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[Q] Caelestis the Fox Demon [READY! - Crits please]

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KanamiTenjo

Eloquent Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:56 pm


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLMENT FORM

Name: Caelestis
Nicknames: Cael
Gender: Male
Age: 17

Faction: Demon
Race: Fox

Natural Ability: Shapeshifting - Transforming into anything found in nature. Not that powerful yet, but Cael's favorite shift is into a common red fox. Only used rarely for now until he can become stronger because it can drain alot of energy out of him so he must recharge.

Personality:

Loner - Keeping to himself in most situations is Cael's specialty. He lacks normal social skills and he would rather avoid large crowds and keep in the shadows. Being an only child/being never helped while growing up. Some would call him a "social phobic" though he does try to interact with others. When he does speak up though, Cael would sound cold and distant in tone but not rude.

Emotional - Cael is quite the ticking bomb as long as you know how to push the right buttons...or the wrong ones in this case. Very destructive in attitude when pushed to his limit, he does not appreciate dominant behavior. In an instant he can become quite dangerous to approach as he will lash out at his victim. Once you piss off with this fox you just sentenced yourself to enemy number one. Another reason why he isn't very social as afraid of what he is capable of doing when his short wick temper is ignited. His emotions are his greatest weakness.

Thief - Time to time Cael has a habit of taking nice things that are not his. He "borrows" the oddest items and stashes them away. Anything from discarded books, pocket mirrors, pens all sorts of things. He's quick of his work without leaving any trace of evidence. He only takes items that have become meaningless to others. One creatures trash is another demons treasure.

Resourceful - Quite clever and inventive Cael learns by picking things up fast. Quick to deal skillfully and promptly with new situations an surroundings finding ways to handle them in the best of his knowledge. When confronted with new things or creatures he is not fearful but cautious. Thinking before acting is crucial in these times. Think fast or perish in a sense, a good way to survive.

Devoted - Cael has a deep passion to song and music when listening on his headphones. He finds it quite soothing and helps mellow him out, especially when he is trying to block out negative vibes. When listening it changes him temporarily in a way that his expression is softer also his mood is very calm almost affectionate. Never in public but he sings on occasion and it quite hypnotizing. Almost sounds like a females voice when heard from a distance.

Courteous - Raised by his mother, civil at his best, taught to be a well mannered foxy. Learned to respect all living creatures. Respectful to elders and higher ranked beings as well as woman (and a few men) on occasion. He knows better then to be crude and out of line. It was sort of bashed into him as well as it is in his nature and out of habit. Cael shows gracious consideration towards the younger generation as to be merciful.

Why did they enroll at the academy? Brutally forced by his beautifully sadistic mother to enroll. Didn't take much since she's ten times scarier then Cael is every aspect. Dragging him by the ears with his tail between his legs so to speak. She believes Cael going to this university would help with his self-esteem, lack of destructive control when provoked, and build up his knowledge for the unknown. Cael being half nervous and half anxious, really wants to be able to be of some significance and to be respected one day. Not just some creature in the shadows with no hope for greatness. So if this academy can boost his self being, then what's there to lose?

FEAR Ability: Pocket Realms - Cael is able to fold the fabric of space and time, creating pockets of reality. Still not mastered but he can produce and turn a small hole under a floorboard into a little room. Time flows faster inside his realms then outside. A few hours spent is his pocket of reality is really only truly a few minutes. Eventually in time, he would go longer periods inside his realms and make more elaborate illusions of space.

Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Dark shiny hazelnut
Hair Colour/Style: Brown with a wisp of blonde/short and wavy
Skin Colour: Peach skin
Clothing Style/Colours: His clothing consists of a long sleeved maroon shirt plus a cut off v-neck collar jacket,
black and red detached pants, punk strap shoes. Maroon headphones around neck, blood red star necklace, bondage black cover mask.
Extra: Large ears and a very long thick tail that drags across the floor. Under his bondage mask lies a fox muzzle, only does the rest of his face look normal.
References: Chibi with Fox FriendFullbodyUnmasked
PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:00 pm


Bio

In his younger years Cael lived with his mother Nevaeh, a beautiful woman but he never remembered her ever being gentle with him. She was always so aggressive in temperament, he guessed it was because her mate vanished and she was left alone to take care of him. Never knew who his father was and grew up alone being the only kit in the family. Made it very hard growing up not being able to come in contact to the outside world other then his home. Confined to the land he was born in and to protect the household was his main duties. Anger seemed to infest him because being alone and living in the middle of nowhere can be quite stressful. Though the loneliness of it all seemed to vanish when he would sing to himself. It sounded so sad but made him feel at ease. Music was a mysterious thing but it made him happy even for a little bit. So all the time presently you would find that he always has headphones with him if ever he felt upset or down in the dumps.

