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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 12:54 pm
Nothing good here... just things I've written in five minutes or less, piecing together my life recently.
I just have to put them somewhere, and I'm not sure where else to put them. Ahah, they're saved in drafts on my phone and I want them out of there.
A Haiku:
I wrote this haiku so you could see me in a different way
Another:
I believe in love that lasts a few days or weeks but never a year
Another:
I just want to drive and escape this place, but where haven't I traveled?
Just a generic... -dies-:
Oh dear _____ You were always the best
for a good solid month or so.
But you became pretty boring, kept leaving me snoring
and now I think you should go.
Don't get me wrong- you're cute and you're pretty but you're something not witty..
and sometimes you can be pretty slow.
don't hold it against me or say you resent me
because you of all people must know..
that it seemed good on the outside and good on the inside
but in truth, it's time to let go.
Something random again:
Whatever you put in writing someone has a chance of finding.
Not my best work at all. Dl
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 6:17 pm
I like them, especially the haikus!
Although the long poem was good, it was spaced a bit oddly. I like that you used a blank instead of a specific name, though!
I also though the last little thing was cute!
Keep writing!
:3
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Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:13 pm
Thanks... I'm actually surprised. Like I said, they were written randomly, as I thought of them.
And the poem is not my best at all.. it just popped in my head and I had to get it out, you know? :l
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