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KagaminoKakera

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 5:15 pm


Disclaimer: i do not own YYH or any of its characters however i own my oc and other oc's that are in this story and i should say no more since everyone knows i don't own anything other than my own creation and characters. so why continue?

The Falling Perfection

Written by, Shadowz Mourning

Chapter 1 Fading Humans A Doll That Could be Evil



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She was like a doll something that anyone would want the strange thing is that no one wanted her. Why? she was an evil girl she had many dark stories to tell she was pale as if she was dead. She was cold and heartless and care none for those who aknowledge her. She was like a procelin doll. she was nothing more than an emotionless doll to herself and everyone around her. Sometimes people even think of her as the living dead. she was just too perfect in everything pitch olive black hair and straight like silk. Burning cold blue eyes clear as crystals. She had pale creamy skin smoothe like the petals of a white rose and soft like cotton clouds above. She would trail the dark hallways by herself of course everyone envied her jealous of her beauty, and mostly angered that they were not as perfect as she. Even the most perfect person in the world there are flaws and other images that were not perfect.

Even she did not know how wrong perfection was. she didn't know that. A strange silver maned demon with clear golden eyes and a silver tonic watched her disappear following her as if he was knocked into her trance a spell that he could not break out of. She was just human right? There was nothing wrong with be a perfect human right? Of course she was too good to believe. Even in his demon form the girl was mysterious and cold hearted it reminded him back then and now it was more than a fleeting image. He had changed in many ways the Dark and evil cold-hearted Kitsune Thief he was no more. He had grown attached to the world he protected and that he would die saving it. Ningenkai has become his new base and his new home well to him anyways he wasn't so sure. He continued to follow the female his goldenrod eyes staring at her from the distance. Something about her something was wrong and off. She was not human.

She had long knew that she was being followed sighing and started to walk faster there was no use in panicking and running right away. She had to make sure the aura was okay and that she wouldn't get harmed by them or whoever is there. She continued to stare at the ground as she walked faster her eyes were flowing down the dark alleyways. She wasn't ready to attack or anything trying he best to keep her guard up without wasting any time. Her clear ocean eyes were still scanning knowing that something was in the lurks perhaps she would find out soon enough. She found her way towrds a cream colored hous a small house. The house was welcoming and very cozy to her words. she still didn't think that he would follow her that far. She was starting to get paranoid again. But it was better to be safe than sorry right? Taking some more steps she was at the front of her house reached into her backpack and pulled out a silver metal key and opened the door. She looked behind her yet again there was no one.

He stopped immedietly and hid himself into the darkness and looked at her from afar. He stared at her again and looked at his shining compact communicator. There was something definately wrong with this girl but he wasn't sure what. His Silver white Kitsune ears started to twitch in annoyance as much as he liked stalking this female it was a pain to stay hidden. He took it and flipped it open staring a the buzzing screen for a few more moments. Then a small face of a baby wearing a large oversized blue hat with the words Jr. stamped on it and his eyes were closed in his mouth was a Pacifier and he was sucking on it when the Kitsune called.

"Kurama much to be obliged, how's the mission?" he asked looking at the demon.

"It seems she was more than a human to me, she's too perfect..." he replied softly.

"So it seems call up Yusuke and Kuwabara and Hiei too, I think that they would like to help with this since the girl is very mysterious with her actions and deeds got it?" he asked the Kitsune and looked at the papers in his hands.

"Alright," Kurama replied as he shutted off the communitcator. He then changed back to the emerald eyed and ruby maned human and went a hand through his hair. He then called the others it seems Yusuke and Kuwabara weren't so confident as for Hiei he wasn't even responding. Only with a mere 'Hn,' and he was gone from the screen in the matter of ten minutes the whole Tentai was standing there with their glued eyes on the house. Hiei took his lead and disappeared from them and appeared on a tree spying on the female.

+Her Room+

She wasn't happy having her mother scream her a** off at her was not funny it wasn't even worth the laughs. Sighing she threw her uniform off and tossed on an oversized T-shirt and shorts grabbed her keys and headed towards the front of her house leaving her room knowing that someone was spying at her from afar in the tree. Taking a soft growl she threw her jacket on and headed out towards the park usually she would get her stalkers to get out here but she wasn't so sure yet. Her Clear eyes truely saying there was nothing to worry about but she though otherwise. She ran an inhuman speed towards the park into the forest of the park and knowing her stalkers they were following her too. She was really enjoying this game of Cat and Mouse. She wondered who these strange humans or demons are. Simply she would have to elimnate them as she finished with her duties.

+Tentai+

"Didja see that? She was like gone in like two seconds! I wonder if she's faster than shorty?" a male tall with Orangered hair and beady black eyes. He resemebled a Elvis Reject and there he stood in his blue scool uniform.

"Shut up Kuwabara we know that," a male dark raven black hair filled with gel and brown orbs and a cocky face. that was just someone they didn't want to mess with he had danger written on his face all over.

"So Urameshi I don't see you going any faster!" Kuwabara shouted.

"Guys let's go," the calm fox demon said as they headed towards the fox even they didn't know what they were against. She was merely a female that was going to toy with them sadly they did not know of this and heading out they dashed towards the flowing of her scent, violets lilacs and lavenders. They reached a clearing nothing to be seen. Her scent long gone and the base of the forest was where it all connected. They glanced splitted up a little form each other and started walking towards different directions. They had to find this female what was she why was she here and most importantly why was she intriguing all the Tentai? Even Hiei held a small interest for her whatever she was she was strong enough for them to conclude she wasn't human and respect her.

"If this is what is following this one then I should have eliminated you all at once," said a voice it was soft and cold mysterious. The girl landed on her feet and smirking at them, "well, well, well what has he graced with me this time more lackeys?" she asked looking at the team. It was quite a scene to take they were surprised as she was smirking.

"Who are you?" Yusuke shouted at her raising his index finger.

"Ohohoohho, Yusuke Urameshi top dog Reikai Tentai leader of the team and winner of the Dark Tournement how entertaining," she smirked as she flipped in front of them her clear blue eyes were showing much interest in this team seems that they were more powerful then they let on. She knew that someone was following her just she didn't know who. Now she did her dark blue eyes narrowed into a hating expression it was clear to her they were out and after her this was going to be something hse would not forget. Smirking she leaned against the tree.

"Now then show me what the team he has can do to me," she sneered baring her inhuman fangs. She was interested in making these people attack her after all she was watching them knowing nothing of them until now it was an advantage she was going to take.

"You're asking for it!" Yusuke shouted as she dashed towards her his fist raised and ready to punch her. She flipped from the tree and Yusuke ended up getting the tree instead of the girl. She was standing where Kuwabara was and he simply 'meeped' as he fell on his feet and she almost cut his head off. She stepped on his back and flipped again and this time she was met with a Katana.

"oh one against four huh? I will remember this, ahhahahahahahahah," she laughed in a maniac like way.


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Cliffy...

Gomen ne this is my first fiction it's weird and random but i promise it will get better... Xp

R and R please and i shall work my way up updating ... BTW i revised the Chapter and all that so please no need to get angry at my mistakes i caught them mostly. well i hoped you like it comments flames and anything i should work on would be nice

-ShadowzMourning
PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 5:18 pm


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