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A Girl & Her Blob

Tenko72

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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 11:00 am

A Girl & Her Blob is a fantasy comic. It's about a girl and her blob. They fight crime - agricultural crime. And profit off of it, by collecting bounties.

This is chapter one...
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7

I'm still drawing chapter two. I want to wait 'til I finish, before I post it and I'd like CC on this chapter, so I can make the next one better.

Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:31 am

The story concept sounds interesting but the illustrations could really benefit from some screen-tones and the speech bubbles are rather plain looking. Page six looks out of order and each page doesn't flow seamlessly unto the next. Also 7 pages is really short for a whole chapter, most manga have 16 to 45 pages per chapter.
Overall I think it has potential but does need work on the presentation.

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broken_bleeding_angel

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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:56 am

That's more of an intro then an actual chapter hun.

Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:11 pm

Thank you, both!

Kezza, that's really helpful. I'm going to have to practice all of those.

Angel, I don't understand. When I think of an intro, I think of backstory or characters telling eachother their names and what they do and stuff. Do you mean the same things or something else?

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Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 7:58 pm

Kinda.

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 12:06 pm

Thanks, Angel.

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