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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:24 pm
Seals and sealing jutsu are very different. Use the proper format. Seals are drawn, jutsu are, well, jutsu. Only four submissions per person at a time. Once your four techniques are accepted or denied, you may post more. For more detail on what goes here, check the sealing jutsu in the jutsu list. Seal [b][b]Guildwide/Personal[/b] {Remove the false tag.}
[i][b]Rank:[/b] (Rank of jutsu)
[b]Type:[/b] Fuuinjutsu | (Use: Link, Trigger, Utility, Trap, Security, Storage, etc)
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] {Remove if inapplicable.}
[b]Required Mediums:[/b] (If seal requires specific mediums.)
[b]Activation Cost:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b][/i] Jutsu [b]Guildwide/Personal[/b] {Remove the false tag.}
[i][b]Rank:[/b] (Rank of jutsu)
[b]Type:[/b] Fuuinjutsu | (Combat Use: Offensive, Defensive, or Supplementary)
[b]Prerequisites:[/b] {Remove if inapplicable.}
[b]Description:[/b][/i] (The description of the jutsu goes here)
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Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2011 11:55 am
Seal Type: Regular Sealing
Name of Seal: Soul Detachment Seal
Rank to Learn: S
Activation Cost: 10 chakra points
Description: The Soul Detachment seal extends to an invisible range of five meters around the seal and only affects victims if they step into this range. It does not extend above ground but it does extend underground when outside. If used within a structure it will encompass the walls and ceiling if they are within five feet of the seal.
Whenever anyone steps into this boundary the seal activates, drawing their soul into the seal and leaving their body comatose. If the seal is simply removed the souls caught will be released but they will not be unable to return to their bodies or re-collect anything from their pass life until the seal is cancelled by a Sealing Master. The seals remains active until removed but if destroyed the souls are forcefully shoved into their bodies, though severe mental and physical stress will leave the character comatose for an entire RP week.
Required Mediums/Ingredients: None
Weakness: The seal has a limited range and is often easily removed. It is also easy to locate unless the Sealing Master has the Tatto Artist Benefit. In addition this seal does not naturally differentiate between friend or foe.
Seal Type: Regular Seal
Name of Seal: Three Seals Barrier
Rank to Learn: C
Activation Cost: 5 chakra points for activation, 2 chakra points to maintain the barrier per post.
Description:
The user places three seals around their location with must be within a building or an enclosed space. Any attempts to enter the the seal boundaries results in the instantaneous erection of a violet barrier (in the shape of a pyramid) around the location. The barrier cannot be destroyed by any technique C rank or below and does not permit any viewing techniques/methods (supernatural or technological) from an external source to penetrate within. In addition, each seal cannot be placed farther than five meters away from each other.
Fueling this barrier is often a battery seal or source of chakra to power it. Once this source of chakra fades the barrier can only last for an additional post before fading away.
Required Mediums/Ingredients: Battery Seal or direct chakra source
Weakness: This barrier is designed to be mostly impregnable against lower-ranked shinobi but does not encompass the seals used to create it. Any technique above C-rank will instantly destroy the barrier but leaves the structure mostly unharmed. In addition the barrier does not extend underground, though only Sealing Masters who are familiar with the jutsu have any knowledge of this.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 3:51 pm
Soul Detachment: Denied. It's just... No.
Barrier: Needs more description. I honestly haven't a clue what you're intending this to do.
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:20 pm
I apologize about the Barrier, I realized I used the version I created first instead of my completed version. I hope this one makes more sense.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:27 pm
Maximum size should be in the description, not the weakness. Beyond that, twenty meters is by no means small. That's sixty five and a half feet. It needs to be smaller than that.
Is the barrier open from the top, or is it a pyramid?
And rather than have it hold up for such an unspecified length of time as an RP week, add a drainage scale to it. Then you can have an ally on the outside power it, or link it to a battery seal, draining chakra every post.
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:34 pm
It's a pyramid and I'll edit for size now.
I have no problem giving it a drainage scale but I don't expect it to be very high, no more than three chakra points per post.
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Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:21 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2011 3:13 pm
Got brain cramped and couldn't think of anything on this, but it's been awhile, so I'm gonna force it.
First, you added the drain, but you didn't specify where the chakra is coming from. It's not a jutsu, so it can't come directly from the user unless he's standing on the seal at all times, which I assume he's not since they are outside the barrier. So you need to specify that.
And the strength is a bit too high. A C rank jutsu shouldn't be able to stop B rank jutsu, much less a seal doing it. If you want, rather than lowering the rank it can block, you can add on a drainage for damage taken. Say, make it able to withstand C rank jutsu, and anything higher breaks it. But if it's connected to a battery seal, it drains the same amount of chakra from the battery as the attack cost.
Actually, forget the battery thing. That'd make it a B rank at least.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 5:23 pm
Personal
Seal Type: Regular Seal
Name of Seal: Repulsion Seal
Rank to Learn: B
Note: Requires knowledge of the Magnet Seal.
Activation Cost: 5
Description: Developed by Nomiya Yasashii based on the basic Magnet seal, the Repulsion seal is the exact opposite. Where the twin seals of the magnet seal pull towards each other at all costs, the repulsion seals push apart from each other, and while active, will not allow themselves to be within a certain range of each other, which can be designated up to a max of fifteen feet. Upon activation, the seals will force themselves, and whatever they are drawn on, to push away from each other.
A skilled sealing master can alter a basic magnet seal into a repulsion seal with little effort, and vice versa.
