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Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:00 pm
Mew is one of the most interesting Pokemon for me. She has the ability to use any attack and instead of using them she plays around and has fun. Hiding the fact that they know more than one would think and have a duty that most people do not know.
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Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:05 pm
For Certing Username: sailornorthstar Nickname: Aurora Gender: Female DEX Number:151 Species: Mew New Species Pokémon Type: psychic Ability: Synchronize Job: Specialty Gift Shop Owner
For the Artist Height: 4’2” Weight: 92lb Hair Color: baby pink all of it except for her bangs goes a little past her chin her bangs are on either side of her face and go an inch past her shoulder. Eye Color: clear blue Glasses/Contact Lenses: no Skin Color: peach Face Shape: heart Other Features: She has Mew Ears and a Mew tail both a little darker pink than her hair. she has a long scar running lengthwise down her back that starts just below her left shoulder blade and ends on the sight side near the top of her tail bone. Her feet are a little longer than normal humans feet for that reason she never wears shoes.
Clothing Style: When she is working in the shop she is often seen wearing peasant blouses and a gypsy style skirt with a hole for her tail. Her skirts are gauze so she can wear layers of them in different colors if she wants. She is known to have a white bow right before the spot where her tail gets wider near the end. The colors that she wears are light blues, whites, cream, and sometimes a pink darker than her hair. She wears a simple gold chain necklace with a pale green crystal pendent if it is not on the necklace she will wear it on a bracelet or on her headband. The crystal is from were she was born. She does not wear any shoes. When she is not working in the shop she is known to wear sun dresses in either white, lavender, or baby blue with a bow headband in her hair. Sometimes she wears off white pearl bracelets
About the Character Personality: (5 positive, 5 negative, each with at least 3 sentences describing how it effects their daily life)
Positive: Friendly: Aurora is friendly to almost anyone who she happens to meet. This is a good thing and a bad thing because not everyone wants to be good friends but she will not give up easily. This also makes some people annoyed with her because she is so persistent. Even if someone does not want to be her friends will have a difficult time getting her to give up on them but it can be done.
Always sees the positive: Whether things look bright and sunny or dark and gloomy Aurora will always see the bright side of any situation. The use of this is that she sees things in a different way. The problem is that she can seem overly cheery at times when it is not appropriate. She can not see the positive in death and anything to do with trainers.
Caring: If anyone is hurt or sick Aurora will go out of her way to take care of them. This is great because she will help but many times she does not know what she is doing. But even if she messes up she will try to make up for it. Many times causing more trouble to the sick/hurt person. When she is told off she takes it personal and gets upset. Aurora will then back off and keep her distance for some time.
Fast learner: Aurora can pick things up that people show her very quickly. Though this does not work when it comes to cooking and first aid. Though she understands and do what she has learned, Aurora can not always teach it to others. Some things do take her longer to learn they are some of the more difficult tasks.
Hard-working: Aurora works hard at anything that she does to the point that she will collapse due to exhaustion. This makes her good at doing complicated tasks. But this also makes her become easily obsessive on her work. If she can not get something done she will try until in frustration she will give up.
Empathetic: Aurora is sensitive to peoples feeling so if someone is unhappy she knows it and can feel it and becomes unhappy. The same goes if she feel some one happy then she is happy. she is not always effected only when emotions are high. Being in a large crowd can overwhelm her. When Aurora is overwhelmed with emotion she will start to cry and run away so she can hide from the caused her to be overwhelmed until she is calmed down.
Negative:
Wears her heart on her sleeve: Anyone can tell how she feels at any moment because she does not know how to hide her emotions. This is both a good and bad thing. It is good because people can tell when she is down or when she is happy. It is bad because people can find out her fears and use them against her to make her do things.
Runs away from Problems: When things get scary she will run away from her problems to seek out safety. This can be seen when she is confronted by trainers or Mewtwo she will run away. This only occurs when problems reach a certain level. When Aurora runs away she sometimes lose control of her powers this may be caused by her fears.
Shy: Aurora has lived her life hiding what she was so that she does not normally go out of her way to talk to people. Trainers scare her because she has been hunted down by trainers all her life that she will not go near them. Though she forces her self to interact with people in her shop. Because she is sensitive and shy being the center of attention can be painful.
Personal space: She does not understand personal space so she is almost always close to people she is talking to even if it makes the other person feel uncomfortable. If asked she will back away but she always ends up back close to the person she is talking or interacting with.
Immature: Most of the time Aurora acts like a little kid. It does not help that she looks like a little kid though at times she can act more mature if she wants to but she finds that acting like a kid is much more fun. People do not always take her seriously because of how she acts. Aurora has a problem making new friends because people do not take her seriously. Once she does make friends Aurora will try not to insult her new friends. As they get to know them Aurora will go back to acting normal.
Mannerisms: Though she may act like Child a in the way she talks and acts she is very mature and knowledgeable. Aurora can go from acting like a child to being mature if she needs to. She keeps her hands behind her back so try to keep herself from touching everything. She cannot sit still without having something to keep her attention.
Habits: Playing with everything in sight and also known for taking things that interest her. She also is known to fall asleep to soft music. Aurora also collects random things and to keep them for sometime before giving them away. Also Tying bows to what ever she thinks needs a bow.
Quirks: Flying around to every were above people. Playing with her tail when she is board. When she is confused Tilting her head to the side and saying "Mew". (I know Net does this also but it is a very mew thing to do) Getting distracted by almost anything that is going on.
