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Vanna1994

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 1:33 pm


Its my first time drawing a picture where two people are touching each other. Its partially for an art trade with a friend, and partially practice for me xd
I plan on practicing more humans intereacting with each other too.

I've restarted this drawing a few times already. Its my oc freaking out, and my friends oc hugging him and trying to comfort him, which is only making him freak out more (Has to do with something tragic in his past)

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http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/Gaia/LastScan-14.jpg
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The first pic is one of my attempts, (Its just a rough sketch of the bodies, everything looks this bad when I first start.. sweatdrop ) So you can kind of get an idea for what the upper bodies are doing (Lower bodies are up for changing). The second is how I decided I think the heads should go and where their bodies need to be. I cannot draw the shoulders and neck though...

Redlines, advice, references, anything is appreciated!

If you want I can get reference pictures of our two oc's I would have to ask my friend permission first
PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 5:13 pm


so, I think the large heads are probably your personal style, am I correct? If not, then they are too big XD
I will (try) to do a redline, but I am not sure how its going to turn out, lol.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 3:56 am


AuroraCelestine
so, I think the large heads are probably your personal style, am I correct? If not, then they are too big XD
I will (try) to do a redline, but I am not sure how its going to turn out, lol.


eh, nothing is very.. consistent with my art. Cant seem to draw the same thing twice xd
My heads are usually not the right size sweatdrop

A redline would be nice, Thanks ^^
PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 4:01 pm


alright, here is the headshot one. I was a little confsued, since this one didn't seem to match up with the other one...
I also don't really know what to do with the neck. I am still http://img861.imageshack.us/i/lastscan21.jpg/
working on the other one.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:51 am


AuroraCelestine
alright, here is the headshot one. I was a little confsued, since this one didn't seem to match up with the other one...
I also don't really know what to do with the neck. I am still http://img861.imageshack.us/i/lastscan21.jpg/
working on the other one.


I seen the last one you did for me in the link too xd
Thanks ^^ Anything will help at this point xd
PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2011 4:52 pm


http://img52.imageshack.us/i/scan0004u.png/
sorry that its not in red, but I just drew it with pencil and was too lazy to go over it again.
anyways, if you can't read the comments, just ask me.
hope this helps! ^^

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PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2011 5:19 pm


AuroraCelestine
http://img52.imageshack.us/i/scan0004u.png/
sorry that its not in red, but I just drew it with pencil and was too lazy to go over it again.
anyways, if you can't read the comments, just ask me.
hope this helps! ^^


Thanks ^^
I've actually set this drawing aside for a while, but I will probably be doing something like this later on (Ive managed to get quite a few different ideas, so Im trying to catch up on them all XD)
PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2011 6:45 pm


Alright.
yeah I know the feeling, I have like 4 or 5 different projects going on right now. Its hard to keep up.

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