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Little Red Riding Hood WIP - Lines. Any comments welcome.

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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:05 am

So, I'm working on this right now using GIMP, and figured I could use a little feedback before I get back to it. Wat do you guys think, anything I can work on? Anything you particularly like about it? Dislike? Anything else?

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 9:35 pm

Looks pretty good so far.

My only critiques are about the face, usually Little Red Riding Hood is depicted as a child and has soft features.

The lips and nose are probably the main concern, personally I think they need to be smaller in size, less bulky. Otherwise it does make her seem a lot older then normal.
(Unless you are going for an older version, then you could completely disregard this).

I like the cute little flower pattern around the stomach area. : D

Hope this helps. : D

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