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[Q] Avalon Page of Earth/Tate Konstantin (CRIT ME)

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shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer

PostPosted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:24 pm



Arthur my king lay dying,
his golden crown was broken.
Came three witches on eagles' wings
To carry him home to Avalon.

Avalon, Avalon, where Merlin's magic burns bright!
There yet reigns our good king: Arthur, the truest knight!

Stay safe, sweet child, in thine angel's care
As gently thy life moves on,
Till that day when through the air
He shall bring thee to Avalon.

Tate Konstantin
PostPosted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:27 pm


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Knight Title: Avalon Page

Planet: Earth

Challenge: Thinking:
The wind and the stars are crying for Avalon!
Every step brings me closer to Avalon.
A hate-filled heart could never bear Avalon.

Uniform:
Top -- Avalon's top is an off-the-shoulder tunic over the traditional Shittenou uniform. bottom left for the uniform I'm thinking of.
Bottoms -- Traditional Shittenou pants, see the above reference, tucked into her boots.
Gloves -- No. Despite the miscolored ref over here. Avalon has wraps around her knuckles, to protect them from damage.
Belt -- Belt. In the same brown as her boots and accents. The buckle is similar to the Tara brooch, but much simpler and in gold.
Shoes -- Knee-high heeled boots in brown leather.
Shoulders -- Nothing in her first stage.
Accessories -- None in her first stage.

Weapon:
Page: An apple. It's just an apple. What do you think it does?

Squire: A wand, made of apple wood from the Tree of Avalon. There is a vine motif carved into it. Yes, it is like Harry Potter. Avalon can now grant a minor strength boost to herself or any ally simply by pointing the wand their way. It lasts for one minute, and affects one person at a time.

Knight: A staff, made of apple wood from the Tree of Avalon. In appearance, it is most similar to Gandalf the Gray's staff, but the crystal at the top is reddish and shaped similarly to an apple. Avalon can now grant a decent strength boost by indicating an ally with her staff. It lasts for one minute, and can affect up to three people at once.

Main Color: Misty green
Secondary Color: White
Accent Color: Warm brown

shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer


shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer

PostPosted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 1:21 am


READY FOR CRIT.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:35 pm


Alright, I love the hell out of the apple -> wand -> staff progression. It's unusual, it's unique, and it makes so much sense as you've explained it (apple to apple wood, all from Avalon). Uniform design is love. Appropriate, and a nice simple base that Natsu/other artists can go nuts with in later stages.

I would like some clarification on whether Avalon is granting a physical strength boost, or an overall-wellbeing boost? Is it just making them punch harder, or is it an overall 'wow, I feel 120%' thing? Was also wondering if there's a time limit to the boosts, or a limit on many allies she can strengthen at once?

kalindara


shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer

PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 9:31 pm


It's basically a "Wow! I feel 120%" thing. I should add a time limit, too... I was thinking about a minute, though. 8|a And probably one ally as a squire, but three-ish as a knight? Hmm. 8|a
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 9:48 pm


Sounds good to me ^_^

kalindara


Akina Tokuwa

PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2011 9:31 pm


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