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 Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:16 pm
I was trying a different style with this one. I also did it very quickly this time, instead of asking for oppinions for each and every step rolleyes
I did alot of new and different things for this and I just want to see what everyone thinks :3 ((normal critiques for things like anatomy would be greatly appreciated as well))
http://auroracelestine.deviantart.com/art/Cync-Pose1-198868320
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 4:13 pm
You can draw feet!
xd
Her arms, from her elbow to her wrist, seems kind short.
The knee that is pointing forward, is to thin, the knee kinda sticks out more.. I cant explain this part, sorry sweatdrop
Hope it helped though ^^
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 9:17 pm
yeah, I understand what you mean. thank you for the critique, I'll make sure to remember them for next time ^^
I accually don't like the feet I draw sweatdrop they look so boring compared to the rest of the outfits XD
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Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:19 am
i think your feet are very nice ^-^
as was said the legs and arms are a bit thin and awkward, and theres something off with the eyes to me but i cant tell want its is.... hm
but i your shading is great. keep up the good work <3
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Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:04 pm
thank you ^^
Yeah, I noticed the arms were really weird right after I finished it, so it was too late to fix anything razz
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Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 3:16 pm
I noticed the arms as well... They do seem a little much outwardly bent? If you try to stick your hands in your pockets like that, you usually rest your arms on your sides, so minor repositioning and foreshortening would probably have solved the "awkwardness"^^
Although the right kneecap is a bit small(I swear, I do this all the time too), I really like her legs overall C: They are very pretty x3 The clothes look so comfortable too! *o* I'd wear them in a heartbeat >w< And I do enjoy your style^^ Having hung so much around people who draw "generic animu" (and doing so myself as well xD ) makes it really refreshing to see something that plays out differently^^ Very enjoyable indeed~
Your coloring and shading also has tons of potential (I'm particularly digging the undersweather over her shorts... The blending is great x3 )~ It would be fun to see you play with bolder/darker colors for shading though >o<
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Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:20 pm
awww thank you whee
I love her cloths too, they look really comfy ^^
thats a good tip about the shading. I really don't know much about digital shading (or any medium of shading really) so it really helped.
Also, thanks for the help with the arms. I am really bad at for-shortening, so I think once I finish my incredibly time-consuming comic for history, I will be doing some shading and for-shortening practice.
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