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 Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 1:18 am
PEACE FROM POPPIES
Peace to every Nation must be taught,
Only Peace now, must be sought,
Peace for all Nations of the globe,
Peace should be our only robe,
If Peace it is we are to find,
Each Nation find a way. Peace must come and Peace must stay,
Sometimes the blind must lead the blind.
Peace for all People on this Planet,
Each one of us must strive to gain it,
Attention now to this our aim,
Catch Peace by the hand. Lead it through all the land.
Ensuring that their sacrifice is not in vain.
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 3:30 am
I like the wording but the rhythm could be worked on. Nice job though I really like it. Good message! heart
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Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 8:25 am
Cool. Peace, yes, but why did you choose Poppies?
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 12:03 am
The Poppy is used by The Royal British Legion.
Poppy Wreaths are laid at memorials all over the U.K. on Rememberance Sunday.
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Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 12:25 am
Are you from U.K. or elsewhere?
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 4:58 pm
Poppies can also be used to make opium. If everyone was on opium we may achive a bit of temporary peace. blaugh
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 7:42 pm
Junto Asnani Poppies can also be used to make opium. If everyone was on opium we may achive a bit of temporary peace. blaugh I don't need any substance abuse to live a loving peaceful life!
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Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2006 11:58 pm
dramaartwriting Are you from U.K. or elsewhere? I am from the U.K.
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 2:39 am
H-o-s-h-i-m-a-r-u I like the wording but the rhythm could be worked on. Nice job though I really like it. Good message! heart We all have our own ways to express ourselves. Poetry is not about following rules but breaking them with words instead of someone else.
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