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My first time doing a fanfic, let me know if did anythong wrong. Wanted to tryout on a Touhou Call of Duty story inspired by the Various Touhou Call of Duty pictures i see on Danbooru.

Prologue Chapter 1

Suika: Good news first: Gensokyo's in great shape. We've got a civil war among Youkais, Youkai loyalists against Ultrayoukaist rebels, and 15,000 nukes at stake.
Reimu: Just another day at the office.
Suika: Utsuho Reiuji. Currently the second most powerful girl in Jigoku. Word on the street is she's got the minerals to be top dog down there. Intel's keeping an eye on her.
Reimu: And the bad news?
Suika: We've got a new girl joining us today fresh out of Selection. Her name's Sparks.

F.N.G
SDS Training Compound at the Hakurei Shrine center
Sgt. 'Sparks' Kirisame
22nd SDS Regiment

Sgt. "Sparks" Kirisame is at an SAS training compound with Suika, "Yo, Suika" greeted Marisa. "Good to see you Sparks. Take one of the rifles on the table." said Suika. Sparks walks up to the table and grabs a G36C rifle. "You know the drill, get to station one and aim your rifle downrange." said Suika. Sparks reaches station one. "Now aim your rifle downrange" Sparks uses iron-sighting to aim her weapon. "Now. Shoot each target when aiming down your sight." said Suika while Sparks was firing from the Iron-sights of her gun at the targets. "Lovely... Now shoot at the targets while firing from the hip" Sparks shoots the targets from the hip she notices how inacurrate it can be when firing from the hip. "Now I'm gonna block the target with the sheet of plywood. I want you to shoot the targets through the wood. Bullets will penetrate thin, weak materials like wood, plaster and sheet metal" Sparks shoots the targets behind the wood. "Thanks for that tip Suika" said Sparks
"Your welcom... Now I'm going to make the targets pop up one at a time. Hit all of them as fast as you can. As long as you're aiming near the target, you can snap onto them by repeatedly popping in and out of aiming down the sight" said Suika. Sparks reloads then shots at the Targets popping up and hits them wih ease. "Piece of Cake" said Sparks. "Proper good job Sparks! Now go get a side arm from the armory" said Suika as Sparks grabs a USP .45 pistol. "Good. Now switch to your rifle" Sparks Switches to her Rifle, Suika then orders Sparks to pull out her side arm. "Remember - switching to your pistol is always faster than reloading. All right Sparks, come this way. Using your knife is even faster than switching to your pistol. Knife the watermelon" Sparks quickly takes out her knife and slices the watermelon. "Nice! Your fruit killing skills are remarkable! Captain Reimu wants to see you" said Suika, "I'll see you later Suika, Ze" said Sparks.

Sparks exits the armory and walks through an alley with a lot of trucks and cars. Behind a fence, a highway with military vehicles, buses and civilians cars can be seen. There is a parking lot with HMMWVs and a field with three Black Hawks, while another is making a circle around the base, landing at each turn and taking off again. Several S.D.S. girls are waiting at an obstacle course. When approaching hangar number one, the door opens slowly and the player enters. In the hanger, a group of four girls are waiting. Two of them face Sparks and the two others turn back to see. They all wear gas masks, except Captain Reimu.

