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Fatcat

PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 12:49 pm


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AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Peaches
Nicknames: n/a
Gender: Female
Age: 17

Faction/Race Demon - Nekomata

FEAR: Umbrakinesis - ability to control, manipulate, generate and shape dark and shadow energy.

Potentials:
* Ability to create items/weapons from shadows/dark energy.
* Modification of user's body through shadows/dark energy.
* Ability to shoot bolts/blasts/orbs/beams of dark energy.
* Ability to walk into a shadow to travel distances in short periods of time.
* Manipulation of objects/people by surrounding or infusing them with shadows/dark energy.
* Invisibility via manipulation of shadows.

Obviously she can't do these things yet. She can shoot orbs of darkness that are about the size of large marbles and move small objects for short periods of time.
These little things take a huge amount of energy at the moment.

Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Light Green
Hair Colour/Style: Light Blonde
Skin Colour: Here
Clothing Style/Colours: See main ref. (I am open for colorists to put some Halloween flair)
Extra: She has her ears and tail in either form. The tail has just split and will continue to do so as she gets older. Like so
References: Main Ref

Note: Peaches is an OC based off of my RL cat. All current art is based off of her and the orginal OC. I'm hoping if I get accepted that a colorist can make her look more "Halloween-ish"
PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 12:54 pm


Background: Peaches lived with her parents and twin sister. Her story was pretty normal. Her parents loved her and her sister. They wanted more for their children then they had. At a young age, Peaches has wanted to go to Amityville Academy. Her parents had agreed and made plans for her to go when she was older. She suddenly lost both her parents one day when they went to the human world. One human had seen her parents in their cat forms and killed them for their fur. They never came home and she knew they were gone. Her twin died from the strength of her sorrow. It was raining the day her sister was taken from her. Peaches plotted revenge on humans, but she had no knowledge about them or how to get to the human world. Deciding that Amityville Academy might be not only useful for her revenge, but she also wanted to make her parents proud by being as successful as she could.



Personality: She loves to go on adventures that have something to learn. The more to learn, the better. She knows education is important, even if it's not always super exciting. Peaches is a sweet girl at times, but her naughty nature often gets her in trouble. She likes to push people to their limits. She wants to know what makes them tick. Once she does know more about them she will settle down and be more likable. She normally keeps to herself, but will sometimes find a friend and hold onto them. She prefers to be around others, but she often can't find others that she likes enough to sick around. Her way of finding a friend is being as mean or rude as possible and see if they stick around. If they do Peaches knows that they won't mind her crap even on bad days, like when it rains. She's a tomboy at heart but doesn't mind being feminine every once in awhile. She hates tight clothes and male clothes often seem to be more baggier. She does have a set style that looks more feminine but are fit looser. Her favorite colors are earthy tones like green, brown, and tan. She also likes blues and some yellows. She loves to help others. She finds it relaxing and it gives her a sense of accomplishment at the end of the day. She's cool with helping with homework, cleaning, listening to others problems, giving massages, giving her opinion, etc. Peaches strives to be unique yet accepted. She wants to be her own person that others can rely on. Never try to mess with Peaches on a rainy day. Rain makes her irritable and she hates getting wet. She will lash out at anyone without really meaning to. She will apologize later for her behavior and/or actions.



Likes: Exploring, shiny things, exotic foods, being around others, high places, running, relaxing, helping others,
feathers, her sister, napping, fish, reading romance novels, non-humans, bells, cuddling in her cat form.



Dislikes: Being completely alone all the time, getting sick, wearing tight clothes, extreme cold, extreme heat, pretending, humans, rain, fakes, being ignored.



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Fatcat

PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:44 pm


Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Peaches wants to learn about the human world and things
she doesn't know much about. She wants to make her parents proud and complete her revenge. Friends are a plus.


