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 Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:15 pm
I'm no Dark and I'm no Goldie but at least I didn't pick Cyndaquil. I'm going to speed through the first bits since all the fun stuff is later on. I'm going to try to do at least one comic a day minimum. 
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:16 pm
Lol at the typo but I'm not going to fix it becuase I'm lazy.
Just not that moust should be mouse.
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:01 pm
Gotta love typos. My comic is riddled with them...
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:25 pm
I did my best to make my mom a MILF for added effect xP so here is the next instalment of my fail journey... 
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:28 pm
Good times. xD
I have a Mom avatar but I've not gotten around to using it. xD
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:45 pm
I think I'll work llama to the bone so it will evolve before I get to Mr.pokemon's house b/c I want to make pot jokes about the joint looking leaves on Bayleef's neck.
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:57 pm
lmao i want a llama with a leaf on his head too but in that game i usually prefer the baby alligator on crack
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:13 pm
You have a great comic, and I am enjoying it profusely. However, I have a little bit of criticism. The good kind.
In the panel where Chikorita is doing lewd things to your mother (There's a sentence I never thought I'd type...) it's hard to follow the text in the proper order. Try to consider the order its written in. Your text is overlapping , in the sense of being on the same line, so its hard to tell what order you intended it to be read in.
Also, the sex jokes are great, but don't get carried away, kay? Not saying its gonna be a problem, but sexual jokes can sometimes be...well...yah >_>
Anywho, I look forward to your next comic strip~
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:26 pm
if you look closely in that frame you will see there are small black pixles next to lines of text that indicate the numerical order.
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Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:46 pm
I had noticed the dots but I didn't realize what they were for. xD
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GoldDiggingWhore Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 5:30 pm
I hadn't noticed the dots at all because I'm blind and not very observant xd
But I approve! There's a certain charm to yours that I think makes the vulgarity kinda cute. Maybe it's just the Chikorita >.>
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:20 pm
omg I fell so far behind. I like disappeared for a few days and just played 24/7 and now I'm like about to take on the elite four so like idk I guess since I have a week off from school I'll just breeze through the whole journey. xD boy have I got some fun sh!t planned around Llama and the gang of animals i caught.
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:07 pm
Good job there. xD
I'm attempting to stay about a city ahead of my comic but I'm having trouble with wanting to play and forgetting stuff that I want to put in the comic or that are part of the game's plot. xD
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:19 pm
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Fashionable Autobiographer
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:22 pm
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