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Jinsei Higashi

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 10:32 pm


please do not post here unless you have suggestion or are cheering on certain characters
Abyss/Azu is Blue has appearance of Noctis

Lucia is Purple has appearance of Touka

Yufa Ichinose is Green has appearance of Tear Grants

and the Ritzkani Sisters Eva and Soran are Maroon have appearances of Shana from Shakugan no Shana(Soran) and Erza Scarlet from Fairy Tail(Eva)

random town citizens shop owners or other minor characters are Teal

lackeys and minions are Orange

main villains or serious bad guys are red

this is a story about 4 young women and a single young man and a village called Eltmont. that lies on the northern continent of Elgiar. which is the northern most town on that continent lying in the mountains half the continent away lies the Capital of Pedigrin. anyhow an embassy of dark forces from an eastern continent Zeltiah have been appearing in the region near the base of the mountains in the north this story mainly tells of how these 4 woman discover their powers and help a young man defeat the forces and maintain peace as well as strive for goals that they are of yet unaware of.... and a future that is shrouded in mist... oh and a lil fighting over him xD
PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 11:45 pm


CHAPTER ONE: An Inevitable Meeting


we open to the young man named Azu
-yawns- man did i sleep good -stretches and gets out of bed and gets dressed in his usual black shirt and pants- hmm whats this -picks up a small note on the dresser that reads-

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code name Abyss aka Azu age 21
Job: Mercenary Captain
known by many as abyss the reaper has worked many missions succeeding and proving himself yet what others don't know is he has usually gotten lucky
favorite foods
jerky, pumpkin pie, and egg rolls
least favorite foods and things
coconut, bugs piss him off to the point where hes jumping up and down he once ate a been and some ants and has nightmares because of it

Note from Lucia reads: Dearest Azu woke up early went out to look for new jobs for us be back later left some food cooking on the stove please try and leave some for later ill be safe so no worries...

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Lucia age 20
Job: Swords woman and Hunter
long time childhood friend of Azu she has always loved going out on hunts with him and cooking for him seeing as they live together they kinda depend on one another
likes~ mostly same as Azu except for the fact shes more open and tries to get him to be
dislikes~ bugs yet will squish em and call to Azu, small spaces tick her off

silly woman who does she think i am -he sighs slightly- ah well cant be helped -he sniffs the air- i wonder what she left me -he opens his door and walks out into the kitchen eating area of their small house and then gets tackled to the floor-

-Eva appears and tackles Azu- MORNING MASTER ABYSS WHY DID YOU SLEEP SO LONG -he gets buried and squished under her armor and she gets off acting as if she did nothing wrong-

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Eva age 20
Job:Heavy Magic Sword Wielder
also an old friend of Azu's the 2 of them trained together growing up and have had fights at times but somehow always managed to get through them
likes~ more of the finer things loves pastries enjoys polishing her big sword and tends to be a bit hyper any time Azu is around and she also enjoys getting her way.
dislikes~arguments, losing, her armor rusting

OOOOOUUUUCCCHHHH that really hurt yanno... i was sleepy was up late last night
-she cuts him off-

ooooh doing what? dont tell me you were finally making miss Lucia your life partner because you know I WANT that position
-she glows menacingly-

dont be ridiculous you know me and her are like siblings... but then again
-she cuts him off again-

what if miss Lucia doesnt see it that way
-she giggles and smacks him on the back making him fly into the table and fall over-

-he gets ticked off and gets up angerly-
WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU HERE FOR IF ONLY TO SMACK ME AROUND THE PLACE LIKE IM SOME KIND OF TOY OR SPARRING EQUIPMENT
-he throws a baked potato at her and she catches it in her mouth and has a saddened face-

-she finishes eating the potato and replies-
mmm im terribly sorry for my actions master -and she bows and hugs him- i acted improperly and assumed things.(thinking to herself though it was fun) anyhow i was sent here by the mayor he claims that one of the soldiers has sighted strange unknown soldier's and creatures on the bottom of the mountain near the edge of town he wants you and me to investigate with lady Yufa
-and she sits down next to him after preparing his plate of food and setting it at the table in front of him as he sits down as well-

-he sits down and eats while listening then replies-
-sighs- ah i see so its a job your here for i shouldn't have jumped to conclusions either forgive me your one of my finest and most trusted companions i should've known you wouldn't just be here to joke around but seriously sometimes you need to watch your strength think you almost cracked 4 or 5 of my bones hmm anyhow well move out for the cathedral once im done eating Yufa should be their praying as usual...
-they continue eating-

