Here is the mostly finshed picture (it's not hard to find the first). I think it looks better... I got rid of some things and I didn't bother finishing the trim at the bottom of the skirt. She is somewhat short because I ran out of paper and I only used a half-sheet, anyway. Aaaand... The thing got resized so it looks a teeny bit worse than it should, which is not much of a difference. And I gave up on the skirt's shading so it actually could look better, but I'm not patient enough.