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Aristocratic Views Captain
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 Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 1:55 am
When I translated my fanfic from english to Japanese, back to english again, I got this:
Cracks.
Deafening pounding never beat me, feel my heart go away. These wounds my heart still remains never fading.
Miller was covered with blood in my legs weak, reflecting the Amethyst Onyx is set to wither, bathroom, and I carry. His eyes, once you have claimed to find love in a hollow dead now. What happened? If we have it as thin as we tore off the paper? What does he do all you want? I love your quiet enough available? You left these scars. Only memories are blue, purple eyes revealed with a smile. I have twisted around the world. Your eyes swallowing vortex consumes all my open wounds back tears again.
"Hello, America." I say every day. Answer is always, always the same pain. Tears, and my purple twinkle in the eye, and I reply:
"I'm Canadian.
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:41 am
Dude LOL. Now post the orginal text so I can laught even more (not at your fanfic but at how ******** up the translator is)
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:53 am
The original text is:
Cracked.
The feeling inside my chest that never goes away, deafening me with pounding beats. Those scars over my heart still remain, never fading.
My feeble legs carry me to the bathroom, where the blood-encrusted mirror reflects wilting onyx set in amethyst. Those eyes you once claimed you loved, now hollow and dead looking. What happened then? That tore us apart as if we were flimsy as paper? Is he all you wanted? Is my quiet love for you not enough? You left only these scars. Only memories reveal both blue and violet eyes smiling. The world is twisting around me. Your eyes an all consuming vortex, swallowing me, tearing my scars back open again.
"Hello, America." I say every day. Your reply is always the same, always so painful. My violet eyes glow with tears, then, and I respond:
"I'm Canada."
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:02 am
Here's another mutilated fic:
"Hey, Austria!" Prussian "Verily, verily, I tell you it is important to have something."The Scream
"What is it?" in other countries, the shift from his piano and asked sighed.
"I'll whisper it to you! is important because it must be near. "He smirked.
Austria has begun a little. "Closer!" Prussia claimed.
It took him closely approximated by leaning closer to claiming another man. Prussia and ultimately released, his nose was almost touching the ears of Austria.
"I'm great, " he whispered and licked the ear of Austria.
His face is priceless, he thought.
"What?" Austria was in a hurry.
And Prussia only smirked.
Original text:
"Hey, Austria!" Prussia yelled, "I have something, really, really important to tell you."
"What is it?" The other country asked with a sigh, turning from his piano.
"It's important, so you have to be closer! I'll whisper it to you." He smirked.
Austria leaned over a bit. "Closer!" Prussia insisted.
He leaned closer and closer at the other man's insistence. When Prussia finally let up, his nose was almost touching Austria's ear.
"I'm awesome," He whispered and licked Austria's earlobe.
The look on his face is priceless, He thought.
"What was that for?" Austria was flustered.
And Prussia just smirked.
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Aristocratic Views Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:04 am
This one is hilarious:
I woke up to the disaster. My seats were scattered around the room, was one of the ashtray on my pillow, my neck somehow, was curled up in a closet with a hangover ********. " I lit a cigarette, and set a tone Mishimishi. What happened last night? I myself from the closet untangled, stumbled to the kitchen.
Old cup of black coffee, the morning more embittered.
"Well, at least it then I'm gonna get rid of my hangover. " I muttered to myself.
We are optimistic that my old self horrifying smile your face ... the pain, there you go. Almost.
I watch Sunday, one day I saw a face off. Please I need to see him yet. But one day not long. The only thing I remember, because he is, you need to know what happened last night.
It was the first meeting ... I remember.
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 1:01 pm
Dude................*hand to forehead* that is funny. I like your writing by the way, very lovely I think
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:11 pm
Creepy Kuro Neko Dude................*hand to forehead* that is funny. I like your writing by the way, very lovely I think
Thank you!
But yes, Google translate fails miserably.
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 2:35 pm
Tiem for more!
The music had stopped. Make sure that everyone had stopped by now you can put a constant humming.
Tori is almost began to laugh nervously fidgeting. He, N is standing parallel to one another silence, and continued for several moments.
"...... ...." Well, he used every syllable that is not talked to came out with some melodic tone.
N may have to say exactly what the boy saw him quizzically?
"I ... I ... "Touyo feeble attempt to cover his face flushed face is a burning feeling in his hands.
N is a delicate subject because it was, it was all about love .......
Determined look, as if they were trying to start a fight that he, Touyo eyes appeared.
"Y is - about the love you knew?"
N, despite a nod to his embarrassment, he reached out his hand grasped the hand of the N's.
"Well, I choose you please!"
Original text:
The music had stopped. The constant humming that no one could ever place had stopped.
Touyo fidgeted and almost began giggling nervously. The silence continued for several moments, as he and N stood parallel to each other.
"…..Erm…." He was not used to talking, and every syllable came out with a slight melodic tone.
N looked at him quizzically, what on earth could the boy be trying to say?
"I-… I…" Touyo's face flushed and a feeble attempt to cover his face left his hands feeling burnt.
This was all because N had brought up a delicate subject….. Love.
A determined look appeared in Touyo's eyes, as if he were about to start a battle.
"Y-you wanted to know about love?"
N nodded, and despite his embarrassment, he reached out and grabbed N's hand.
"Well, I choose you!"
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 2:38 pm
Light Yagami ....
I knew he was Kira. Not from the start, no thought in my mind nagging me, who I had never had evidence.
I knew I just had to use him. From the beginning, the first time it happened, I do not mean that he never knew.
He had succeeded in trying to tempt me. However, despite how illogical it in. I had
How many times did he gave me that look, filthy his hand to touch me suffer death, I could not resist.
He has to taste like cake.
Original text:
Light Yagami….
I knew he was Kira. Not from the start, no, but there was that nagging thought in my head, the one I never had hard evidence to prove.
I knew he was just using me. From the very beginning, from that first time it happened, I knew he didn't mean it.
He had attempted to seduce me, and succeeded. But, despite how illogical it was, I had to give in.
No matter how many times he gave me that look, or touched me with his filthy, death ridden hands, I could never resist.
Because he tasted like cake.
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