"It's the F.N.G. mam. Go easy on her, it's her first day in the regiment" said an SDS member. "Right. What the hell kind of name is Sparks, eh? How'd a muppet like you pass Selection? Sparks, it's your turn for the C.Q.B. test. Everyone else head to observation. For this test you'll have to run the cargo-ship solo in less than 60 seconds. Suika holds the current squadron record at 19 seconds. Good luck. Climb the ladder over there." said Cpt. Reimu as Sparks climbs the ladder to the top of the course. Cpt. Reimu then orders Sparks to Pick up that MP5 and four flashbangs and equips the inventory and takes out the MP5 and sees the layout of the course. "On my go, I want you to rope down to the deck and rush to position 1. After that, you will storm down the stairs to position 2. Then hit positions 3 and 4, following my precise instructions at each position. Grab the rope when you're ready." said Reimu, Sparks grabs the rope, slides down, and begins the course.
Cpt. Reimu: Go, go, go!
Sparks comes to the "bridge".
Cpt. Reimu: Hit the targets!
Clears.
Cpt. Reimu: Position 2, go!
Sparks follows the red arrows and continues through the course.
Cpt. Reimu: Hit the targets!
Sparks clears the room, passes a door and another door with Mess painted on it. Several other arrows are painted on the walls and on the floor.
Cpt. Reimu: Flashbang, through the door!
Sparks tosses a flashbang and covers as it explodes.
Cpt. Reimu: Position 4! Hit the targets!
She shoots the targets.
Cpt. Reimu: Position 5, go!
Sparks runs to a room when two targets pop up.
Cpt. Reimu: Hit the targets!
Sge shoots the targets.
Cpt. Reimu: Six, go!
Sparks arrives at a door which is exactly the same as the other that was passed before.
Cpt. Reimu: Flashbang, through the door!
She throws a flashbang and two targets pop up.
Cpt. Reimu: Hit the targets!
She shoots the targets.
Cpt. Reimu: Final position, go! Sprint to the finish!
Sparks sprints to a red circle painted on the floor. "Piecs of Cake,ze" said Sparks as Cpt. Reimu was very impressed with Spark's run through "Alright, Sparks, that's enough. You'll do. Climb up the ladder if you want an other go. Otherwise come over to the monitors for debrief" Sparks walks to the monitors then Reimu then gives a debriefing "Ladies, the cargo-ship mission is a go. Get yourselves sorted out. Wheels up at 0200 hundred (2:00 AM). Dismissed".

Well can you tell how to do it properly please? i was also thinking of doing this story in a script format is its ok with everyone.

Well, I'm certainly no class-A writer myself, but the whole "Character: Dialogue" setup is annoying to me, personally. Not to mention, some lines (both spoken and narrative) could be broken up a bit better. Some paragraph tweaking, and a few grammatical errors could be fixed, too.

An example, if I may be so bold:



My personal rework:





But! I say all this as constructively as I can. I'm neither trying to bash your story or your idea, or saying I could do better! I hope you take this all the right way sweatdrop

Okay, cool biggrin I'll be looking forward to it. I'm glad you took that as constructive criticism. I'm not always the best at conveying that.

Okay, only had a chance to skim it so far, since I have to go cook dinner soon.

Your use of dialogue has improved, and the flow is a bit cleaner.... but my god man, where are the paragraphs? :O

Either way, it's improvement. I'll give it a full read later on when I have time. Oh, and I picked up CoD4 last weekend, so I have a general knowledge now of where you're going with this, haha.

I'll try to take that advice, i think i kinda forgetten the basics of writing i've always had a hard time in Language Arts class. BTW, anyone got a good suggestion on who should play the USMC(and the US Rangers in the sequel) that will be invading the Jigoku, for me im thinking of using the Lunarians. Anyways heres the last prologue chapter, had it ready but the past fews day my internet connection is broken in my house.


Somewhere at the Ancient City in Jigoku

Satori Komeiji is dragged out of the building by two OpFor soldiers. Other soldiers are on top of buildings. Helicopters swarm the area.

“Today we rise again as one nation, in the face of betrayal and corruption!”

She is dragged into a car and hit in the face by one of the soldiers. When she looks forward the car is driven by an OpFor soldier and a girl wearing a pink dress with a blue apron and a matching headband with a ribbon on the side., her eyes are gold, and her hair is blonde. They take Satori to Utsuho for a public execution while Utsuho's speech plays over the radio.

“We all trusted this woman to deliver our great nation into a new era of prosperity.”

Soldiers are seen running down the sidewalk in the opposite direction of the car. At a fork soldiers stand on the side, firing into the air. The girl touches the driver and then points, leading the driver down a sandy, uphill drive, after a BMP. Soldiers are seen smoking on the sides. The girl gets a call on his cell-phone. She looks back at Satori and then gets back on the phone. Soldiers are seen strangling civilians back on the road.

