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PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:39 am


Name Ms. Ruby Greywind
Gender Female
Age Appears to be 28, Is really over 1,000 years old
Species Alien, from the Negamoon or Black Moon [Sailor moon Reference]
Occupation Cirque du Noire Fortune Teller

Appearance Her skin is smooth and blemish free. In color, it is a pale, almost white tone. It stays that way, since most of her time in the sun, she carries a parasol. On her forehead is a black creasent moon like this. Her hair is red color, with orange highlights. A red bow holds back a few locks of hair. In her ears, she wears earrings that are either round and red and gold in color, or longer black earrings in a silver setting. The black earrings are made of Jakokusuishou (Evil Black Crystal) found on her home planet and worn by everyone in the Royal family. [Seen here]. Her eyes are a deep red color. Occasionally, she wears a dark red or black ribbon around her neck. Her clothing of choice is a silk gown dyed a deep red to match her eyes. Its style is that of the 1800s France. The arm of the gown is relatively short, and puffy. Around the bottom of the gown and sleeves, as well as the waist is black lace. She wears black gloves that cover only the hands, and is seen always carrying either a parasol of pink and red or black, or a small fan made of red silk and bamboo from China. A Ruby broach either hangs around her neck or is secured to her gown at chest level.
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Personality Raised as royalty, she demands respect from those who talk to her. She is otherwise very friendly and laid back.

Abilities Aura Reading, Fire Manipulation, Healing, and Fortune Telling. She is also pretty good with hand to hand combat

Weaknesses Quick temper

Backstory After divorcing her first husband, Ruby left the comfort of her palace to explore earth a little. Upon seeing the Cirque du Noire and hearing rumors that it needed a talented fortune teller, she applied for the possision. The rest is history so to speak.

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Sample Ruby sighed in frustration as she looked at the third card. Every night she would spend hours trying to get a reading for herself. And every night, every attempt, her future was replaced by the Joker card. It was as if the cards were trying to tell her she was a fool for trying.

She looked up between her attempts to see Alexander walking around half naked. The expression on her face did not change anymore. She was used to him walking around like that now. "It is freezing outside..put some clothes on." She looked back to her cards and tried again as Alexander looked over her shoulder. "These damned cards won't ever tell me my future. They'd rather mock me!" She threw the cards down and turned to face Alexander. "Ready for me to heal those wounds?"
PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:16 am


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Rubi, I need to ask you to put a looot more to this. Especially the descriptions and backstory. There's just..well..to be honest, there really isn't anything to them.

Just some points

[x] What sort of alien is she? This is more out of curiosity than anything else. If she does not originate from Gaia, where does she come from?

[x] Her appearance needs a looot more too it. Describe anything you can about her. Texture of her hair, complextion, height, body build, facial structure, scars, birth marks, as much as you can so that we get a clear image of your character in our heads. (Note - the picture is just there for clarification. I still want to be able to imagine your character from the description.)

● With what you gave for her personality, she seems a bit flat. I'm sure there's more to her personality than that. What are some quirks she has? Things that irritate her. Things she loves, you know, things like that. You can't describe your own personality in a few adjectives, can you?

● Does she have any physical weaknesses? Where would she fall short in a fight? This isn't much of a biggy, just something I noticed.

● You said before she was raised as royalty. Why not go deeper into that? Talk about her childhood, her former marriage, how she got into divination. Don't be afraid to ramble about her past, we want to hear that.



Hope those points help you. I'll check back later. heart

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Sparkling Gemstone Anon

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:14 pm


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>.>; ok I'll work on it lolz


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:08 pm


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Appearance looks good...though...eeerr..is it necessary for you to use a reference from another canon? sweatdrop

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Sparkling Gemstone Anon

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 8:40 pm


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Well, I made her to be the daughter of Prince Dimande....so..um....^^;


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:00 pm


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Hmmm...well...do you think you can alter her a little? XD Cause...nooffense...I don't think the canons line up very well. sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:08 pm


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er...I think it needs to be...a bit more creative.
.3.; use your imagination dear...let's not...use characters from other stuff.


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:21 pm


There's a useful tip someone gave me. If you were to be the viewer/reader of someone's profile/biography/background, write down any questions you may ask yourself as you read. So, I read through your profile, and came across a few questions myself. If you can answer them, you'll be able to fill up your profile easily (that's what I do with mine, lol).

Personality: I could see why she joins the circus. She want to earn back that status she lost. That's why she demands respect from other people. For what reason does she have a friendly/laid-back personality?

Abilities: Since you're an Alien (which can explain her various abilities), I would like to know whether these said abilities are prominent in Negamoon. If not, for what reason does she pick up these abilities? Is it just out of interest? Is it just a natural gift? Or is it for survival?

Backstory: What makes Earth/Gaia so interesting that she had to leave her planet (or moon in this case)? Is the divorce "more" than what it seems in Negamoon in comparison to Earth?

Anyway, I could have easily just removed the whole Sailor Moon reference with something else. Like, put a star on your forehead and pretend your race is of those star people of Gaia's (Saiph, Gemini Twins, Cygnus, etc). xD

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Sparkling Gemstone Anon

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:57 am


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Aw but I dunt wanna change her ;-; I spent years developing her based on my adoration of Sailor Moon xD

She gets her powers/abilities by channeling them from the Ruby around her neck. I have noticed the personality needs work though. sort of contradictory. Ums....what else...I havent put much into the story of the divorce, though I suppose I need to. Looks like I has alot of writing to do *le sigh*


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