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 Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:02 am
Doton Genjutsu;
Academy Student:
Okkuu Chiri no Jutsu (Annoying Dust Technique)
Description: This simple genjutsu makes a person feel as if there was a speck of dust in their eye, irritating it. Although not damaging, it can cause the victim to lose concentration and also make him continually rub his eyes in an attempt to get the nonexistent dust speck out.
Tsutaurushi no Jutsu (Poison Ivy Technique)
Description: A genjutsu inspired by the poison ivy and oak plentiful in the forests of Earth Country, it causes the victim to feel as if he was touched by poison ivy. The user feels irritating itching and pain on his skin, and begins to scratch away.
Itsuwari Doton Bunshin no Jutsu (Fiction Earth Clone Technique)
Description: Similar to Doro Bunshin no Jutsu and the original Bunshin no Jutsu, this genjutsu creates false clones that appear to be Doton Bunshin. When struck the Bunshin will explode onto a dust cloud much like a Dust clone would, however the dust will not have any effect, it will simple float in place until it settles onto the ground not effecting the Shinobi at all. This is mostly used by lower level ninja to confuse there opponent.
Iwa no Jutsu (Rock Technique)
Description: A simple genjutsu that makes the victim see a rock protruding from the earth at the last minute, about waist high and seems to have suddenly appeared from nowhere. This can be used as a distraction if the opposite ninja is charging forward for an attack. However the rock will not effect the enemy ninja, if they were to keep charging, they would simply pass through the rock as it wasn't there.
Doro Shissaku no Jutsu (Mud Slip Technique)
Description: A genjutsu similar to Obtrusive Rock, the victim feels “mud” right beneath his feet, causing him to slip and fall backward.
Genin:
Kyuukai Nikutai Oshuu no Jutsu (Rotting Flesh Foul Smell Technique)
Description: A genjutsu that makes a person imagine the smell of rotting flesh permeating through the air. This causes a loss of concentration, nausea, and sometimes vomiting.
Sekkin Kyoushoukoku no Jutsu (Approaching Allies Technique)
Description: A simple genjutsu in which the opponent hears the sound and feels the chakra of approaching shinobi, presumably allies of the user. This jutsu is used as an intimidation tactic.
Shonben no Jutsu (Urine Technique)
Description: A genjutsu which simply makes the opponent feel the urge to urinate badly.
Sei Kyuuten no Jutsu (Gender Sudden Change Technique)
Description: A rather humorous genjutsu, this genjutsu makes it so that opponent imagines everyone he sees as the opposite gender. This can cause major confusion to the opponent, as well as shock.
Fuketsu Koromo no Jutsu (Dirty Clothes Technique)
Description: A jutsu in which the opponent sees a large amount of dust rises up into the air and attach to the opponent's clothes. The clothes then become incredibly uncomfortable to wear and move around in, making the opponent lose mobility and speed.
Chuunin:
Jisuberi no jutsu (Landslide skill)
Description: When in some sort of a low altitude area, such as a valley or a canyon, the user of this skill can make his opponent see, hear and feel large boulders sliding towards them at a very fast rate. This does not only confuse and distract an opponent, but makes them waste their chakra and stamina trying to defend themselves from the non-existing boulders. If someone were to be hit with this boulder, they would be unharmed. However their heart would be racing and they would be extremely confused and panicked because in their mind they were almost certainly going to die.
Chiri Magai Bunshin no Jutsu (Dust Imitation Clone Technique)
Description: This genjutsu allows the user to create a Bunshin which, to the opponent, is a loved one. The user does not know who it is the opponent views, but he can make the bunshin attack the opponent. This causes disorientation, confusion, and a desire to cease fighting so that the opponent doesn’t hurt his/her loved one. Only one bunshin may be made at a time.
Doro no Gekiryuu (Raging Rapids of Mud)
Description: Similar to Jisuberi no jutsu, the user can cause the opponent to see, hear, and feel a huge river of mud come crashing forward at a high velocity. This confuses, distracts, and, if the “river” hits the opponent, cause the body to believe it is drowning and being hit by mud from all sides. Once the genjutsu is released the person trapped in it will be disoriented and extremely confused.