KanamiTenjo

Eloquent Shapeshifter


Bloodlust Dante

Fortunate Hellraiser

PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:56 pm


Its a good start. he sounds like quite the prankster.
I'm interested in learning more about him, like how is he in social situations and any of his pet peeves.
Keep up the good work.
PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2011 10:03 am


ninja

KanamiTenjo

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iStoleYurVamps

iStoleYurVamps

Crew

Trash Husband

PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:21 pm


First off, we have two kitsunes in play already, Remi played by lilwolfpard and Tomoko played by demon_pachbel. Since your personality runs in with his natural abilities I can't give a true critique. The big issue is that you're only allowed one natural ability, a second come year 2 if you so wish. So your boy having 3? No very possible. Also as far as FEAR is concerned he's a demon, not a reaper, so he can't really have a weapon since those are very much reaper only.

Also, stay away from things like 'absolute' statements like he WILL attract girl, since then your meta-gaming reactions, which is a big no-no.

I don't mean to sound harsh but I can't do much unless those thing are addressed since they come into play all over D:
PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:05 am


Updated and redone~

Yes Cael whole bio has been fixed (finally) because there was alot of things I didn't notice or messed up on. So now he has ONE natural ability and fixed up his persona. Now his personality is unique I think (it's up to the crits of course) and I knew there one was kitsune in play but didn't know there was two. So I made sure that his bio didn't clash with the other two characters. Ok so I kicked out history for now until his whole self is set in stone. I also want to point something out about his persona, now when I say "provocative behavior" it's more like irritating or rude people not so much arousing. I know there's two meanings to that. Last thing, yeah I cut some things out like him attracting girls for one. Yeah he is good looking but he can't even socialize very well so less likely he would pick up chicks!

Ok I'm done~go crit! <3

KanamiTenjo

Eloquent Shapeshifter


Blade Kuroda

Militant Raider

PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 7:04 pm


Interesting start. There's a few things I'd like to point out though...

The three traits you listed for him are all rather negative, which creates kinda an imbalance. What are some positive things about him? Having too many flaws can be just as bad as having too many virtues and all.

That aside... his FEAR is a little overpowered I think, and that might be too much even for like... an alumni character, especially with the whole bit of the one day spent = seven years thing.

As a first year, being able to create even a mansion would be stretching it, so definitely reign it in.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:39 pm


Is he just a Fox Demon, or is he a Kitsune (which are..Fox Demons, technically speaking). If you want to differentiate the two races, make clear that you're doing it, because right now that can be a source of questions.

demon_pachabel

Beloved Werewolf


KanamiTenjo

Eloquent Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 6:57 am


Updated~

Confirmed that yes he is a kitsune demon and not just some random fox monster. Also he now has an even amount of traits, three good and three ehh not so good. His FEAR has been toned down so he is not a god-mod-uber-pwned-you-all-being. I think now I have established he only has a mother and that's it. Like I said in my last update though I'd like to keep history out for now until he is more together.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 6:33 am


ninja

KanamiTenjo

Eloquent Shapeshifter



Citanul Lunatic


Devout Lunatic

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 6:59 pm


I've been kinda lurking around the shop, and posted a form of my own, but I wanted to be helpful!

Cael sounds interesting. I love the Kitsune, and from what I can tell, he is different from the other ones in the shop.

Do his pocket realms stay forever? Or does he have to concentrate to keep them open? Just a curious question.

So, his emotions can overrule his respect to others? When he lashes out, does he try to physically hurt the object that's annoying him, or just scare them away?

Maybe irrelevant to his actual form, but I thought it might be good to expand a little on him.
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 1:22 pm


Updated once more~

I have have fought myself with this and finally decided he shall be a normal fox demon.
Plot might be interesting. What would kitsunes think about him?
How would they level him up compared to them?

Comments?

Also added some bio <3

KanamiTenjo

Eloquent Shapeshifter


KanamiTenjo

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 4:42 am


heart
PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 8:16 am


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