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Jett Stryker

PostPosted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:52 pm


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Weapon - Warrior - Nightmare



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        ~User Data~

        RP Name: Domon Tsugetsa
        Age: XXXX
        Gender: Male
        Numero: 3
        Element: Power/Force
        Riatsu Color: A dark Red, almost black
        Species:Arancarr

        ~Appearance~


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        Height: 6'0
        Weight: 195
        Hair: Spiked and Messy throughout, Domon's bangs tend to hang over his face.
        Eyes: Domon's eyes have always had a red hue to them, however as his emotions rise and his riatsu is released, they begin to glow a fiery redish orange. Some beleive this is a trademark of the wielder of a rare zampaktou.
        Clothing: His coat, is of leather, a vest with a two toned black and white color scheme, a collar of black fur over his shoulders. A pair of chains around his neck. His 'hakama' follows a similar color scheme to his vest, loose fitting for ease of motion in combat, however ends just below the knee where they are tucked into his boots, another deviation from the typical uniform while still maintaining the black and white typical of the Espada.
        Left arm armored with Metal bands as well as a wrap. His right has a much more Holllow appearance due to the dark energy which courses through it, for that reason, Domon calls it his "cursed" arm. This Dark Energy which courses through the limb has two effects. Firstly, his hierro is strengthened to the durability of soul-steel and is in fact linked to his zampaktou and it's containment of his hollow abilities. Secondly, this arm tends to augment spiritual energy allowing him to create special barriers.
        Physical Appearance:
        Domon is physically built like a Soldier. He is not so bulky as to take away from his agility, and not so agile as to take away from his strength. He is equally balanced between his powerfully commanding strenght, and his impressive ability to dash about his opponent, seeking out the best point to attack. His body is decorated with a few scars, there are three his is particularly proud of; one on his forehead, one on his right forearm, and a very large slash across his back from left shoulder across to his waist on his right.

        ~Background~


        Feudal Japan saw the rise and fall of a great number of great samurai, one inparticular was a ronin by the name of Tsugetsa Domon. Known for living a mercenary lifestyle for the simple pay of fighting in the greatest battles in history, Domon fought to bring himself honor and a lasting legacy. However the day he fell in combat, he came to realize that his dream faded into the pages of history faster than perfume on a summer wind. Tsugetsa Domon's legacy of the great warrior he had fought so hard to sculpt and refine was rendered nothing more than a footnote. This harsh grudge against those who lived on to become great warriors ate away at his soul until he forced himself into becoming a hollow due to the hate and negative emotion which grew inside of him, corroding his soul chain at an alarming rate.
        In Hollowdom, Domon roamed the battlefields of Asia, feeding on the souls of fallen warriors and other hollows he happened across, reaching a satisfaction he could only acheive in the ending of the lives of others. Just as he had taken pride and pleasure in winning battles and honor to himself, his instincts honed in on the hunter's instinct of the killer he had become. Abandoning all honor, integrity and virtue of a true warrior of legend, Tsugetsa Domon transformed himself into a monster, feeding and climbing the Hollow evolutionary ladder, fixated on the goal of ending lives for no purpose at all. As this evil desire welled up within him, Domon had come to find that this change within his resolve had a physical result, his right arm taking a rather sinister form, Cursed. Domon managed to harness that curse, taking every setback he found and used it to his advantage.
        He reached his zenith when he cracked his mask in a battle with another hollow who's strength rivaled his own. Shaken but not defeated, Domon finished the battle and fed upon his prey, however became fixated on the flaw in his bone white mask, finally deciding that he would remove it completely, becoming an Arancarr. Granted new power, and a new form, Domon continued his quest more efficiently, eventually capturing the attention of the Legendary Espada. Confronted by this crossroads, he was given a choice as his brother arancarr approached him, asking him to join their ranks. Compelled to fight like the Mercenary Ronin he was long past, he took his place at the Table of the Ten Swords, a number branded upon his chest, Fighting and killing for the Espada, for hollow-kind.

        ~Personality~
        Domon is a self sacrificing loyal combatant with an attitude which thrives in conflicts which he tends to instigate from the get go. His confident "I Dare You" personality can be quite easy to overcome if approached in kind, knowing his challenging nature. However, back down or shy away and Domon will forever place you below him. Overcome him or surpass his expectations and he will actually respect and look up to you. But if you ignore, insult, or impose on him, he will never forgive you. It is difficult for one to change the way Domon looks at them after this first impression has been established.