“But like our monarchy before the Revolution, she has been colluding with the West, with only self-interest at heart!”

On one side of the road a soldier is seen pinning a civilian and then gutting her. On the other several soldiers are firing into buildings. A tank comes out of an alley closely followed by civilians. Soldiers aren't far behind. The tank stops near a market place, soldiers get out and start shooting and stabbing the shoppers. The car goes down a hill. At the bottom a garbage can is rolling with a human under it. The human gets out and is shot from behind. The car comes to an intersection. A truck chock full of soldiers goes ahead of the car. The other roads are swarmed with soldiers. The car follows the truck. They come to a fork. The truck goes left. In the middle is an empty concrete area behind a building. Many civilians are lined up against it with their hands behind their heads and their faces against the brick. Several civilians are on the ground being arrested by soldiers. On a corner bend there was another empty area behind a building where some more civilians are being killed and arrested for resisting the OpFor. At the violent scene the girl tapped the driver's shoulder, and she looked, nodded, and turned back to the road. Civilians steal guns from soldiers and fire upon OpFor agents in a small courtyard. They are all killed. Soldiers exit a tank and run down the sidewalk. The car goes right at a fork into an alley with many posters of Utsuho and dumpsters. Behind a dumpster a civilian is seen painting a picture of Satori onto the alley wall. She sprints off when the car comes near. A civilian is seen jumping a chain-link fence escaping from a Attack Dog .

“The time has come to show our true strength. They underestimate our resolve. Let us show that we do not fear them. As one people, we shall free our bretheren from the yoke of foreign oppression!”

A dumpster lid is lifted slightly. A civilian head is exposed. She quickly shuts it once the car moves. The car approaches a highway near the bay. Waves crash against the side rail. Soldiers run across from the right end to the left. The car turns right and follows the soldiers. On the left several soldiers sneak around a crashed truck and start firing up the road. The car goes straight. On the left many civilians are lined up with their backs facing the road. Soldiers reload and aim at them. As the car passes they fire and the bodies drop in a hail of gunfire.

“Our armies are strong and our cause is just.”

The car turns left at a small courtyard where soldiers are lined up and tanks are parked.

“As I speak, our armies are nearing their objective, by which we will restore the independence of a once great nation.”

The car travels down a deserted road. At the end are some soldiers talking and smoking. At the very end there is an arena on the right. Many soldiers are lined up here. They all fire their guns into the air as they cheer. The car stops outside the arena. A soldier opens the back door, another pulls Satori out, and throws her onto the ground.

“Our noble crusade has begun.”

The soldier kicks Satori in the face knocking her out. As Satori's vision comes to, two soldiers each take one of Satori's arms and lead her down the long hallway into the arena while re-gaining conscious. The soldiers hold Satori in front of a woman with Light-blue eyes, white hair, and wearing a red robes, who looks at her. She then nods and backs off. The soldiers begin to lead her towards a bloody, wooden stake in the middle of the arena.

“Just as they lay waste to our country, we shall lay waste to their's.”

The soldiers tie Satori up and soldiers cheer very loudly. Utsuho looks at the woman, who is holding a Gold Desert Eagle. Utsuho approaches to take it. When Utsuho first looks up, it looks as if the woman is threatening her because she is aiming at Utsuho. Utsuho hesitates, and then the woman turns it over so Utsuho could grip it. Utsuho takes it and walks towards Satori. She looks into the camera as the execution is being filmed on live television. She tells the world...“This, is how it begins”. Utsuho aims the Desert Eagle at Satori's face and cocks it. Satori then tells Utsuho her last words “I’ll be wait for you Okuu, and torture you last”. Utsuho fires the gun, executing Satori.

Heres the first mission of Act I. Gotta Read Silent Sinner in Blue before making the next chapter.