Zeppeki Gisou no Jutsu (Cliff Disguise Technique)
Description: A genjutsu which can only be used if the user and opponent are on a cliff. The genjutsu makes the opponent see solid ground where the cliff truly is. If the user is careful, he can manuever the opponent to where there is supposedly solid ground, but is in reality empty air, and cause the opponent to fall.
Iwahara no Jutsu (Rock Plain Technique)
Description: A genjutsu that is large only in scope of vision. It causes the opponent to suddenly view a large, neverending plain full or rocks and small bits of grass. The opponent can see only this, and hear, smell, and feel nothing else but the "plains".
Jishin Genjutsu (Earthquake illusion skill)
Description: The user performs a short row of hand seals and then slams his hands on the ground. If the opponent sees the hands on the ground, then the illusion begins. The user appears to transfer chakra into the ground, causing the ground to shake. The opponent begins to feel the shaking, and lose balance of their body.
Kousho no jutsu (High altitude skill)
Description: An advanced genjutsu technique in which the user uses hishers chakra in order to make an opponent think that they are on the very verge of an incredibly high cliff, always a few inches from falling down the abyss. The effects of this genjutsu are difficulties to breath (The mind believes that it's in a high altitude, meaning the air is very thin in oxygen), the body is suddenly very cold due to the winds blowing, vertigo etc.
Konrinzai no Jutsu (Deepest Part of the Earth Technique)
Description: The exact opposite of Kousho no Jutsu, the genjutsu forces the opponent to believe that he is in a deep, dark pit, with the opening to the pit a hundred feet away. The walls of the pit are slimy, so impossible to climb. The causes the opponent to panic, to become claustrophobic, to suffocate etc.
Hitoiki no Chiri (Breath of Dirt)
Description: This genjutsu makes the opponent feel as though they are swallowing dirt instead of air when they breath. The opponent’s breathing with gradually become more and more rapid as they struggle to get in a breath of fresh air and they will faint.
Kyouboku Toukai no Jutsu (Forest Destruction Technique)
Description: A genjutsu that can only be used in forests (ie. the redwood forests of Earth Country etc.). The opponent sees, hears, and feels trees falling all around him, threatening to crush him. He moves out of the way, making himself open to attacks. He can even hit standing trees by accident, because he sees them as falling and crashing, not standing still.
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 1:09 pm
Jounin:
Ishi Karada Tenka (Stone Body Transformation)
Description: This genjutsu makes the opponent feel as if their body is slowly turning into stone, from the feet on up. It takes a short while for the victim to feel as if his entire body was turned into stone (4 posts). The victim is unable to move his body, and even the breathing slows down until it is nearly gone. Unless Kai-ed, the user can lose consciousness because of lack of air.
Tokeru no Tai (Dissolving Body)
Description: With the use of this jutsu, the victim gets to watch in horror as their body suddenly starts to turn into a bloody, acrid-smelling pile of earth. They can feel their body breaking but no pain, only a helpless, sucking feeling as their body’s insides falls out from their dissolving flesh.
Iwa Senshudan no Jutsu (Rock Team Technique)
Description: A genjutsu in which the user can cause a person to suddenly view a teammate as transformed into stone. The genjutsu blocks the hearing of the victim as well, so that he cannot hear the calls of the teammate, who is in reality perfectly fine. This causes panic, fear, and intense anxiety. Obviously, there must be a teammate present for the genjutsu to work.
Kiretsu no Jutsu (Fissure Technique)
Description: The user performs a short row of hand seals and then slams his hands on the ground. Then the target, upon seeing the user's hands, begins to see the ground cracking and opening up into a fissure. This fissure begins to look as if it is going to swallow the target.
Musebu no Jutsu (Smothering Skill)
Description: Used in combination with other known genjutsus. The victim suddenly starts to experience claustrophobia, a side effect signifying that the genjutsu is about to start. Then (2 posts later) the genjutsu starts to work. The victim is given the feeling of suffocation, very oppressive, which tricks them into not breathing. However, this illusion ends as soon as the victim passes out.
Anoyo Kiretsu no Jutsu (World of the Dead Fissure Technique)
Description: The user makes the opponent see a fissure appearing in front of him. Then, voices begin to come out of the fissure, voices of people that the opponent knows and can recognize. The voices lament their "deaths" and call out to the opponent to join them in hell. This is a genjutsu that can scare the opponent immensely, as well as distract and psychologically hurt them.
