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[Q] Jin the Harionago Demon (Ready) [Crits Please!]

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stella cinere

Ice-Cold Codger

PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 8:16 pm


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

User ImageName: Jinsuzu Kurochi
Nicknames: Jin. (any other name he will find a way of disposing you.)
Gender: Male
Age: Looks around 16-17

Faction/Race Demon- Harionago

Personality: Jin is a real son of a b***h all around snob and when it comes to getting what he wants its either his way or the highway not that he particularly cares for your opinion on that matter. He is blunt, cold, and would rather prefer if you didn't approach and attempt to talk to him unless he asks you to. Though some people seem to lack this understanding in which just annoys him to no end. He would rather work alone, and views the majority of others as nothing more than servants to serve his needs. Jin will however be give in public respect to those who he deems is on his level or higher, other than that he will look down on anyone else. Jin doesn't particularly like those who are on his level or higher he just presents respect due to his family status. He would rather be higher than them, and will do any sort of underhanded scheme, use his status and/or pumpkin seeds, his own abilities to become higher than them.

He is very vain and knows he is rather gorgeous (though apparently not as gorgeous as his brother). He takes particular care in his appearance, being rather neat, and rather somewhat expensive looking to his taste. He abhors the idea of having to wear some sort of grungy, hole like clothing, or even having to go to gym class and sweat. He will avoid getting dirty or having to touch anything he finds is disgusting. Jin takes particular care of his hair, he pretty much coddles it when it comes to its appearance and will make sure that it has the upmost care in looking perfect. This doesn't mean he won't treat it like a servant, if he has to do anything that involves touching dirt or etc. he would rather get his hair to do it then getting dirt under his nails.

Despite his rather vain and cold nature Jin is highly intelligent demon he just merely chooses not to put all of his effort into classes. He has a rather remarkable memory and an eye to tell even littlest detail in others and objects, it is impossible to get a fake or copy without him noticing. Jin is rather realistic in view he doesn't tend to believe in dreams or fate but rather the facts over the matter.

If anyone manages to become a friend to Jin, in which is a rarity on his own, he is particularly loyal to them. He will never admit to helping them or even considering them as a friend however he will secretively make sure that if any trouble comes their way that he does what he can to help them but prefers if they do not know about it.
Those who ask for favors will find that nothing is free that everything has a price.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Jin is only there because his parents unfortunately told him he had to attend, if it was his choice he would be anywhere but Amityville. He comes from a rather prominent/rich demon family whose interest is more for political and gain of friends and associates than being there solely to learn. Nevertheless he is there mainly to get some lessons, meet some other demons, and probably not want to be in class.
Classes that he won't admit he wants to take:
-Botany Basics and Great Works of the 20th Century

Other Various Info:

History/Family: He comes from a rather old and traditional family of Harionagos who have rather been successful in haunting Japan years ago. He has one older brother whom he seems to show a rather great dislike for, considering he has long black colored hair and pale skin and seems to have a bit more luck in attracting ladies than himself. His brother is also his father's favorite considering he is the eldest and will have more control over the family where as Jin will be the one to get what is left over. Jin on the other hand seems to be favored more so by his mother (in other words he is a bit of a momma's boy). He takes particular interest in the finer things like she does such as teas, silks, art, and etc.

Quirks: Doesn't like to touch things with his hands unless he has to, instead he would rather use his hair when he can. He can be seen relaxing with a cup of tea using his hair to hold and pour the teapot while holding a book with another part of his hair. He loves his hair and will take extreme care over it (it's like his most prized possession). He can be seen combing it late at night and pampering it in the shower. Jin hates mornings, in fact the worse time of day to even attempt to speak to him is in the morning, he can be rather fierce and over all the worse person to even try to wake up.
Likes: Tea, reading, pretty things, novels, music, pumpkin seeds, things taken from the human world, and his hair.

Odd Facts: He hates that his hair color is white for various reason, one of them is the complaint that it's so hard to keep clean (especially when he battles or it decides to not listen and drag on the ground in a manner of protest).

Despite being a stickler in dressing to impress when he is in the comforts of his own room he is very fond of wearing a loose robe similar to a kimono or nagajuban with his hair free to do as it pleases. He likes to wear as little as possible seeing it as his choice of freedom however he does warn if you come looking for him there is a good chance he will answer the door that way, not that he has any shame. Obviously he is rather hard to embarrass and would be happy to play a rather cunning seductive male.

His Dislikes: The poor and slime.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 8:19 pm


FEAR:
Fear First Year: Jin can manipulate his hair to do whatever he wants (most of the time sometimes it seems to rather reject what he wants), it can pick up things, wrap around objects and etc.

Various uses: He can use his hair as a shield, or as one large sword like entity or several smaller daggers/needles. It can wrap around objects and or others (like grabbing an ankle and tripping them), it can also ball up together and act like a fist to punch someone in the gut. Jin can also swing it around like a whip, and it is capable of holding on to something like a hook, or a dagger and is rather dangerous if he is wielding something sharp and swinging it around.

