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Unohana Retsu Taichou

PostPosted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 11:09 am


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Name: Yoi
Actual Age:
Appearance Age:
Gender:
Sexuality:
Personality: Yoi is a very shy yet happy individual. She finds it hard to become mad at others even when they deserve it, though she's shown to be quite harsh with several Rukongai residents in the past.
Bio: Being born in Japan, Yoi was a top Medical student in the Mie University, School of Medicine. Yoi became quickly involved with medical research and acquired man honour's during her time. She was engaged when she was knifed on her way home from a lecture. She is now apart of the fourth squad medical team.

Theme Song:
Division: Fourth
Rank: Fourth


Appearance

Height: 5'3"
Weight: 110 lbs
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Usual Clothing: Pink Kimono
Reiatsu Color: Dark Pink
Zanpakutō Position: Under Kimono
Other Appearance:
Accessories:


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Zanpakutō

  • Name:

    あわいかげ Awaikage Light Shadow

    [Left Blade あっさりした Assarishita - Light] [Right Blade ひかげ Hikage - Shadow]

    [Combined - Awaikage]

    • Zanpakutō Element:

      Light / Dark / Sight Manipulation

    • Sealed Appearance:

      Either of her blades take the form of a Wakizashi, she hides them under her kimono and are often never seen by anyone. Either sheath is decorated in an old Japanese style baring light and dark manifestations.

    • Zanpakutō Spirit:Awaikage

    Shikai
    • Release Command: [Breakdown]
    • Physical Changes:

      Upon releasing, Assarishita dissolves into a burst of what light, and Hikage into a burst of black light. They swirl around her for a moment before both transform into very long white and black blades. Each one glows with an omnious feel.

    • Shikai Special Ability:

      While the main focus is light and dark based attacks, it also has power to distort ones vision. One ability that is not classed as marked, is that she is able to use these blades to attack as normal, with each hit of the blade sending off either a light burst of energy or a dark burst of energy.

      • Shikai Abilities

        • くろい Kuroi Hikage consumes Assarishita, creating two black blades. Either blade transforms back into pure spiritual pressure and creates a covering over a certain area that is completely void of sight. While in this domain of pitch darkness, abilities that would normally create light are useless, such as demon magic or fire. However, Yoi is able to see.

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    • Obtained?:

  • Bankai
    • Extended Name: Breakdown Reality
    • Physical Changes: Either sword appear as a dark and light wing on Yoi's back.
    • Bankai Special Ability:

      Unknown

      • Bankai Abilities:

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    • Obtained?: No

Powers and Abilities

  • Medical Expert:

    Yoi is highly advance in the field of medicine. She can easily cure most minor injuries completely on her own.

  • Highly Intelligent:

    Yoi is shown to be extremely intelligent in all regards.



Unique Abilities

  • None

Miscellaneous Information
  • Likes: Yoi loves medicinal teas and also cuddling next to someone.
  • Dislikes: Horror and fighting in general.
  • Fears: Large bugs and horses.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 9:57 pm


~I'd like to point out that I want to have my character grow and learn new abilities. Meaning that as I do training and I'm about to get my character to learn abilities, I'll post them and get approval first. Hiraka told me this was fine.~

Unohana Retsu Taichou


Dan the Dante
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 11:40 pm


That's quite alright. My RPC, Hibiki, and other RPCs have underwent several zanpakuto modifications/upgrades over the years as well.

Shikai
1. How intense is the distortion? Is it the likes of desert mirages or something in the level of Kuchiki Kouga?
2. How powerful is the energy bursts from the swords? And are there significant differences between light and dark energy bursts, aside from the change in color?
3. Kuroi is a bit overpowered for a Shikai ability, me thinks. It's basically on the same level as Tosen's Bankai, except Yoi can still see, which is quite a disadvantage as the opponent cannot create artificial light themselves.

Bankai
1. Might want to put at least one Bankai ability, even a fairly general one so as to create a grasp on the scope of its abilities.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:11 am


~Perhaps I'll put that as a Bankai ability then.~

Unohana Retsu Taichou


II The Metal Alchemist II

PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 5:05 am


I agree with Dante, that ability is a bit too strong for a simple shikai attack.

Also, answering the questions Dante has put forward is something that is also needed.

Besides this, I see nothing else wrong, it is lacking but we've already gone over that.
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