Genkaku no Juuryoku (Illusion of Gravity)
Description: A genjutsu that affects the brain in such a way that the user's opponent feels as if they are walking in an environment of higher G-force, which is basically a place that has stronger gravity than normal. Consequently, muscles are strained since the body thinks it should work harder to compensate for the higher G-force, causing fatigue. However, if the caster of this genjutsu is struck by a physical attack, they will receive more damage because the user of the physical attack will have put more strength into it to compensate for the genjutsu's effect.
Chiridaruma Kuuchuu (Dust Covered Sky)
Description: The user begins a series of seals that, when seen, causes the victim to see dust cover everything and then rise up into the air. More and more dust goes up and begins to cover light coming from any light source. Pretty soon (1 post), there is so much dust that it is dark and impossible to see. This technique can be used on multiple people, but it will only work on those who were looking at the users hand seals as he activated the jutsu.
Gaishuukketsu Tsuchi no Jutsu (Bleeding Earth Technique)
Description: The user begins a series of seals, that when seen, causes the victim to see blood begin to come out of all of the rocks, earth, mud etc. in the area. The blood is real in every way to the victim, who can see, smell, taste, hear, and even touch it. The blood flows everywhere and sticks to everything, including on the victim. The sheer amount of the sticky blood causes loss of movement, fear, panic, disorientation, and disgust. It also obscures vision and scent.
Mujuuryoku no Jutsu (Zero Gravity Technique)
Description: An advanced jutsu that is the successor to the Genkaku no Juuryoku, this genjutsu causes the victim to believe that gravity has disappeared. The body believes that it is floating, causing disorientation, nausea, panic, the fear of not returning to the ground, loss of natural senses, and other similar symptoms. Although the victim can see for himself that he isn’t floating, the body refuses to believe the eyes.
Kage:
Iwa Semeku no Jutsu (Rock Torture Technique): The user performs a powerful genjutsu on the opponent by first performing a series of seals. The opponent suddenly feels and sees himself chained naked to a large rock. Unable to move, the opponent sees a large flock of crows and ravens come swooping down. They land on and around the opponent and begin immediately ripping out and eating bits of flesh from the body of the opponent. This sensation can be both seen, heard, and felt, causing the victim to feel immense amounts of pain. This is a jutsu used specifically for torture and it is incredibly effective. If not broken within 5 posts, the victim will die.
Yougan Kiretsu no Jutsu (Lava Fissure Technique): The user performs a short row of hand seals and then slams his hands on the ground. If the target sees the user's hands, the illusion continues. The target then sees a fissure opening coming towards them. As the fissure continues to follow the target, the traces of the fissure begin to spew lava from within the cracks. Fear of the lava takes hold of the target. If the lava comes in contact with the victim of the genjutsu, it will break. However, even though the genjutsu might have ended in the victim's eyes, their body will still believe in the illusion. To the senses of the body, the jutsu is so real that even though there is no real harm to the body and the victim consciously knows the lava was an illusion the subconscious will continue to believe that the damage caused by the lava is real. This belief renders whatever part of the body that was touched by the lava useless. If the lava comes into contact with the torso or face the victim, they could very well die or become blind depending on were they were struck with the lava.
Hitokiri Jutsu: Tsuuda Tsuchi (Assassination Technique: Crushing Earth): This genjutsu causes earth and stone to seemingly erupt around the victim, surrounding them and encasing them up to their neck. Slowly the earth seems to squeeze the target bit by bit, making breathing nearly impossible by the end of the first post. This inability to breathe leaves the victim vulnerable to attack. However, this effectiveness does not come without a cost as a hefty amount of stress is placed on the user's mind when they use this technique. Can only be sustained for 2 complete posts.
Chiri no Ittenshikai (World of Dust): The user begins a series of seals, and while the user does so, the victim’s vision begins to waver. Pretty soon, everything looks to be covered in dust to the victim. At the first slightest movement of the victim, the dust begins to rise up into the air, obscuring the victim’s visions and clogging up their air holes (ex: nose and mouth). Additionally, the victm begins to feel the dust gathering around them, enclosing them and making it impossible to move. The victim begins to panic and to stop breathing. Falling unconscious is a normal effect of this genjutsu. It is also normal for the victim to be unable to move and see.
