hobos and the Doo Wap girls from the Little Shop of Horrors and my life will be completed!!
((Answer to your spelling question: Maniacs))i WOULD LOVE YOU FOREVER! but i have my own singing bums and doo wop girls cause that's what my towns high school is doing this year... actually this week!! WHOOP and my brother is the dentist hehe
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 11:39 am
Ninja_Cookie_Chan White_Trash_PartyofCanada Ninja_Cookie_Chan A BUNCH OF MANIACKS (sp?) COMMENTED ON MY POEM.... now all we need are some hobos and the Doo Wap girls from the Little Shop of Horrors and my life will be completed!!
((Answer to your spelling question: Maniacs))i WOULD LOVE YOU FOREVER! but i have my own singing bums and doo wop girls cause that's what my towns high school is doing this year... actually this week!! WHOOP and my brother is the dentist hehe
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Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 8:01 pm
haha, love the poem!
but the pic would terrify any teacher~
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