MEANWHILE
over at the cathedral Yufa is praying and Soran is their assisting in organizing the offerings to the church.

rei rei zue tei mmmm -opens her eyes and sits up- hows the sorting going father -she asks one the head priest-

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Yufa age 18
Job Radiant Healer

priest: ah Mistress Yufa the sorting is doing fine little miss Soran is a great aid to the sorting and is speeding it up tremendously i dont think all us old geezers could do it without her shes a great blessing to us all

oh thank goodness thats great news im so glad my friend is such great help -she grins happily-

-Soran walks over after setting down a box-
of course im a great help ive been on many adventures with my sister and have learned much -she giggles-

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Soran age 16 Eva's younger sister (looks like Shana)
looks up to her big sis and is always trying to be more and more like her yet she prefers to wield a katana over a heavy claymore together with her sister their known as the crimson dragon of death seeing as Soran can create flames to go along with her sisters demonic like armor

likes- helping out anyone in need, supporting others trying to fly she enjoys heights and sweet things like pocky and melon bread
dislikes- being cornered, thunder and lighting tend to frighten her

Priest: yes journeys do teach us much but you mustn't forget the hardships youve gone through to reach where you are now

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(picture of the priest yes he is old but he is full of many secrets and is still somewhat strong for his age being 52)

-Yufa and Soran answer together-
We wont father
-and they both bow and pray as the priest lays his hands on a holy book on a pedestal in front of them-


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:32 pm


CHAPTER ONE CONTINUES....


this time we join Miss Lucia in town looking for a job of any sort

mmm i wonder...
we find our heroine lost and looking at a fairly bad drawn map
i knew i shouldn't have trusted that peddler now im lost -pouts- if Azu knew i got myself lost he'd lecture me... -she imagines it and falls back against a wall- what am i going to do... oh how i miss him

-a snide voice is heard from the shadows in an alley nearby-
maybe i en can help you n miss

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(minion known as Teo)

names n Teo miss -he slowly emerges with a sharp blade and swings it around as if he thinks its a toy or something-

STAY BACK YOU CREEP!!! -she jumps back a bit and takes out her katana- i dont want to be forced to use this against you but i will if i must... -she flinches a bit from exhaustion from walking so long it had after all gotten to be afternoon and she hadn't eaten lunch-

you look n mighty tired n why dont i offer you a place to rest your little n head here in my stomach gahahahaha -he cackles profusely-

damn... -she squints and raises her katana straight- i wont die here... not yet when i have so much i want to do... and when i have to return home... theirs someone special to me waiting for me to come home and with a job... heh what do you think hell say when i tell him i did one already... ~she smirks~

what n are you babbling on about just shut up en get in my tummy n im hungry... -he gets an impatient ravenous look on his face and his glasses shine almost blindingly-... n what n do you mean job?

dont play dumb i seen a wanted poster for you awhile back before i got lost... heh dead or alive, pay out of 1000 shilling's if alive because your boss is being hunted and theirs rumors you may know where he is or am i wrong?

so your a hunter are n ya grrr you might be able to talk n all big n smart but a second ago you were n flinching n in exhaustion n besides ive been following you n since you n entered town i seen you n helping those villagers n on the edge of town n i seen the way n you n used your katana to separate their corn from their n husks en..en..en very impressive indeed i knew n then i wanted you n -chuckles arrogantly- and i wont let n you get away now n that i have my eyes set on you en..en..en

-a woman appears from a room 3 stories up coming out onto a balcony and fires a handgun at the lackeys feet as hes rambling-
you imbecile do you realize who that is.... beside the point your mission was to stay on track and find me some of that sacred mineral to get that device working WHAT IN BLAZES ARE YOU DOING BACK HERE WASTING TIME!!!