Suika: Captain Reimu, Utsuho just executed President Satori Komeiji on national television.
Captain Reimu: The Lunarians have plans for Utsuho. And it's too late to do anything for Satori. But in less than three hours Code-Name Aya will be executed.
Suika: Aya ma’am?
Captain Reimu: Aya Shameimaru is our informant in the Ultrayoukaist camp. She supplied the Intel on the cargo ship operation. Aya's in hell right now. We're gonna walk her out... ...We take care of our friends. Let's move.

‘Blackout’
Day 2 – 01:31:28
Youkai Mountain
Sgt. ‘Sparks’ Kirisame
22nd SDS Regiment

It was night time Reimu, Sparks, and Suika are at a small river and moving forward, all three are armed with night vision goggles, M4A1 w/suppressors, red dot sights, and an m203 grenade launcher, while Sparks has a Suppressed M21 Sniper Rifle. “The loyalists are expecting us half a click to the north. Move out.” Ordered Reimu. “Loyalists, eh? Are those the good Youkais or the bad Youkais?” asked Suika. “Well, they won't shoot us on sight, if that's what you're asking.” Replied Reimu. “Yeah well, that's good enough for me.” Said Suika. The team moves out to meet the Loyalists. They see a couple of guards one on the dock and the other by a car. “Weapons free.” Order Reimu as they ten kill the two guards. Sparks then enters the small house and kill the two more Ultrayoukaist rebels inside watching TV “Good night”. “Good work, there should be a few more guard posts up ahead. Kawashiro and her women will be waiting for us in a field to the northwest.” Said Reimu as they move out forward to under a bridge then across the river and forward to two more guard post “Sparks - plant some claymores in front of the door, then get their attention” Ordered Suika. Sparks plants claymores by the door entrances of each house and plants one outside on the road path, Sparks returns to her Captain & Suika and shoot the Claymore. The explosion attracts a few guards who stepped on the Claymores by the doors.

They move forward to an abandoned house that’s pretty wrecked and come out of the house to a small farm garden that’s empty yet suspicious. “Suika, you smell that?” asked Reimu. “Yeah, Kawashiro” replied Suika. They see someone coming out of the grass waving her rifle, it was Sgt. Nitori Kawashiro. “Welcome to Youkai Mountain, Captain Reimu. ”Greeted Kawashiro, her team of Loyalists made up of Kappas & Tengus come out of the tall grass Sparks was surprised on how well they were hidden “Whoa, they were well hidden”. “What's the target, Kawashiro?” asked Reimu “We've got an informant to recover”. “The Ultrayoukaists have BM21's on the other side of the hill. Their rockets have killed hundreds of civilians in the valley below.” Said Nitori as she starts rushing but Reimu stops her a bit. “Not so fast. Remember the Subterranean Animism? You're with us.” Said Reimu. “Hmm... Guess I owe you one.” Replied Nitori, followed by Suika “Your damn right you do”. The joint team of SDS and Youkai Loyalists head up a hill while Nitori whispers to her troops “Vanya is coming! Prepare to attack! Wait for my signal!”. They split up, Loyalist troops took the right path while SDS followed Kawashiro to the left path “This way. There's a good spot where your sniper can cover my women. Reimu, Suika, Sparks, and Kawashiro position themselves on the cliffs above Kawashiro's women where they see rockets being fired from the village filled with Ultrayoukaist. “Sniper team in position.” As Reimu confirmed “Suika, cover the left flank.” “Roger. Covering left flank.” Said Suika. “We’re Ready” said Sparks. “All units, commence the attack.” Order Sgt. Kawashiro. Reimu's team begins to snipe Ultrayoukaist troops while the Loyalists storm the village. “Sparks, take out the machine gunners in the windows so Kawashiro's women can storm the building!”. “You got it” Sparks kill the Machine Gunners inside a house after that continues sniping more Ultrayoukaist force. Reimu was very impressed Spark’s sniping “Nice shot, Mima would be impressed”. “Who’s Mima?” asked Sparks while sniping. “I’ll tell you some other day” replied Reimu. Helicopters are later seen flying overhead as Nitori is shocked to see them. “Damn! Enemy Helicopters!” shouted Nitori. “You didn't say there would be any helicopters, Kawashiro.” Said Reimu. Nitori didn’t even expect the Ultrayoukaist Rebels to have helicopters ”I didn't say there wouldn't be any either. We need to protect my women from those helicopter troops. This way!”. They move forward on to intercept the helicopters while passing through a burnt house. “Make it quick Kawashiro. I want that informant...” said an Impatient Reimu. “You have nothing to worry about. We'll take out the BM21s and carve a path straight to your informant, Captain Reimu.” “We should just beat it out of her” as Suika Suggested but Reimu disagrees “Not yet”.

