|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 4:41 pm
I drew this a while ago but I would still like some critique on it.
It's not perfect, I know, but I just would like to improve.
Thanks!
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:05 pm
Is this a male or female? The bulge in the center of the next area looks like an adams apple. Mouth could use a few touches, but other than that it's great.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:18 pm
Ritsuka Hakurei Is this a male or female? The bulge in the center of the next area looks like an adams apple. Mouth could use a few touches, but other than that it's great.
Thanks c:
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 9:47 pm
I'll find what I've been searching for...
I think he looks a tad feminine. That could just be the hair though?
Also, the back of the hair has no volume. The top is good, but the bottom where it starts getting long just flattened out. It's like it's suctioned to his neck. Make more hair back there. biggrin
Aside from that, it's good for a basic headshot. It's just kind of plain though. But that should be expected from a colorless headshot. It would look fine if it was colored/finished/shaded/had a background.
...Whatever that is.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 9:58 pm
Uriel Ledon I'll find what I've been searching for...
I think he looks a tad feminine. That could just be the hair though?
Also, the back of the hair has no volume. The top is good, but the bottom where it starts getting long just flattened out. It's like it's suctioned to his neck. Make more hair back there. biggrin
Aside from that, it's good for a basic headshot. It's just kind of plain though. But that should be expected from a colorless headshot. It would look fine if it was colored/finished/shaded/had a background.
...Whatever that is. Ohh, I see now. Thanks! Yeah, I did color it and stuff upon my father's request, but then he took it before i could scan it in. xD
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
