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egoxromantic

Anxious Conventioneer

PostPosted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 12:54 pm


Nothing good here...
just things I've written in five minutes or less, piecing together my life recently.

I just have to put them somewhere, and I'm not sure where else to put them. Ahah, they're saved in drafts on my phone and I want them out of there.

A Haiku:

I wrote this haiku
so you could see me
in a different way

Another:

I believe in love
that lasts a few days or weeks
but never a year

Another:

I just want to drive
and escape this place, but where
haven't I traveled?

Just a generic... -dies-:

Oh dear _____
You were always the best

for a good solid month or so.

But you became pretty boring,
kept leaving me snoring

and now I think you should go.

Don't get me wrong- you're cute and you're pretty
but you're something not witty..

and sometimes you can be pretty slow.

don't hold it against me
or say you resent me

because you of all people must know..

that it seemed good on the outside
and good on the inside

but in truth, it's time to let go.

Something random again:

Whatever you put in writing
someone has a chance of finding.

Not my best work at all. Dl
PostPosted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 6:17 pm


I like them, especially the haikus!

Although the long poem was good, it was spaced a bit oddly. I like that you used a blank instead of a specific name, though!

I also though the last little thing was cute!

Keep writing!

:3

Monochromosexual

Timid Ladykiller


egoxromantic

Anxious Conventioneer

PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:13 pm


Thanks... I'm actually surprised.
Like I said, they were written randomly, as I thought of them.

And the poem is not my best at all.. it just popped in my head and I had to get it out, you know? :l
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