Hobbies: Collecting cute and shiny things, listening to soft music, knitting, and sleeping outside in trees.
Dislikes: Scientist This is because of the fact she watched happened to Mewtwo all the pain they created and how it affected Mewtwo in the end.
Trainers because they have hunted her down all her life. She has heard that not all trainers are bad but she was thought to keep away from them in case they tried to capture her.
Sour foods make her sick because of that she stays away from them. She does not know why this is it just makes her sick. Likes: (at least three, with breif descriptions) Music Boxes: When she was little she always head the music from the music boxes that her mother collected when she fell alseep. Aurora now Collects music boxes so that when ever she feels lonely she can wind one up and listen to the calming music.
sweet food: She likes anything that taste sweet because they make her forget all troubles.
Toy: She has always liked toys the simpler the better. She used to take toys from the castle when she was little and she always enjoyed them.
Roleplay Post Style:
Optional Just-for-Fun Stuff Filling this out with as much detail one can muster is a plus! Educational Background: No formal education though she did learn a lot of things from humans and books. Intelligence Level: Mews are known to be highly intelligent though no one has ever been able to test to see how smart she is. Physical/Mental Condition: Physical she is healthy but mentally she has a few issues. Because of past encounters with Xero she has a fear of Mewtwos. Another one of her Mental problems is that the more scared that she gets the less she is able to use her powers until she is powerless. This is only temporary and she regains her ability to use her powers after she has calmed down. Many people think that she may have ADD due to the fact that she can not pay attention for that long. Learning Experiences: She has learned mostly from experiences that she has. Character's short-term goals in life: Character's long-term goals in life: To deal with her Mewtwo phobia How does Character see himself/herself? How does Character believe he/she is perceived by others? She believes that people see her as a child not old enough to know right from wrong. Does the character seem ruled by emotion or logic or some combination thereof? she is ruled mostly by emotion along with a some logic
What would most embarrass this character?: Anything about attraction to others and mating will cause her to turn red as a ripe tomato and cause her to try to get away. Introvert or Extrovert? How will the character deal with anger? She will try to hide it but if it gets to be to much she will get mouthy and try to take her opponent on. --------------------------------------With sadness? She shows her emotions so when she is sad she cry's --------------------------------------With conflict? She does not like to deal with conflict and tries to get away. --------------------------------------With change? It depends on what the change is to how she will react to it. --------------------------------------With loss? Aurora takes loss very hard. She will hide her self away and morn the loss. What does the character want out of life? Love What would the character like to change in his/her life? What motivates this character? The wish to have more fun and wants to learn more about things. What frightens this character? Mewtwo, Scientist, trainers, Pokeballs, darkness.
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Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:11 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 4:38 pm
I can tell you're still working on this, so I wont address really anything yet, but there is something I must address.
What Canon Mew are you intending her to be? It's been brought to my attention that through rp, apparently, you have hinted at her being both the Mew who saw Mewtwo created (the movie Mew). Or the Mew from the Tree of Beginning? I'm very sad to say you'll have to choose one or the other. I don't mind you taking a Canon Character Pokemon and giving them a persona, but both is just too much.
Thank you. ^^;
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Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 5:15 pm
I understand the confusion but I can explain. Aurora is not the mew from either of those movies. She has a strong connection to the tree of beginning because that is were she grew up with her siblings. Her mother is the Tree of beinnings Mew. For her it feels like home that is also why she has a piece of the crystal for a necklace to remind her of home. There was no Mew in the movie on site at the birth of mewtwo. She only happened to be there because she was curious about what was going on. The incidents fallowing that she ended up being at the wrong place at the wrong time. The two have never fought but I will change thing to make things less confusing.
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Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:39 pm
OH. FF. I see now. XD Thank you for making it clearer.
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 1:20 pm
I think I am done please Critique
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:08 pm
-Temp crit staff at the request of Hoshi Lockhart-
This isn't so much a crit as a request. Some of your traits are only two sentences long. The requirement is that they be at least three. So I ask that you please fill out these traits to the minimum requirements and then I will gladly crit you. <3
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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 5:37 pm
Kallysto -Temp crit staff at the request of Hoshi Lockhart- This isn't so much a crit as a request. Some of your traits are only two sentences long. The requirement is that they be at least three. So I ask that you please fill out these traits to the minimum requirements and then I will gladly crit you. <3 I fixed it
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:57 pm
Temp crit staff for Hoshicakes.
Thank you for fixing that!
Friendly: I like that you mention how she is overly friendly and borderline annoying. Good job bringing out the bad side of the trait.
Positive: Is there anything that can bring her down?
Caring: How will she react if someone tells her off for trying to help and messing things up?
Fast learner: "Though she understands and do what she is tough she can not always teach it to others. " This sentence is hard to understand. Could you possibly rewrite it?
Sensitive: This sounds more like empathetic. Feeling what other people feel. How does she react when it becomes too much?
Runs away from problems: I'm find with this but she would "lose" control of her powers, not "lous". <3
Does her immaturity make it hard for her to make friends or maintain relationships?
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:59 am
Thank you for the Crit Kallysto I believe I have fixed the problems that you pointed out.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:15 pm
I don't see anything else to ask ;D so Ice Approves this!
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Ice_Dragon_Demon
Ice_Dragon_Demon
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