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(1st villain of the story Alphard a female who wields a strange ability very agile and carries 2 handguns and some knives) age unknown she might be a witch little is known of yet

-Lucia takes this opportunity to slip by the minion and run away-
asta la bai bai freaks -throws a few hand bombs behind her as she continues running for her escape-

-the minion dodges the bullet fire from his higher up but gets hit by one of Lucia's bombs and fly's back against the wall where Lucia was leaning before-

OWCHHIIIEEE -he wines loudly- sorry boss i didna know who they n were i wus just hungwy thought n it n be a good nuff idea to eat something so i could n search betta

uruchai uruchai uruchai (lit. shut up shut up shut up) -fires her gun off at his feet a few more times- i dont want to hear you talk imbecile just do your damn job right or ill change my mind and blow your f-en head off -she grins evilly-

i am n sorry mam -he flinches and falls on his rear-

MEANWHILE
-Lucia has found a small storage shack that belongs to a shop owner and he has allowed her to hide their and rest at a price of course-
ahhhh ahhh ahh -she breaths heavily- thank you sir i cant tell you how much this means to me i was so lost you wouldnt by chance have a map of the town would you ive only been around here a couple weeks so i dont know the towns layout that well thats why i was running i was in a bad part of town ~she continues panting~

not a problem miss anything for a Azu's assistant

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shop owner Ludrich Ronaki age 34

ah so word of my partner has reached even this town huh? and im not his assistant ~she pouts~ I'm his... ~she stops and just blushes~

yes mam and stories of his 4 female companions and all with their own unique abilities you especially i knew it was you right away not many girls have purple hair or ears quite like yours their quite unique to say the least heh

ah thank you sir may i have something to eat my stomach has been grumbling for hours? ill pay if i must ~her ears twitch downward as her stomache rumbles~

no no miss you dont have to be charged anything anyone who has assisted in saving our village and or our country is a free pass in my book especially if their in danger

oh i see well thank you sir for your generosity -she bows into a curtsy- im eternally grateful of your kindness -and she lays down on a cot to rest as the shop owner sorts through some merchandise- um sir would you like any help with that ~she asks to be polite~
-he nods and they work together sorting some merchandise-
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 12:11 pm


CHAPTER ONE CONTINUES...


this time we join the Vanguard back to Azu and Eva who seem to be walking to the cathedral

been awhile since weve had any work together hasnt it Eva

~she blushes slightly and replies~
um... well yeah but i suppose thats why im looking forward to it so much

hmm... ~he notices her blushing~ whats gotten into you? you seem different from before when you first saw me you were so i dunno pushy i guess

oh so im pushy am i? ~she looks down~ im sorry i guess i was just expecting you to be happier to see me

oh i see ~he grabs her shoulder and stops walking looking down~ listen Eva I am... I'm happy to see you ok... i really missed you... and i was thinking of you at times i mean it has been a year and we did train together how could i not miss you

~she turns around looks up as hes talking and then lunges toward him hugging him and sniffling~

I'm so glad to hear you say those things and here I thought you didnt care... I just wanted to hear you let me know you missed me I was hurting because when I was fighting alongside my sister to survive all I was thinking of was our reunion... I've missed you so much... I never stopped thinking about you

~he hugs her back blushing slightly while continuing to walk~
you... were really thinking of me... ~she replies with a nod~ i didnt know i meant so much to you... I'm glad we've reunited safely then

~he gets cut off~
I'm sorry are we interrupting something

~Azu and Eva turn around to see Yufa and Soran approaching them~

(Soran)hey big sis finally telling him your feelings

(Eva)what are you talking about
~Azu and Eva both blush and step apart~

we were just coming to meet you two for a job

is that all because if their was anything else going on as a priestess under god id have to

(Eva)youd have to what seperate us ~she sticks her tongue out as she finishes saying it~

(Azu thinks to himself shes so cute when she tries to cover her tracks)

~they continue arguing for what seems like 2 minutes but turns into 15 xD~

now now girls thats enough

~they all go silent and look at him then Yufa asks~

so whats the job? or do you wanna tell us which of us youve finally choosen?

im going to ignore that second comment... Eva came to me this morning with a job from the mayor he wants me Eva and Yufa to fight off some strange scruffy looking characters on the edge of town. they've been sighted trying to scale the mountain and we all know what that means...