They reach a hill near the power station and encounter troops that came out of the helicopters “We've got company! Helicopter troops closing in fast!” said Suika as they engage, taking cover behind logs. Sparks takes out her M4A1 rifle and uses the Grenade Launcher attachment taking out multiple Ultrayoukaist troops that got caught in the blast. They move forward till Sparks spots another Wave “Look out more Ultrayoukaist troops”. They engage the 2nd wave of small Ultrayoukaist forces and then kill them all with ease “Hostiles down” confirm Suika. Nitori later gets word from her troops that they ran into more Ultrayoukaist forces “Captain Reimu, my women have run into heavy resistance. Help me support them from the cliffs”. “What about our informant?” asked Reimu “She's running out of time!”. “Then help us! The further my women can get into this village, the closer we will be to securing your informant!” said a worried Nitori. Reimu’s team eliminate more targets from the cliff above the village, rebels hiding by wrecked cars and some on rooftops, more started coming from the northeast of the village, they also found Ultrayoukaist snipers right below them as Sparks tosses a grenade to them. “Good! Now we are making progress. Follow me up to the power station.” As Nitori was excited that her forces are moving forward. They continue moving up to the village’s power station on the top of the hill and stop at another sniping position. “Look. The final assault has already begun. With a little more of your sniper support we are sure to be victorious. Captain Reimu, I need to-“ but then Nitori was interrupted by an impatient oni, she grabs Kawashrio bu pushing and holds her on the ledge “Enough sniping! Where is the informant?”. “Hey Suika take it easy will yah.” Said Sparks seeing the Kappa all freaked out “What are you doing? What are you crazy? Who will you let it?”. “Where is she?!” shouted Suika, Nitori points at the location “The house... the house at the northeast end of village!”. The Oni then let’s go of her “Well that wasn't so hard was it? Now go sit in the corner”. “Damn Oni!” replied Nitori. Reimu, Sparks, and Suika then go over to rappels to prepare to rescue Aya “Sparks, Suika, we've got to reach that house before anything happens to the informant. Let's go!”

Reimu, Suika, and Sparks rappel down from the power station to the village. They encounter Ultrayoukaists at the first house in front of them while getting assistance from the Loyalist troops. They enter the first house and kill more Ultrayoukaist inside and move on the way to the uphill. “Let’s move! She may still be alive.” Shouted Reimu as they move uphill and reach the house Aya is held at. “Suika, go around the back and cut the power. Sparks, get ready!” as Reimu ordered. “You got it.” Said Sparks as they Reimu and Sparks put on night vision goggles and prepare to enter the house while Suika goes around the back of the house to cut the power. Reimu tell Suika to cut the power as the lights inside the house out. “Alright, I've cut the power. Go.” Said Suika. Reimu and Sparks enter the house all dark inside, they see a Rebel puzzled why the power is out. “Hm? What happened with electricity? The electricity went out!”
Sparks then kills her with ease. “These night vision goggles make it too easy.” Said Reimu. “Very Easy” replied Sparks. They continue through the house and see another Rebel with a knife making steady steps “Are you There? You still here...?” Sparks kills her and continue upstairs. They later see another Rebel sitting by the corner with her pistol afraid, Reimu kills her. Then a Ultrayoukaist Rebel behind a wooden table starts blind firing followed by Sparks shooting her through the table, later Sparks & Reimu hear a grenade bounce and move out of the way and see a Ultrayoukaist behind the door with Reimu shooting her “Close one”. Sparks check the room and finds it empty while Suika Regroups with them at the 2nd floor. Sparks checks the next room but as she enters the next room she gets surprised by an Ultrayoukaist yet again“DIE YO-“ But gets killed quickly by Spark’s knife attack ”Damn that’s like 2nd time that’s happened to me” Sparks then see someone lying on the ground with a flashlight “Are you Aya Shameimaru!?” she asked. The person asked “What do you want? Who are you? Special forces?". Reimu comes in to check on her and confirms it’s her. “Aya are you all right? Can you walk?” asked Suika. “Yes - and I can still fight. Thank you for getting me out of here” said the Tengu as she picks up a AK-74u. Reimu then contacts Big Bird “Big Bird this is Bravo Six. We have the package. Meet us at LZ one. Over”. “Bravo Six this is Big Bird. We're on our way. Out.” Said Big Bird. They move out of the house to down stairs to the backyard where Big Bird landed. Once all aboard, Big Bird takes off. “Have the Lunarians already attacked Utsuho?” asked Aya. “No, their invasion begins in a few hours! Why?” replied Reimu. Aya then said “The Lunarians are making a mistake. They will never take Utsuho alive.”