Classes of Interest:
Gym
"Why not? I like to run."
Stealth
"It can't hurt to be quiet, helps me....hunt."
Human Studies
"I must know more...REVENGE!"
Forms & Faces
"I can change my appearance, just not very well."
Emergency Aid
"I want to help others. Isn't aid the same as help?"
Basics of Curses, Spells, and Hexes
"I sooo need more practice with this stuff."

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Clubs of Interest
Amityville Track Team
"I like to RUN!"
Shape Shifters Appreciation Club
"Duh...I can shift shape...obviously."

PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 5:46 pm


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:15 pm


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:15 pm


Woah.

Uh.

The organization threw me off. Lemme gather my thoughts here...

Appearance: She doesn't really look much like a Nekomata, and by that I mean I don't see any cat features on her at all. She just looks like a human, which only the Reapers can get away with. There's a student who is a Bakeneko, Deacon, and as far as I'm aware, Nekomata are a sort of "evolved" form of a Bakeneko (Nekomata has two tails while Bakeneko only have one, but they're very similar otherwise) so you might want to take an ear and tail(s) cue from him in her design.

Name: Peaches? Really? ...Well, okay I guess. It doesn't sound Halloweeny, more like what a human might name a pet, but--

History: Oh. That's why.
Sorry, Asylum, but only Undead and Ghosts can have ever set foot in the human world prior to gaining a Passport (which is what most students are attending to get in the first place) so this history isn't going to fly at all, unfortunately. Students aren't allowed to have any prior knowledge of the human world, and even the Ghosts and Undead who were there prior to moving on to Halloween don't remember their experiences in it at all. I'd suggest thoroughly reading all of the information in the World of Halloween subforum before continuing with this quest.

Enrollment Reason: Same for this. She can only know about the non-human world at the moment, that's all, so if she's looking to learn she'd be wanting to learn about the human world, not Halloween.

Hope this helped.

Snoofington

Merry Krampus


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Fatcat

PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:02 pm


ex o ex Snoof
Thank You~ That helped a lot. I've reorganized and changed a few things. And I read all the information in the World of Halloween subforum. sweatdrop
-Yes, her name is Peaches. She is based off my RL cat so it would be weird for me to change her name just for this character.
-I'm still working on her appearance. I honestly don't know what else to do to make her look like she belongs in Halloweentown. I'm hoping if she gets accepted that a colorist can fix her up a bit. I do however want her to have the split tail.
-I scraped the history completely. I have zero ideas for the background so I'll just leave it at that.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:14 pm


Hi, there, Asylum! Let's see if I can't help you a bit <3

First: I think we need to know more about her personality. You've got a decent bare bone structure, but it's lacking meat. What kind of adventures? Why does she like adventuring? What exactly does her 'naughty nature' entail? Why is she so solitary? What makes her a tomboy? What does she generally do to help others? Is there anything she strives for? Anything that gets on her nerves badly?

Right now, I just don't get a sense of her, or what makes her tick from the little bit you have there. A back story would certainly help, and I think researching the species would do wonders to help come up with a history.

A little bit about the neko-mata: They are said to dance and manipulate the dead like puppets, and are associated with strange fires and other unexplainable occurrences. Essentially, their powers lay in shamanism and necromancy. This could definitely be useful for a FEAR ability.

They are generally hostile to humans, so her liking humans doesn't necessarily fit into the species very much.

All in all, it's a decent start - but let us know more about her as a character. =)

Kyribird

Aged Codger


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Fatcat

PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 6:20 pm


Kyribird

Hello and thank you for the crit~
-I expanded her personality and explained things in more detail. The whys and hows. Hopefully it's better and I can come up with more in the future. It'll probably be easier when I can role play her.
-Your suggestions on FEAR was extremely helpful. I looked up necromancy and it led to shadow manipulation which led to her FEAR.
-I also came up with a background somewhat based on nekomata legends. I worked in her twin Oreo (She was her litter mate in RL that died a few years ago) so she now has a hatred and desire for revenge on humans. This helps her "fit in" more in Halloweentown because she'll like to scare them and such.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 7:25 am


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 5:26 pm


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