(Soran)that their after the demonic power at the summit... whats my job i don't wanna be left out ~she pouts~

~they hear her then Azu looks at Eva and she nods~

hmm well considering your sister has told me how well you've been doing in training i have a special mission just for you

(Soran)Eva has praised me... ~she looks at her elder sister blushing slightly~
what did you tell him ~she whines~
mhm and thats why your on supply duty it might sound like an easy job but its not and its critical to our mission we need you to get us supplies as fast as you can... can we count on you Soran

(Soran)of course you can big brother ~she grins looking up at him~

alright then will move out tomorrow around noon... hmm oh um... i hate to ask but Soran Yufa have you heard from Lucia

~they both shake their heads in a no response and he looks down~

i hope shes alright... lets get some rest at that nearby inn

~they all nod in agreement~
~moments later Azu is sitting on the roof and Eva joins him~

(Eva)mmm im sure she is fine ~she grabs his hand and looks down~ um... if you wanna go look for her ill come with you

~he looks up at her~
thanks Eva

~shes blushes slightly~
(Eva)its no problem really i... i just wanna help... i dont like seeing you so down but... truly i just want to be by your side...

~he turns to face her~
mmm ive been meaning to ask you Eva...
~he grabs her hands and lays them in his lap~
you... love me dont you?

~she turns beat red~
(Eva)um wha what of... all...
~she sighs and after a short pause continues~
(Eva)i didnt want to admit it but i do deeply we all do... but i sometimes feel more

well i... im not sure what to say i never thought of you or the others that way but now thinking on it i suppose i do
~he blushes slightly and wraps an arm around her making her eyes widen and her blush more~

(Eva)you aren't tricking me for your own enjoyment are you because i truly mean it and if you don't i'm going to be hurt and ill never forgive you

oh silly Eva how could i make any of this up your my lotus i just i cant imagine not having you around

(Eva)yeah but you have Lucia and Yufa do you truly desire me ~she looks down sad-end at the realization she just made aloud~

i wont lie your all precious to me... even your younger sister... don't get your hopes so down though... stays strong for me Eva because i need you... just give me a little time to come up with the best decision for myself and what i truly want alright

~she turns a deep red after hearing his words~
(Eva)your so much more mature then i remember you being almost makes me wonder when you grew up... i'm just glad you haven't left me behind... ~she clings to his arm~ and ill wait as long as i have to just promise me... don't die on me i couldn't bare the loss... and if anything should happen to us to separate us lets meet up at this inn and... if anything should happen to me please look after my sister

that's more then one request but they're all ones i can keep to so ill accept them ~he grins and kisses her shoulder~
(Eva thinking to herself hes so determined in the things he does and he overwhelms me i know for sure i love him)

~she blushes and looks at him~
i'm glad anything you want me to keep to

~he thinks then replies~
you remember when we were in training that piece of cloth i never took off the piece you used to bandage my arm when we first met ~he pulls it out~ i want you to hold onto it and give it back to me when the mission is over and i want you to know it has always been special to me

~she looks astonished that he still has it but blushes at the request~
(Eva)you kept it all these years i didn't know ~she takes it~ it smells just like you and its sorta a silly thing to hang on to

yup i thought about it and i figured... out of all the things i could do that one would probably mean the most to you oh and well i know it may be silly but well that time we shared meant something
~he blushes slightly looking at her~

(Eva)im delighted to know you kept it i... wasnt expecting you to it sorta makes me feel special knowing you kept something from our past with you at all times

of course id keep it... it reminded me of you... ~he blushes~ anyhow its getting pretty late we should turn in we have a long day tomorrow

(Eva)oh oh right of course well then i suppose night Azu ~she blushes as they part ways as they walk to their rooms~



THUS ENDS CHAPTER ONE


what will happen to Azu and his companions next? what will Lucia do to reunite with the group?... are Eva and Azu destined to be together or will he choose one of the other female companions he has?... what of Alphard the Priest and the lazy stuttering Teo? is the shop keeper crooked? find out next chapter of the Vanguard of Eltmont


Jinsei Higashi

Jinsei Higashi

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Friendly Hunter

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Jinsei Higashi

Jinsei Higashi

Captain

Friendly Hunter

14,550 Points
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  • Crack Shot 50
PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:22 am


CHAPTER 2 MYSTERIES AND CHAOS


we open up to Azu he wakes up in the middle of the night and finds Soran outside crying and all bloody

~he runs over to her~
~she screams at him~
(Soran) STAY BACK MASTER

Azu:what happened Soran ~he stutters stepping to the side to see her in the moonlight better~

(Soran) it just came out of no where ~she winces before continuing~

Azu:what did?

~screeching is heard in the distance~

(Soran) a vampire ~she stutters and falls down crying~

-forgive me ill continue when i come up with something im having writers block lol-
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