Limits: Water makes his hair rather heavy and harder to move quickly, however it is however dangerous if it tangles up and punches you in the gut. This is also a ranged weapon, it will on extend to as far as his hair can go (so if his hair is 6 feet long he can only attack to 6 feet).

Fear for Later Years: Tough Love Hair: Jin can make his hair even tougher beyond that of regular hair (his hair is rather tougher than common scissors however when he uses his fear it becomes even tougher). As a weapon it is extremely durable, strong, hard, and surprisingly flexible when need be (think of it as strands of extremely tough material yet flexible like string, when they bond together they become even tougher). This typically only last about three hours currently usually after that his hair starts to lose its ability to hold its strength.

stella cinere

Ice-Cold Codger


stella cinere

Ice-Cold Codger

PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 8:19 pm


Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Right eyes is black with red pupil with a red rune marking underneath, and his left that is typically covered by long sweeping bangs is a regular eye with red pupil.
Hair Colour/Style: White with a hint of gold coloring to it (almost like white to blonde instead of the usually white to silver). Tied up with a red ribbon. He has long sweeping bangs to the left and two chest length strands on each side of his face that tend to float around doing whatever needed.
Skin Colour: Dark, tan like.
Clothing Style/Colours: Black coat with gold outlining and red satin on the inside, large collar and wide sleeves. He wears a belt on the outside of it with the skull pendant hanging on a gold chain. The shoulders of the coat has black raven feathers that hang from a gold band. Black almost knee height boots with gold trimmings. Black pants with a red pin stripped vest with two sky blue gems with gold outlining and chain hanging on the end of the vest. A white shirt underneath with a sky blue gem charm with a black neck tie underneath the vest only showing around his neck.
Extra: Horns, a little more pointy and black to red colour. He has a red like marking/tattoo under his right eye.
References: *Chibi on first post for appearance A few sketches sketch
PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 10:25 pm


Open <3

stella cinere

Ice-Cold Codger


Muffinsbaby

Dapper Lunatic

PostPosted: Tue May 17, 2011 10:27 am


This is more of a comment then a crit, because I'm horrible at them. I haven't RPed here before so I dont know what is good with the setting of the shop. ><

He sounds, for lack of better words, insanely awesome. xD You've hit a lot of points very well. But what does he do when he's forced to touch something with his hands? What will happen if his hair gets cut (in halloween it will grow back shortly, I just wanna know his reaction)?

Does he secretly like plants too?!?! He has a lot of the same likes as my quest, Rizzie~! That just got me excited. xD
PostPosted: Tue May 17, 2011 4:32 pm


Thank you muffins! No worries I haven't rped other than in the meta with E5 either <3

When he is forced to touch something with his hands that he doesn't like he will glare with a deep intensity of hate and will complain. He doesn't mind touching things that he enjoys or likes such as books or something pretty but otherwise he would rather not.

His hair is extremely hard to cut but if it happens he would be beyond pissed to the point of wanting revenge for someone harming his precious hair. He would probably do something in return that they wouldn't like and be moody for the next month at everyone.

He doesn't like plants per-say but he secretly loves flowers especially those he considers dark but lovely such as the humans call roses.

I'll have to check Rizzie out! <3

stella cinere

Ice-Cold Codger


x-Asylum Error-x

Fatcat

PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2011 10:40 am


I love Jin. I love his race, appearance, attitude, FEAR, everything. I have no crits, honestly.
Questions...
"views the majority of others as nothing more than servants to serve his needs"
What about the group not in that majority? Like what if Jin met a girl(or boy w/e) that he honestly liked. What would he do? Is there somewhere deep,deep,deep down where Jin isn't a jerk?
PostPosted: Thu May 26, 2011 6:46 pm


Thank you!

He might treat them a little nicer but this would have to be someone he saw as an equal as well someone he felt very comfortable around. It would also take someone a lot of time dealing with him and probably just as stubborn about sticking to him.

stella cinere

Ice-Cold Codger


demon_pachabel

Beloved Werewolf

PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 10:00 am


Muffinsbaby
What will happen if his hair gets cut (in halloween it will grow back shortly, I just wanna know his reaction)?


For clarity, this isn't the case. The one student who did have this happen has her hair-manipulation as her natural ability, which included its growth back. Otherwise people couldn't get hair cuts!

However, I have a question on the front of his status-mongering (AKA attempting to climb the ladders of social status); How would he fare meeting people who he cannot out-status by any means, such as the horsemen who have Hybrid status as well as esteemed status with their connection to the end of the world?
PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2011 10:39 am


Thank you pach <3

He would treat those like the horsemen with respect he knows that he cannot gain a higher status above theirs but he also knows that treating them poorly would not fair in his favor. He would rather grin and treat them politely then make them his enemy.

Jin would react poorly to his hair getting cut.

stella cinere

Ice-Cold Codger

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