Muhen Ishi no Jutsu (Infinite Stone Technique): An advanced and terrifying genjutsu that forces the eyes of the opponent to see everything around them begin to age except for rocks and stones. The entire world changes before their eyes at a blindingly fast rate, in which one year can pass in one real second, a decade can pass in 10 seconds, and so forth. It can literally cause a person to go insane if held long enough (7 posts) since, to the victim, the world changes at a rate that is unnaturally fast and goes against all sense of logic. Even if the victim doesn’t go insane, they are heavily traumatized.
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 3:18 pm
Doton jutsu made for this guild:
Special Jounin:
Earth hold: The user will make eye contact with the enemy, once this is done the victim of the genjutsu well feel the earth start to wrap around there feet, if the enemy is charging they will be stopped dead in there tracks. After being in the genjutsu for one post the earth will shoot forth grabbing there wrists, stopping them from being able to defend attacks. If this genjutsu is held for 5 posts without being broken, the earth will shoot forward attaching itself to the back of the victim's head, it will then bend there body backward in a very painful manner until they are trapped lying on the ground with all there limbs held down by the earth. At this point in the genjutsu the victim will start to slip away and become unconscious, if this genjutsu is held for an entire 6 posts the victim will become unaware and completely at the mercy of his enemy.
Secret Cave:
This Genjutsu is different than most, it creates the illusion of a cave on any land scape, once a ninja get to close to this cave entrance they are trapped in the genjutsu. The victim will feel a strong erg to travel deeper in the cave, as they travel it will become darker, and darker until they can barley make out there hands. Once they have reached this point (2 posts)
they will here a loud roar behind them. They will turn and see a beast ( description is up to caster ) At this point the victim will have to battle the beast for 4 posts, if the the victim is servilely injured by the monster they will fall unconscious, if it is a more simple wound to a certain limb then the genjutsu will break and they will be left panicked and that portion of there body still injured, even tho the wound that should be there wont be. If the victim makes it four posts with either evading the beast or killing it the genjutsu will be broken, they will however still be left panicked and confused about what just happen.
Bottomless Pit:
The caster will weave a set of hand sign then slap his hand to the ground, if the enemy ninja sees this they will be trapped in the genjutsu. Once the genjutsu has taken hold the floor will fall from under the victims feet, they will feel as if they were about to fall, and just before they do a black tar like substance will shoot from the edges of the hole and grab the ninja trapped in this genjutsu suspending them over a massive pit. The victim will become very frighted and have the erg to squirm inside the tar like substance, if they do this they will wiggle free and fall into the pit. If this happens they will fall unconscious from the jutsu and left defenseless. However if he find a way to break the genjutsu they will be come out unharmed in any way, mentally or physically.
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2011 8:46 pm
Kagetsukiko Eheh, as a disclaimer, even if what I type up sounds pretty demanding, they were just suggestion sweatdrop . Sorry for being so critical, especially when I should be happy that you took this job off of my hands sweatdrop . Really, I think you did a great job mrgreen ! Fiction Earth Clone: You spelled shinobi wrong. Rock Technique: To me, it seems as if "about waist high and would have suddenly appeared from no were" would be better written as "about waist high and seems to have suddenly appeared from nowhere". Replace the comma in the last sentence with either a semicolon or a period. I think, to be grammatically correct, "if they were to keep charging they would simply pass threw the rock as if it weren't there" should be written as "if they were to keep charging , they would simply pass through the rock as it wasn't there". Landslide Skill: Change the "Once," to an "If" and put a comma right before the first "they". Unharmed is not two words, so don't put a space between "un" and "harmed". Replace the comma after "unharmed" with either a semicolon or a period and put a comma after "however". You used the wrong form of "there" twice, it should be "their" Raging Rapids of Mud: *opens mouth to say something but can't find anything wrong* .... Good job mrgreen !
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:11 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:32 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:42 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:44 am
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HeadlessKoko Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 6:31 pm
Okay, time for the jounin and kage skills, then I'll go on to customs tomorrow 3nodding .
Illusion of Gravity: Maybe you should put a hyphen between "G" and "force" in the first sentence? In the last sentence, I think you meant "by" when you wrote "my". Also, I think you should specify that the taijutsu blow should be coming from the target of the genjutsu (either that or specify that the genjutsu affects everyone within a certain distance of the user) and.... Hmmm.... The sentence looks alright, but I have the feeling some people might be confused at what the "it" refers to. How about changing everything from "it will be more..." onwards to "they will receive more damage because the user of the physical attack will have put more strength into it to compensate for the genjutsu's effect." Actually, change "taijutsu blow" to a more general term like "physical attack" because, really, a weapon attack should have the same effect.