Weeks distractions and lazyness, heres the next mission. I really need to concentrate.


Newscaster: After heavy fighting today, L.D.C Soldiers began their push into the city where Utsuho is making her last stand. Fighting has intensified in the Ancient City. Anti-aircraft fire and burning buildings light the underground.

Command: Roger on location. Repeating: Map Grid 52761-niner, over.
Shiroko: Bravo Six copies, over usa.
Command: Bravo Six, we have an Abrams dead in the water. Call sign "War Pig". Lt. Shiroko, your unit is shotgun, over.
Shiroko: Copy. Bravo is inbound. Tell "War Pig" to stand by usa. We're on our way. Out.


‘The Bog’
Day 3 – 05:00:17
Sgt. Reina Kotozaki
1st Force Recon Co., L.D.C

Lt. Shiroko, Sgt. Reina Kotozaki, SSgt. Reisen II, and a group of L.D.C Soldiers were on a highway with wrecked cars, destroyed tanks, and debris scattered. "Alpha Company's tank is stuck half a click north of here usa. We gotta hustle! Let's go!” shouted Lt. Shiroko as her squad move forward "Move it! Move it! Clear! Keep moving up!" shouted a few L.D.C soldiers. Suddenly, gunfire from a darkened building by the highway fires down on the team killing the first L.D.C soldier that came into contact "Ambush! Contact right! Contact right!" shouted an L.D.C Soldier as Shiroko's squad take cover behind one of the wrecked cars, destroyed tanks, and Concrete Blockades."Get suppressing fire on that building usa! We have to move forward!" shouted Lt. Shiroko. Sgt. Kotozaki aims with the Aperture Sights on her Type 100 SMG and fires a few rounds on the boarded windows of the building despite not being able to hit them; she also fires at a few OpFor soldiers on the balcony of the buildings second floor. "Keep moving forward usa!" shouted Lt. Shiroko "Alpha, let's take the stairs and their flank! Bravo, give us covering fire! Come on Kotozaki, move it!" Shiroko's squad move down the stairs from the highway to the side of a partially wrecked apartment building. "Let's go Kotozaki, follow me!" said Shiroko Switch to night vision now usa!" Shiroko's squad put on their Nightvision goggles and went through the opening to the destroyed part of the building killing two OpFor soldiers by the wall piece. The fire fight was intense as Shiroko's squad arrived at the Apartment entrance. "Kotozaki, you and Romi head upstairs. We'll cover this entrance. Go!" said Lt. Shiroko. Sgt. Kotozaki and Pvt. Romi proceed upstairs of the apartment building, when Pvt. Romi reached near the 2nd floor of the stairs she gets attacked by an OpFor soldier. Pvt. Romi struggles with an OpFor soldier "Kotozaki Help Me!". "Oh no you don't!" Sgt. Kotozaki takes out her knife and stabs the OpFor soldier that ambushed Pvt. Romi “Hey Thanks Sgt. Kotozaki”. Sgt. Kotozaki & Pvt. Romi reach the second floor, Sgt. Kotozaki contacts fellow L.D.C Soldiers who are fighting at ground level”Watch your fire! We're on the second floor!”. “Roger that, shifting fire” said a L.D.C Soldier. Lt. Shiroko and the rest of her squad regroup with Sgt. Kotozaki on the second floor by the hallway door where they will attack OpFor forces in hallway that are concentrated on fighting L.D.C Soldiers below. Sgt. Kotozaki takes out a flashbang "Hang on, going to throw a Flashbang" she tosses the flashbang it goes off as Lt. Shiroko's squad rushes forward killing all OpFor affected by the white flash and then proceed to the Machine Gun nest at the left balcony of the partially destroyed apartment. Sgt. Kotozaki gets behind the Nest sprays her Type 100 SMG at the remaining OpFor soldiers. "Hit their flank with their machine gun usa! Cut 'em down! Shoot 'em through the wall usa!" said Lt. Shiroko. "Roger That!" Sgt. Kotozaki mans the mounted machine gun at the nest and fires at the OpFor forces at the other side of the open halls and floors plows down the enemy's flank. "That takes care of them" said Sgt. Kotozaki. Command contacts Shiroko's squad "Be advised, more enemy troops are converging on the tank. Get there A.S.A.P!". "Roger that! We're working on it – out usa!" said Lt. Shiroko