        ~Techniques~


        Domon is an upredictable warrior, professional at using his gifts in the most destructive way possible while still maintaining versitility. The source of all of Domons strengths can be traced to one feature which fuels all of them, Domon has a massive reserve of raw spiritual energy. Like a dam holding back a river, Domon's sealed form harnesses the pressure and power this spiritual energy posesses and applies it in various ways, however most primarily is to enhance his strength. Domon is known for using brute force and relentless fury to obliterate opponents by sheer strength, hacking them to peices or beating them to a pulp. Secondly to his strength, Domon is known to favor destructive spiritual attacks like Cero, Cero Oscuras and his various custom techniques which also impliment his tremendous reserves. Lastly, Domon favors a strong defensive, however is not afraid to take a hit if it means damaging his oponent in the process as well, as such, he actively applies his riatsu towards regeneration.

        Bala
        Though less powerful than a Cero, the Bala is twenty times faster than a Cero. The speed of a Bala is directly proportionate to the speed of the user. It has been shown to be faster than an average Shunpo.

        Acidic Touch: When a Hollow grabs a Human with their hands, the spot where the person was grabbed is shown to get burned as if acid were poured onto it. This was shown when Orihime was grabbed in the leg, and on the wound on Chad's back. These wounds seem to allow the Hollow's reiatsu to seep into the person, causing great pain to the victim. The wounds can heal if given enough time though, and it is unknown if this ability works on Shinigami or other spiritually powerful beings.

        Cero is a highly powerful and relatively swift energy blast that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers
        Cero Oscuras: Only used by the top four Espada, this is an extremely powerful form of Cero which is akin to man Hollow using Cero at once. It is so powerful that it is forbidden to be used inside of Las Noches.
        Gran Rey Cero: This form of Cero is used by all Espada, but is somewhat weaker than Cero Oscuras. It, like Cero Oscuras, has a large blast radius and is highly destructive. Despite being weaker, it is also forbidden within the walls of Las Noches.

        Hierro
        All Arrancar have this, but the degree to which they have it depends on their power level. In essence, this is how hard the skin of an Arrancar is. It is like armor. It can only be cut by those who are able to measure the spiritual density of it and raise their power higher than said density.

        Garganta
        The equivalent of a Shinigami Senkaimon. The Garganta is an alternate realm full of swirling energy and completely void of light besides the white energy swirling around in it. To use it, an Arrancar must be able to form a pathway underneath their feet or they will fall into the void. This requires immense control over reiatsu.

        High-Speed Regeneration is the ability that allows a Hollow to heal most injuries very quickly, with the exception of the destruction of the head or vital organs.

        Custom abilities:
        Cursed arm hierro - The hierro on his cursed arm is durable to the point of soul steel, simply because of the fact its nature matches that of his zampaktou.

        Cursed arm augmentation - Riatsu based attacks, when channeled through his right arm are strengthened due to the concentration of evil and hollow nature in that part of his body. Also, this allows him further control of this Riatsu, enabling him to form it into unique attacks...

        - Término (Terminus) is an ability used on opponents within a short range, essentially serving a Shotgun version of a Cero. Deadly at close range with a wide area of affect, while nearly useless from further distances.

        - Fijacion (fortification) is used through application of large amounts of Riatsu into Domon's cursed Right arm. The augmentation of this riatsu through his heavily defended arm releases this spiritual energy in the form of a round barrier extending from the palm of his hand with a diameter of about two meters.

        - Sable (Sabre) Unleashes crescent waves of Spiritual energy in a very raw and unstable form. Rather than simply cutting an opponent upon contact, it detonates and ignites in a devistating explosion. These arcs can be sent by blade or by melee strike, depending only on the focal point of the riatsu used to create the attack.


        Arrancar Release State

        "Tear, Odio!"


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        Odio does not change Domon's appearance too drastically aside from the obvious, the color of his hair fades to a grey-white as it now expands down his back, spiking up messily throughout. His clothing takes a much edgier appearance, his mask fragment becomes a steel plate across his forehead and Steel bracing extends along his left arm. Domon's mighty sword doubles in size and is now a two edged Claymore which he still wields easily with one hand.
        However, the primary change in Domon's resurrected form is the change in his Cursed arm. Turning from black to a vivid red. Rather than augmenting Domon's abilities in a defensive manner, this change actually causes any attacks released from that to be more destructive, essentially giving Domon full access to 100% of his riatsu reserves and use them as he sees fit, essentially making him a powerhouse of mellee combat. Fury, Chaos and Destruction in every attack with little regards to taking damage himself.



