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[Q] It Came from the Wishing Fountain (Critique Please?)

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Randy2love

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:56 am


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORMUser Image

Name: Zelther
Nicknames: Zelth
Gender: Male
Age: 13

Faction/Race Monster

Personality: Zelth is a very confused little creature. Spawned by some rogue magic in the wishing well of a witch's potion, he just swam up to the surface one day. At first he ate minipets to survive until he was caught by the witch whose pets he was eating.

Seeing how her magic was what spawned the swamp creature, the witch took him in. He eagerly accepted her as his mother and coddled up to her. He's learned as much as the hermit witch could teach but he wants to know more.

He considers himself Wanda's older brother. She's another swamp creature that the witch took in. He's very protective of her and although she can clearly handle herself, he likes to make sure she's alright. He hopes they can get accepted into school together so they don't have to be alone.

He decides who he likes by looking at their aura which he calls 'Intent'. Since he is very out going he wants nothing more then to make friends. He's not too sure on relationships. He only knows what people have told him and that isn't much. He adores water and anyone who can do anything with it is instantly on his list of people to get to know. He loves to spar and swimming contest make him extraordinary happy.

He does tend to get angry if he looses and has a habit of biting things he both likes and dislikes. It makes his minipets shy away from him when he's over zealously affectionate which is often. What are love bites to him are rather dangerous with his sharp teeth.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? The witch is the one who directed Zelther toward the Academy. She wanted both of her swamp kids to learn more about their FEAR powers and become good members of society. Not to mention make friends.

Zelth is interested in finding friends and joining clubs. He'll be most interested in swimming club or classes about the History of Halloween Town and the creatures that live in it.

FEAR: Zeath can create a ball (roughly the size of a soccerball) out of water. This has teeth and an evil glower but it doesn't do anything other then splash the opponent. He's hoping that eventually it'll turn into something that can actually bite and inflict pain.

Natural Ability: Zelth can 'sense' someone's intentions with his orange eye, such as if someone has a 'good' aurora or a bad one. For example if someone was intending to hurt him he would sense it with a colorful aura. White is a good intent, gray is a meh, and black means that they are very dangerous.

Physical Description:
Eye Colour: One eye black and a normal kind of bugged out eye. The other one is actually a hallow space with a glowing orange pinprick.
Hair Colour/Style: Tawny brown
Skin Colour: Greenish-brown. Very braken skin.
Clothing Style/Colours: He wears mostly what he found. Rags and moss. He doesn't normally wear clothes if he can help it. It makes it hard to swim.
Extra: His deepset eye. He has otter like hands and feet along with a corcodile tail. His teeth are extremely sharp and large making him look very frightening.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:48 am


Zether's Minis

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. Ashley- A very good ghost dog that he found while exploring. He tired to eat her but went right through. Confused, he tried to leave but she just kept on following him. He likes her now and she's fun to hug when she's solid.
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Can- Can is Zelther's pet goat. He didn't want to eat him, rather Can headbutted some boils that were picking on him. He likes to stick close to the goat and the goat likes to eat his-well everything! He ate a can when Zelth first met him and thus got his name.


User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.-Bubble! Zelth found Bubble in the fountain. He thought the thing was a ball for a while and played with it in the water until it hatched. One look at each other and a flashing grin of sharp teeth and well... its safe to say Bubble is one fish off the menu. They love to swim together.

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Ask Zelther

Randy2love


Aeyote

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 5:10 am


Very well fleshed out for what you can answer about him. The only things I see that need to be worked on are what he is and his Fear.

When he uses his water ball does it cut the opponent with the fangs or does it just splash and get them wet. You can expand off of this and perhaps have some minor control over water with it. And maybe his Natural Ability should be his special fear. Unless whatever else of his race can also see illusions. Maybe you can make your own species and everything could pretty be your own playground.

Also his name. <3 It's intriguing and I'd like to know what it means / where you saw it / or is you just made it up?
PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 5:16 am


Tripp_Trapp
Very well fleshed out for what you can answer about him. The only things I see that need to be worked on are what he is and his Fear.

When he uses his water ball does it cut the opponent with the fangs or does it just splash and get them wet. You can expand off of this and perhaps have some minor control over water with it. And maybe his Natural Ability should be his special fear. Unless whatever else of his race can also see illusions. Maybe you can make your own species and everything could pretty be your own playground.

Also his name. <3 It's intriguing and I'd like to know what it means / where you saw it / or is you just made it up?


Thanks, I made him up after I made that first sketch. Fell in love with his design.

That does sound line an idea. I could make it just a splash ball that just happen to have a face. It could be really distracting for a bit.

Mm, yah I was going to turn him into his own race of Swamp Monster. He's just kind of created out of nothing so he doesn't really have a *race* per se. He's one of a kind. Though I wouldn't be adverse to sharing him.

Ah, his name. I made that up! It was originally "Zealther" Which is Stealth but with a 'Z' stuck in instead of an 'S'. I don't like the way it rolls off the tongue and it sounds too awkward so I changed it to Zel-ther. I think 'Zelth' flows a lot nicely while still keeping the original meaning and same kind of tone to it.

Randy2love


Aeyote

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 5:25 am


You're right it does sound cool. <3

And true. If he is indeed his own one of a kind race he could name his own kind. If others wish to be one of him they can ask for for permission. Perhaps all of his race are created when certain magic or potions are mixed with water from that fountain? They could be the creations of alchemy as well. :3 Just another idea. XD
PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 6:01 am


Tripp_Trapp
You're right it does sound cool. <3

And true. If he is indeed his own one of a kind race he could name his own kind. If others wish to be one of him they can ask for for permission. Perhaps all of his race are created when certain magic or potions are mixed with water from that fountain? They could be the creations of alchemy as well. :3 Just another idea. XD


Gawd, you are awesome! I'll have to see if that's permissible!

Randy2love


Aeyote

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 6:20 am


Just wanna help out. <3 Glad I could be of some help .
PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 4:35 am


Tripp_Trapp
Just wanna help out. <3 Glad I could be of some help .


Updated his FEAR and ability! Along with some personality! What do you think? <3

Randy2love


Aeyote

PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:20 am


He looks great! You can keep adding small things that you think of to make him even better. I like that he loves to give 'love bites'. It's adorable.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:46 am


Tripp_Trapp
He looks great! You can keep adding small things that you think of to make him even better. I like that he loves to give 'love bites'. It's adorable.


Haw, he thinks everyone enjoys love bites. The bleeding is their LOVE. OOOZING OUT. 8D;;

Randy2love


Aeyote

PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:31 am


LOL Too right.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 7:24 am


Buaha, updated with minis, an ask Zelth AND new plot ideas! 8D;

Randy2love


Randy2love

PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 2:39 pm


Zether got some fancy art! Also linked to Wanda's profile and updated his history some.
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