Shiroko's squad head back down stairs of the wrecked Apartment building to the rear of the building leading to the parking lot where fellow L.D.C soldiers are at the windows suppressing fire at the parking lot. Staff Sgt. Reisen II deploys the Bipod of her Type 99 LMG at one of the windows for more accurate firing "Ma’am there's a ton of 'em out there usa!". "Shut up and keep 'em pinned down usa!" said Lt. Shiroko. "Roger that, suppressing FIRE USA!" shouted Reisen II. Outside of the parking lot OpFor forces were covering from behind cars, balconies, and on rooftops. The L.D.C soldiers pushed forward to the parking lot to engage more OpFor while Sgt. Kotozaki and few Squad mates would enter the building where snipers are held at. Sgt. Kotozaki & a few squad mates move upstairs and then fire at the OpFor soldiers at the second floor roof. More OpFor soldiers appeared highway bridge across the area "Contact! On the overpass usa!" shouted an L.D.C Soldier. "U.A.V. recon has spotted enemy tanks headed this way!". "They're not kidding I see them moving on the Highway road" said Sgt. Kotozaki. "Private Aoi, get on the roof and hit 'em with the Javalin usa!" said Lt. Shiroko. "Right away ma’am!" Pvt. Aoi aims her Javelin at the Tanks on the highway bridge but she gets killed before she could use it. "Private Aoi is down! Aoi is down! Kotozaki get the Javelin usa!" shouted an L.D.C Soldier "Kotozaki! Pick up the Javelin so you can take out those tanks usa!" shouted Lt. Shiroko. "Roger!" Sgt. Kotozaki runs back down to Pvt. Aoi's body to pick up the Javelin & Rockets "GOT IT!". "Kotozaki! Get to the second floor and take out those tanks usa!" Shouted Lt. Shiroko. Sgt. Kotozaki rushes back to the second floor roof, "Come on! Hit those vehicles at the far end of the bridge usa! Hurry!" shouted an L.D.C Soldier. "Better take care of those Tangos at the highway bridge while I aim!" shouted Sgt. Kotozaki as she locks on the first Tank waiting for the beeping and fires it, The Javalin Rocket Fires from the sky and drops down to the first tank it destroys "Got one!". She then does the same with the other Tanks on the Highway overpass "Ok that's the last of 'em". Sgt. Kotozaki regroups with her squad while they are cutting through a fence with acid spray. They pull out the fence and make their way through the slums underneath the overpass to reach War Pig at the bog. "Bravo Six, we're taking heavy fire on our position north of the overpass usa! Where the hell are you?!" shouted War Pig. "We're almost there! Hang on!" said Lt. Shiroko.