Guild Wide
Seal Type: Parts Seal
Name of Seal: Transmitter Seal
Rank to Learn: C
Activation Cost: 1
Description: This seal is part of a larger system of seals. The transmitter seal, works much like a microphone, picking up sounds around it and sending them down the line to a receiver seal through a link seal. It can be used for several purposes, from use as a bug, to a less secure radio system, which will work for more people.
Guild Wide
Seal Type: Parts Seal
Name of Seal: Receiver Seal
Rank to Learn: C
Activation Cost: 1
Description: The receiver seal is meant to be used in tandem with the transmitter seal, and works as a speaker, playing the sounds picked up by the transmitter seal for all to hear.
Guild Wide
Seal Type: Parts Seal
Name of Seal: Recorder Seal
Rank to Learn: B
Activation Cost: 2
Description: The recorder seal picks up sounds from around it, and records them to be played back later. This can be used to leave messages behind, send audible messages, and various other uses. When linked to a transmitter seal, it will pick up it’s audio from that seal instead of the area around it. Likewise if linked to a receiver seal, it will replay through that seal instead.
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I have more in mind I plan on putting up, so whoever I decide has to help with these better do it fast. =.=
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Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 5:58 am
Ahhh Hinote broke his own rule :O
Jokes aside, I fixed the Barrier and made mention of a battery seal (or any active source of chakra) to power and lowered its strength. But if a may I have some questions about the seals you posted.
@ Repulsion Seal: You said the seals will not allow themselves to be within a certain range of each other. Is this literal or are their cases where the seals can be forced together?
Also does changing the magnet seal into a repulsion seal cost any chakra points and is it able to be changed after they have been activated.
@Transmitter Seal: Can you put down a specific range and exactly how much could it hear? Whispered conversation? Rats scurrying on the floor?
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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 5:18 pm
EDITTED
Guild Wide
Name of Jutsu: Object Transmission Technique
Rank to Learn: A
Activation Cost: The cost is proportional to the size of the object which is added to the base cost of three chakra points:
Hand-held object: 3 chakra points
Chair-sized: 5 chakra points
Table/: 7 chakra points
Description: The Object Transmission Technique is a Space//Time technique that sends non-living, inorganic objects to any designated location marked with a Dimensional Receiver Seal. The cost of the jutsu is dependant on the size of the object but the object is transported at light-speeds, arriving at the designated area instantly. The technique cannot transport object across Countries or transport them into a space that is already occupied. This technique cannot be used when engaged in combat.
Guild Wide
Seal Type: Regular Seal
Name of Seal: Dimensional Receiver Seal
Rank to Learn: B
Activation Cost: N/A
Description: The Dimensional Receiver Seal is one of the first Space//Time Seals learned by a Sealing Master. It acts as a receiver for objects transported through Space//Time.
Required Mediums/Ingredients: N/A
Weakness: Changing the diagram in any way results in the destruction of the seal, excluding the alterations of a ninja with the Tattoo Artist Perk.
EDITTED
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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:28 pm
Barrier: Seems alright now. Approved. Is it guild wide or personal? I added that section after you submitted it, so I need to know whether to transfer it to the list or not.
Transmission: First, remove the hut portion. That's too much for too little. Second, make a focusing seal to go with the jutsu, and have it only send to locations marked by that seal. Being able to send things literally anywhere is a tad OP.
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As for your questions on my own seals...
Repulsion: Try forcing two magnets together on equal poles. If the magnet is strong at all, you won't be able to force them to touch, no matter how hard you try. I'm sure this would be different if you used the proper method, but that is the basis of this seal. They can of course be forced together when they aren't active, but when they are, they will fight their hardest to split to the proper distance, without breaking whatever it is they're attached to.
Changing the seal over wouldn't require any chakra, as it's a simple alteration of a drawing. And I don't think you could alter one while it's active, if that's what you mean.
Transmitter: It's mainly meant to be used in a small room, so if it was put in the middle of a field, you wouldn't pick up much at all. As for how much it could hear, it's about as powerful as a human ear or a regular microphone, so whispering would only be heard if the whisperer was right close to it.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:51 pm
The Barrier is Guild-Wide and I've editted
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Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 8:57 pm
Personal
Seal Type: Chakra transfer
Name of Seal: Kameeliun
Rank to Learn: Chuunin
Activation Cost: 2 chakra points (activation is weak for good reason)
Description: The user actively transfers their own chakra into another person (usually squad mate or ally) to essentially "refill" their chakra points. The user would lose 2 chakra points in addition to however many chakra points given to the target. (ex. 2+15=27 - total cost of jutsu)
Required Mediums/Ingredients: Touching the target
Weakness: It's a slow process, 1 post for every 10 chakra points
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:49 am
@Martin: The jutsu looks okay now, but before approving it, let's work on the seal. First, unless it's doing something more than acting as a receiver, it doesn't really need a set activation cost, being that activating it alone would likely do nothing. (Unless you made it some sort of instant mail service, in which case it would no longer be a receiver anyways.) Excepting the case that you're making it in such a way that only one can be active at a time?
When you say it can hold an object prior to activation, what does that mean exactly? And you say that requires altering the diagram, but the weakness is that altering the diagram breaks the seal? Doesn't really work. Another point on the weakness, does this mean the tattoo artist benefit won't apply to this seal?
@Storm: Alright, I've done a bit of thinking, and I suppose this could work separately from the one I had planned.
First, you need to make it a sea rather than a jutsu. Doesn't really work as a jutsu. A tip for the description would be making the seal act as a filter to change the chakra's base nature to match the receiver's own.
Looking slightly closer, you did use the seal format, but it still reads as a jutsu. You need to mess with the description and make it a seal. Does it require skin contact? Flesh out some details on how it works and such.
To be sure I understand the drainage, if I give an ally ten points, I lose twelve?
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