Rock Torture Technique: Okay, this is a really picky detail, but seeing how none of the other parentheses were written like ( this ) but were instead written like (this), I think you should get rid of those extra spaces on the inside. Oh, you also forgot a period at the very end and I think there should be a comma between "broken" and "the".
Lava Fissure Technique: First, you missed a couple things completely. In the second sentence, "than" should be "then" and the "But," right after the second sentence should just be taken out completely. Now, on to the red part.... Okay, actually, before I even tackle this part, I don't understand your logic. Since the genjutsu breaks once it comes into contact with the victim, how does it cause the victim to believe that the lava was real? Wouldn't it be a giveaway that the lava wasn't real when it disappears. If it damages on contact but also ends on contact... umm... I don't see how that works confused ....
Note- Just because I noticed something that wasn't in read, doesn't mean I read everything. I usually only read the red parts sweatdrop . This was just an unusual case....
Crushing Earth: You forgot a period at the very end.
Infinite Stone Technique: Once again, my picky detail about parentheses sweatdrop . This time, add spaces to the outside of the parentheses while deleting the spaces right on the inside borders of the parentheses. And... yeah, I don't get the last part, either.... Hmm.... I think the last sentence meant creator when it talked about an owner....
Dust Covered Sky & Smothering Skill: Eheh, completely missed these two at first sweatdrop . Same deal with the parentheses as in Infinite Stone Technique. That's really the only thing I could think of to fix in those two and even then, it's completely up to you as to whether or not you want to fix that....
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 7:38 pm
Thanks a bunch Kage, I will make the edits in about a hour from this post.
About the Lava jutsu tho, lets talk about it a bit, what I propose is the following:
As Ren charges his foe, the enemy weaved a set of hand seals together then slapped the earth with his palms. Suddenly the earth began to shake and split open, lava shoots from the fissures toward Ren. Franticaly he dodge the first few spirts, however the pure fear of the boiling earth touching him causes him to slip up and take a glob (lol couldn't think of anything else to describe lava with) to the shoulder. Suddenly the ground no longer has fissures carved into it and all the lava was gone. Ren's shoulder had no wounds or burn marks, however when he tried to move it nothing happen. " Wh-ugh... What did you do? What was that?! " Fear, panic and confusion crippled Rens voice as he tried to figure out what just happened.
Does that help you see what I meant to say? If so how would you word it in the jutsu description? I know it could use ALOT more detail but I was hoping to show you my few with out making you read TO much heart
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HeadlessKoko Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 8:38 pm
Hmm.... I think so.... Here, this is how I would describe it but I'm not sure if it matches your idea exactly and if it is clear enough.... Sorry, but since most of my corrections were pretty small compared to yours, I just decided to color code them red like yours sweatdrop .
The user performs a short row of hand seals and then slams his hands on the ground. If the target sees the user's hands, the illusion continues. The target then sees a fissure opening coming towards them. As the fissure continues to follow the target, the traces of the fissure begin to spew lava from within the cracks. Fear of the lava takes hold of the target. If the lava comes in contact with the victim of the genjutsu, it will break. However, even though the genjutsu might have ended in the victim's eyes, their body will still believe in the illusion. To the senses of the body, the jutsu is so real that even though there is no real harm to the body and the victim consciously knows the lava was an illusion the subconscious will continue to believe that the damage caused by the lava is real. This belief renders whatever part of the body that was touched by the lava useless. If the lava comes into contact with the torso or face the victim, they could very well die or become blind depending on were they were struck with the lava.
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:54 am
WA!!! That was perfect! mrgreen We make a pretty good team :p. Maybe we shoud work on the other jutsu together, I can make all the major edits so they make more sense combat wise, and you can make them all polished and smexy.
Anyway I didn't get around to the edits last night because Rosa wanted to watch 6 hours of naruto... 6 HOURS! We were up until 4 in the morning biggrin . Best girl friend ever heart
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:02 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:23 am
Would be a better description, she is a scrapper. A good one I might add mrgreen
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