"The tank's on the other side of that overpass usa! Come on - let's get back to the squad usa!" said Sgt. Kotozaki. They arrive at the site of the stranded tank surrounded by enemy fire. "Alpha Six what's your status over?" asked Lt. Shiroko. "We're still surrounded Ma’am! There's just the four of us left but the tank's still ok over usa!" said Alpha Six member. Shiroko's squad takes up defensive positions around the tank while using nearest object for cover. "Contacts to the east and more flanking to the south usa! Hold the perimeter!" said Lt. Shiroko. "Bravo Six, this is War Pig! The main gun's offline but we still have our machine gun usa!" said the Tank Driver. "They're movin' in with det-packs! Don't let 'em get close to the tank usa!" Shouted Lt. Shiroko. Shiroko's squad defending the Tank from incoming OpFor force appearing from the South side taking cover behind the sheet metals and a few appearing on the rooftop buildings "Look out! RPGs! Take em out quickly" shouted Sgt. Kotozaki. "I see them Open fire usa!" said SSgt. Reisen II. "Bravo Six, be advised. More hostiles have assembled to the west of your position usa, over." said Command. "Two Charlie, Bravo Six! Requesting air support for fire mission usa, over!" said Lt. Shiroko. "Uh, negative, Bravo Six, there's an enemy ZPU to the south of your position usa. Until you take it out, we can NOT risk sending in any more choppers usa, over." said Command. "Kotozaki! Find that ZPU and take it out so we can get some air support usa! Ami! Shoko! Cover her!" said Lt. Shiroko. "Roger that Lt. Shiroko" said Sgt. Kotozaki. "All right, let's move out! Secure the western approach, move usa!" shouted Lt. Shiroko as they secured the southern part of the bog move out to secure the western part of the bog while Sgt. Kotozaki along with two L.D.C soldiers Pvt. Ami & Pvt. Shoko move towards where they can see ZPU's bullet firing at the sky "Its coming from that building near that market stand come on usa!" said Sgt. Kotozaki along with Pvt. Ami & Pvt. Shoko rush toward the building taking cover from outside the windows firing at OpFor force inside "There’s the ZPU' said Sgt. Kotozaki. Sgt. Kotozaki moves toward the ZPU and takes out the gunner and OpFor Soldiers near it "Kotozaki, plant the C4 on the gun, move usa!" shouted Pvt. Shoko as Sgt. Kotozaki plants the C4 on the ZPU and takes out the remote detonator. "Good job, let's get to a safe distance usa" said Pvt. Ami as they exit out of the building to get away from the blast. "We're good to go usa! Detonating Now!" Sgt. Kotozaki detonates the C4, destroying the ZPU "Lt. Shiroko, I destroyed the ZPU over usa!". "Good Job Kotozaki, I've got air support on the way but they need our exact location usa. Plant the IR beacon and get their attention usa. Out." said Lt. Shiroko. Sgt. Kotozaki runs to an open spot across the enemy building while being behind the metal containers and plants the IR beacon "Beacon Planted!". “OK, positive ID on your sparkle usa. We're comin' in hot from the northeast. Standby.” Two Cobra attack helicopters arrive and begin firing their rockets and mini guns on the fortified building housing the remnants of the OpFor in the area “Uh, Two, you see anyone left down there usa?”. “Negative, we got 'em usa.” Replied Cobra Pilot, “Roger that. All targets destroyed and we're outta here usa. Good luck girls. Out.” The Cobra helicopters leave the area. Lt. Shiroko contacts HQ “Command, LZ is secure. Bring in the engineers and let's get this tank moving usa”. “Roger that. They're on the way. Good work. Out.” Said Command. "Squad, regroup at the tank. Let's go!” shouted SSgt. Reisen II. The surviving squad members make their way to the Abram where Lt. Shiroko has sketched a crude plan of the surrounding area on the side of the tank. “Listen up. We don't have much time to get this tank out of here. We'll take up defensive positions around the bog here, here, and here, and buy the engineers some time to get the tank moving usa. Oorah?”