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PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:26 pm


I see one thing wrong with this profile..... you have five abilities in which you are only allowed one outside of releases.

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His right has a much more Holllow appearance due to the dark energy which courses through it, for that reason, Domon calls it his "cursed" arm. This Dark Energy which courses through the limb has two effects. Firstly, his hierro is strengthened to the durability of soul-steel and is in fact linked to his zampaktou and it's containment of his hollow abilities. Secondly, this arm tends to augment spiritual energy allowing him to create special barriers.


The bold along with what is listed in your custom abilities counts as five. The only abilities you should have listed is in your "custom" abilities section. Other than that your profile is good

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Jett Stryker

PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 5:35 pm


Fair Nuff... lets see what we can do.
How about i adjust his custom techniques and make them usable only in his released state. as well as the augmentation of riatsu based attacks. Then leave the Augmented hierro as his single ability outside of resureccion.

now before you greenlight that, understand that the custom techniques he has are simply abilities he created himself no different than cero or balla. Any hollow could learn them if they applied themselves, he just happened to make it up.
now would that still fall under what you consider a custom technique? sounds to me that he can only have one unique ability outside of resureccion
PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 5:55 pm


Well the custom ability is pretty much unique to your character. Mine is simply enchanting my base abilities, yours could be almost anything really, as long as it is not god moding.

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Jett Stryker

PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:15 pm


well my main question in that case would be
could I keep the augment as my "custom ability"
and list those three named techniques as techniques he knows and use them in sealed form?
PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:26 pm


Well you could say that in literally ONE ability that you can manipulate your reitsu into attacks and list them under that ability and STILL have one more ability lol

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Jett Stryker

PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:37 pm


Cursed Arm Augmentation - because of the dark nature of Domons Cursed arm allong with the high concentration of dark energy in that arm, Domon is able to manipulate his riatsu into various.

Cursed Arm Hierro - yeah...
PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:42 pm


So list your attacks under the Augmentation ability so its all good

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Jett Stryker

PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 8:47 pm


done
PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:46 pm


Raxephlon
done

Not so fast.

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Jett Stryker

PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:25 pm


... *has yet to post anywhere*
Not so fast doing what?
PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:14 pm


Raxephlon
... *has yet to post anywhere*
Not so fast doing what?

So was the mention of your strength just a reference to the fact that your an Espada and your number 3? or is that one of your abilities? You mention it, but it's not clarified in your choice abilities as a major attribute.

For instance, Matsuo's character clearly points out that his choice abilities are his physical power and even denser hierro, while you only point out the ability to make a shield and do "Unique" attacks and so on, but nothing about superior strength. You also mention this "Energy Dam" as well, well that to is also another ability that you didn't clarify. You gotta state what is and what isn't because currently your putting in abilities that are pointed out under the section specific to your personal abilities.

By the way, what exactly does "Unique" mean? That is so broad, it could mean anything from punching the ground and causing the ground to shatter to cutting someone with a karate chop. I'm gonna have to ask for more specificity on that bit.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:35 pm


Hi.

I'm sorry if you feel you are being picked apart, but I have to point something out.

The whole "Sex Blood Tequila" thing on the top of your profile doesn't really sit well with me.

That's not to say that I'm not all for alcoholism and domestic violence, but if it isn't too much trouble I'm going to ask you to change it.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:03 am


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Hi.

I'm sorry if you feel you are being picked apart, but I have to point something out.

The whole "Sex Blood Tequila" thing on the top of your profile doesn't really sit well with me.

That's not to say that I'm not all for alcoholism and domestic violence, but if it isn't too much trouble I'm going to ask you to change it.

We are all adults here Social. I see no problem with it personally other than that no such sex, blood, or tequila is mentioned in his profile at all.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 12:07 am


Anonymous Aristocrat
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Hi.

I'm sorry if you feel you are being picked apart, but I have to point something out.

The whole "Sex Blood Tequila" thing on the top of your profile doesn't really sit well with me.

That's not to say that I'm not all for alcoholism and domestic violence, but if it isn't too much trouble I'm going to ask you to change it.

We are all adults here Social. I see no problem with it personally other than that no such sex, blood, or tequila is mentioned in his profile at all.

Well, I suppose you are right, and It was no more than my two cents.

However I feel It's a bit trashy.

But its not at all a big deal, I was just wondering if he would be willing to change it (:
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