Criticism, please!

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Okay. For those that comment, thank you!

These are actually poems for school. Other readers are helpful and suggestions are always welcome. I think I might post more work as they come.

Thanks again. Enjoy!

Yeah. My muse for the three following poems might be nice to see too.... Muse

 

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The Rose's Tears

 

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I_am_bitterblue

GOOD JOB!
my favorite is the lines one,but i had difficulty reading a few of the other founts

Yeah. The font is supposed to match the tones, or some little detail to the piece, but they don't work as well as would be liked. I can look into finding better ones though. Thank you!